Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD52XNRVGXQQ7XWXR7PW312

Run Details

Duration:
12.9s
Cost:
$0.000394
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crunch of gravel under Aurora’s boots echoed too loudly in the stillness. She paused at the tree line, the Heartstone pendant pressing against her collarbone like a second pulse, its deep crimson gem catching no moonlight. The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into shapes that made her neck prickle. She’d walked this path a dozen times during daylight, delivering takeout to the park ranger station on the far side. But tonight, the trees seemed to lean inward, their branches clawing at the sky. The air tasted metallic, thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something sweet and decaying, like overripe fruit left in the sun. “Hello?” Her voice sounded foreign, too loud. No answer. Just the whisper of wind through leaves that didn’t rustle the way wind should. Aurora stepped forward. The stones marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, a place locals avoided after dark. She’d come here because the pendant had grown warm an hour ago, pulsing in time with her heartbeat. Now, standing at the threshold, it throbbed with a heat that spread up her arm. The clearing opened before her, bathed in silver light that had no source. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered like oil on water, whites that seemed to drink the darkness around them. She’d read about time distortion here, how an hour inside could stretch to days outside. The pendant’s warmth intensified, pulling her forward. Something moved at the edge of her vision. She turned sharply. Nothing. Just shadows between the trees, shifting like smoke. Her breath came faster. The wrongness wasn’t sudden—it had been building since she’d left the city, a low hum beneath her ribs that made her skin crawl. “This is stupid,” she muttered, but her feet kept moving. The pendant burned now, a brand against her skin. She could feel eyes on her, though when she looked up, the clearing remained empty. The flowers didn’t sway. The stones didn’t cast shadows. A sound like children laughing echoed from somewhere beyond the tree line. Too high, too thin. She’d heard that sound before, in dreams that left her drenched in sweat. The ranger station was supposed to be a fifteen-minute walk from here. She should have called ahead, should have told someone where she was going. Instead, she’d followed the pull of the pendant, the way it had guided her through backstreets and footpaths until she stood here, alone in a place that wasn’t quite real. The laughing came again, closer now. She spun toward the sound, but there was nothing—just trees and flowers and stones that seemed to watch her with patient interest. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. A text from Eva: *Where are you? You said you’d be back hours ago.* The screen flickered. The time read 3:17 AM. She’d left the restaurant at 11:30. Three minutes should have been enough to walk to the ranger station and back. But the pendant had grown warm, then hot, and something had whispered her name in a voice that wasn’t quite a voice. “Hello?” she called again, louder this time. Her voice cracked. The laughing stopped. Silence pressed in around her like a physical weight. She waited for the sound to resume, for the wind, for anything that would prove she wasn’t losing her mind. But there was only the slow, steady beat of her own heart and the insistent warmth of the pendant against her chest. A figure stepped from between two oak trees. Aurora froze. The shape was too tall, too thin, moving with a fluidity that didn’t match human gait. It turned toward her, and she saw that its face was featureless—a smooth expanse of pale skin where eyes and mouth should have been. “You shouldn’t have come here,” it said, and the voice was like dry leaves scraping against stone. She backed away, but her feet caught on something root-like, and she stumbled. The pendant flared, its crimson gem blazing with inner fire. The figure tilted its head, and for a moment, she thought she saw something behind its featureless face—shapes moving, faces pressing against the inside of its skin. “Run,” she whispered, but her legs wouldn’t obey. The figure took another step forward, and the flowers around them began to wither, their petals blackening in seconds. The air grew colder, the sweet decay replaced by the sharp bite of frost. “You’re not alone,” the figure continued, its voice now layered with others—whispers, laughter, the sound of things moving just beyond sight. “You never were.” Aurora’s hand flew to the pendant, but it was already glowing, pulsing in rhythm with the figure’s words. She could feel something tugging at the edges of her mind, pulling at memories that weren’t hers, dreams that belonged to someone else. The standing stones began to hum, their ancient wood vibrating with a frequency that made her teeth ache. The figure raised a hand—or what passed for a hand—and the world tilted. Colors bled together, time stretched and snapped like a rubber band, and she could swear she heard Eva’s voice calling her name from somewhere far away. When she looked up again, the figure was closer. Too close. Its featureless face was inches from hers, and she could feel its breath—cold and wrong, carrying the scent of grave soil and forgotten things. “The door is open,” it whispered, and this time, a hundred voices spoke as one. “Come see what waits on the other side.” The pendant burned so hot she thought it would melt through her skin. She wanted to scream, to run, to do anything other than stand here and let this thing—whatever it was—pull her into whatever lay beyond. But her feet were rooted to the spot, her body betraying her with its refusal to obey. Something brushed against her arm, and she finally found the strength to pull away. She stumbled backward, crashing into one of the standing stones. The impact sent splinters of wood into her palm, but she barely felt the pain. All she could focus on was the pendant, still burning, still pulling, still whispering promises of things she couldn’t name. The figure didn’t move as she backed away, didn’t follow. It simply stood there, waiting, and she knew—with a certainty that chilled her more than the frost creeping up her ankles—that it would be here when she returned. That it had been here all along, watching, waiting for her to cross the threshold. She ran then, not daring to look back, her boots pounding against the gravel path as she fled the clearing. Behind her, the laughing started again, softer now, almost gentle, like a lullaby meant to coax her back into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she called again [again]"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.778
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
95.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"could feel"
count3
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"grave"
count1
12
word"chilled"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pulse"
2"loomed"
3"whisper"
4"throbbed"
5"shimmered"
6"warmth"
7"could feel"
8"flickered"
9"silence"
10"weight"
11"grave"
12"chilled"
13"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
56.80% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords10
totalWords1120
ratio0.009
matches
0"Where are you? You said you’d be back hours ago."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount1091
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.37
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora4
Heartstone1
Fae1
Grove1
Eva2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"whites that seemed to drink the darkness around them"
1"stones that seemed to watch her with patient interest"
2"quite a voice"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1120
matches(empty)
88.24% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"heard that sound"
1"saw that its"
68.16% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean40
std15.54
cv0.389
sampleLengths
052
158
223
351
455
58
639
743
854
930
1048
1150
1213
1351
148
1542
1617
1750
1841
1924
2059
2139
2235
2323
2454
2559
2653
2741
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"was supposed"
1"were rooted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was going"
1"wasn’t losing"
2"was already glowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences85
ratio0.129
matches
0"The air tasted metallic, thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something sweet and decaying, like overripe fruit left in the sun."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered like oil on water, whites that seemed to drink the darkness around them."
2"The wrongness wasn’t sudden—it had been building since she’d left the city, a low hum beneath her ribs that made her skin crawl."
3"She spun toward the sound, but there was nothing—just trees and flowers and stones that seemed to watch her with patient interest."
4"It turned toward her, and she saw that its face was featureless—a smooth expanse of pale skin where eyes and mouth should have been."
5"The figure tilted its head, and for a moment, she thought she saw something behind its featureless face—shapes moving, faces pressing against the inside of its skin."
6"“You’re not alone,” the figure continued, its voice now layered with others—whispers, laughter, the sound of things moving just beyond sight."
7"The figure raised a hand—or what passed for a hand—and the world tilted."
8"Its featureless face was inches from hers, and she could feel its breath—cold and wrong, carrying the scent of grave soil and forgotten things."
9"She wanted to scream, to run, to do anything other than stand here and let this thing—whatever it was—pull her into whatever lay beyond."
10"It simply stood there, waiting, and she knew—with a certainty that chilled her more than the frost creeping up her ankles—that it would be here when she returned."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1107
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03884372177055104
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005420054200542005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean13.18
std7.28
cv0.552
sampleLengths
013
124
215
320
414
524
67
72
814
93
1015
1118
1215
1313
1420
1515
167
178
183
191
208
214
2223
2310
249
2515
264
275
2812
294
3013
3112
3213
3330
346
3522
366
377
387
393
405
416
4214
4322
447
453
463
479
4820
4922
47.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.32941176470588235
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences79
matches
0"Just the whisper of wind"
1"Just shadows between the trees,"
2"Too high, too thin."
3"Instead, she’d followed the pull"
ratio0.051
73.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences79
matches
0"She paused at the tree"
1"She’d walked this path a"
2"Her voice sounded foreign, too"
3"She’d come here because the"
4"She’d read about time distortion"
5"She turned sharply."
6"Her breath came faster."
7"she muttered, but her feet"
8"She could feel eyes on"
9"She’d heard that sound before,"
10"She should have called ahead,"
11"She spun toward the sound,"
12"Her phone buzzed in her"
13"You said you’d be back"
14"She’d left the restaurant at"
15"she called again, louder this"
16"Her voice cracked."
17"She waited for the sound"
18"It turned toward her, and"
19"it said, and the voice"
ratio0.367
48.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences79
matches
0"The crunch of gravel under"
1"She paused at the tree"
2"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
3"She’d walked this path a"
4"The air tasted metallic, thick"
5"Her voice sounded foreign, too"
6"Aurora stepped forward."
7"The stones marked the boundary"
8"She’d come here because the"
9"The clearing opened before her,"
10"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets"
11"She’d read about time distortion"
12"The pendant’s warmth intensified, pulling"
13"Something moved at the edge"
14"She turned sharply."
15"Her breath came faster."
16"The wrongness wasn’t sudden—it had"
17"she muttered, but her feet"
18"The pendant burned now, a"
19"She could feel eyes on"
ratio0.823
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Now, standing at the threshold,"
ratio0.013
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered like oil on water, whites that seemed to drink the darkness around them."
1"The wrongness wasn’t sudden—it had been building since she’d left the city, a low hum beneath her ribs that made her skin crawl."
2"Instead, she’d followed the pull of the pendant, the way it had guided her through backstreets and footpaths until she stood here, alone in a place that wasn’t …"
3"She could feel something tugging at the edges of her mind, pulling at memories that weren’t hers, dreams that belonged to someone else."
4"The standing stones began to hum, their ancient wood vibrating with a frequency that made her teeth ache."
5"She ran then, not daring to look back, her boots pounding against the gravel path as she fled the clearing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she muttered, but her feet kept moving"
1"it said, and the voice was like dry leaves scraping against stone"
2"she whispered, but her legs wouldn’t obey"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"the figure continued (continue)"
3"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.667
73.8242%