| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she called again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.778 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 95.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1134 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1134 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "grave" | | 12 | "chilled" | | 13 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.80% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1120 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Where are you? You said you’d be back hours ago." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 1091 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.37 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 4 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "whites that seemed to drink the darkness around them" | | 1 | "stones that seemed to watch her with patient interest" | | 2 | "quite a voice" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.24% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "heard that sound" | | 1 | "saw that its" |
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| 68.16% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 40 | | std | 15.54 | | cv | 0.389 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 59 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 41 |
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| 96.81% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "were rooted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "wasn’t losing" | | 2 | "was already glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.129 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted metallic, thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something sweet and decaying, like overripe fruit left in the sun." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered like oil on water, whites that seemed to drink the darkness around them." | | 2 | "The wrongness wasn’t sudden—it had been building since she’d left the city, a low hum beneath her ribs that made her skin crawl." | | 3 | "She spun toward the sound, but there was nothing—just trees and flowers and stones that seemed to watch her with patient interest." | | 4 | "It turned toward her, and she saw that its face was featureless—a smooth expanse of pale skin where eyes and mouth should have been." | | 5 | "The figure tilted its head, and for a moment, she thought she saw something behind its featureless face—shapes moving, faces pressing against the inside of its skin." | | 6 | "“You’re not alone,” the figure continued, its voice now layered with others—whispers, laughter, the sound of things moving just beyond sight." | | 7 | "The figure raised a hand—or what passed for a hand—and the world tilted." | | 8 | "Its featureless face was inches from hers, and she could feel its breath—cold and wrong, carrying the scent of grave soil and forgotten things." | | 9 | "She wanted to scream, to run, to do anything other than stand here and let this thing—whatever it was—pull her into whatever lay beyond." | | 10 | "It simply stood there, waiting, and she knew—with a certainty that chilled her more than the frost creeping up her ankles—that it would be here when she returned." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1107 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03884372177055104 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005420054200542005 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 13.18 | | std | 7.28 | | cv | 0.552 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 47.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.32941176470588235 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the whisper of wind" | | 1 | "Just shadows between the trees," | | 2 | "Too high, too thin." | | 3 | "Instead, she’d followed the pull" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 73.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the tree" | | 1 | "She’d walked this path a" | | 2 | "Her voice sounded foreign, too" | | 3 | "She’d come here because the" | | 4 | "She’d read about time distortion" | | 5 | "She turned sharply." | | 6 | "Her breath came faster." | | 7 | "she muttered, but her feet" | | 8 | "She could feel eyes on" | | 9 | "She’d heard that sound before," | | 10 | "She should have called ahead," | | 11 | "She spun toward the sound," | | 12 | "Her phone buzzed in her" | | 13 | "You said you’d be back" | | 14 | "She’d left the restaurant at" | | 15 | "she called again, louder this" | | 16 | "Her voice cracked." | | 17 | "She waited for the sound" | | 18 | "It turned toward her, and" | | 19 | "it said, and the voice" |
| | ratio | 0.367 | |
| 48.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The crunch of gravel under" | | 1 | "She paused at the tree" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "She’d walked this path a" | | 4 | "The air tasted metallic, thick" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded foreign, too" | | 6 | "Aurora stepped forward." | | 7 | "The stones marked the boundary" | | 8 | "She’d come here because the" | | 9 | "The clearing opened before her," | | 10 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets" | | 11 | "She’d read about time distortion" | | 12 | "The pendant’s warmth intensified, pulling" | | 13 | "Something moved at the edge" | | 14 | "She turned sharply." | | 15 | "Her breath came faster." | | 16 | "The wrongness wasn’t sudden—it had" | | 17 | "she muttered, but her feet" | | 18 | "The pendant burned now, a" | | 19 | "She could feel eyes on" |
| | ratio | 0.823 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the threshold," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 57.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered like oil on water, whites that seemed to drink the darkness around them." | | 1 | "The wrongness wasn’t sudden—it had been building since she’d left the city, a low hum beneath her ribs that made her skin crawl." | | 2 | "Instead, she’d followed the pull of the pendant, the way it had guided her through backstreets and footpaths until she stood here, alone in a place that wasn’t …" | | 3 | "She could feel something tugging at the edges of her mind, pulling at memories that weren’t hers, dreams that belonged to someone else." | | 4 | "The standing stones began to hum, their ancient wood vibrating with a frequency that made her teeth ache." | | 5 | "She ran then, not daring to look back, her boots pounding against the gravel path as she fled the clearing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, but her feet kept moving" | | 1 | "it said, and the voice was like dry leaves scraping against stone" | | 2 | "she whispered, but her legs wouldn’t obey" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "the figure continued (continue)" | | 3 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |