Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD52ZBYNHMCB8WV0101F4BY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.032384
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sat nav had given up an hour ago. Aurora killed the moped's engine at the edge of Richmond Park and checked the delivery slip again, though she'd memorised it by now. Golden Empress order number forty-seven. Two portions of char siu, one mapo tofu, cash on delivery. The address read: The Old Stones, Richmond. No postcode. No house number. Yu-Fei had written it himself, his brush-pen strokes sharp as razors, and when she'd told him no such address existed, he'd only looked at her and said, "It exists tonight." So here she stood, at half past midnight, with a warming bag over her shoulder and the November dark pressing against the park gates like water against glass. The gates were locked. They hadn't been when she'd arrived. She was certain of that. She'd pushed them open with her hip — the left hinge had groaned, she'd noted it, because the sound had scattered something from the trees. Now the chain hung looped through the bars, the padlock rusted into a solid brown knot, years of weather crusted on its flank. "Brilliant," she said, and her voice came back thin. She walked the perimeter fence until she found the gap Yu-Fei had described — two oak posts leaning together like drunk friends, a footpath worn through the bracken between them. Ancient standing stones, the codex of park lore would call them, though these looked less like carved monuments than trees that had turned to stone mid-scream. She ducked between them. The air changed. That was the only way to hold it in her mind afterwards. Not warmer, not colder — changed, the way a room changed when someone stopped breathing in it. Wildflowers crowded the clearing ahead, bluebells and campion and something pale she couldn't name, all of it blooming in November, all of it trembling though she felt no wind. Her phone said 00:31. Then it said 11:47. Then the screen died between one blink and the next, though she'd charged it before her shift. The pendant under her collar began to warm. She stopped walking. The stone sat against her sternum, thumbnail-sized, crimson, and in the two months since it had arrived in an unmarked parcel it had never done anything but hang there. Now it pulsed. Slow. Steady. Like something on the other side of a wall matching its heartbeat to hers. "Just get it delivered," she told herself, "get paid, go home." The path wound deeper. She followed it because going back meant touching that padlock again, and some low animal part of her refused. The clearing opened by degrees — grass silver with frost that hadn't been there at the gates, the wildflowers growing denser, taller, until they brushed her shins. She could see her breath. She could also see, past the clearing's far edge, a light. Warm and low, the colour of a hearth through a window. Someone's house. The Old Stones, presumably, whatever it was. She took three steps towards it. Behind her, the flowers rustled. She turned. Nothing. The clearing lay still, frost unbroken except for her own footprints — a single dark line across the silver. She watched it for a long moment. Her eyes kept snagging on the flowers, on the way their heads all pointed the same direction. Towards her. Bluebells didn't do that. Nothing did that. The light ahead flickered. A figure stood in front of it now, between her and the glow. Tall. She hadn't seen it arrive. It hadn't walked into place; it had simply become, the way a word on a page became visible once you'd read it. Too far to make out a face. Close enough to see that it stood with its head tilted, as if listening to something above it. Aurora's training — her father's training, really, Brendan Carter's courtroom voice in her skull — said: assess, then act. The figure made no move towards her. The warming bag hung heavy on her shoulder. Forty-seven pounds and change, cash on delivery, and a man-shaped silence between her and the door. "Hello?" she called. The word came back to her. Not as an echo. As a voice, from the trees to her left, saying hello in her own tone but slower, tasting the word, and getting the vowel slightly wrong. She backed up two paces. The pendant throbbed against her breastbone, hot now, genuinely hot, and the figure in front of the light tilted its head the other way. Then it raised one arm. Pointing. Not at her. To her left. At the trees. She looked. She hated herself for looking, and she looked. Between two of the oak stones, where the path she had entered by should have been, the bracken stood waist-high and undisturbed. No gap. No leaning posts. Her footprints, which she could still see crossing the frosted grass, ended abruptly at the clearing's edge, as if she had been lowered there from a height. The pendant's glow bled through her shirt. A faint red heartbeat under the fabric. When she looked back, the figure was closer. Not close. Closer. Twenty yards nearer than it had been, in a space of time she couldn't account for, and she had not seen it move. Its arm was down now. The hearth-light behind it had gone from amber to something deeper, something that pulsed in the same rhythm as the stone on her chest, and she understood with the clarity of cold water that the light was not a window. It was an opening. It had edges. It had a depth that went the wrong way, down instead of through. Somewhere to her right, her own voice said, "Just get it delivered." The flowers were moving. All of them, now, swaying without wind, and the sound they made was not rustling. It was closer to whispering. Closer to breathing. A thousand small throats drawing air. Aurora did what her quick mind had always told her to do in the courtroom of her father's stories: she stopped reacting and started observing. The figure did not cross frost without breaking it — there were no tracks before it. The light was not fire. The pendant was not hers, not really; she had never been told who sent it, and she had worn it anyway, because she was twenty-five and tired and it had felt like the one beautiful thing in a life of late deliveries and a flat above a bar that never slept. The figure spoke. Its voice came from everywhere the flowers grew, a dry sound, a sound like pages turning in an empty library. "Aurora Carter." It knew her name. It knew her name, and the wrongness of that eclipsed everything else — the voice, the frost, the dead phone in her pocket — because she had told no one about this delivery. Not Eva. Not Silas. Only Yu-Fei, who had written the address in his razor strokes and told her it existed tonight. "That's my order, then," she said. Her voice held. She was proud of that, distantly, the way she might be proud of a stranger. She unslung the warming bag and set it on the frosted grass between them. The frost did not melt around it. The figure regarded the bag the way a cathedral regards a coin dropped at its door. "You shouldn't have worn the stone here," the flowers said. The pendant pulsed. The red light at the clearing's far edge pulsed with it, and for the first time the thing in front of that light moved — a step, unhurried, towards her, and the ground did not crunch beneath its foot, and the flowers leaned away from its passage like iron filings from a reversed magnet, and Aurora understood that the night had been narrowing around her since the moment she'd ducked between the oaks, every small wrongness a wall, and the walls had just become a room. She reached up and closed her hand around the pendant. It was warm as a living thing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.875
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"pulsed"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"echo"
5"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences118
matches
0"was proud"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen85
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1340
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1310
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.31
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
Empress1
Old2
Stones2
November2
Yu-Fei3
Brendan1
Carter1
Eva1
Silas1
Aurora4
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Brendan"
2"Carter"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if listening to something above it"
1"felt like the one beautiful thing in a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1340
matches(empty)
82.63% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences119
matches
0"touching that padlock"
1"see that it"
2"understood that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean32.68
std28.76
cv0.88
sampleLengths
09
181
228
310
453
59
660
73
858
925
108
1151
1211
1386
146
155
1655
174
1866
1950
203
2136
2229
239
246
2564
2614
278
2891
2912
3033
3197
3223
332
3458
3524
3637
3710
3889
3910
407
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences118
matches
0"been lowered"
1"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was not rustling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences119
ratio0.092
matches
0"She'd pushed them open with her hip — the left hinge had groaned, she'd noted it, because the sound had scattered something from the trees."
1"She walked the perimeter fence until she found the gap Yu-Fei had described — two oak posts leaning together like drunk friends, a footpath worn through the bracken between them."
2"Not warmer, not colder — changed, the way a room changed when someone stopped breathing in it."
3"The clearing opened by degrees — grass silver with frost that hadn't been there at the gates, the wildflowers growing denser, taller, until they brushed her shins."
4"The clearing lay still, frost unbroken except for her own footprints — a single dark line across the silver."
5"It hadn't walked into place; it had simply become, the way a word on a page became visible once you'd read it."
6"Aurora's training — her father's training, really, Brendan Carter's courtroom voice in her skull — said: assess, then act."
7"The figure did not cross frost without breaking it — there were no tracks before it."
8"The pendant was not hers, not really; she had never been told who sent it, and she had worn it anyway, because she was twenty-five and tired and it had felt like the one beautiful thing in a life of late deliveries and a flat above a bar that never slept."
9"It knew her name, and the wrongness of that eclipsed everything else — the voice, the frost, the dead phone in her pocket — because she had told no one about this delivery."
10"The red light at the clearing's far edge pulsed with it, and for the first time the thing in front of that light moved — a step, unhurried, towards her, and the ground did not crunch beneath its foot, and the flowers leaned away from its passage like iron filings from a reversed magnet, and Aurora understood that the night had been narrowing around her since the moment she'd ducked between the oaks, every small wrongness a wall, and the walls had just become a room."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1311
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.031273836765827616
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008390541571319604
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean11.26
std11.8
cv1.048
sampleLengths
09
123
25
311
47
52
63
730
828
94
106
115
1225
1323
149
1530
1626
174
183
1912
2017
2129
224
234
2417
258
263
2729
283
291
301
3114
3211
334
3419
3527
365
3711
3811
392
407
416
425
432
441
4519
467
4717
482
494
51.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3949579831932773
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences101
matches
0"Then it said 11:47."
1"Then the screen died between"
2"Too far to make out"
3"Then it raised one arm."
4"Somewhere to her right, her"
5"Only Yu-Fei, who had written"
ratio0.059
89.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences101
matches
0"They hadn't been when she'd"
1"She was certain of that."
2"She'd pushed them open with"
3"she said, and her voice"
4"She walked the perimeter fence"
5"She ducked between them."
6"Her phone said 00:31."
7"She stopped walking."
8"she told herself"
9"She followed it because going"
10"She could see her breath."
11"She could also see, past"
12"She took three steps towards"
13"She watched it for a"
14"Her eyes kept snagging on"
15"She hadn't seen it arrive."
16"It hadn't walked into place;"
17"She backed up two paces."
18"She hated herself for looking,"
19"Her footprints, which she could"
ratio0.327
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences101
matches
0"The sat nav had given"
1"Aurora killed the moped's engine"
2"The address read: The Old"
3"Yu-Fei had written it himself,"
4"The gates were locked."
5"They hadn't been when she'd"
6"She was certain of that."
7"She'd pushed them open with"
8"she said, and her voice"
9"She walked the perimeter fence"
10"She ducked between them."
11"The air changed."
12"That was the only way"
13"Wildflowers crowded the clearing ahead,"
14"Her phone said 00:31."
15"The pendant under her collar"
16"She stopped walking."
17"The stone sat against her"
18"she told herself"
19"The path wound deeper."
ratio0.703
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"Now the chain hung looped"
1"Now it pulsed."
2"To her left."
ratio0.03
76.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Ancient standing stones, the codex of park lore would call them, though these looked less like carved monuments than trees that had turned to stone mid-scream."
1"The clearing opened by degrees — grass silver with frost that hadn't been there at the gates, the wildflowers growing denser, taller, until they brushed her shi…"
2"Close enough to see that it stood with its head tilted, as if listening to something above it."
3"Only Yu-Fei, who had written the address in his razor strokes and told her it existed tonight."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.8646%