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Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD53A3BR2WXBB3YS7FAYRS0
Run Details
Model:
MoonshotAI: Kimi K3 (Reasoning, Low)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 24s
Cost:
$0.031256
Provider:
Moonshot AI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
90.01%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
80.03%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
71.24%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
92.59%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
25.56%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
29.44%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
98.68%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
89.5851%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
The knocking came in threes. Polite, patient, and
utterly
wrong for two in the morning.
Aurora gripped the kitchen knife
behind her back and cracked the door on the chain. A slice of corridor light. Platinum hair catching it. One amber eye, one black, both fixed on her through the gap. "Take the chain off, chérie. It's cold out here, and I've walked a long way to be insulted at a door." "Silas has rules about visitors after midnight."
She didn't move
. "Mostly that I stab them." "Silas's rules never stopped you before."
Lucien leaned one shoulder against
the frame, the ivory handle of his cane resting against his chest.
His charcoal suit had a
dark patch on the left sleeve. Wet.
The stairwell smelled of rain
and something underneath it. Copper. "You're bleeding on my doorstep." "Someone is. I haven't decided whose it is yet."
She shut the door, slid
the chain, and opened it wide.
He stepped past her into
the flat like he owned the lease, which, given how things worked in his world, he probably could have by Thursday.
She locked all three bolts
behind him.
He surveyed the room the
way he surveyed everything, fast and filing it away.
Her flat above the bar
hadn't changed since the last time he'd stood in it. Same sagging sofa. Same stack of Cardiff law textbooks she'd never returned, gathering dust under the window. Same chipped mug collection on the draining board. What had changed was her, and she watched him
notice
.
The new scar along her
collarbone.
The way she kept the
knife in her hand instead of putting it down. "Sleeve off. Let me see." "You first. Show me the knife."
She set it on the
counter, handle toward him.
A gesture of trust wrapped
in a
reminder
.
His mouth twitched, almost a
smile, and he shrugged out of his jacket with a wince he
tried to
hide and failed.
The gash ran from his
elbow to his shoulder, shallow but ugly, the edges of it wrong somehow.
They shimmered faintly, like oil
on water. "That's not a normal blade wound." "Nothing about tonight was normal."
He sat without asking, on
the one chair in the kitchenette that didn't wobble. "Avaros steel. My father's people send their regards." "Your father's people
tried to
open you like a letter, and you came here."
She fetched the first aid
kit from under the sink and dropped it on the table harder than necessary. "Not a hospital. Not one of your fixers. Here." "Hospitals ask questions. Fixers sell answers."
His good hand caught her
wrist as she reached past him for the antiseptic. Gentle.
His thumb rested exactly on
the crescent scar on her left wrist, the one from childhood, the one she'd told him about at four in the morning eight months ago, in a bed neither of them had mentioned since. "You, Aurora, just stand there and look at me like I've ruined your evening." "You ruined my year. The evening's nothing."
She pulled free and started
cleaning the wound. He didn't flinch. Half-demon pain thresholds, he'd once told her, were a point of pride and a damned nuisance for anyone trying to be kind to them. "Eight months," she said. "No word. Then you vanish from Marseille with a price on your head, and the first I hear of you in weeks is you leaking all over my landing." "You heard about Marseille." "Everyone heard about Marseille. Yu-Fei heard about Marseille, and she thinks the supernatural world is a health code violation." "And yet you didn't come looking." The black eye held hers. The amber one drifted, reading her face like a document. "I told myself you would. That was my mistake." "I told you what would happen if you chose him over me." "Your father." "My father." The antiseptic stung her fingers where the bottle dripped. "Don't say it like a curse. He's a barrister in Cardiff who thinks I'm finishing my degree. He's not a demon lord you had to kneel to, Lucien. There's no comparison." "No,"
he agreed quietly
. "There isn't. I knelt to mine. You ran from yours. We both paid." The
silence
settled between them, thick as the steam off his wet coat.
She stitched the wound in
concentrated quiet, six neat sutures, her hands steadier than her breathing. He watched her work.
She could feel his gaze
the way she'd once felt it across a card table in a basement in Soho, the night they'd met, the night he'd cheated her out of two hundred pounds and she'd let him, just to see how he did it. "There," she said, snipping the thread. "You'll keep your arm. Now tell me why you're here, and it had better not be what I think." "It's exactly what you think." "Lucien." "They know about you, Rory." The nickname in his mouth did something to her chest she resented immediately. Nobody else called her that in that voice, half prayer, half warning. "How." "Because my father has been looking for a way to hurt me that doesn't involve knives." He reached into his breast pocket with his good arm and drew out a folded photograph, creased soft from handling. He laid it on the table between them. Her face. Taken through the window of the Golden Empress, mid-shift, laughing at something Yu-Fei had said. The timestamp read Tuesday. "That's four days ago." "Three streets from here. In daylight." His jaw worked. "He sent it to me with a note. One line. 'Blood calls to blood, and debts pass down.' He's not after me anymore, chérie. He's found the softer target." She stared at the photograph. The Rory in it
looked happy
. Unarmed. Unknowing. "Why would he think I matter enough to leverage?" The question hung there. She heard it land. She'd meant it as strategy, and it came out as a wound, and from the way Lucien's expression closed like a door, he'd heard both. "Because he bugged my flat in Marseille,"
Lucien said, each word clipped
. "And there are recordings. Of me saying your name in my sleep, every night for a month, after I sent you away. Of me saying it the way a man says the name of the only thing he's ever chosen for himself." Her hand had gone still on the photograph. "You sent me away," she said. "You stood in this kitchen and told me we were a complication neither of us could afford. Those were your words. I memorised them. I had them translated into French so I could hate them in two languages." "Je le sais." "Don't." She shoved back from the table. "Don't speak French at me like it erases anything. You don't get to bleed on my floor and confess and make it romantic, Lucien. That's not how this works. I waited. For weeks I left the chain off that door, do you understand? Every night. Like an idiot. Like a girl in a film." "I know." "Then I stopped. I bolted it. I went to work. I learned to fold dumplings and I learned to sleep through the night, and I was fine." Her voice cracked on the last word and she hated it. "I was fine." "You were never fine. Neither was I." He rose, slow, his stitched arm held stiff. He didn't crowd her. He never had. He just stood within reach and let the distance be her decision. "I came tonight to warn you and to move you somewhere safe, and then to leave, if that's what you want. Say the word and I'll be a rumour by morning. But I needed you to know the truth first. You were not a complication, Aurora. You were the only uncomplicated thing in my entire rotten life, and I was too much my father's son to keep you." Downstairs, the bar's door slammed. Footsteps on the pavement outside.
Too many of them, moving
in formation, stopping directly below her window. Lucien went
very
still. "They followed me," he said. "I shook two tails in Whitechapel. I didn't shake the third." The lights of her flat
flickered
. Once. Twice. Something below them exhaled, and every bottle in Silas's bar rattled in its shelf like teeth. Aurora looked at the photograph on the table, then at the three deadbolts, then at the man she'd bolted them against for eight months. "How many?" "Four that I counted. Possibly more." "And your cane has the blade in it?" "When does it not." She crossed the room, pulled the kitchen knife from the counter, and pressed it into his good hand.
Then she reached above the
doorframe and took down the thing she'd kept taped there since February, a short iron crowbar wrapped in rosary beads, Eva's parting gift, consecrated and cold. "After this," she said, "we are having a
very
long conversation." "If we survive it, chérie, you can have any conversation you want." The window exploded inward.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
19
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"he agreed quietly [quietly]"
1
"She shoved back [back]"
dialogueSentences
59
tagDensity
0.322
leniency
0.644
rawRatio
0.105
effectiveRatio
0.068
90.01%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1502
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
2
highlights
0
"utterly"
1
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
80.03%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1502
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"reminder"
count
1
1
word
"shimmered"
count
1
2
word
"silence"
count
1
3
word
"could feel"
count
1
4
word
"footsteps"
count
1
5
word
"flickered"
count
1
highlights
0
"reminder"
1
"shimmered"
2
"silence"
3
"could feel"
4
"footsteps"
5
"flickered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
84
matches
0
"looked happy"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
84
filterMatches
0
"notice"
hedgeMatches
0
"tried to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
124
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
68
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1502
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
19
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
16
wordCount
832
uniqueNames
13
maxNameDensity
0.48
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
4
Thursday
1
Cardiff
1
Gentle
1
Soho
1
Golden
1
Empress
1
Yu-Fei
1
Tuesday
1
Rory
1
Silas
1
February
1
Eva
1
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Yu-Fei"
2
"Rory"
3
"Silas"
4
"Eva"
places
0
"Cardiff"
1
"Soho"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
50
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1502
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
124
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
61
mean
24.62
std
22.99
cv
0.934
sampleLengths
0
15
1
36
2
21
3
15
4
45
5
5
6
9
7
44
8
84
9
5
10
6
11
39
12
25
13
6
14
27
15
42
16
74
17
7
18
35
19
33
20
4
21
19
22
30
23
12
24
2
25
42
26
17
27
78
28
25
29
5
30
1
31
5
32
25
33
1
34
65
35
4
36
38
37
13
38
9
39
33
40
54
41
8
42
44
43
3
44
61
45
2
46
41
47
102
48
22
49
4
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
84
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
137
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
124
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
835
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
26
adverbRatio
0.031137724550898204
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.009580838323353293
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
124
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
124
mean
12.11
std
11.52
cv
0.951
sampleLengths
0
5
1
10
2
15
3
5
4
4
5
12
6
21
7
10
8
5
9
23
10
11
11
1
12
9
13
1
14
5
15
9
16
11
17
26
18
7
19
14
20
15
21
3
22
14
23
8
24
10
25
6
26
14
27
5
28
6
29
9
30
8
31
22
32
18
33
7
34
6
35
19
36
8
37
33
38
9
39
20
40
1
41
39
42
14
43
7
44
8
45
3
46
24
47
4
48
29
49
4
71.24%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.47580645161290325
totalSentences
124
uniqueOpeners
59
92.59%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
72
matches
0
"Too many of them, moving"
1
"Then she reached above the"
ratio
0.028
25.56%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
35
totalSentences
72
matches
0
"She didn't move"
1
"His charcoal suit had a"
2
"She shut the door, slid"
3
"He stepped past her into"
4
"She locked all three bolts"
5
"He surveyed the room the"
6
"Her flat above the bar"
7
"She set it on the"
8
"His mouth twitched, almost a"
9
"They shimmered faintly, like oil"
10
"He sat without asking, on"
11
"She fetched the first aid"
12
"His good hand caught her"
13
"His thumb rested exactly on"
14
"She pulled free and started"
15
"He didn't flinch."
16
"he agreed quietly"
17
"She stitched the wound in"
18
"He watched her work."
19
"She could feel his gaze"
ratio
0.486
29.44%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
62
totalSentences
72
matches
0
"The knocking came in threes."
1
"Aurora gripped the kitchen knife"
2
"A slice of corridor light."
3
"Platinum hair catching it."
4
"She didn't move"
5
"Lucien leaned one shoulder against"
6
"His charcoal suit had a"
7
"The stairwell smelled of rain"
8
"She shut the door, slid"
9
"He stepped past her into"
10
"She locked all three bolts"
11
"He surveyed the room the"
12
"Her flat above the bar"
13
"The new scar along her"
14
"The way she kept the"
15
"She set it on the"
16
"A gesture of trust wrapped"
17
"His mouth twitched, almost a"
18
"The gash ran from his"
19
"They shimmered faintly, like oil"
ratio
0.861
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
72
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
29
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"He stepped past her into the flat like he owned the lease, which, given how things worked in his world, he probably could have by Thursday."
98.68%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
19
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"Lucien said, each word clipped"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"he agreed quietly (agree)"
dialogueSentences
59
tagDensity
0.119
leniency
0.237
rawRatio
0.143
effectiveRatio
0.034
89.5851%