Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD53RG06VQV8WRPHEXRDN8N

Run Details

Duration:
22.2s
Cost:
$0.011924
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered Soho with a particular viciousness, the kind that soaked through shoes and collected in collar seams. The green neon of The Raven's Nest bled across the wet pavement, smearing SOHO into a watercolour. Inside, the bar breathed low light and old wood. Aurora Carter stood behind the narrow stretch of oak that passed for a staff table near the taps, her rain jacket slung over a stool, sleeves pushed to her elbows. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light when she moved. Shoulder-length black hair still dripped. “You lock up early in biblical weather,” Silas Blackwood called from the far end. He wiped a glass with a rag, his silver signet ring flashing on his right hand. His auburn hair, streaked through with grey, looked darker in the dim. He favoured his left leg when he rounded the bar, the old limp more pronounced at the end of a long shift. Rory flicked water off her hands. “You tell customers that? Bad business.” “Selective business.” The maps on the walls curled at the corners, continents warped by steam and age. Black-and-white photographs watched from their frames. The bookshelf that hid the back room stayed shut. Two regulars hunched over whiskies. The door opened and shut and brought a gust of wet air. Rory looked up out of habit. Every delivery shift trained that reflex. The woman in the doorway had an umbrella that had given up. Her coat clung. Brown hair cut short, sharp at the jaw. Cheekbones that cut harder than Rory remembered. She pushed wet strands from her forehead and left a puddle on Silas' mat. For a second Rory did not place her. Then the woman's eyes landed and stuck. “Rory?” The glass in Rory's hand slipped. She caught it before it hit the oak. A clack. Water sloshed. “Eva?” Eva Morales laughed, or coughed out something that wanted to be a laugh. She stepped forward, boots squeaking. “No. No fucking way.” Rory came around the bar before she thought. Eva met her halfway. The hug smelled of rain and cheap city perfume and something else, smoke, hairspray. Eva's coat was cold against Rory's arms. Her frame felt smaller, tighter, coiled. Eva pulled back first, hands still on Rory's shoulders. “Look at you. Your hair—” “Yours— you cut it.” “I cut everything.” Eva grinned. A chipped front tooth, Rory remembered that chip from a playground fall in Cardiff. Year six. Still there. “Christ. How long? Three years? Four?” “Four.” Eva looked past her to the bar, to Silas, to the maps. “You work here now? I thought you— Golden Empress? The moped?” “I still do. I live upstairs. Silas lets me—” Rory gestured, vague. Her throat worked. “You were supposed to call me when you got your flat sorted.” Eva's hands dropped. “Yeah.” The word landed between them. Silas set two glasses down without being asked, poured short measures. He did not interrupt. His hazel eyes moved between them and settled on Rory with a quiet weight. Eva peeled off her coat and draped it over a stool. Under it a black dress, work dress, tight. Her knees shone with rain. A tattoo curled around her right forearm, fresh lines and half-healed skin, a snake eating its tail. Rory stared. “You get that in London?” “Camden. Guy did it stoned. Cost extra for the pain. Very authentic.” Eva took the stool, took the glass Silas offered. Silas lifted his chin. “Friend from home?” “Childhood. We shared a sandbox and most of our bad decisions.” Eva knocked her glass against Rory's untouched one. “Eva Morales. I used to braid her hair before court debates.” “Eva called me at two am and told me to get on a train or she'd come drag me herself,” Rory said. That drew a flinch. Fast, gone. Eva drank. Silas leaned against the brass rail. “You want food? Kitchen closes in ten.” “I'm good,” Eva said. “Liquid diet.” He nodded and drifted to the regulars, his limp soft on the old floor. Silence pooled. The rain hammered the green sign and made the windows rattle. “You never told me you moved out of Cardiff properly,” Rory said. “Your mum—” “Mum talks too much. She tell you I was in London?” “She told me you were working. Boutique somewhere in Shoreditch. I went there. Twice. They said no Eva.” Eva stared into her whisky. The neon caught the side of her face. “Boutique lasted three weeks. Commission was a scam. You know how it is.” Rory's thumb traced the scar on her wrist, back and forth. “I would have found you a place. You know I would. You begged me to leave and then you—” “I know.” “You vanish—” “I know, Rory.” Eva's voice cracked on the second word. She pressed her lips together. “I fucked it up. Okay? You got out. You did the brave thing. You left that prick Evan and you came here and made this little—” She waved at the bar, at the maps, at the upstairs flat that smelled of fryer oil. “You made a life. I couldn't watch it while I still had nothing.” Rory's bright blue eyes fixed. “You think I had a life? I slept on your cousin's floor for six months. I delivered noodles through riots. I still wake up—” She cut herself off. Her hands curled. “You were the one who said London fixes everything.” “And you believed me. Christ. You always believed me.” Eva laughed again, sharper this time. “Cardiff's brightest pre-law student running from her boyfriend with a suitcase held together by tape because little Eva from Splott said the streets here were paved.” “I did not run because you told me to. I ran because you showed up at A and E. Remember? You waited eight hours because I said not to call Mum.” Eva went still. Outside a bus hissed past, spraying water. “I remember,” Eva whispered. Her fingers tightened around the glass. The new tattoo stretched. “I remember every fucking hour.” Rory reached across the oak. Not quite touching Eva's hand. “You look different.” “You look the same. That's worse. You look exactly the same and you look at me like I still live next door.” Eva's eyes shone, too bright for the dim bar. She blinked hard. “I got married, you know. Sort of. Did Mum tell you that bit?” Rory's spine straightened. “No.” “Lasted eleven months. His name was Marco. He sold vintage jackets and coke. Mostly coke.” Eva slid her sleeve down, covered the tattoo. “We had a flat over a nail shop in Tottenham. Rats the size of—” She stopped, swallowed. “Anyway. Not married now.” A beat. “You could have told me.” “Could have told you a lot of things.” Rory let her hand fall flat on the bar. The wood held the cold from outside. “You write? You still— you wanted to do fashion—” “I cut hair now. In Dalston. Cash only. Tips are better when you look sad enough. Turns out I'm good at sad.” Eva smiled with teeth this time. The chipped one. Rory smiled back before she could help it. Something old and elastic stretched between them, frayed but not snapped. “You want to see the flat upstairs? It's awful. Mould that looks like modern art. Silas pretends he doesn't know.” Eva looked up at the ceiling, as if she could see through it. “Silas your boss now?” “Landlord. Sometimes uncle. He was MI6 once. For real. Don't ask, he goes cryptic.” “Of course you live above a spy bar. Only you.” Silas returned with a bowl of chips he had not been asked for, set them down. His signet ring tapped the ceramic. “On the house. For prodigal friends.” Eva took one, burned her fingers, shook them out. “Thanks.” Rory watched Eva eat, watched the rain run down the window behind her, watched the green light from Silas' sign paint Eva's short hair an unnatural colour. “Stay tonight,” Rory said. “The couch folds out. Or doesn't. Either way it holds a person. We're terrible at it but it tries.” Eva did not answer right away. She finished her whisky. She looked at Rory's jacket still dripping over the stool, at the scar on Rory's wrist, at the maps that made the world look smaller than it was. “I have a shift at seven.” “Call in sick.” “I need the money.” “I have money.” That earned a look. Hard. Eva stood, coat still wet, and pulled a fiver from a small, battered purse. She set it under the glass. Silas, from the other end, shook his head but said nothing. “Walk me to the tube?” Eva asked. Rory already had her jacket in her hands. They pushed out into the rain together, the door jingling shut behind them, the green neon snapping off their silhouettes and throwing them long onto the wet Soho street.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva laughed again [again]"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.515
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.03
96.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1489
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount894
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.02
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Rory26
Morales1
Cardiff1
Silas8
Eva27
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Rory"
5"Morales"
6"Silas"
7"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1489
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences164
matches
0"trained that reflex"
1"Cheekbones that cut"
2"remembered that chip"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs101
mean14.74
std13.85
cv0.94
sampleLengths
036
19
248
364
46
56
62
747
812
944
108
117
121
1318
141
1518
164
1739
189
195
204
2129
221
2312
2411
2527
263
271
285
2929
3041
312
325
3312
349
354
363
3730
3822
396
402
416
427
436
4414
4513
4614
4711
4818
4913
99.05% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"being asked"
1"been asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs174
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences164
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount710
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.035211267605633804
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005633802816901409
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean9.08
std7.18
cv0.791
sampleLengths
019
117
29
330
413
55
614
716
812
922
106
116
122
1315
146
159
165
1712
186
196
2012
213
228
237
2414
258
267
271
286
298
302
312
321
3313
345
354
368
374
3814
397
406
419
425
434
445
4514
462
472
486
491
56.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36585365853658536
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners60
34.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"Then the woman's eyes landed"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences96
matches
0"He wiped a glass with"
1"His auburn hair, streaked through"
2"He favoured his left leg"
3"Her coat clung."
4"She pushed wet strands from"
5"She caught it before it"
6"She stepped forward, boots squeaking."
7"Her frame felt smaller, tighter,"
8"Her throat worked."
9"He did not interrupt."
10"His hazel eyes moved between"
11"Her knees shone with rain."
12"He nodded and drifted to"
13"She pressed her lips together."
14"She waved at the bar,"
15"She cut herself off"
16"Her hands curled."
17"Her fingers tightened around the"
18"She blinked hard."
19"She stopped, swallowed"
ratio0.26
6.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences96
matches
0"The rain hammered Soho with"
1"The green neon of The"
2"Aurora Carter stood behind the"
3"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
4"Shoulder-length black hair still dripped."
5"Silas Blackwood called from the"
6"He wiped a glass with"
7"His auburn hair, streaked through"
8"He favoured his left leg"
9"Rory flicked water off her"
10"The maps on the walls"
11"The bookshelf that hid the"
12"The door opened and shut"
13"Rory looked up out of"
14"Every delivery shift trained that"
15"The woman in the doorway"
16"Her coat clung."
17"Brown hair cut short, sharp"
18"She pushed wet strands from"
19"The glass in Rory's hand"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood behind the narrow stretch of oak that passed for a staff table near the taps, her rain jacket slung over a stool, sleeves pushed to her elbo…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory gestured, vague"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva laughed again (laugh)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.121
leniency0.242
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.061
85.8719%