Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5421C9NTPEKAHW7NEQV58

Run Details

Duration:
13.5s
Cost:
$0.000344
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung inward on its rusted hinges with a groan that made Aurora look up from the chipped mug of tea she’d been nursing in the dim light of Eva’s flat. The sight that met her eyes made her stomach lurch. Lucien Moreau stood in the doorway, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the rain streaking the windows behind him. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—caught the lamplight like twin flames. She hadn’t expected to see him again. Not after the way things had ended. “Lucien,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “What are you doing here?” He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his cane tapping a rhythmic pulse against the warped wooden floorboards. The scent of sandalwood and something darker—something like ozone—trailed him in. Ptolemy, the tabby cat perched on the arm of a sagging armchair, hissed and arched his back, tail lashing. “I could ask you the same,” he said, his French accent softening the edge of his words. His gaze swept the cluttered room—books stacked haphazardly, scrolls spilling from shelves, Eva’s handwriting scrawled across every available surface. “This place hasn’t changed much. Still looks like a witch’s hoard.” Aurora shifted closer to the kitchen counter, her hand instinctively brushing the crescent scar on her left wrist. “You’ve got twenty minutes to explain why you’re standing in my friend’s doorway uninvited, *mon ami*.” He smirked, that infuriatingly charming smirk she’d once found irresistible. “Is that all you’ve got? No curiosity? No—” “No time for games, Lucien.” She crossed her arms, though her pulse thrummed in her throat. “Last time we met, you said you’d never come back.” “I needed to see you.” The words were quiet, almost hesitant. For a moment, the mask slipped, and she saw something raw beneath—urgency, maybe regret. “There’s a problem.” The word hung in the air, thick and heavy. She studied him. The rain had left him damp, his coat clinging to his frame. His amber eye glinted with something dangerous. “Problems don’t just wander into flats on Brick Lane, *chérie*. You need to be more specific.” He hesitated, cane drumming against his palm. “It’s about Avaros.” Her breath caught. The realm of Avaros. She’d heard whispers in the underground tunnels beneath London, murmurs of a rift widening, of something slipping through. But she’d dismissed it as superstition, or maybe fear. Now, seeing Lucien—so certain, so *alive* with purpose—made her knees weaken. “You’re not here to tell me it’s true.” She kept her voice light, but her fingers curled into fists. “You’re here to drag me back into whatever mess you left behind.” “Was it a mess?” His laugh was bitter. “Or was it… protection?” The question snagged something in her chest. She remembered the nights they’d spent talking, him reading from the scrolls, explaining the old ways, the old powers. She remembered how his black eye had shadowed over when he looked at her, how his voice had gone low and dangerous when he’d said, *“You don’t understand what you’re walking into, Rory.”* She’d walked away anyway. “You said I was too human for this world,” she said. “I was wrong.” He stepped closer, stopping just outside her reach. “And you were right to leave. But the truth is, I need you now.” The room seemed to tilt. She wanted to argue, to retreat to the safety of her delivery bags and her quiet life above Silas’s bar. But something in the set of his jaw, the way his amber eye held hers like a promise or a threat, made her lean forward instead. “What do you need?” He reached into his coat, pulling out a slip of parchment sealed with wax. The emblem was unmistakable—a serpent coiled around a dagger. “Your old law professor,” he said, pressing it into her palm. “Jennifer Carter. She’s gone missing. The last message was to this number,” he tapped the paper, “and then… silence.” Aurora’s breath hitched. Her mother. “She’s not in Cardiff,” Lucien continued. “She was here, in London, a week ago. Someone took her. And they’re using her—” He glanced at his cane, then back at her. “They’re using her knowledge of the old texts. Of Avaros.” Her grip tightened on the parchment. Marrow prickled in her bones. This was no ordinary disappearance. This was the kind of thing that got you killed if you weren’t careful. “Why me?” “Because you’re not human anymore, Rory. Not really. That accident—” he paused, watching her flinch, “—it wasn’t just metal and blood. The scar, the way you healed so fast. You’ve got some of it in you. Power. And they need it.” She stared at him. The scar on her wrist pulsed, faintly warm. “They need *both* of us.” The silence stretched between them, broken only by the distant clatter of dishes from Golden Empress below. Aurora’s mind raced—her mother, the law, the way Lucien had always been the one person who saw the edges of what she couldn’t name. “You left me,” she whispered. “I’m sorry.” The admission was so simple, so direct, that it undid something in her. “Why now?” His hand brushed hers, just for a second, and she felt it—a current, like static in the air. “Because the same person who took your mother might take mine next. And I don’t want to lose anyone else.” She looked away, her cheeks burning. “You don’t get to ask for forgiveness and just *show up*.” “I never expected to.” The truth was, she missed him. Missed the way his voice had always been two notes higher when he was nervous, the way he’d memorized the lines of her face in the dark. Missed the way she’d felt, once, like she was exactly where she was supposed to be. “Fine,” she said finally. “But if you’re here to drag me into another one of your wars, I’m leaving.” His smile was softer now. “No wars. Just… a search. And maybe,” he added, his thumb grazing the back of her hand, “a second chance.” She pulled her hand back, but not before catching the ghost of his scent—cinnamon and something wilder, like storm clouds. “Second chances don’t come with guarantees, *mon ami*.” “No,” he agreed. “But they do come with risks worth taking.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.39
leniency0.78
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.049
95.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1063
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1063
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"lurch"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"lurch"
2"rhythmic"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"pulsed"
6"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences67
matches
0"was bitter"
1"was nervous"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords17
totalWords1051
ratio0.016
matches
0"mon ami"
1"chérie"
2"alive"
3"“You don’t understand what you’re walking into, Rory.”"
4"both"
5"show up"
6"mon ami"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount720
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora4
Eva2
Moreau1
French1
Avaros1
London1
Lucien4
Silas1
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like ozone—trailed him in"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1051
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean24.44
std17.87
cv0.731
sampleLengths
080
114
214
349
447
534
618
726
828
99
1038
1110
1245
1331
1412
1559
164
1711
1825
1951
204
2123
2230
235
2440
2530
262
2741
2812
295
3041
315
322
3315
3438
3517
364
3749
3819
3925
4020
418
4211
94.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences90
ratio0.1
matches
0"His platinum blond hair was slicked back, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—caught the lamplight like twin flames."
1"The scent of sandalwood and something darker—something like ozone—trailed him in."
2"His gaze swept the cluttered room—books stacked haphazardly, scrolls spilling from shelves, Eva’s handwriting scrawled across every available surface."
3"For a moment, the mask slipped, and she saw something raw beneath—urgency, maybe regret."
4"Now, seeing Lucien—so certain, so *alive* with purpose—made her knees weaken."
5"The emblem was unmistakable—a serpent coiled around a dagger."
6"Aurora’s mind raced—her mother, the law, the way Lucien had always been the one person who saw the edges of what she couldn’t name."
7"His hand brushed hers, just for a second, and she felt it—a current, like static in the air."
8"She pulled her hand back, but not before catching the ghost of his scent—cinnamon and something wilder, like storm clouds."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount732
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.036885245901639344
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009562841530054645
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean11.68
std7.72
cv0.661
sampleLengths
032
110
219
319
47
57
69
75
819
911
1019
1117
1219
1311
1418
1516
1610
178
1816
1910
2011
2114
223
239
243
2512
267
2716
287
293
303
314
3218
339
3411
3519
3612
378
384
397
4019
4133
424
4311
4411
4514
465
4720
4826
494
55.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.37777777777777777
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
7.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences62
matches
0"His platinum blond hair was"
1"She hadn’t expected to see"
2"she said, her voice steadier"
3"He stepped inside without waiting"
4"he said, his French accent"
5"His gaze swept the cluttered"
6"He smirked, that infuriatingly charming"
7"She crossed her arms, though"
8"She studied him."
9"His amber eye glinted with"
10"He hesitated, cane drumming against"
11"Her breath caught."
12"She’d heard whispers in the"
13"She kept her voice light,"
14"His laugh was bitter"
15"She remembered the nights they’d"
16"She remembered how his black"
17"She’d walked away anyway."
18"He stepped closer, stopping just"
19"She wanted to argue, to"
ratio0.532
16.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences62
matches
0"The door swung inward on"
1"The sight that met her"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"She hadn’t expected to see"
5"she said, her voice steadier"
6"He stepped inside without waiting"
7"The scent of sandalwood and"
8"Ptolemy, the tabby cat perched"
9"he said, his French accent"
10"His gaze swept the cluttered"
11"Aurora shifted closer to the"
12"He smirked, that infuriatingly charming"
13"She crossed her arms, though"
14"The words were quiet, almost"
15"The word hung in the"
16"She studied him."
17"The rain had left him"
18"His amber eye glinted with"
19"He hesitated, cane drumming against"
ratio0.887
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Now, seeing Lucien—so certain, so"
ratio0.016
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The door swung inward on its rusted hinges with a groan that made Aurora look up from the chipped mug of tea she’d been nursing in the dim light of Eva’s flat."
1"The sight that met her eyes made her stomach lurch."
2"He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his cane tapping a rhythmic pulse against the warped wooden floorboards."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"he said, his French accent softening the edge of his words"
2"She crossed, though her pulse thrummed in her throat"
3"She kept, but her fingers curled into fists"
4"he added, his thumb grazing the back of her hand,"
52.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Lucien continued (continue)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he added (add)"
3"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.439
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.195
77.3660%