Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD54VRWVTM2Q00PFGRHXRXJ

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Duration:
8.1s
Cost:
$0.000236
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The damp air in the abandoned Tube station carried the scent of mildew and something else—ozone, sharp and metallic, like the aftertaste of a lightning strike. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the brim of her battered fedora against the drip of water from the ceiling and stepped carefully over broken glass. Her worn leather watch caught the dim light from her flashlight, the second hand ticking with the steady rhythm of someone who had learned to trust time over intuition. "Christ," she muttered, her brown eyes scanning the makeshift crime scene. A body lay sprawled near the platform edge, its posture unnatural, as if frozen mid-fall. The victim's clothing was disheveled, but not in the way of someone who had struggled. It was too... precise. Like a puppet whose strings had been cut. Eva Kowalski stood a few paces away, arms crossed, her round glasses fogged from the humidity. Her curly red hair was tucked behind her ear for the third time since Quinn had arrived, a nervous habit that grated against Quinn's patience. The British Museum archaeologist clutched a leather satchel that looked like it had seen better decades. "The ritual circle," Eva said, as if Quinn hadn't just witnessed the scene. "It's incomplete. The sigils are there, but they're... off-center. Like someone didn't finish the work." Quinn crouched beside the body, noting the position of the limbs. The victim's left hand was outstretched toward the platform wall, where a circle of chalked symbols had been drawn in the dust. But the circle wasn't centered on the body. It was offset, as if the killer had intended something else entirely. "Ritual circle?" Quinn's voice carried a flat edge. "That's what you see here? A ritual circle?" Eva stepped closer, her freckled face creased with concentration. "The symbols match the Codex Ratiocinis. I've seen them in the restricted archives. They're supposed to be protective wards, but this—this feels wrong. The alignment is all wrong." Quinn nodded slowly, her jaw tight. She'd seen enough crime scenes in her eighteen years on the force to know when something didn't fit. The body hadn't bled out from a wound. There was no puncture, no slash, no blunt force trauma. The eyes were open, staring at nothing, and the skin was pale in a way that suggested something beyond ordinary death. She reached into her coat pocket and pulled out her own compass—a standard issue from the precinct, its needle spinning lazily north. It hung useless in this place, where the magnetic field seemed to bend on its own. But then she remembered the case file she'd carried with her, the one that mentioned a missing artifact from the Veil Market. "The Compass," she said, pulling the leather-bound folder from her satchel. "The Veil Compass. It's supposed to be here. The buyer's report said it would be sold to someone wearing a leather watch on their left wrist." Eva's eyes widened behind her glasses. "But the Compass points to supernatural rifts. If it were here, it would be drawing attention to itself." Quinn flipped through the photographs in the file. The victim, identified as Marcus Bellweather, a known occult dealer, had been last seen purchasing information from the Veil Market. The compass had been the item of interest. But the compass wasn't in the photos from the scene. "Look at the chalk marks," Quinn said, tracing her finger along the dusty symbols. "They're not protective wards. They're directional. Like a map." Eva squinted. "A map to what?" Quinn's hand moved to her own wrist, brushing the worn leather watch. "To something that's not here. The Compass would have pointed toward it, but if it's missing..." She stood, her military bearing snapping back into place. "Then whoever took it didn't want it found. And whoever killed Bellweather didn't want the Market to know." The investigation had led Quinn underground, following whispers of a stolen artifact and a death that defied explanation. Now, standing in this forgotten station, she understood why DS Morris had vanished three years ago. The supernatural wasn't just folklore. It was business. And she'd just found the ledger.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount688
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"lazily"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount688
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"magnetic"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"standard"
2"magnetic"
3"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences42
matches(empty)
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences42
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences50
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords685
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount530
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Eva5
Veil2
Market2
Marcus1
Bellweather1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Marcus"
5"Bellweather"
6"Morris"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.462
windowScore0.667
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like it had seen better decades"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount685
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
83.26% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean42.81
std18.9
cv0.441
sampleLengths
079
153
257
328
453
516
637
763
860
937
1024
1146
1223
136
1455
1548
80.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences42
matches
0"was disheveled"
1"was tucked"
2"was outstretched"
3"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs82
matches(empty)
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences50
ratio0.04
matches
0"The damp air in the abandoned Tube station carried the scent of mildew and something else—ozone, sharp and metallic, like the aftertaste of a lightning strike."
1"She reached into her coat pocket and pulled out her own compass—a standard issue from the precinct, its needle spinning lazily north."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount534
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.02247191011235955
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009363295880149813
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences50
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences50
mean13.7
std7.35
cv0.537
sampleLengths
026
124
229
311
415
515
63
71
88
916
1025
1116
1213
1315
1411
1522
168
1712
188
198
209
2128
226
2318
248
2510
2621
2722
2816
2922
3011
3126
326
3318
348
3520
368
3710
3814
399
402
414
4212
4325
4418
4518
4616
475
483
496
64.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.42
totalSentences50
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences40
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught"
1"she muttered, her brown eyes"
2"It was too..."
3"Her curly red hair was"
4"It was offset, as if"
5"She'd seen enough crime scenes"
6"She reached into her coat"
7"It hung useless in this"
8"she said, pulling the leather-bound"
9"She stood, her military bearing"
10"It was business."
ratio0.275
47.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences40
matches
0"The damp air in the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"Her worn leather watch caught"
3"she muttered, her brown eyes"
4"A body lay sprawled near"
5"The victim's clothing was disheveled,"
6"It was too..."
7"Eva Kowalski stood a few"
8"Her curly red hair was"
9"The British Museum archaeologist clutched"
10"Eva said, as if Quinn"
11"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
12"The victim's left hand was"
13"It was offset, as if"
14"Quinn's voice carried a flat"
15"Eva stepped closer, her freckled"
16"Quinn nodded slowly, her jaw"
17"She'd seen enough crime scenes"
18"The body hadn't bled out"
19"The eyes were open, staring"
ratio0.825
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"Now, standing in this forgotten"
ratio0.025
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught the dim light from her flashlight, the second hand ticking with the steady rhythm of someone who had learned to trust time over in…"
1"A body lay sprawled near the platform edge, its posture unnatural, as if frozen mid-fall."
2"Her curly red hair was tucked behind her ear for the third time since Quinn had arrived, a nervous habit that grated against Quinn's patience."
3"The British Museum archaeologist clutched a leather satchel that looked like it had seen better decades."
4"The investigation had led Quinn underground, following whispers of a stolen artifact and a death that defied explanation."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she muttered, her brown eyes scanning the makeshift crime scene"
1"Eva said, as if Quinn hadn't just witnessed the scene"
2"She stood, her military bearing snapping back into place"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.143
76.0237%