| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.395 | | leniency | 0.789 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 83.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1226 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1226 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "dance" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "mosaic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1238 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 927 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | December | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 11 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | England | 1 | | Violet | 1 | | Insistent | 1 | | Deeper | 1 | | Sunday | 1 | | Pale | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Ripples | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Violet" | | 3 | "Deeper" | | 4 | "Varga" |
| | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "England" |
| | globalScore | 0.907 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1238 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 33.46 | | std | 28.4 | | cv | 0.849 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 87 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 91 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 113 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 50 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 67 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 57 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 67 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't fade — it stopped, severed at the shoulder blades like a coat yanked off." | | 1 | "The light came from nowhere — no sun overhead, only a soft gold haze, as if the whole clearing sat at the bottom of a jar of honey." | | 2 | "The clearing went on longer than it should have — she'd seen the ring of oaks from outside, fifty paces across at most, and she'd walked fifty already with no far edge in sight." | | 3 | "They followed a stream that hadn't been there a moment ago — she was nearly certain of that — its water running uphill in one stretch, clear as gin, bright minnows suspended in it like coins in ice." | | 4 | "Not in wind — there was no wind — but slowly, patiently, a root thick as her wrist easing over the stone like a hand settling on a sleeping dog." | | 5 | "Everything else in the grove breathed warmth; the mosaic drank it from her fingertips." | | 6 | "Just for a beat — the whole clearing skipped, flowers freezing mid-nod, minnows arrested in the stream." | | 7 | "A grove within the grove — white-barked trees whose leaves chimed against one another like cutlery." | | 8 | "Its glow pulsed faster now, urgent, though she could see no tear, no shimmer — nothing but the woman and the black water and the leaning flowers." | | 9 | "Pale lavender eyes settled on Rory, and Rory felt read — not judged, simply read, cover to cover, footnotes included." | | 10 | "Ripples spread outward — upward, defying sense, lifting off the water like rings of smoke." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 667 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.026986506746626688 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005997001499250375 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 12.38 | | std | 9.41 | | cv | 0.76 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 89.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.54 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Just for a beat —" | | 1 | "Then the hum resumed, and" | | 2 | "Then the path ended." |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She tugged her collar higher" | | 1 | "It didn't fade — it" | | 2 | "She stood very still." | | 3 | "It vibrated in her teeth." | | 4 | "It turned toward her hand." | | 5 | "She walked deeper." | | 6 | "She snatched her hand back." | | 7 | "She moved her boot off" | | 8 | "They followed a stream that" | | 9 | "Her pendant grew warm against" | | 10 | "She fished it out from" | | 11 | "She looked at them" | | 12 | "Their silhouette had gone sharper" | | 13 | "They scanned the flowers, the" | | 14 | "It was the most they'd" | | 15 | "They simply walked around it," | | 16 | "She hissed and held it" | | 17 | "Its glow pulsed faster now," |
| | ratio | 0.257 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks stood in a" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "Frost silvered the grass." | | 3 | "A crow heckled from somewhere" | | 4 | "She tugged her collar higher" | | 5 | "Nyx poured themselves between two" | | 6 | "Rory stepped through the gap." | | 7 | "The cold vanished." | | 8 | "It didn't fade — it" | | 9 | "Warmth pressed against her face," | | 10 | "She stood very still." | | 11 | "Poppies and foxgloves and things" | | 12 | "The light came from nowhere" | | 13 | "Bees drifted between the blossoms," | | 14 | "It vibrated in her teeth." | | 15 | "Nyx said, solidifying beside her" | | 16 | "Violet eyes swept the clearing." | | 17 | "Rory crouched, fingers hovering over" | | 18 | "It turned toward her hand." | | 19 | "Something in their whisper almost" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks stood in a ring, eleven of them, each trunk wider than a car and fused at the roots into something that was less a circle of trees and more a single or…" | | 1 | "Warmth pressed against her face, damp and green-smelling, and her boots sank into turf that gave beneath her like a held breath." | | 2 | "Poppies and foxgloves and things she had no names for, blooms the size of dinner plates nodding on stems that shouldn't have been alive in December, in Richmond…" | | 3 | "Standing stones leaned out of the flowers at intervals, grey granite veined with something that caught the gold light and threw it back in threads of green." | | 4 | "They followed a stream that hadn't been there a moment ago — she was nearly certain of that — its water running uphill in one stretch, clear as gin, bright minn…" | | 5 | "Deeper in, she found the first ruin: a low wall of the same veined granite, broken, half-swallowed by roots that moved." | | 6 | "Not in wind — there was no wind — but slowly, patiently, a root thick as her wrist easing over the stone like a hand settling on a sleeping dog." | | 7 | "A hollow filled with mist that smelled, unmistakably, of her mother's kitchen, Sunday roast and gravy, and Rory stopped dead at the edge of it, chest tight, and…" |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory crouched, fingers hovering over a flower with petals like black glass" | | 1 | "The warmth seeped, not painful" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.105 | | leniency | 0.211 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |