Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD55C8QVB40CWW3ZCH8SMTV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.031207
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks stood in a ring, eleven of them, each trunk wider than a car and fused at the roots into something that was less a circle of trees and more a single organism wearing eleven bodies. Rory stopped at the edge of them, breath clouding in the December air, and looked back across Richmond Park. Frost silvered the grass. A crow heckled from somewhere behind her, ordinary as chips. "This is it?" She tugged her collar higher. "I've cycled past here a hundred times." "You've cycled past the idea of it." Nyx poured themselves between two of the stones, their edges blurring where the weak sun tried to touch them. "The grove decides who notices the door. Today it decided you." "Flattering." "Or hungry. The two feel similar from the inside." Rory stepped through the gap. The cold vanished. It didn't fade — it stopped, severed at the shoulder blades like a coat yanked off. Warmth pressed against her face, damp and green-smelling, and her boots sank into turf that gave beneath her like a held breath. She stood very still. "Oh," she said. Wildflowers. Everywhere. Poppies and foxgloves and things she had no names for, blooms the size of dinner plates nodding on stems that shouldn't have been alive in December, in Richmond, in any sane corner of England. The light came from nowhere — no sun overhead, only a soft gold haze, as if the whole clearing sat at the bottom of a jar of honey. Bees drifted between the blossoms, slow and fat, their hum pitched lower than any bees she'd ever heard. It vibrated in her teeth. "Time pools in here," Nyx said, solidifying beside her. Violet eyes swept the clearing. "Don't trust your watch. Don't trust your hunger. If you feel thirsty, we leave before you drink anything." "You're telling me not to eat or drink in the magic fairy circle." Rory crouched, fingers hovering over a flower with petals like black glass. It turned toward her hand. Not the light. Her hand. "Next you'll say don't dance with anyone." "You couldn't keep up if you tried." Something in their whisper almost sounded fond. She walked deeper. The clearing went on longer than it should have — she'd seen the ring of oaks from outside, fifty paces across at most, and she'd walked fifty already with no far edge in sight. Standing stones leaned out of the flowers at intervals, grey granite veined with something that caught the gold light and threw it back in threads of green. Old. Older than the oaks, maybe. When she laid a palm on one, warmth pulsed up through the stone, slow and regular. She snatched her hand back. "It's beating." "Breathing." Nyx ran a shadowed hand along the same stone, unbothered. "The grove is alive the way a sleeper is alive. Mind where you tread. Nobody likes being stepped on in their sleep." Rory looked down. She moved her boot off the moss. They followed a stream that hadn't been there a moment ago — she was nearly certain of that — its water running uphill in one stretch, clear as gin, bright minnows suspended in it like coins in ice. Her pendant grew warm against her sternum. She fished it out from under her jumper. The crimson heartstone glowed, faint but steady, pulsing in time with the standing stones. Nyx went very still. "When did that start?" "Just now. Near the stream." The warmth seeped through her shirt, not painful. Insistent. "It does this near portals. Hel portals." "I know what it does." "There's no Hel rift in a Fae grove." She looked at them. Their silhouette had gone sharper at the edges, the way it did when they braced for something. "There isn't, is there?" "The Veil is thin this week. Solstice in three days. Thin things tear, and tears don't consult maps." They scanned the flowers, the stones, the impossible sky. "Keep it where you can see it. If it burns, we run." "Lovely. Relaxing afternoon out, this." Deeper in, she found the first ruin: a low wall of the same veined granite, broken, half-swallowed by roots that moved. Not in wind — there was no wind — but slowly, patiently, a root thick as her wrist easing over the stone like a hand settling on a sleeping dog. Beyond the wall, a floor. Mosaic tiles under the moss, and when Rory knelt and brushed them clear, a face looked up at her. A woman's face in blue and gold tesserae, eyes closed, hair spread in waves that became rivers that became roads. The tiles were cold. Everything else in the grove breathed warmth; the mosaic drank it from her fingertips. "Someone built here," she murmured. "Before the oaks. Before the stones?" "People build in places that don't belong to them. It's the defining habit of your kind." Nyx tilted their head at the sleeping face. "Mine too, once. Aldric had a tower. Mortared it himself." It was the most they'd ever offered about their old life. Rory didn't look up. "What happened to it?" "The tower? Fell, I expect. Four hundred years of rain is a patient enemy." A pause. "I don't remember its door. That's the strange one. I remember mixing the lime. I remember my forearms aching. The door is gone." The bees' hum faltered. Just for a beat — the whole clearing skipped, flowers freezing mid-nod, minnows arrested in the stream. Rory's heart slammed once against her ribs. Then the hum resumed, and the warmth, and the nodding blooms, as if the grove had swallowed wrong and cleared its throat. "We should keep moving," Nyx said quietly. The grove grew stranger as they went. A grove within the grove — white-barked trees whose leaves chimed against one another like cutlery. A hollow filled with mist that smelled, unmistakably, of her mother's kitchen, Sunday roast and gravy, and Rory stopped dead at the edge of it, chest tight, and refused to go nearer. Nyx didn't tease her. They simply walked around it, and she followed. Then the path ended. A pool lay before them, round as a coin, black as the space between stars, and utterly still. Standing at its far edge was a woman in grey, silver hair loose to her waist, bare feet on the moss. Where she stood, the flowers had turned to face her, every one, like a crowd at a window. Rory's pendant flared hot. She hissed and held it away from her skin. Its glow pulsed faster now, urgent, though she could see no tear, no shimmer — nothing but the woman and the black water and the leaning flowers. "The cold one and the borrowed one." The woman's voice carried across the pool without seeming to travel at all. Pale lavender eyes settled on Rory, and Rory felt read — not judged, simply read, cover to cover, footnotes included. "You walked a long way for a short question, Aurora Carter." "I haven't asked anything yet." "No." Something moved in those eyes, sad and old and amused all at once. "But the solstice is coming, and the water has already shown me the shape of your asking." Isolde Varga crouched at the pool's edge and trailed one finger through the black surface. Ripples spread outward — upward, defying sense, lifting off the water like rings of smoke. "Come and see what it answers."
created_at"2026-07-25T17:28:58.452Z" 7/25/2026, 5:28:58 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.789
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.053
83.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1226
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1226
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"warmth"
count5
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"dance"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"mosaic"
count2
highlights
0"warmth"
1"vibrated"
2"dance"
3"whisper"
4"pulsed"
5"scanned"
6"mosaic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1238
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount927
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
December2
Richmond2
Park1
Nyx7
Rory11
Wildflowers1
England1
Violet1
Insistent1
Deeper1
Sunday1
Pale1
Isolde1
Varga1
Ripples1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Violet"
3"Deeper"
4"Varga"
places
0"December"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"England"
globalScore0.907
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1238
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean33.46
std28.4
cv0.849
sampleLengths
070
115
237
31
49
55
645
73
887
932
1042
1114
1291
132
1433
1510
1667
178
1821
195
2033
2139
225
23113
2411
2534
2619
2739
2850
297
3067
314
3257
3340
3451
355
3667
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences100
ratio0.11
matches
0"It didn't fade — it stopped, severed at the shoulder blades like a coat yanked off."
1"The light came from nowhere — no sun overhead, only a soft gold haze, as if the whole clearing sat at the bottom of a jar of honey."
2"The clearing went on longer than it should have — she'd seen the ring of oaks from outside, fifty paces across at most, and she'd walked fifty already with no far edge in sight."
3"They followed a stream that hadn't been there a moment ago — she was nearly certain of that — its water running uphill in one stretch, clear as gin, bright minnows suspended in it like coins in ice."
4"Not in wind — there was no wind — but slowly, patiently, a root thick as her wrist easing over the stone like a hand settling on a sleeping dog."
5"Everything else in the grove breathed warmth; the mosaic drank it from her fingertips."
6"Just for a beat — the whole clearing skipped, flowers freezing mid-nod, minnows arrested in the stream."
7"A grove within the grove — white-barked trees whose leaves chimed against one another like cutlery."
8"Its glow pulsed faster now, urgent, though she could see no tear, no shimmer — nothing but the woman and the black water and the leaning flowers."
9"Pale lavender eyes settled on Rory, and Rory felt read — not judged, simply read, cover to cover, footnotes included."
10"Ripples spread outward — upward, defying sense, lifting off the water like rings of smoke."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount667
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.026986506746626688
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005997001499250375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean12.38
std9.41
cv0.76
sampleLengths
037
119
24
310
48
57
626
711
81
99
105
113
1216
1322
144
153
161
171
1834
1928
2018
215
229
235
2418
2525
265
273
282
297
3014
313
3234
3327
341
355
3616
375
382
3911
4022
413
427
4338
447
458
4614
474
484
4913
89.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.54
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"Just for a beat —"
1"Then the hum resumed, and"
2"Then the path ended."
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences70
matches
0"She tugged her collar higher"
1"It didn't fade — it"
2"She stood very still."
3"It vibrated in her teeth."
4"It turned toward her hand."
5"She walked deeper."
6"She snatched her hand back."
7"She moved her boot off"
8"They followed a stream that"
9"Her pendant grew warm against"
10"She fished it out from"
11"She looked at them"
12"Their silhouette had gone sharper"
13"They scanned the flowers, the"
14"It was the most they'd"
15"They simply walked around it,"
16"She hissed and held it"
17"Its glow pulsed faster now,"
ratio0.257
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences70
matches
0"The oaks stood in a"
1"Rory stopped at the edge"
2"Frost silvered the grass."
3"A crow heckled from somewhere"
4"She tugged her collar higher"
5"Nyx poured themselves between two"
6"Rory stepped through the gap."
7"The cold vanished."
8"It didn't fade — it"
9"Warmth pressed against her face,"
10"She stood very still."
11"Poppies and foxgloves and things"
12"The light came from nowhere"
13"Bees drifted between the blossoms,"
14"It vibrated in her teeth."
15"Nyx said, solidifying beside her"
16"Violet eyes swept the clearing."
17"Rory crouched, fingers hovering over"
18"It turned toward her hand."
19"Something in their whisper almost"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The oaks stood in a ring, eleven of them, each trunk wider than a car and fused at the roots into something that was less a circle of trees and more a single or…"
1"Warmth pressed against her face, damp and green-smelling, and her boots sank into turf that gave beneath her like a held breath."
2"Poppies and foxgloves and things she had no names for, blooms the size of dinner plates nodding on stems that shouldn't have been alive in December, in Richmond…"
3"Standing stones leaned out of the flowers at intervals, grey granite veined with something that caught the gold light and threw it back in threads of green."
4"They followed a stream that hadn't been there a moment ago — she was nearly certain of that — its water running uphill in one stretch, clear as gin, bright minn…"
5"Deeper in, she found the first ruin: a low wall of the same veined granite, broken, half-swallowed by roots that moved."
6"Not in wind — there was no wind — but slowly, patiently, a root thick as her wrist easing over the stone like a hand settling on a sleeping dog."
7"A hollow filled with mist that smelled, unmistakably, of her mother's kitchen, Sunday roast and gravy, and Rory stopped dead at the edge of it, chest tight, and…"
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory crouched, fingers hovering over a flower with petals like black glass"
1"The warmth seeped, not painful"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.211
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.053
84.2890%