Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD55Q90JHZ380C1SFAD3B2Y

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.027731
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones rose from the bracken like the ribs of something buried, and Aurora stood between two of them with her phone torch held low, watching the beam shiver across bark that had no business being warm. She'd followed the pendant here. That was the reason, if reason was the right word for it. The Heartstone had burned against her sternum the whole ride through Richmond Park, hotter with every step off the path, until she'd left the gravel altogether and pushed through hawthorn that snagged her delivery jacket like fingers. Now the little crimson stone sat against her collarbone, thrumming. Steady. Patient. Like a second pulse. "Brilliant, Rory," she muttered. "Wandering round a locked park at midnight. Dad would be so proud." Her voice came out thin. The dark swallowed it whole. The clearing opened ahead of her. She knew it was the clearing from the way the trees stopped, all at once, like a held breath — a perfect circle of grass ringed by oaks, and inside it, wildflowers. In November. Hundreds of them, pale and open, faces tilted up at a moon she couldn't see through the canopy. She crouched and touched one. Real. Cool petals, dew on her fingertips. Something rustled behind her. She spun. Torchlight swept the ferns, the hawthorn, the gap between the stones where she'd come in. Nothing. The park held its ordinary night noises somewhere beyond the trees — a distant road, a fox, wind — but here, inside the ring, the silence had weight to it. It pressed on her eardrums. She stood. The pendant throbbed harder, and she pressed her palm flat over it. "What do you want me to see, then?" The clearing offered no answer. She walked it anyway, slow, counting the stones. Twelve. Thirteen. She counted again because the number bothered her, and this time she got twelve, and she stood very still for a moment and told herself she'd simply miscounted the first time. People miscounted. That's what people did. She counted a third time. Twelve. At the far edge of the circle, the grass grew wrong. She'd almost missed it — a strip where the blades lay flattened in a spiral, coiling inward to a bare patch of earth about the size of a dinner plate. The pendant went from warm to hot. Properly hot, the kind of heat that made her hiss and pinch the chain away from her skin, and in the same instant the bare patch of earth exhaled. There was no other word for it. The soil loosened, sighed, and a breath of cold air came up out of the ground and slid across her ankles like water. Aurora stepped back. Then back again. Her heel struck a root that she did not remember being there, and she caught herself against a stone — warm, like the bark, warm as a living wrist — and pulled her hand away with her heart slamming. "Right," she breathed. "Right, okay. Nope." She turned to leave. The gap between the stones where she'd entered was gone. She stood facing unbroken trunks, a wall of oak and shadow, and the cold moved up her spine vertebra by vertebra. She walked the boundary. Briskly at first, then faster, torch swinging, and every stretch of the ring looked like every other stretch, dense dark wood with no way through, as if the grove had folded its opening shut behind her like a mouth. "That's not possible," she said, louder now, because the silence had started to feel like company and she'd rather have her own voice. "I walked in. There's a gap. There's a gap." The pendant pulsed. Almost smug. Then, from somewhere in the middle of the clearing, came a sound like knuckles rapping on wood. Three slow knocks. A pause. Three more. Aurora froze. The torch beam found the spiral of flattened grass, the bare patch of earth. The soil was moving. Not collapsing — breathing. Rising and settling, rising and settling, gentle as a sleeping chest. The knocks came again. From below. She should run. Every practical, Cardiff-bred, barrister's-daughter instinct she owned said run, but her feet carried her sideways instead, along the curve of the circle, keeping the patch of earth in front of her, and that was when she saw the figure between the trees. At the edge of vision, where the torchlight died: a shape standing between two trunks. Tall. Still in the way that only things that had never needed to move could be still. When she swung the beam full onto it, there was nothing there but bark and shadow. When she let the light drift away, it returned. Watching. She could feel the attention of it on her skin like heat from a fire. "Who's there?" Her voice cracked on the second word. The grove answered with birdsong. A single, liquid trill, sweet as spring morning — at midnight, in November, in a place with no sky. It came from everywhere at once. Then it stopped, mid-note, cut off like a switched radio. In the silence that followed, something spoke. It used her name. Not "Aurora." The other one. The one only Eva used, the one from childhood bedrooms and scraped knees and secrets. *Rory.* Drawn out, soft and fond, in a voice that was almost her mother's and almost Eva's and almost her own, layered wrong, like a recording played underwater. Her whole body went cold and hot at once. "That's not funny," she said, and hated how small it sounded. The voice laughed. It laughed from the bare patch of earth, from the breathing soil, and the wildflowers all across the clearing turned their faces toward her at the same time, a slow hundred-headed swivel, pale petals catching the torchlight like eyes. The pendant scalded her skin. She grabbed it through her shirt and it thrummed against her palm — faster now, urgent, the rhythm of a heart that had just woken up. The gap in the stones reappeared. She saw it the way you see a thing in a dream, simply there where it hadn't been, black hawthorn beyond and the ordinary dark of the park beyond that. She did not run toward it. Some deep, animal part of her, the part that had survived Evan and survived London and learned to read rooms before entering them, understood that the invitation was the trap. Things that wanted you to leave didn't open the door for you. The shape between the trees stepped forward. Not into the light. The light bent away from it, her torch beam curving like water around a stone, and she saw only that it was taller than any person had a right to be, and that it wore something on its head that caught the moonless dark — a crown, or antlers, or branches growing from its skull. "Rory," it said again, tender as a lullaby. "You came all this way." The ground breathed in. She felt the pull of it in her soles, in her bones, and the flowers leaned, and the voice — her mother's, Eva's, her own — began to hum, and the tune was one she knew, one her mother had sung in the kitchen in Cardiff on wet Sunday afternoons, note for note, word for word, and Aurora stood between the breathing earth and the open door with the Heartstone burning against her chest, and did not move.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:29:09.67Z" 7/25/2026, 5:29:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"it said again [again]"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
95.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"perfect"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"throbbed"
5"pulsed"
6"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen78
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1244
ratio0.001
matches
0"Rory."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1194
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora4
Heartstone2
Richmond1
Park1
November2
Cardiff-bred1
Eva3
Drawn1
Evan1
London1
Cardiff2
Sunday1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Drawn"
4"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
3"Cardiff-bred"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like every other stretch, dense da"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1244
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"understood that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean33.62
std25.18
cv0.749
sampleLengths
039
170
216
310
470
54
653
714
88
952
106
1177
1230
1345
146
154
1610
1764
1832
195
2024
2135
226
2345
2473
259
2640
277
2852
299
3011
3142
3267
3348
3466
3513
3682
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences105
ratio0.086
matches
0"She knew it was the clearing from the way the trees stopped, all at once, like a held breath — a perfect circle of grass ringed by oaks, and inside it, wildflowers."
1"The park held its ordinary night noises somewhere beyond the trees — a distant road, a fox, wind — but here, inside the ring, the silence had weight to it."
2"She'd almost missed it — a strip where the blades lay flattened in a spiral, coiling inward to a bare patch of earth about the size of a dinner plate."
3"Her heel struck a root that she did not remember being there, and she caught herself against a stone — warm, like the bark, warm as a living wrist — and pulled her hand away with her heart slamming."
4"Not collapsing — breathing."
5"A single, liquid trill, sweet as spring morning — at midnight, in November, in a place with no sky."
6"She grabbed it through her shirt and it thrummed against her palm — faster now, urgent, the rhythm of a heart that had just woken up."
7"The light bent away from it, her torch beam curving like water around a stone, and she saw only that it was taller than any person had a right to be, and that it wore something on its head that caught the moonless dark — a crown, or antlers, or branches growing from its skull."
8"She felt the pull of it in her soles, in her bones, and the flowers leaned, and the voice — her mother's, Eva's, her own — began to hum, and the tune was one she knew, one her mother had sung in the kitchen in Cardiff on wet Sunday afternoons, note for note, word for word, and Aurora stood between the breathing earth and the open door with the Heartstone burning against her chest, and did not move."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1186
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slow hundred-headed swivel,"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03794266441821248
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005902192242833052
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.85
std13.19
cv1.113
sampleLengths
039
15
212
337
410
51
61
74
84
912
105
115
126
1332
142
1518
165
171
186
194
202
2115
221
2330
245
252
2612
278
285
298
301
311
3231
332
344
355
361
3711
3830
397
4029
417
4223
433
443
4539
463
473
484
4910
67.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4380952380952381
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences80
matches
0"Properly hot, the kind of"
1"Then back again."
2"Briskly at first, then faster,"
3"Then, from somewhere in the"
4"Then it stopped, mid-note, cut"
ratio0.063
85.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences80
matches
0"She'd followed the pendant here."
1"Her voice came out thin."
2"She knew it was the"
3"She crouched and touched one."
4"It pressed on her eardrums."
5"She walked it anyway, slow,"
6"She counted again because the"
7"She counted a third time."
8"She'd almost missed it —"
9"Her heel struck a root"
10"She turned to leave."
11"She stood facing unbroken trunks,"
12"She walked the boundary."
13"she said, louder now, because"
14"She should run."
15"She could feel the attention"
16"Her voice cracked on the"
17"It came from everywhere at"
18"It used her name."
19"Her whole body went cold"
ratio0.338
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences80
matches
0"The oak standing stones rose"
1"She'd followed the pendant here."
2"That was the reason, if"
3"The Heartstone had burned against"
4"Her voice came out thin."
5"The dark swallowed it whole."
6"The clearing opened ahead of"
7"She knew it was the"
8"Hundreds of them, pale and"
9"She crouched and touched one."
10"Something rustled behind her."
11"Torchlight swept the ferns, the"
12"The park held its ordinary"
13"It pressed on her eardrums."
14"The pendant throbbed harder, and"
15"The clearing offered no answer."
16"She walked it anyway, slow,"
17"She counted again because the"
18"That's what people did."
19"She counted a third time."
ratio0.75
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now the little crimson stone"
ratio0.013
7.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The Heartstone had burned against her sternum the whole ride through Richmond Park, hotter with every step off the path, until she'd left the gravel altogether …"
1"Properly hot, the kind of heat that made her hiss and pinch the chain away from her skin, and in the same instant the bare patch of earth exhaled."
2"Her heel struck a root that she did not remember being there, and she caught herself against a stone — warm, like the bark, warm as a living wrist — and pulled …"
3"Briskly at first, then faster, torch swinging, and every stretch of the ring looked like every other stretch, dense dark wood with no way through, as if the gro…"
4"*Rory.* Drawn out, soft and fond, in a voice that was almost her mother's and almost Eva's and almost her own, layered wrong, like a recording played underwater…"
5"Some deep, animal part of her, the part that had survived Evan and survived London and learned to read rooms before entering them, understood that the invitatio…"
6"The light bent away from it, her torch beam curving like water around a stone, and she saw only that it was taller than any person had a right to be, and that i…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.333
83.1424%