Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD56MWT3EG4CAH5Q16NPXWJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.025434
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The stairs down into the old Camden passage smelled of wet stone and something underneath it—something coppery and sweet that Harlow Quinn had learned, over eighteen years, to associate with bodies left too long in the wrong place. She ducked under the tape at the bottom of the stairwell, torch in hand, and let her eyes adjust. The station had been closed since before she was born. Tiled walls the colour of old bone, adverts flaking off in curls, a roundel so soot-blackened the station name was a rumour. The crime scene techs had rigged lamps along the platform, and their light made everything worse—harsh shadows, no hiding places. DS Amit Rao met her at the edge of the platform, notebook already out. "Victim's a male, mid-thirties, no ID. Found by a pair of urban explorers who called it in anonymously and vanished. Time of death, pathologist's first guess, sometime last night." "Cause?" "That's where it gets strange." Rao led her along the platform. "No visible wounds. No blood. No signs of struggle. He looks like he sat down against the wall and simply stopped." The man did, too. He sat propped against the tiles beneath a peeling poster for a film forty years out of cinemas, legs crossed, chin tipped toward his chest. He could have been sleeping rough, except rough sleepers didn't wear coats that cost more than Quinn's monthly rent, and they didn't carry nothing—no wallet, no phone, no keys. Not even lint in the pockets, according to the techs. Quinn crouched. The dead man's hands lay loose in his lap, palms up, almost ceremonial. On the tiles beside his right hand, something had caught the lamplight. She angled her torch. A small brass compass, greened with verdigris, its face etched with fine interlocking marks that made her eyes slip off them when she tried to focus. The needle wasn't pointing north. It wasn't pointing anywhere consistently—it trembled, wandered, swung back toward the far tunnel like a hound pulling at a lead. "Bag that separately," she said. "And nobody winds it, shakes it, or does whatever one does with a compass." "Already photographed in situ." Rao hesitated. "There's more. Or rather, there's less. SOCO went over the platform twice. No footprints in the dust except the victim's and the explorers'. No fibres. No fingerprints anywhere on the body. But—" he flipped a page—"there are scorch marks on the rails. Spaced evenly, every three metres or so, all down the tunnel. And the pathologist found this in the victim's fist." He held up an evidence bag. Inside was a small white object, smooth, curved. It took Quinn a moment. "Is that bone?" "Carved. Some kind of token. There's a hole drilled through it, like it hung on a cord. But no cord. And no marks on his neck where a cord would've been." Quinn stood slowly and looked down the length of the platform, past the lamps, into the dark where the tunnel swallowed the light. The scorch marks on the rails. The evenly spaced burns. She'd seen something like that once, three years ago, at a warehouse in Bermondsey—the case that had taken Morris. Burn patterns the fire investigator had called "impossible" and then, when pressed, "inconsistent with accelerant behaviour," which was lab-speak for I don't know and I don't want to know. She pushed the memory down where it belonged. "Here's what doesn't sit right," Rao said, lowering his voice. "No struggle, no wounds, no toxins on first screen. My read? He came down here for a buy—drugs, contraband, whatever moves in places like this—something went wrong, he had a cardiac event, natural causes, and his associates stripped his pockets and left him. The burns are old. Kids with fireworks. It happens." It was a tidy story. Quinn almost let herself like it, because tidy stories closed cases and let her sleep. Instead she walked the platform edge, torch low, the way Morris had taught her: light flat to the ground catches what upright light misses. Dust. Grime. The long grey pelt of decades. The victim's footprints came up the stairs and along the platform—she tracked them backwards—and stopped. Just stopped, eight metres from where he sat, as though he'd materialised mid-stride. She crouched again. No. Not materialised. The dust here was disturbed in a wide sweep, scuffed and re-settled, like a rug someone had beaten. Someone had erased the rest of the trail. Carefully. Patiently. You didn't do that for a dead drug buyer whose friends had panicked. And the burns on the rails. She looked at them again through the gap beneath the platform lip. Evenly spaced, Rao had said. Every three metres. But they weren't random scorch—they were paired, one on each rail, directly opposite one another, like the cross-ties of a ladder laid flat. Like something had travelled the tunnel and left scorch where its weight, or its heat, or its passage had touched. The compass needle twitched in its evidence bag when the tech lifted it past the tunnel mouth. Quinn saw it. Saw the tech see it, and decide not to have seen it. "There's a woman upstairs asking for you," a uniform called from the stairwell. "Says she's a consultant. Name of Kowalski." Quinn climbed the stairs into the grey Camden morning. The woman waiting by the cordon was small, a foot of curly red hair escaping its pins, round glasses, a worn leather satchel clutched to her chest like a shield. Freckles. Green eyes that didn't flinch when Quinn put on her face. "Detective Quinn. Eva Kowalski. British Museum." The hand she offered was ink-stained. "I study restricted archive material. I was told the scene involved a carved bone object." "Who told you that?" "The object," Eva said, and tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear, "is an entry token. There are places in this city that don't appear on any map, Detective. They move. They keep their own hours. And they ask for payment in kinds, not cash." She glanced at the station mouth, and for half a second her composure cracked, showing the fear underneath. "Your dead man paid his way in. The question you should be asking isn't who killed him. It's what he bought, and whether it followed him out." Quinn looked at her for a long moment. Eighteen years told her this woman was either a crank, a suspect, or the first honest person she'd met on this case. "Tell me about the burns on the rails," Quinn said, and watched Eva Kowalski go pale.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1104
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1104
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"trembled"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1094
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount779
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Harlow1
Quinn11
Amit1
Rao5
Bermondsey1
Morris2
Eva2
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Amit"
3"Rao"
4"Morris"
5"Eva"
6"Kowalski"
places
0"Bermondsey"
globalScore0.794
windowScore0.833
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like that once, three years ago, a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1094
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean39.07
std24.6
cv0.63
sampleLengths
038
171
243
31
432
568
631
751
819
968
1019
113
1231
1381
148
1562
1620
1760
1847
1969
2032
2120
2251
2327
244
2592
2630
2716
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"been closed"
1"was disturbed"
2"were paired"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs139
matches
0"wasn't pointing"
1"wasn't pointing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences77
ratio0.104
matches
0"The stairs down into the old Camden passage smelled of wet stone and something underneath it—something coppery and sweet that Harlow Quinn had learned, over eighteen years, to associate with bodies left too long in the wrong place."
1"The crime scene techs had rigged lamps along the platform, and their light made everything worse—harsh shadows, no hiding places."
2"He could have been sleeping rough, except rough sleepers didn't wear coats that cost more than Quinn's monthly rent, and they didn't carry nothing—no wallet, no phone, no keys."
3"It wasn't pointing anywhere consistently—it trembled, wandered, swung back toward the far tunnel like a hound pulling at a lead."
4"\"There's more. Or rather, there's less. SOCO went over the platform twice. No footprints in the dust except the victim's and the explorers'. No fibres. No fingerprints anywhere on the body. But—\" he flipped a page—\"there are scorch marks on the rails. Spaced evenly, every three metres or so, all down the tunnel. And the pathologist found this in the victim's fist.\""
5"She'd seen something like that once, three years ago, at a warehouse in Bermondsey—the case that had taken Morris."
6"The victim's footprints came up the stairs and along the platform—she tracked them backwards—and stopped."
7"But they weren't random scorch—they were paired, one on each rail, directly opposite one another, like the cross-ties of a ladder laid flat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount495
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.022222222222222223
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.006060606060606061
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean14.21
std12.79
cv0.9
sampleLengths
038
119
210
322
420
514
629
71
811
921
104
1125
1229
1310
142
1513
1612
174
1826
195
2020
215
2214
236
2462
256
268
275
283
2931
3023
316
324
3319
3429
358
3610
3752
385
3915
4024
411
421
436
4415
4513
463
471
482
4918
93.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5844155844155844
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences56
matches
0"Instead she walked the platform"
1"Just stopped, eight metres from"
2"Evenly spaced, Rao had said."
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences56
matches
0"She ducked under the tape"
1"He sat propped against the"
2"He could have been sleeping"
3"She angled her torch."
4"It wasn't pointing anywhere consistently—it"
5"he flipped a page—\"there are"
6"He held up an evidence"
7"It took Quinn a moment."
8"She'd seen something like that"
9"She pushed the memory down"
10"It was a tidy story."
11"She crouched again."
12"You didn't do that for"
13"She looked at them again"
ratio0.25
76.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences56
matches
0"The stairs down into the"
1"She ducked under the tape"
2"The station had been closed"
3"The crime scene techs had"
4"DS Amit Rao met her"
5"Rao led her along the"
6"The man did, too."
7"He sat propped against the"
8"He could have been sleeping"
9"The dead man's hands lay"
10"She angled her torch."
11"A small brass compass, greened"
12"The needle wasn't pointing north."
13"It wasn't pointing anywhere consistently—it"
14"he flipped a page—\"there are"
15"He held up an evidence"
16"It took Quinn a moment."
17"Quinn stood slowly and looked"
18"The scorch marks on the"
19"The evenly spaced burns."
ratio0.768
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He could have been sleeping rough, except rough sleepers didn't wear coats that cost more than Quinn's monthly rent, and they didn't carry nothing—no wallet, no…"
1"Green eyes that didn't flinch when Quinn put on her face."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the fire investigator had (have)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.095
90.1084%