Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD56XT6J1DKYT6NMWQT44DF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 37s
Cost:
$0.034084
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs down to the old Camden passage station had been sealed since 1962, and somebody had cut through the hoarding with something that left the steel edges curled like orange peel. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the crime scene tape and felt the temperature drop ten degrees in as many steps. Her torch beam caught the tilework — Victorian green, black with damp — and the bored face of the uniform posted at the bottom. "Morning, guv. SOCOs are already down there. DI Brandt too." "Who found the body?" "Urban explorer. Broke in chasing photographs for his channel, found more than he bargained for. He's upstairs throwing up into a evidence bag. Well. Near an evidence bag." Quinn clicked her tongue and moved past him. The tunnel swallowed the station's noise behind her. Torchlight ahead, white and clinical, spilled from the platform where the forensic team had erected their lamps. She counted her paces out of habit. Forty-one. The air smelled of wet rust and something underneath it — scorched sugar, burnt hair. Her watch ticked loud against her wrist. The platform had been a ballroom once, or wanted to be. Someone in the last century had laid a mosaic floor between the platform edge and the wall: concentric rings of coloured tile, geometric patterns that hurt to look at directly. Quinn skirted them. The body lay at the centre. A man, mid-fifties, well dressed. Grey suit, good shoes, no wallet. He sat propped against a pillar with his legs crossed and his hands folded in his lap, composed as a commuter waiting out a delay. His eyes were open. There was not a mark on him. DI Brandt crouched nearby, eating a cereal bar, nodding at her as she approached. Tall, florid, twelve years on the job and coasting. "Quinn. They said they were sending someone from Homicide. Didn't think they'd send their bloodhound." "What have we got, Brandt?" "Heart attack, I'd stake my pension on it. Poor sod comes down here for whatever reason — drugs, a meet, a dare — the climb or the fright does for him. Clean as they come." She crouched beside the body. The dead man's face held no fear. That was wrong. People who died of fright showed it in the set of the jaw, the fixed muscles. This man looked mildly inconvenienced. "No wallet, no phone, no watch." "Robbery, then. Explorer lads aren't always honest. Or whoever he was meeting took his things and ran when he dropped." "The explorer called it in from his own phone. Gave his real name." Quinn pulled on a latex glove and lifted the dead man's hand. The fingers flexed with a loose, wrong fluidity. She turned the wrist. "When did the ME put time of death?" "Preliminary says between midnight and two. Rigor's come and gone." "Rigor doesn't come and go in ten hours, Brandt. Not fully. Not in this cold." "So it's warmer down here than it looks. Tunnels hold heat." She let the hand rest and shone her torch across the mosaic. The concentric rings centred exactly where the body sat. The tiles within the innermost ring were newer than the rest — she could see it in the grout, pale where the outer rings' had gone black. Someone had relaid them. Recently. "You notice the floor?" "It's a floor, Quinn." "It's a floor somebody repaired. In a station sealed for sixty years." She rose and walked the ring, torch low. Soot smudged several tiles at the ring's inner edge, spaced at regular intervals. Seven of them. She crouched and rubbed one with a gloved finger. Wax, under the soot. "Candles. Seven candles, burning here while he died. That's not a heart attack during a drug deal. That's a ceremony." Brandt exhaled through his nose. "Oh, come on. Occult nonsense? This is Camden. Kids spray-paint pentagrams on everything that stands still. Probably some goth party that went wrong, old boy wandered in, dropped dead, they panicked and legged it." "Then where's the party? No bottles. No cans. No cigarette ends. No footprints but ours and his." She swept the torch along the platform. Dust lay thick as felt everywhere except inside the rings, where it had been swept — no, not swept. Cleared. The dust simply stopped at the ring's edge in a line sharp as a blade. "Look at that. Tell me how dust respects a mosaic." "Draught. Tunnel breeze." "Down the length of the platform? In one direction, stopping on a line?" She moved to the body again and studied the clothing. The suit was dry. Every surface in the station ran with damp — the walls wept, the rails sweated. His shoulders were dry. His hair was dry. She leaned in close and inhaled. The burnt-sugar smell clung to him, strongest at his open mouth. One of the SOCOs looked up from her kit. "There's something you should see, Detective. His pockets." She'd turned them out onto a plastic sheet. Keys, loose change, a handkerchief, a pen. And a small disc of what looked like bone, pale and polished, carved with a spiral. Quinn picked it up in her gloved hand. It was warm. She told herself that was the SOCO's body heat, transferred through the bag, and didn't believe it. The thing was warm like a coin left in the sun. "What is it?" "Some kind of token? We're logging everything." Quinn held it under her torch. The spiral was not carved, she realised. It was grown — the grain of the bone itself, coaxed into the pattern. Three years she'd sat across from specialists and pathologists, reading every impossible detail of the Morris file until the words went numb, and she'd never seen anything like it. But she'd felt the same wrongness. The same sense of a scene arranged by hands that knew what a scene should look like and didn't quite. "Brandt. Come here." He ambled over. She turned the dead man's chin with two fingers and angled her torch into his mouth. The tongue was dark. Not bitten, not swollen. Dark, as if stained, the colour reaching down toward the throat. "Heart attack doesn't do that." "Could be something he drank. Poison, then, if you're determined to make a meal of this. Suicide. He comes somewhere quiet, drinks something, arranges himself." "He walked down forty-one paces of tunnel and a flight of stairs cut through steel hoarding to kill himself in a magic circle, after sweeping the floor in a perfect line and lighting seven candles that somebody then took away. And the candles were removed and his pockets emptied after he died, because a man folding his own hands in his lap doesn't tidy the scene after himself." Brandt folded his arms. "You always do this, Quinn. You build cathedrals out of crumbs. It's why they moved you off—" He stopped. "Off what?" Her voice stayed level. "Say it." "Off the Morris case. It's why. You see patterns until the patterns see you." The platform went quiet. The SOCOs found reasons to look at their kits. Quinn's thumb moved over the face of her watch, once, the way it did when she was counting to something. Then she pocketed the torch and turned to the forensic lead. "I want the wax swabbed and the soot analysed. I want the grout from the relaid tiles dated — if the mortar's fresh, I want to know how fresh. I want his stomach contents fast-tracked, and I want a full tox screen including the exotic panel, not the standard. And I want the bone token logged, sealed, and sent to the lab with a note that it's to be handled as little as possible." "On what grounds?" Brandt spread his hands. "I can authorise the tox screen. The rest of it's overtime on a natural death." "On the grounds that his shoes are wrong." That landed. Even the SOCOs looked up. Quinn crouched once more and lifted the dead man's trouser cuff. "Good suit. Good shoes. Hand-stitched, expensive. And spotless. Not damp, not dusty. He didn't walk down here through forty-one paces of filth — his soles are clean. Somebody carried him, dead or dying, set him inside the ring, folded his hands, lit the candles, and left. This isn't a natural death and it isn't a suicide. It's a display. Somebody put him here the way you put flowers on a grave." Brandt stared at the shoes. She watched him run the maths and hate the answer. "Doesn't mean it's occult," he said finally. "No. It means it's murder, and the rest is detail." Quinn straightened and looked down the dead platform, at the rings in the tile, at the swept line of the dust. "The token means something to someone. A bone token, hand-carried, left in the pocket of a displayed body. Either the killer wanted us to find it, or the killer didn't know it was there. Both of those tell me something." "Which is?" "That he'll be back, or that someone will come looking." She pulled off her gloves and turned to the uniform at the stairs. "Nobody touches the mosaic. I want this station sealed, logged, and guarded around the clock, and I want a list of everyone who's applied for access to disused Tube property in the last six months." She took one last look at the dead man, sitting patient in the centre of his rings, composed as a commuter. Under the burnt-sugar smell, faint as a rumour, she caught something else. Cold earth. Open ground. Three years since Morris, and she knew the smell of a wrong scene. This one was wronger than any she'd stood in. She just didn't yet have the language for why.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:29:49.134Z" 7/25/2026, 5:29:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.409
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.045
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"mosaic"
count4
1
word"sense of"
count1
2
word"determined"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"standard"
count1
6
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"mosaic"
1"sense of"
2"determined"
3"perfect"
4"stomach"
5"standard"
6"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1628
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount901
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Victorian1
Brandt5
Soot1
Dust1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Brandt"
3"Soot"
4"Dust"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like bone, pale and polished, carv"
1"quite"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.614
wordCount1628
matches
0"No footprints but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean30.72
std25.24
cv0.822
sampleLengths
076
110
24
328
463
550
647
723
815
95
1035
1136
126
1320
1445
1510
1615
1711
1853
194
204
2169
2239
2369
243
2513
2654
2717
2870
293
307
3182
323
3338
345
3525
3668
3723
388
3914
4044
4174
4222
438
447
4582
4615
477
4871
492
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences93
matches
0"been sealed"
1"been swept "
2"was grown "
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was counting"
8.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences128
ratio0.047
matches
0"Her torch beam caught the tilework — Victorian green, black with damp — and the bored face of the uniform posted at the bottom."
1"The air smelled of wet rust and something underneath it — scorched sugar, burnt hair."
2"The tiles within the innermost ring were newer than the rest — she could see it in the grout, pale where the outer rings' had gone black."
3"Dust lay thick as felt everywhere except inside the rings, where it had been swept — no, not swept."
4"Every surface in the station ran with damp — the walls wept, the rails sweated."
5"It was grown — the grain of the bone itself, coaxed into the pattern."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount846
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.013002364066193853
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004728132387706856
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean12.72
std12.41
cv0.976
sampleLengths
032
120
224
310
44
528
68
78
817
97
101
1115
127
1311
1430
153
166
175
186
1925
204
217
2214
239
2415
255
2635
275
287
293
3016
315
326
3320
3425
358
364
378
3810
3915
4011
4112
429
4327
444
451
464
474
4820
4913
82.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.515625
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners66
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then she pocketed the torch"
1"Even the SOCOs looked up."
ratio0.023
94.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences86
matches
0"Her torch beam caught the"
1"She counted her paces out"
2"Her watch ticked loud against"
3"He sat propped against a"
4"His eyes were open."
5"She crouched beside the body."
6"She turned the wrist."
7"She let the hand rest"
8"She rose and walked the"
9"She crouched and rubbed one"
10"She swept the torch along"
11"She moved to the body"
12"His shoulders were dry."
13"His hair was dry."
14"She leaned in close and"
15"She'd turned them out onto"
16"It was warm."
17"She told herself that was"
18"It was grown — the"
19"He ambled over."
ratio0.314
58.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences86
matches
0"The stairs down to the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"Her torch beam caught the"
3"Quinn clicked her tongue and"
4"The tunnel swallowed the station's"
5"Torchlight ahead, white and clinical,"
6"She counted her paces out"
7"The air smelled of wet"
8"Her watch ticked loud against"
9"The platform had been a"
10"Someone in the last century"
11"Quinn skirted them."
12"The body lay at the"
13"A man, mid-fifties, well dressed."
14"He sat propped against a"
15"His eyes were open."
16"She crouched beside the body."
17"The dead man's face held"
18"That was wrong."
19"People who died of fright"
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Someone in the last century had laid a mosaic floor between the platform edge and the wall: concentric rings of coloured tile, geometric patterns that hurt to l…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.045
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.4264%