| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.028 | | leniency | 0.056 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "fractured" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 160 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 196 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1238 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.73% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 997 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 2 | | Aurora | 18 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | London | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Dymas | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Nyx | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Prince" | | 4 | "Belphegor" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.597 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like that place might" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1238 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 83 | | mean | 14.92 | | std | 13.62 | | cv | 0.913 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 40 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 63 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.55% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 196 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "The path, the fence, the distant orange spill of London - all smeared, as if seen through thick glass." | | 1 | "Their hand - when solid, long fingered, smoke at the knuckles - hovered over a bloom that rang faint when wind brushed it." | | 2 | "In this light, Aurora saw the shape inside the shadow for a half second — a man in a burnt coat, mouth open around a word." | | 3 | "Dymas - Prince Belphegor's realm of endless feast." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 806 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.026054590570719603 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 196 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 196 | | mean | 6.32 | | std | 4.48 | | cv | 0.71 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 74.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.46938775510204084 | | totalSentences | 196 | | uniqueOpeners | 92 | |
| 75.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Then shadow again." | | 1 | "Somewhere high above, chimes sounded" | | 2 | "Light fractured through them and" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hand went to her" | | 1 | "Their form thinned at the" | | 2 | "They slid between shadows, and" | | 3 | "Their hand - when solid," | | 4 | "She swallowed against it." | | 5 | "Her scar throbbed, the small" | | 6 | "It reflected no sky." | | 7 | "It reflected a different forest," | | 8 | "Their silhouette stretched." | | 9 | "Her bare feet disturbed nothing." | | 10 | "Her boots crushed thyme that" | | 11 | "Its trunk wider than a" | | 12 | "She had read about it" | | 13 | "Her stomach clenched despite herself." | | 14 | "Their form shivered." | | 15 | "Her voice came from close" | | 16 | "Her fingers stopped an inch" | | 17 | "She backed out." | | 18 | "They turned toward the pool." | | 19 | "It tugged forward, toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.165 | |
| 53.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 108 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks did not belong" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped at the treeline." | | 2 | "Bark split into spirals." | | 3 | "Branches reached for each other" | | 4 | "Her hand went to her" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant beat against" | | 6 | "Isolde stood already half inside" | | 7 | "Richmond's winter fell off her." | | 8 | "Lavender eyes reflected something that" | | 9 | "Nyx pooled beside Aurora." | | 10 | "Their form thinned at the" | | 11 | "Violet eyes opened in the" | | 12 | "Aurora's breath fogged." | | 13 | "The air beyond the stones" | | 14 | "Honey and iron and cut" | | 15 | "Isolde tilted her head." | | 16 | "A smile without amusement." | | 17 | "Aurora stepped forward." | | 18 | "The Heartstone flared hot once," | | 19 | "The Fae-Forged Blade hung from" |
| | ratio | 0.812 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 89.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde left no prints in loam that swallowed Aurora's boots ankle-deep." | | 1 | "Their hand - when solid, long fingered, smoke at the knuckles - hovered over a bloom that rang faint when wind brushed it." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |