| 70.97% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said flatly [flatly]" | | 1 | "She crouched again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.387 | | leniency | 0.774 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.129 | |
| 94.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 967 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 967 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glinting" | | 1 | "echoes" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "magnetic" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "quickened" | | 10 | "racing" | | 11 | "unwavering" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 959 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 712 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.25 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 16 | | Northern | 1 | | Line | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Eva | 14 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Museum" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.376 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like hands reaching upward" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 959 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 28.21 | | std | 20.92 | | cv | 0.742 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 67 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 68 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 52 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 6 |
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| 85.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "was etched" | | 1 | "was crafted" | | 2 | "been arranged" | | 3 | "were meant" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned Tube station hung thick with the scent of damp concrete and something sweeter—ozone, maybe, or the musk of old magic." | | 1 | "Eva shook her head, tucking a curl of red hair behind her ear—her nervous habit." | | 2 | "Its casing bore the telltale patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with symbols she’d only seen in DS Morris’s notebook before he—before everything." | | 3 | "Even in her fatigue, Eva looked younger somehow—too young to have seen what Quinn had seen in that notebook, too young to understand the weight of certain objects." | | 4 | "The victim—tall, lean, dressed in a long coat that hadn’t been there before." | | 5 | "Symbols—more of them, arranged in a pattern that made her breath catch." | | 6 | "The compass wasn’t just evidence—it was a message." |
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| 94.95% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 721 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.04576976421636616 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009708737864077669 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 10.78 | | std | 7.09 | | cv | 0.658 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 75.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4606741573033708 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Once a bustling stop on" | | 1 | "Just a body and a" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over a broken" | | 1 | "Its casing bore the telltale" | | 2 | "Her stomach clenched." | | 3 | "she said flatly" | | 4 | "She crouched again, tracing a" | | 5 | "She noticed now that the" | | 6 | "Her military bearing still sharp" | | 7 | "She crouched again, closer now," | | 8 | "she said, lifting the hem" | | 9 | "She unfolded it with gloved" | | 10 | "She looked back at the" | | 11 | "She paused, glancing at Eva" | | 12 | "She pocketed the parchment, her" | | 13 | "Its needle pointed now, unwavering," | | 14 | "She picked it up, the" | | 15 | "They were meant to be" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 14.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the" | | 2 | "The beam of her flashlight" | | 3 | "She stepped over a broken" | | 4 | "The victim lay sprawled near" | | 5 | "Eva Kowalski crouched beside her," | | 6 | "Eva murmured, not looking up" | | 7 | "Quinn knelt beside her, gloved" | | 8 | "Eva shook her head, tucking" | | 9 | "Eva’s voice carried the quiet" | | 10 | "Quinn followed her gaze." | | 11 | "A small brass compass lay" | | 12 | "Its casing bore the telltale" | | 13 | "Her stomach clenched." | | 14 | "she said flatly" | | 15 | "Eva stood, brushing off her" | | 16 | "She crouched again, tracing a" | | 17 | "Quinn exchanged a glance with" | | 18 | "Quinn remembered now, with a" | | 19 | "Something Morris had written about" |
| | ratio | 0.891 | |
| 78.13% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in her fatigue, Eva" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 93.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Symbols—more of them, arranged in a pattern that made her breath catch." | | 1 | "The full moon cast a pale glow through the grates above, but the station felt deeper, older, as if the earth itself had swallowed light whole." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva murmured, not looking up" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.226 | | leniency | 0.452 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |