| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice carried oddly [oddly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.359 | | leniency | 0.718 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 92.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1335 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 58.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1335 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "resolving" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "resolved" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1350 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1055 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Rory | 14 | | Hel | 1 | | December | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Isolde | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "December" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 0.836 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking through the last inch" | | 1 | "something like recognition — old, complicate" | | 2 | "quite keep pace with her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1350 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 25.47 | | std | 24.94 | | cv | 0.979 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 85 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 61 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 93 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 76 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 48 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 74 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 51 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 41 | | 47 | 34 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 58 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx stood beside her — or hovered, it was hard to tell where the shadow ended and the ground began." | | 1 | "Then she heard it — not felt, heard — a slower rhythm underneath the birdsong, deep as a drum played underground." | | 2 | "Wildflowers crowded every direction — bluebells, poppies, foxgloves, blooms she had no names for, petals shaped like curled tongues and tiny lanterns." | | 3 | "The path — if it was a path — wound between oaks whose trunks were wider than her flat." | | 4 | "The grove unfolded around them in layers — a hollow filled with mushrooms arranged in perfect spirals; a stream that ran uphill, black water sliding over silver stones; a fallen log hollowed by age, inside of which grew a second, miniature tree, leaves the size of her thumbnail and the deep blue of evening." | | 5 | "Rory couldn't pin it to anything at first — the grove was beautiful, warm, brighter than any December afternoon had a right to be." | | 6 | "Not overgrown — replaced." | | 7 | "Around it grew more of the impossible blooms — the lantern flowers swaying with light of their own, dusk-blue and amber." | | 8 | "She wore grey and green, and where she stepped — she was walking toward them along the pool's edge, unhurried — the grass sprang back up unbent." | | 9 | "Then they slid to Nyx, and something like recognition — old, complicated — moved through them." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 475 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.02526315789473684 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 12.27 | | std | 9.99 | | cv | 0.814 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 54 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 67.27% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.43636363636363634 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard it —" | | 1 | "All flowering at once." | | 2 | "Then she noticed the silence." | | 3 | "Then the grove opened into" | | 4 | "Then they slid to Nyx," |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "It did not have a" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes tracked along" | | 2 | "Her heartbeat thumped steady." | | 3 | "She stepped between two of" | | 4 | "Her mother's garden back in" | | 5 | "They moved deeper." | | 6 | "She stopped walking." | | 7 | "They walked on." | | 8 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 9 | "She stood slowly." | | 10 | "She looked back along the" | | 11 | "She kept her voice level" | | 12 | "Their eyes had brightened from" | | 13 | "They turned in a slow" | | 14 | "She wore grey and green," | | 15 | "Her voice carried oddly, arriving" |
| | ratio | 0.219 | |
| 49.04% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "Richmond Park had deer, joggers," | | 3 | "It did not have a" | | 4 | "Nyx stood beside her —" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes tracked along" | | 6 | "Rory pressed two fingers to" | | 7 | "Her heartbeat thumped steady." | | 8 | "The pendant under her jumper" | | 9 | "Whatever this place was, it" | | 10 | "She stepped between two of" | | 11 | "The world hiccuped." | | 12 | "Warmth slid over her bare" | | 13 | "The dead bracken behind her" | | 14 | "Wildflowers crowded every direction —" | | 15 | "Her mother's garden back in" | | 16 | "Nyx poured through the gap" | | 17 | "The sun hung in the" | | 18 | "Shadows fell at two angles." | | 19 | "Rory's own shadow stretched west," |
| | ratio | 0.822 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "It did not have a ring of oak trees fused into grey monoliths, bark petrified into whorls that caught the weak winter sun and threw it back green." | | 1 | "The grove unfolded around them in layers — a hollow filled with mushrooms arranged in perfect spirals; a stream that ran uphill, black water sliding over silver…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.205 | | leniency | 0.41 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.205 | |