Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5E3J3YD7NYXHNSA6ER9YN

Run Details

Duration:
12.7s
Cost:
$0.000518
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, turning Shaftesbury Avenue into a river of reflected neon and headlights. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her back against the damp brick wall of a closed electronics shop, watching the suspect vanish around the corner. Her leather gloves were soaked through, and the collar of her trench coat stuck to her neck, but she kept moving. The woman—early thirties, dark hair, wearing a red coat—had been waiting for her at the end of the alley behind the British Museum. One moment she'd been there, the next she'd melted into the crowd. Quinn's hand instinctively went to her left wrist, where her father's old service watch ticked steadily beneath the leather band. Military precision. That's what they'd called her in the academy. Eighteen years on the force, and she still relied on that training when everything else went dark. She broke into a jog, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the green glow of the Raven's Nest sign ahead. The woman had doubled back toward Soho, probably heading for the Nest. Quinn had been watching that place for weeks, ever since the disappearances started—three young men, all last seen leaving the bar on Saturday nights. The red coat disappeared through the Nest's front door just as Quinn rounded the corner. She skidded to a halt, pulling out her radio. "Control, this is Unit 47. I need a unit to watch the front of 77 Frith Street. Possible suspect entry." Static crackled back. "Unit 47, we copy. What's the suspect description?" "Female, red coat, approximately five-six, dark hair. Be advised, there may be supernatural involvement. Repeat, supernatural involvement suspected." Another pause. "Unit 47, you're going to need to elaborate on that last transmission." Quinn's jaw tightened. Three years ago, her partner DS Morris had died chasing something he couldn't explain. She'd spent months convincing herself it was just a random mugging, a tragic accident in a bad part of town. But the witness reports had been inconsistent, the security footage had shown impossible things, and Morris's body had been found with ice crystals forming on his jacket despite the summer heat. "I'll call it in later," she said, snapping off the radio. The green neon sign buzzed overhead, casting shifting shadows across the wet pavement. She pushed through the door. The Nest was exactly what you'd expect from a dive bar in Soho—dim lighting, sticky tables, and the smell of stale beer mixed with something else that made her nose wrinkle. Old maps covered the walls, yellowed and torn at the edges. Black-and-white photographs showed scenes that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them. "Evening, love." The bartender—a pale man with slicked-back hair—looked up from polishing glasses. "Can I help you?" Quinn moved to the end of the bar, keeping her distance. "Whiskey. Neat." "Coming right up." He poured a generous measure and slid it across. "You look like you could use it." "I'm not here for drinks." The man's smile didn't reach his eyes. "Aren't we all, love? Aren't we all." She scanned the room. Empty tables, a few regulars nursing pints in the corner. No sign of the red coat. But something felt wrong—like being watched by something that wasn't human. "Excuse me." An elderly woman materialized beside her, clutching a worn handbag. "Could you spare some change for a poor old lady?" Quinn's hand went to her weapon. The woman's face seemed to flicker, like a film reel skipping frames. "Please, love. Just spare change." "No." Quinn stood up straight. "I'm looking for someone who was just in here. Red coat, dark hair." The bartender laughed—a dry, rasping sound. "Haven't seen anyone like that, love. You sure you've got the right place?" Quinn's fingers tightened around her glass. "I know you're lying. Where is she?" Something clicked behind the bar. A section of the wooden paneling swung inward, revealing a narrow corridor lined with more maps and photographs. The air that drifted out carried the scent of ozone and something sweetly metallic. "Now, now, Detective." Silas stepped out from behind the bar—tall, gaunt, wearing a velvet waistcoat that seemed to absorb the light. "No need for hostilities." Quinn drew her weapon. "Silas. I know your real name is Silas Thornfield, and I know you've been running an illegal gambling operation out of this establishment." "Gambling?" Silas chuckled. "Oh, Detective. You're thinking much too small." He gestured toward the opening. "That woman you're looking for—she's not the first to run through that doorway, and she won't be the last." "What is this place?" Quinn demanded. "A crossroads, love. A meeting place for those who don't fit neatly into your world or ours." Silas leaned closer. "You really want to know what happened to DS Morris, don't you?" Quinn's grip didn't waver. "Tell me." "Then you'll have to come and find out." He stepped back. "But once you cross that threshold, there's no going back. The Market doesn't let go easily." The rain had slowed to a drizzle by now, but Quinn could hear footsteps above—boots on wet pavement, people hurrying home. Normal life continuing while she stood on the edge of something that defied explanation. "You don't understand," she said. "Morris was my partner. My friend. I need to know what really happened to him." Silas studied her face, his expression unreadable. "And if I told you that Morris knew about the Market? That he'd been investigating it for months before his death?" Quinn's breath caught. "What do you mean?" "He found something down there that scared him, love. Something that made him think the disappearances weren't random at all. That they were connected to something much bigger than either of you." The corridor beckoned, dark and narrow. Quinn could hear whispers coming from within—not voices exactly, but the sound of thoughts brushing against each other like moths against glass. "Go back, Detective," Silas said quietly. "Before it's too late." But Quinn had made her decision. She'd spent three years wondering if she'd imagined things, if Morris's death had broken something in her mind. If this was real, if there really was a supernatural underworld operating beneath London's streets, then she needed to see it for herself. She stepped forward, her weapon raised. The moment her boot crossed the threshold, the door slammed shut behind her. The corridor opened into a vast cavern—the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, but transformed. Stalls lined the walls, selling everything from crystalline substances that pulsed with inner light to books bound in what looked suspiciously like human skin. The air thrummed with energy, and the whispers had grown louder, forming words she could almost make out. "Bone tokens," a vendor hissed, holding up a small ivory carving. "Entry requires bone tokens, love. You got any?" Quinn's hand went to her pocket, where she kept a photograph of Morris. "I don't have any bone tokens." "Then you can't stay." The vendor's eyes glowed faintly. "But you can play." Behind her, footsteps echoed—the red coat, moving deeper into the Market. Quinn spun, following the sound until she saw a figure disappearing around a bend in the tunnel. "Wait!" she called out, but the woman was already gone. A shadow detached itself from the wall beside her. Tall, wearing a long coat, with features that seemed to shift and blur at the edges. "You shouldn't have come here, Detective," the figure said. Its voice was familiar somehow, like a memory from a dream. "Morris?" Quinn's weapon wavered slightly. "Is that you?" The figure smiled, but it wasn't Morris's smile. "No, love. Just someone who knew him. Knew what he was looking for." "What did he find?" Quinn demanded, taking a step forward. "That the Market feeds on fear, Detective. On desperation. On the things people are willing to do to survive." The figure gestured around at the stalls. "Your partner thought he could expose it, bring it down. But the Market doesn't get exposed. It gets fed." Quinn's vision blurred, and for a moment she could swear she saw Morris standing behind the figure, his face pale and desperate, mouthing something she couldn't hear. "Where is he?" she whispered. The figure's expression softened—just for a moment. "He's here, love. But not the way you remember." The whispers grew louder, forming a chorus that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. Quinn could feel something tugging at her mind, trying to pull her deeper into the Market, into whatever lay beyond the stalls and the shadows and the impossible geometry of this underground realm. Her hand tightened around her weapon, but even as she raised it, she knew it wouldn't help. The Market had rules that no badge could override, and she'd just broken the most important one by entering without permission. Somewhere in the distance, she could hear the red coat laughing.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:33:44.397Z" 7/25/2026, 5:33:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
11.32% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"He stepped back [back]"
1"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
2"The vendor's eyes glowed faintly [faintly]"
3"Quinn's weapon wavered slightly [slightly]"
4"The figure gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.396
leniency0.792
rawRatio0.238
effectiveRatio0.189
83.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"sweetly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count3
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sweetly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Thornfield"
59.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"crystalline"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"wavered"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"flicker"
2"velvet"
3"footsteps"
4"unreadable"
5"crystalline"
6"pulsed"
7"echoed"
8"familiar"
9"wavered"
10"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
46.55% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1475
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1031
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.13
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Harlow1
Quinn22
British1
Museum1
Raven1
Nest4
Soho2
Saturday1
Morris6
Silas5
London1
Tube1
Camden1
Market3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Silas"
places
0"Shaftesbury"
1"Avenue"
2"Nest"
3"Soho"
4"London"
5"Market"
globalScore0.433
windowScore0
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"waistcoat that seemed to absorb the light"
1"features that seemed to shift and blur at the edges"
2"chorus that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.678
wordCount1475
matches
0"not voices exactly, but the sound of thoughts brushing against each other like moths"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"watching that place"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean26.34
std16.99
cv0.645
sampleLengths
060
182
257
344
411
518
614
768
829
957
1017
1113
1219
135
1414
1531
1622
1723
1818
1919
2013
2137
2225
2327
2434
256
2632
276
2827
2935
3020
3128
327
3332
3428
3510
3647
3719
3856
3919
4019
4113
4228
4310
4425
4520
468
4721
4810
4945
97.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"been found"
1"being watched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs178
matches
0"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences121
ratio0.099
matches
0"The woman—early thirties, dark hair, wearing a red coat—had been waiting for her at the end of the alley behind the British Museum."
1"Quinn had been watching that place for weeks, ever since the disappearances started—three young men, all last seen leaving the bar on Saturday nights."
2"The Nest was exactly what you'd expect from a dive bar in Soho—dim lighting, sticky tables, and the smell of stale beer mixed with something else that made her nose wrinkle."
3"\"Evening, love.\" The bartender—a pale man with slicked-back hair—looked up from polishing glasses."
4"But something felt wrong—like being watched by something that wasn't human."
5"The bartender laughed—a dry, rasping sound."
6"\"Now, now, Detective.\" Silas stepped out from behind the bar—tall, gaunt, wearing a velvet waistcoat that seemed to absorb the light."
7"The rain had slowed to a drizzle by now, but Quinn could hear footsteps above—boots on wet pavement, people hurrying home."
8"Quinn could hear whispers coming from within—not voices exactly, but the sound of thoughts brushing against each other like moths against glass."
9"The corridor opened into a vast cavern—the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, but transformed."
10"Behind her, footsteps echoed—the red coat, moving deeper into the Market."
11"The figure's expression softened—just for a moment."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1047
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03629417382999045
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013371537726838587
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean12.19
std7.27
cv0.596
sampleLengths
016
123
221
323
412
520
62
78
817
921
1012
1124
1215
139
1420
153
168
1718
182
1912
203
2114
2220
2331
2411
2513
265
2731
2811
2915
3013
314
3211
332
3412
357
365
377
387
394
4010
416
4211
4312
4410
456
4612
475
485
4913
79.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4793388429752066
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners58
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Somewhere in the distance, she"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her leather gloves were soaked"
1"She broke into a jog,"
2"She skidded to a halt,"
3"She'd spent months convincing herself"
4"she said, snapping off the"
5"She pushed through the door."
6"He poured a generous measure"
7"She scanned the room."
8"He gestured toward the opening"
9"He stepped back"
10"She'd spent three years wondering"
11"She stepped forward, her weapon"
12"she called out, but the"
13"Its voice was familiar somehow,"
14"Her hand tightened around her"
ratio0.181
50.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences83
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her"
2"Her leather gloves were soaked"
3"The woman—early thirties, dark hair,"
4"Quinn's hand instinctively went to"
5"That's what they'd called her"
6"She broke into a jog,"
7"The woman had doubled back"
8"Quinn had been watching that"
9"The red coat disappeared through"
10"She skidded to a halt,"
11"Static crackled back."
12"Quinn's jaw tightened."
13"She'd spent months convincing herself"
14"she said, snapping off the"
15"The green neon sign buzzed"
16"She pushed through the door."
17"The Nest was exactly what"
18"The bartender—a pale man with"
19"Quinn moved to the end"
ratio0.819
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"If this was real, if"
ratio0.012
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She broke into a jog, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the green glow of the Raven's Nest sign ahead."
1"Normal life continuing while she stood on the edge of something that defied explanation."
2"Quinn could feel something tugging at her mind, trying to pull her deeper into the Market, into whatever lay beyond the stalls and the shadows and the impossibl…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she called out, but the woman was already gone"
36.79% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Silas chuckled (chuckle)"
1"Quinn demanded (demand)"
2"a vendor hissed (hiss)"
3"she called out (call out)"
4"Quinn demanded (demand)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.189
leniency0.377
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.226
75.8999%