Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5G6Q8QEH8QTP94AJZWKDS

Run Details

Model:
Laguna XS 2.1
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
8.1s
Cost:
$0.000270
Provider:
Poolside

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
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100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
95.13% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
100.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
31.84% AI-ism word frequency (details)
100.00% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
100.00% Filter word density (details)
100.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
46.34% Name drop frequency (details)
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
2.76% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
100.00% Paragraph length variance (details)
100.00% Passive voice overuse (details)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
100.00% Sentence length variance (details)
68.20% Sentence opener variety (details)
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
44.62% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
76.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
27.03% Technical jargon density (details)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions (details)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
75.3024% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary like sentinels carved from midnight itself, their surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to shift when Aurora's eyes weren't directly on them. She paused at the grove's edge, her breath catching in her throat. "It's time," Isolde had said, her voice carrying an unnatural echo as if spoken in a cathedral. "The Veil grows thin." Nyx materialized beside Aurora with barely a sound, their violet eyes reflecting the pale lavender light that filtered through the canopy above. The shade's form rippled like heat distortion over asphalt, solid enough to feel against her skin when she reached out. Aurora's fingers brushed the palm of her glove. "You're certain about this? The ritual?" "Certain enough to die for it, if necessary." Nyx's voice was wind through dead leaves. "The Prince grows impatient. Belphegor does not wait for mortals." The Heartstone pendant at Aurora's throat pulsed—a faint crimson warmth that made her skin prickle. She'd found it two weeks ago in the ruins beneath Golden Empress, left by someone who knew. Someone who knew about the Veil. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching moonlight that shouldn't have reached this place. The seer's lavender eyes held depths Aurora had never correctly read. "The winter solstice approaches. The barrier weakens." They crossed the threshold. The moment they stepped between the standing stones, reality hiccupped. Aurora stumbled, her delivery bag clattering to the moss-slick ground. The world tilted, colors bleeding at the edges like a bad television signal. When her vision cleared, the grove had changed. The oaks stood taller now, their branches woven together into a cathedral ceiling. Light filtered through leaves that shimmered with an inner luminescence—greens and blues and purples that had no name in any language she knew. "Welcome to Richmond Park," Nyx whispered, but their voice sounded wrong here, stretched thin across dimensions. "Or not. Time is a suggestion in these spaces." The ground beneath their feet wasn't earth anymore. It was something softer, spongier, carpeted with grass that released fragrances Aurora couldn't identify—sweetness like honeyed rain mixed with something sharper, metallic. Bioluminescent fungi clustered at the base of the standing stones, pulsing in rhythm with her heartbeat. She pulled out her phone. No signal. Of course. "The Veil's rift point," Isolde murmured, touching one of the standing stones. Ancient runes flared to life along the stone's surface, silver letters that burned away as quickly as they appeared. "Here, the barrier between realms thins. Hel's influence seeps through." Aurora's skin crawled. The air had grown thick, syrupy. She could taste iron on her tongue—blood, maybe, or rust. Somewhere far away, a bell tolled. Or maybe it was her heart. Time moved differently here, and she couldn't tell if an hour had passed or a century. Nyx knelt by a cluster of the glowing fungi. "Dymasian influence," they said, their fingers hovering just above the caps without touching them. "The gluttony realm's mark. Sweets and excess, rotting from the inside out." Aurora remembered the kitchen at Golden Empress—the way Yu-Fei's grandmother had spoken of Dymas, how the otherworldly ingredients seemed to hum with their own hunger. She'd thought it was metaphor. Now she understood. "The Prince sent word," Nyx continued, rising. "His realm stirs. The Veil weakens. Souls grow... hungry." Isolde moved toward the center of the grove where the trees parted to reveal a sight that made Aurora's knees weak. A fissure in reality itself—thin as paper, shimmering like oil on water. Through it, she could see impossible things: landscapes of amber and gold, vineyards that stretched beyond sight, feasting halls where silhouettes moved with gluttonous abandon. The warmth from the rift touched her face like breath. "Hel calls to its own," Isolde said, placing a hand over her heart. "And the barrier remembers." Aurora's pendant flared, the crimson gem cutting through the silver light. She could feel something watching from the other side—not hostile, exactly, but hungry. Patient. Like a predator that had waited centuries for the right moment. "The ritual," Nyx said, turning to face her. "You must complete it at the solstice's peak. The Veil will be at its weakest." Aurora looked at the fissure, then at her friends—the human who'd fled a life of law for something more real, the shadow between worlds, the seer exiled for sharing visions. All of them standing at the edge of something that shouldn't exist. "What happens if I don't?" she asked. Isolde's smile was sad, ancient. "The world remains as it is. Mortal. Limited. But the rifts grow stronger with each passing season. Eventually, the barrier breaks entirely." The fungi pulsed again, and Aurora noticed they were forming patterns now—not random light, but symbols matching those on the standing stones. A language. A warning. "She's right," Nyx said, their form flickering. "But the ritual requires sacrifice. Something of equal weight to what you seek." Aurora's fingers found the scar on her left wrist, the crescent moon from that childhood accident. "What kind of weight?" "Life itself," Isolde said simply. "Or something that cannot be returned." From the fissure, the amber light deepened, and Aurora glimpsed figures moving in the feasting halls—helbound souls, their forms translucent but unmistakably human. They turned toward the rift point, drawn by something Aurora couldn't name. Her phone buzzed. She almost laughed—almost—before remembering the void of signal. Instead, the pendant grew hot against her chest, and she understood that some things traveled faster than light. "So we begin," Nyx said, drawing something from their apparently empty sleeve—a vial of liquid that shifted colors like oil in water. "The Prince grows impatient. And impatient gods make poor neighbors." Isolde nodded, her silver hair floating as if underwater. "The Veil weakens. The ritual strengthens. Such is the balance." Aurora looked at the fissure one last time, where the amber landscapes stretched toward horizons that hurt to imagine. Somewhere in those realms, Belphegor was counting down to something that would reshape everything. She closed her eyes and whispered a prayer to no one and everywhere all at once. The ancient grove held its breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.071
95.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1027
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1027
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"predator"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"etched"
2"echo"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"depths"
6"shimmered"
7"otherworldly"
8"could feel"
9"predator"
10"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"was sad"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1014
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.34% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount820
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora17
Nyx8
Heartstone1
Golden2
Empress2
Veil1
Ancient1
Yu-Fei1
Dymas1
Isolde8
Belphegor1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Empress"
3"Ancient"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Isolde"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.463
windowScore0.667
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shift when Aurora's eyes weren't directly on them"
1"ing from their apparently empty sleeve—a vial"
2.76% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.972
wordCount1014
matches
0"not hostile, exactly, but hungry"
1"not random light, but symbols matching those on the standing stones"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"understood that some"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean28.17
std15.18
cv0.539
sampleLengths
042
121
242
314
425
538
632
74
810
967
1025
1146
129
1341
1447
1535
1633
1716
1868
1917
2036
2123
2242
237
2427
2526
2620
2720
2811
2935
3029
3132
3219
3333
3416
356
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs141
matches
0"were forming"
1"was counting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences87
ratio0.138
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant at Aurora's throat pulsed—a faint crimson warmth that made her skin prickle."
1"Light filtered through leaves that shimmered with an inner luminescence—greens and blues and purples that had no name in any language she knew."
2"It was something softer, spongier, carpeted with grass that released fragrances Aurora couldn't identify—sweetness like honeyed rain mixed with something sharper, metallic."
3"She could taste iron on her tongue—blood, maybe, or rust."
4"Aurora remembered the kitchen at Golden Empress—the way Yu-Fei's grandmother had spoken of Dymas, how the otherworldly ingredients seemed to hum with their own hunger."
5"A fissure in reality itself—thin as paper, shimmering like oil on water."
6"She could feel something watching from the other side—not hostile, exactly, but hungry."
7"Aurora looked at the fissure, then at her friends—the human who'd fled a life of law for something more real, the shadow between worlds, the seer exiled for sharing visions."
8"The fungi pulsed again, and Aurora noticed they were forming patterns now—not random light, but symbols matching those on the standing stones."
9"From the fissure, the amber light deepened, and Aurora glimpsed figures moving in the feasting halls—helbound souls, their forms translucent but unmistakably human."
10"She almost laughed—almost—before remembering the void of signal."
11"\"So we begin,\" Nyx said, drawing something from their apparently empty sleeve—a vial of liquid that shifted colors like oil in water."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount835
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.037125748502994015
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011976047904191617
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean11.66
std6.69
cv0.574
sampleLengths
030
112
217
34
422
520
68
76
815
910
1015
1117
126
1314
1411
157
164
1710
1810
1913
208
2113
2223
2316
249
258
2622
2716
285
292
302
3112
3219
3310
343
356
3610
376
386
3916
409
4114
4212
4325
445
453
467
479
4821
4912
68.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4367816091954023
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences65
matches
0"Somewhere far away, a bell"
1"Instead, the pendant grew hot"
2"Somewhere in those realms, Belphegor"
ratio0.046
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences65
matches
0"She paused at the grove's"
1"She'd found it two weeks"
2"They crossed the threshold."
3"It was something softer, spongier,"
4"She pulled out her phone."
5"She could taste iron on"
6"they said, their fingers hovering"
7"She'd thought it was metaphor."
8"She could feel something watching"
9"They turned toward the rift"
10"Her phone buzzed."
11"She almost laughed—almost—before remembering the"
12"She closed her eyes and"
ratio0.2
44.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences65
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"She paused at the grove's"
2"Isolde had said, her voice"
3"Nyx materialized beside Aurora with"
4"The shade's form rippled like"
5"Aurora's fingers brushed the palm"
6"Nyx's voice was wind through"
7"The Heartstone pendant at Aurora's"
8"She'd found it two weeks"
9"Someone who knew about the"
10"Isolde stepped forward, her silver"
11"The seer's lavender eyes held"
12"They crossed the threshold."
13"The moment they stepped between"
14"Aurora stumbled, her delivery bag"
15"The world tilted, colors bleeding"
16"The oaks stood taller now,"
17"Light filtered through leaves that"
18"Nyx whispered, but their voice"
19"The ground beneath their feet"
ratio0.831
76.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Now she understood."
ratio0.015
27.03% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Nyx materialized beside Aurora with barely a sound, their violet eyes reflecting the pale lavender light that filtered through the canopy above."
1"The Heartstone pendant at Aurora's throat pulsed—a faint crimson warmth that made her skin prickle."
2"Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching moonlight that shouldn't have reached this place."
3"Through it, she could see impossible things: landscapes of amber and gold, vineyards that stretched beyond sight, feasting halls where silhouettes moved with gl…"
4"All of them standing at the edge of something that shouldn't exist."
5"Somewhere in those realms, Belphegor was counting down to something that would reshape everything."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Nyx whispered, but their voice sounded wrong here, stretched thin across dimensions"
1"they said, their fingers hovering just above the caps without touching them"
2"Nyx said, turning to face her"
3"Nyx said, their form flickering"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Isolde had (have)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
3"Nyx continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.286
75.3024%