Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5GT038H8KX7E1TM6HKFSR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.027841
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came again — three measured raps, unhurried, the kind that assumed you'd answer eventually. Aurora froze over the kitchen counter, Ptolemy's half-opened tin of sardines in one hand. Eva was in Edinburgh until Thursday. Nobody else knew she was house-sitting. Nobody she wanted to see, anyway. "Aurora." The voice came muffled through three deadbolts and a warped door. Smooth, faintly accented, infuriatingly calm. "I can hear the cat complaining. Open up." Her stomach dropped straight through the floorboards of the curry house below. She crossed the flat in five strides, stepped over a teetering stack of Eva's research notes, and worked the deadbolts one by one. Top. Middle. Bottom. She left the chain on and opened the door three inches. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing under the flickering corridor bulb, charcoal suit immaculate, platinum hair damp from the drizzle, one gloved hand resting on the ivory head of his cane. His mismatched eyes — amber and black — found hers through the gap and held. "You've got to be joking," she said. "Good evening to you too." Rain slid down his collar. He didn't move to wipe it. "May I come in?" "No." "The stairwell smells of turmeric and someone died on the third floor in 1987. The ghost is tedious company." "Then you and the ghost can keep each other—" "There are two men watching this building from the off-licence across the street." His voice didn't change register. That was the worst of it. He delivered it like a wine recommendation. "They arrived twenty minutes before I did. They're not here for the curry." Aurora stared at him through the gap. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, yowling his betrayal. "Slide the chain, Rory." "Don't call me that." "Slide the chain, Aurora." She slid the chain. He stepped past her into the flat and the whole cramped space seemed to shrink around him — the books, the scrolls, the secondhand coat rack. He took it in with one slow sweep of those eyes, and something flickered across his face that he buried before she could name it. "You moved," he said. "Eva's in Edinburgh. I'm feeding the cat." "You left the flat above the bar." "I didn't leave anything. I'm house-sitting." She shut the door and threw all three bolts, mostly so her hands had something to do. "How did you find me?" "I'm an information broker." He set his cane against the wall with exaggerated care, as though to show her his hands were empty. "Finding people is the entire job description." "And the men across the street?" "Are a separate and worsening problem." He finally looked at her — properly looked, the way he used to, like she was a document written in a language only he bothered to learn. "But before we discuss them, you should know that I didn't come here to—" "To what?" She folded her arms. "To apologise? Bit late. Eight months late, roughly." The corridor bulb buzzed. Somewhere below, the curry house's extractor fan rattled. Lucien removed his gloves finger by finger and laid them over the back of Eva's chair. "I was going to say 'to rekindle anything.' But since you've raised the subject—" "I didn't raise anything." "You said the word 'apologise' before I did." "Because you owe me one!" Ptolemy leapt onto the counter and shoved his face into the sardine tin. Neither of them looked at him. Lucien exhaled through his nose — the closest he ever came to a laugh, or to losing patience; she'd never decided which. "I told you in March that my silence was not a choice." "You told me in March that you'd 'explain when you could.'" She heard her own voice climb and reined it in. "And then you vanished. Again. I sent four messages. Your associate in Soho told me you'd left the country. Your other associate told me you'd never existed." "The second one is a romantic. Ignore him." "Lucien." He went still. She'd forgotten that — the way her saying his name did something to him, pulled him taut like wire. It had been a weapon once. She'd used it without thinking, and now it hung in the flat between them alongside the sardine smell and eight months of silence. "The men outside," he said quietly, "work for a collector who acquired a certain ledger last week. My father's people want it back. My name is on page one, and yours—" He stopped. "Mine." "Page eleven. A delivery you made for me in November. The one to the warehouse in Bermondsey." His jaw tightened. "I was assured your involvement was undocumented. I was assured incorrectly." Aurora sat down on the arm of Eva's sofa because her knees had made the decision for her. "The parcel you said was restaurant supplies." "It was, in the loosest possible sense." "You used me." "I protected you. There's a difference, and the difference is why I spent four months dismantling every record of that delivery from Marseille to—" "You vanished!" She was on her feet again, and Ptolemy bolted off the counter. "You don't get to disappear and call it protection. People who protect you tell you things. Evan used to decide things for me too. He also thought I was too fragile to be consulted." The name landed like a dropped glass. Lucien's face did something she'd only seen once before — the night outside Silas' bar, when he'd found her sitting on the kerb with her split lip and her delivery bag and her whole life in pieces, and he'd said nothing at all, just taken off his coat and put it around her shoulders and sat down on the kerb beside her in his two-thousand-pound suit. "I am not him," he said, very low. "Then prove it. Stay in the room. Tell me the truth while it's still happening instead of after." Her voice cracked on the last word and she hated it, hated that he heard it. He crossed the flat. Slowly — he did everything slowly, she'd once told him he moved like a man being paid by the hour, and he'd smiled, actually smiled, and she'd spent a week trying to make it happen again. He stopped a foot away. Close enough that she could smell rain on wool and something darker underneath, something that wasn't cologne and wasn't entirely human. "The truth while it's still happening," he repeated. "That's the deal." "Then here it is." The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one caught nothing at all. "I left because staying meant watching you become a page in that ledger. I came back tonight because they found you anyway, and I would rather stand in this shoebox of a flat with a cat glaring at me than be anywhere else on Earth knowing you were in it alone." He paused. "And I have thought about the kerb outside Silas' bar every day since March. Not the ledger. The kerb. You, eating my chips, telling me my suit cost more than your degree. That's the truth while it's still happening." Aurora's heart was doing something structurally unsound. "You're still a bastard," she said. "Frequently." "And you're going to fix the ledger thing." "Tonight. There's a forger in Whitechapel who owes me—" "Tomorrow." She reached past him, flicked off the lamp by the window, plunging the flat into the amber wash of the streetlight outside — away from any watching eyes across the road. Her hand brushed his sleeve on the way back and neither of them pretended it was an accident. "Tonight you're going to sit on Eva's terrible sofa, and eat whatever's in her freezer, and tell me everything. Page by page. All of it." Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa and claimed the good cushion. Lucien looked at the cat, then at her, and something in his shoulders came down for the first time since the landing. "The sofa," he said, "or the chair?" "Sofa." She held his gaze. "There's room."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.383
leniency0.767
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.033
88.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1328
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1328
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"stomach"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1338
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount716
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy5
Edinburgh1
Thursday1
Smooth1
Eva4
Moreau1
Rain1
Aurora4
Lucien5
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Smooth"
2"Eva"
3"Moreau"
4"Rain"
5"Aurora"
6"Lucien"
places
0"Edinburgh"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1338
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"forgotten that — the"
1"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean21.24
std21.38
cv1.007
sampleLengths
016
132
225
312
437
546
67
720
81
919
109
1144
1215
134
144
154
164
1751
184
197
207
2128
2230
236
2447
2514
2612
2730
284
298
305
3119
3234
3348
348
351
3651
3733
381
3931
4025
417
423
4324
4448
457
4666
478
4834
4966
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"being paid"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences103
ratio0.097
matches
0"The knock came again — three measured raps, unhurried, the kind that assumed you'd answer eventually."
1"His mismatched eyes — amber and black — found hers through the gap and held."
2"He stepped past her into the flat and the whole cramped space seemed to shrink around him — the books, the scrolls, the secondhand coat rack."
3"\"Are a separate and worsening problem.\" He finally looked at her — properly looked, the way he used to, like she was a document written in a language only he bothered to learn."
4"Lucien exhaled through his nose — the closest he ever came to a laugh, or to losing patience; she'd never decided which."
5"She'd forgotten that — the way her saying his name did something to him, pulled him taut like wire."
6"Lucien's face did something she'd only seen once before — the night outside Silas' bar, when he'd found her sitting on the kerb with her split lip and her delivery bag and her whole life in pieces, and he'd said nothing at all, just taken off his coat and put it around her shoulders and sat down on the kerb beside her in his two-thousand-pound suit."
7"Slowly — he did everything slowly, she'd once told him he moved like a man being paid by the hour, and he'd smiled, actually smiled, and she'd spent a week trying to make it happen again."
8"\"Then here it is.\" The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one caught nothing at all."
9"\"Tomorrow.\" She reached past him, flicked off the lamp by the window, plunging the flat into the amber wash of the streetlight outside — away from any watching eyes across the road."
99.34% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount687
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.040756914119359534
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01455604075691412
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean12.99
std11.38
cv0.876
sampleLengths
016
114
26
36
46
512
65
78
812
923
101
111
121
1311
1431
1515
167
1710
186
194
201
2119
229
2318
246
257
2613
277
288
294
304
314
324
3326
3425
354
367
377
3823
395
4023
417
426
4333
4414
456
468
474
488
4916
64.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4174757281553398
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"Somewhere below, the curry house's"
1"Slowly — he did everything"
ratio0.036
12.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her stomach dropped straight through"
1"She crossed the flat in"
2"She left the chain on"
3"His mismatched eyes — amber"
4"He didn't move to wipe"
5"His voice didn't change register"
6"He delivered it like a"
7"She slid the chain."
8"He stepped past her into"
9"He took it in with"
10"She shut the door and"
11"He set his cane against"
12"He finally looked at her"
13"She folded her arms"
14"She heard her own voice"
15"He went still."
16"She'd forgotten that — the"
17"It had been a weapon"
18"She'd used it without thinking,"
19"he said quietly, He stopped"
ratio0.518
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences56
matches
0"The knock came again —"
1"Aurora froze over the kitchen"
2"Eva was in Edinburgh until"
3"Nobody else knew she was"
4"Nobody she wanted to see,"
5"The voice came muffled through"
6"Her stomach dropped straight through"
7"She crossed the flat in"
8"She left the chain on"
9"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
10"His mismatched eyes — amber"
11"Rain slid down his collar"
12"He didn't move to wipe"
13"His voice didn't change register"
14"That was the worst of"
15"He delivered it like a"
16"Aurora stared at him through"
17"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
18"She slid the chain."
19"He stepped past her into"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Close enough that she could smell rain on wool and something darker underneath, something that wasn't cologne and wasn't entirely human."
81.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He set, as though to show her his hands were empty"
1"Her voice cracked on, hated that he heard it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.117
leniency0.233
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.033
84.1474%