| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1435 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1435 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "crystal" | | 4 | "depths" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "stark" | | 11 | "intensity" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "determined" | | 16 | "charged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 34.36% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1426 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.03% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1291 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Hair | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 4 | | Blade | 4 | | Grove | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae | 5 | | Courts | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Dymasian | 1 | | Nyx | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Hair" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.88 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "something like ozone and old magic" | | 1 | "felt like minutes outside now stretched" | | 2 | "purr that seemed to emanate from the very earth itself" | | 3 | "path that seemed to appear beneath their feet as if the grove itself were guiding them" | | 4 | "as if coming from everywhere at once" | | 5 | "as if walking through air, its form solidifying as it emerged" | | 6 | "as if struggling to maintain their presence in this realm" |
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| 59.75% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.403 | | wordCount | 1426 | | matches | | 0 | "not their images but scenes from other worlds" | | 1 | "no longer abstract shapes but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.53% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 41.94 | | std | 17.97 | | cv | 0.428 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 81 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 56 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 4 |
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| 96.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "been crafted" | | 1 | "was connected" |
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| 59.94% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 238 | | matches | | 0 | "were watching" | | 1 | "was drawing" | | 2 | "were guiding" | | 3 | "were writing" | | 4 | "was hunting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment they stepped through the standing stones, carrying with it the scent of night-blooming jasmine and something else—something like ozone and old magic." | | 1 | "Time here moved like honey—thick and strange." | | 2 | "Trees with bark like polished moonstone reached toward a sky painted in shades that had no name—colors that shifted and swirled like oil on water." | | 3 | "The sound came again—a deep, resonant purr that seemed to emanate from the very earth itself." | | 4 | "Strange symbols carved into the trunks pulsed with soft light, and Aurora realized with a jolt that they were writing themselves as they walked—words in a language she couldn't read but somehow understood." | | 5 | "The standing stones, the pocket realm, the way time flowed differently—all of it was connected to the Veil that separated Earth from Hel and the Fae Courts." | | 6 | "\"Run,\" she said to Isolde, but the seer only smiled—a sad, knowing smile." | | 7 | "But Aurora noticed something as she studied them more closely—their forms weren't entirely solid." |
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| 99.55% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1308 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.040519877675840976 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01529051987767584 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 16.39 | | std | 6.88 | | cv | 0.42 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 54.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3563218390804598 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She left no footprints in" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice like" | | 2 | "It had been growing hotter" | | 3 | "She'd received it from an" | | 4 | "she said, her voice carrying" | | 5 | "They had wings like stained" | | 6 | "they observed, their whisper-like voice" | | 7 | "They moved faster then, following" | | 8 | "They emerged into a clearing" | | 9 | "They were too large for" | | 10 | "she said, but her voice" | | 11 | "they called back, their voice" | | 12 | "It was taller than any" | | 13 | "she said to Isolde, but" | | 14 | "They circled the group like" | | 15 | "They flickered at the edges," | | 16 | "they murmured, more to themselves" | | 17 | "She stepped forward, the Fae-Forged" |
| | ratio | 0.228 | |
| 23.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment" | | 1 | "Aurora felt the Hair on" | | 2 | "Isolde moved ahead, her silver" | | 3 | "She left no footprints in" | | 4 | "Aurora asked, her voice sounding" | | 5 | "The question hung in the" | | 6 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 7 | "The faint violet of their" | | 8 | "they murmured, their voice like" | | 9 | "Aurora clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 10 | "It had been growing hotter" | | 11 | "She'd received it from an" | | 12 | "The grove opened before them" | | 13 | "Trees with bark like polished" | | 14 | "Bioluminescent flowers bloomed in impossible" | | 15 | "Aurora called out, falling into" | | 16 | "The seer paused, turning to" | | 17 | "she said, her voice carrying" | | 18 | "Something rustled in the branches" | | 19 | "They had wings like stained" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt the Hair on her arms rise as the world shifted around them, the familiar green expanse of Richmond Park dissolving into a realm that defied every la…" | | 1 | "Isolde moved ahead, her silver hair catching light that didn't seem to come from anywhere in particular." | | 2 | "She left no footprints in the dew-kissed grass that sparkled with motes of gold, each step taking her further into a grove where the trees themselves seemed to …" | | 3 | "The faint violet of their eyes reflected the ambient glow that permeated everything." | | 4 | "Something rustled in the branches above, and Aurora looked up to see creatures that defied description flitting between the trees." | | 5 | "They had wings like stained glass, bodies that shifted between solid and translucent, and eyes that glowed with their own inner light." | | 6 | "They moved faster then, following a path that seemed to appear beneath their feet as if the grove itself were guiding them." | | 7 | "The trees grew closer together here, their branches intertwining overhead to form a natural canopy that filtered the shifting light into dappled patterns on the…" | | 8 | "Three figures moved in the water's reflection, their forms shifting and flowing like smoke given purpose." | | 9 | "They were too large for normal humans, too angular, too wrong in ways that made her skin crawl." | | 10 | "The standing stones, the pocket realm, the way time flowed differently—all of it was connected to the Veil that separated Earth from Hel and the Fae Courts." | | 11 | "The first one stepped through the pool's surface as if walking through air, its form solidifying as it emerged." | | 12 | "They circled the group like predators assessing their prey, their laughter echoing in the strange air." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asked, her voice sounding small in the vast space" | | 1 | "they observed, their whisper-like voice carrying an undercurrent of wariness" | | 2 | "Isolde said, though her tone suggested she already knew this was futile" | | 3 | "she said, but her voice lacked conviction even to her own ears" | | 4 | "Isolde replied, her voice carrying that same otherworldly quality" | | 5 | "they murmured, more to themselves than to the others" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Aurora called out (call out)" | | 2 | "they observed (observe)" | | 3 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "they called back (call back)" | | 6 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 7 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |