Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5NVPQD521TGN7RV93ZGSH

Run Details

Duration:
15.0s
Cost:
$0.000417
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The path through Richmond Park had always been a shortcut home from the late shift at the Golden Empress, but tonight it felt like a mistake. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter, though the air carried the same damp chill she'd walked through a hundred times before. The standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae-touched grove stood dark against the moonless sky, their ancient oaks twisted into shapes that made her squint. She'd come here for a reason — something the pendant had been pulsing about for the past hour, a slow warmth against her collarbone that no rational part of her could ignore. The crimson gemstone had been a gift from someone who'd vanished before she'd learned their name, and it had led her here, to this pocket of earth that existed between worlds. The first wrongness was the silence. Not the absence of sound, but the wrongness of it — birds that should have been calling had gone quiet, and the usual rustle of foxes through the undergrowth had stilled. Even the wind seemed to hold its breath. Aurora stopped at the edge of the clearing, her hand instinctively going to the pendant. It was warm now, almost hot, and pulsing in time with something she couldn't hear. The wildflowers that bloomed year-round in this place should have been silver and pale in the darkness, but she could swear some of them glowed faintly, their colors too vibrant for the night. "Probably just foxfire," she muttered to herself, but her voice sounded too loud in the stillness. The path curved deeper into the grove, and she followed it, her boots crunching on fallen leaves that should have been crisp from autumn but felt soft underfoot, like something rotting rather than simply dead. The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces smooth and dark, and she noticed something that made her pause — the shadows they cast didn't match their positions. The moon was behind her, but the stones cast shadows forward, stretching toward her like outstretched fingers. She shook her head. Trick of the light. Trick of being tired, of working too many hours, of running from one thing and landing in another. But then she heard it. A sound like fabric dragging across stone, coming from somewhere behind her. She turned, but there was nothing there — just the dark line of trees and the faint, wrong glow of the flowers. The sound came again, closer this time, and she realized it wasn't fabric at all. It was breathing, shallow and uneven, like someone holding themselves in. Aurora started walking faster, her pace quickening. The pendant burned against her skin now, and she could feel its pulse in her teeth. The path wound through the grove, and the trees seemed to lean inward as she passed, their branches tangling overhead like skeletal hands. She'd walked this path dozens of times, but the landmarks were wrong — a fallen log that shouldn't have been there, a patch of flowers that bloomed in colors she'd never seen before. The breathing was gone, but something else had taken its place. Footsteps, slow and deliberate, matching her pace but always just out of sight. She told herself it was her own echo, that the acoustics in the grove played tricks, but her rational mind had been failing her since she'd stepped into the clearing. She broke into a jog, and the footsteps matched her speed. When she stopped, they stopped too, lingering for just a moment before fading away. The pendant was so hot now she could feel it through the fabric of her shirt, and she pressed her palm against it, willing it to stop. The clearing opened up ahead, and she could see the old stone circle at its center — a place she'd never noticed before, despite walking this path countless times. The stones were arranged in a perfect circle, and in the center stood something that made her stop dead. A figure, or what had been a figure. It stood too still, its outline blurred at the edges like a reflection in disturbed water. Aurora blinked, and it shifted, turning toward her with a movement that was almost but not quite human. The pendant flared, and she stumbled back, her hand flying to her mouth. "You shouldn't have come here," the figure said, but its voice was wrong — layered, like multiple people speaking at once, and the words came out backwards before rearranging themselves into something that made sense. Aurora backed away, her boots sinking into the soft earth that felt wrong beneath her feet. The figure didn't move, but she could feel its attention on her, heavy and pressing like a physical weight. The flowers around the circle bloomed brighter, their colors bleeding into each other in ways that hurt to look at directly. "Who are you?" she called out, her voice shaking more than she wanted to admit. The figure tilted its head, and for a moment she thought she could see through it, see the trees and the sky and the path behind her all at once. "You left something behind," it said, and the voice was different now — younger, familiar, like someone she'd known long ago. "You always do." The pendant burned so fiercely she thought it might crack, and she realized with a jolt that it wasn't just warm — it was counting something. One pulse, two, three, each one slower than the last, like a heartbeat running down. "My mother used to say that about lost things," Aurora said, and she wasn't sure why she was talking to it, why she was trying to find purchase in conversation when every instinct screamed at her to run. "That you always left something behind." The figure stepped forward, and the ground beneath it didn't ripple or bend, but the shadows around it did, stretching and warping until the space between them seemed to fold in on itself. "She was right," it said, and now its voice was her own, but older, worn thin by something that had taken too long. Aurora's hand went to her left wrist, where the small crescent-shaped scar from childhood throbbed with a pain that had nothing to do with injury. The pendant's pulse slowed, and she realized it wasn't counting down — it was matching the rhythm of something else, something that lived in the space between heartbeats. "You came for answers," the figure continued, and its form flickered, showing her glimpses of other versions of itself, other versions of the clearing, other versions of the path that led here. "But answers have weight, and they don't travel lightly." The wind picked up then, though there had been no wind before, and it carried scents that shouldn't exist — ozone and rain and something sweet and rotten all at once. The flowers bloomed and withered in the same breath, petals scattering across the circle in colors that stained the air even after they'd fallen. Aurora wanted to ask what it meant, wanted to demand to know who had given her the pendant and why it had brought her here, but her throat was too tight and her legs too unsteady. The figure reached out, and she saw now that its hand was translucent, made of the same stuff as twilight and forgotten dreams. "Time moves differently here," it said, and the words echoed, bouncing off the stones and the trees and something else that lived in the spaces between. "An hour inside can be minutes or days outside. You've been here longer than you think." The pendant's pulse was so slow now she could count the seconds between each one, and with each pulse, she felt something slipping away — a memory, a feeling, a piece of herself that she couldn't name but knew she'd miss when it was gone. "How long?" she whispered, and her voice sounded foreign to her own ears. The figure smiled, and it was a sad thing, like watching sunlight fade from a winter afternoon. "Long enough to forget why you came." The last thing she heard before the world tilted was her own name, spoken in a voice that was almost but not quite her mother's, and the pendant went cold against her chest, leaving only the echo of its warmth and the certainty that she was not alone, never had been, and never would be.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.643
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1393
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1393
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count3
5
word"pulse"
count5
6
word"footsteps"
count2
7
word"echo"
count2
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"throbbed"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"loomed"
4"could feel"
5"pulse"
6"footsteps"
7"echo"
8"perfect"
9"weight"
10"familiar"
11"throbbed"
12"flickered"
13"echoed"
14"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
52.15% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1405
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1327
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Golden1
Empress1
Fae-touched1
Aurora8
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a mistake"
1"not quite human"
2"not quite her mother's, and the pendant went cold against her chest, leaving only the echo of its warmth and the certainty that she was not alone, never had been, and never would be"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.712
wordCount1405
matches
0"Not the absence of sound, but the wrongness of it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
57.96% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean48.45
std17.1
cv0.353
sampleLengths
072
163
245
363
416
579
626
765
879
954
1052
1148
1255
1335
1456
1515
1654
1741
1844
1956
2053
2141
2255
2359
2442
2545
2613
2724
2855
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences63
matches
0"was gone"
1"were arranged"
2"was gone"
29.79% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs235
matches
0"was breathing"
1"was counting"
2"was talking"
3"was trying"
4"was matching"
5"wasn't counting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences68
ratio0.176
matches
0"She'd come here for a reason — something the pendant had been pulsing about for the past hour, a slow warmth against her collarbone that no rational part of her could ignore."
1"Not the absence of sound, but the wrongness of it — birds that should have been calling had gone quiet, and the usual rustle of foxes through the undergrowth had stilled."
2"The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces smooth and dark, and she noticed something that made her pause — the shadows they cast didn't match their positions."
3"She turned, but there was nothing there — just the dark line of trees and the faint, wrong glow of the flowers."
4"She'd walked this path dozens of times, but the landmarks were wrong — a fallen log that shouldn't have been there, a patch of flowers that bloomed in colors she'd never seen before."
5"The clearing opened up ahead, and she could see the old stone circle at its center — a place she'd never noticed before, despite walking this path countless times."
6"\"You shouldn't have come here,\" the figure said, but its voice was wrong — layered, like multiple people speaking at once, and the words came out backwards before rearranging themselves into something that made sense."
7"\"You left something behind,\" it said, and the voice was different now — younger, familiar, like someone she'd known long ago."
8"The pendant burned so fiercely she thought it might crack, and she realized with a jolt that it wasn't just warm — it was counting something."
9"The pendant's pulse slowed, and she realized it wasn't counting down — it was matching the rhythm of something else, something that lived in the space between heartbeats."
10"The wind picked up then, though there had been no wind before, and it carried scents that shouldn't exist — ozone and rain and something sweet and rotten all at once."
11"The pendant's pulse was so slow now she could count the seconds between each one, and with each pulse, she felt something slipping away — a memory, a feeling, a piece of herself that she couldn't name but knew she'd miss when it was gone."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1318
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03414264036418816
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004552352048558422
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean20.66
std10.54
cv0.51
sampleLengths
026
120
226
332
431
56
631
78
815
915
1033
1116
1235
1327
1417
154
164
1718
185
1912
2022
2115
2211
237
2416
2523
2633
2711
2813
2930
3011
3114
3227
3329
3419
358
3616
3718
3813
3935
4016
4119
4221
4315
4430
4521
463
4726
4815
4938
35.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3088235294117647
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners21
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Even the wind seemed to"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences63
matches
0"She'd come here for a"
1"It was warm now, almost"
2"she muttered to herself, but"
3"She shook her head."
4"She turned, but there was"
5"It was breathing, shallow and"
6"She'd walked this path dozens"
7"She told herself it was"
8"She broke into a jog,"
9"It stood too still, its"
10"she called out, her voice"
11"it said, and the voice"
12"it said, and now its"
13"it said, and the words"
14"she whispered, and her voice"
ratio0.238
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences63
matches
0"The path through Richmond Park"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter,"
2"The standing stones marking the"
3"She'd come here for a"
4"The crimson gemstone had been"
5"The first wrongness was the"
6"Aurora stopped at the edge"
7"It was warm now, almost"
8"The wildflowers that bloomed year-round"
9"she muttered to herself, but"
10"The path curved deeper into"
11"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
12"The moon was behind her,"
13"She shook her head."
14"Trick of the light."
15"Trick of being tired, of"
16"A sound like fabric dragging"
17"She turned, but there was"
18"The sound came again, closer"
19"It was breathing, shallow and"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae-touched grove stood dark against the moonless sky, their ancient oaks twisted into shapes that made her squi…"
1"The wildflowers that bloomed year-round in this place should have been silver and pale in the darkness, but she could swear some of them glowed faintly, their c…"
2"The path curved deeper into the grove, and she followed it, her boots crunching on fallen leaves that should have been crisp from autumn but felt soft underfoot…"
3"The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces smooth and dark, and she noticed something that made her pause — the shadows they cast didn't match their posit…"
4"She'd walked this path dozens of times, but the landmarks were wrong — a fallen log that shouldn't have been there, a patch of flowers that bloomed in colors sh…"
5"Aurora backed away, her boots sinking into the soft earth that felt wrong beneath her feet."
6"Aurora's hand went to her left wrist, where the small crescent-shaped scar from childhood throbbed with a pain that had nothing to do with injury."
7"The pendant's pulse slowed, and she realized it wasn't counting down — it was matching the rhythm of something else, something that lived in the space between h…"
8"The wind picked up then, though there had been no wind before, and it carried scents that shouldn't exist — ozone and rain and something sweet and rotten all at…"
9"The last thing she heard before the world tilted was her own name, spoken in a voice that was almost but not quite her mother's, and the pendant went cold again…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she muttered, but her voice sounded too loud in the stillness"
1"the figure said, but its voice was wrong — layered, like multiple people speaking at once, and the words came out backwards before rearranging themselves into something that made sense"
2"she called out, her voice shaking more than she wanted to admit"
3"it said, and the voice was different now — younger, familiar, like someone she'd known long ago"
4"it said, and the words echoed, bouncing off the stones and the trees and something else that lived in the spaces between"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"the figure continued (continue)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.643
leniency1
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.444
64.7445%