| 77.55% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn crouched again [again]" | | 1 | "Quinn's eyes drifted back [back]" | | 2 | "Morris asked quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.347 | | leniency | 0.694 | | rawRatio | 0.176 | | effectiveRatio | 0.122 | |
| 91.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1163 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1163 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "magnetic" | | 5 | "the last thing" | | 6 | "analyzed" | | 7 | "intensity" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 49 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1159 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.04% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 777 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.06 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 16 | | Tube | 1 | | Morris | 10 | | Thames | 2 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.47 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "chill that seemed to seep from the walls themselves" | | 1 | "looked like a spilled bag of chips but wa" | | 2 | "seemed deeper more substantial than they should have been" | | 3 | "not quite" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.863 | | wordCount | 1159 | | matches | | 0 | "not with the lazy rotation of a magnetic compass finding north, but with frantic energy, as if it were trying to escape the conf" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 25.76 | | std | 20.26 | | cv | 0.787 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 50 | | 35 | 48 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 32 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 59 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 53 | | 44 | 15 |
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| 76.62% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "got filed" | | 1 | "was etched" | | 2 | "was cracked" | | 3 | "been folded" |
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| 64.86% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "were trying" | | 2 | "was seeing" |
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| 37.04% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of damp concrete and something else—ozone, maybe, or the metallic tang that preceded a storm." | | 1 | "The usual detritus of urban decay—discarded newspapers, broken glass, the occasional syringe—but arranged in a pattern that made her skin prickle." | | 2 | "But when she blinked, everything was as it had been—or as close to \"as it had been\" as anything could be in a place where the rules of reality seemed to bend and warp like smoke." |
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| 90.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 781 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.05121638924455826 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010243277848911651 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 14.31 | | std | 10.88 | | cv | 0.76 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 69.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4691358024691358 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 74.07% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he saw the same" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't turn around." | | 1 | "She knew that voice, the" | | 2 | "she said, crouching beside something" | | 3 | "It was warm, though the" | | 4 | "he asked, though he already" | | 5 | "She pointed to the ground." | | 6 | "They stood in the silence" |
| | ratio | 0.156 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "The fluorescent lights above the" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over" | | 2 | "The air tasted of damp" | | 3 | "She didn't turn around." | | 4 | "She knew that voice, the" | | 5 | "DS Morris had been her" | | 6 | "Morris stepped closer, his flashlight" | | 7 | "Quinn's gaze swept across the" | | 8 | "The usual detritus of urban" | | 9 | "she said, crouching beside something" | | 10 | "The contents were wrong, the" | | 11 | "Quinn picked up one of" | | 12 | "It was warm, though the" | | 13 | "The casing was brass, tarnished" | | 14 | "Morris said, peering over her" | | 15 | "Quinn turned the object in" | | 16 | "The needle spun, not with" | | 17 | "Quinn stood, brushing dust from" | | 18 | "Quinn's jaw tightened" | | 19 | "Morris was quiet for a" |
| | ratio | 0.933 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The fluorescent lights above the Camden Market station flickered once, twice, then died with a metallic groan that echoed off the tiled walls." | | 1 | "The usual detritus of urban decay—discarded newspapers, broken glass, the occasional syringe—but arranged in a pattern that made her skin prickle." | | 2 | "The needle spun, not with the lazy rotation of a magnetic compass finding north, but with frantic energy, as if it were trying to escape the confines of its cas…" | | 3 | "The concrete was cracked in a pattern that looked almost geometric, too precise for natural wear." | | 4 | "Instead, he saw the same intensity that had made her one of the best detectives in the Metropolitan Police, even if her methods sometimes bordered on the unorth…" | | 5 | "They stood in the silence of the abandoned station, two detectives surrounded by evidence that defied explanation, each of them thinking the same thing: the cas…" |
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| 66.18% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn walked, her hand resting on the grip of her service weapon" | | 1 | "Quinn crouched again, this time examining the cracks more closely" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.102 | | leniency | 0.204 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |