Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5PZ9RH7SX80FEPHRGV58S

Run Details

Duration:
1m 46s
Cost:
$0.037912
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the bracken like the teeth of some buried giant, grey oak trunks fossilised into rock, bark long since hardened into ridges that caught the late afternoon light. Aurora stopped at the edge of them and pressed her palm against the nearest. Warm. The stone held warmth the way flesh did, not the way November stone should. "Boundary markers," Isolde said from somewhere ahead, her voice drifting back through the trees. She walked between the stones without looking at them, silver hair unspooling behind her, and where her feet touched the frost-stiffened grass, the frost did not break. No footprints. Aurora had watched for them all the way through Richmond Park and found none. Nyx lingered at her shoulder, a tall silhouette cut out of the day itself, edges wavering where the light tried to claim them. "The air on the other side is older." "Older how?" "Taste it." She stepped through the gap between two stones. The park vanished. Not gradually, not through any trick of distance — one breath held London's damp November bite, exhaust and wet leaf-rot, and the next held something sweet and green and thick as honey. Aurora turned. The stones stood behind her, but beyond them lay no bracken, no path, no distant traffic hum. Only trees she'd never seen, vast and pale-barked, their canopies braided together so high overhead that the sky came through in coins of light. "We're not in Richmond." "You are and you aren't," Isolde said. She'd paused further down the slope, half-turned, lavender eyes catching the light like water catches the moon. "The grove keeps its own address. Walk." Wildflowers carpeted the ground. That struck Aurora first — flowers in late autumn, dense enough that every step crushed colour. Bluebells beside poppies beside things with six petals and translucent veins that bent away from her boots before she trod on them. She watched one lean, slow and deliberate, like a sleeper rolling from a draught. "Did that flower just move?" "They're polite here," Isolde said. "Mind where you put your feet anyway. Politeness has limits." Nyx drifted ahead, solid one moment and smoke the next, passing through a shaft of sunlight that bent strangely around them. The light in the grove behaved wrong. It fell in columns that leaned, pooled in hollows where no sun reached, and everything it touched carried a faint doubling, as if each object cast a shadow and the shadow cast a fainter shadow of its own. Aurora lifted her hand. Two shadows lay across her palm, one dark, one pale as breath on glass. "Isolde. The light—" "Yes. Don't stare at the second shadow. It stares back, and you'll find it rude company." Aurora lowered her hand. They descended through the trees. The silence had texture to it — not empty but held, the way a held breath has weight. Somewhere water ran over stone, though the sound arrived from the wrong direction each time she fixed on it: left, then behind, then above, as though the stream wandered. Bird-song threaded through it in a pattern too regular, a five-note phrase repeated until Aurora realised it wasn't repeating at all. It was asking. "Something's singing the same question." "Everything here asks," Isolde said. "Few things here answer. You'll learn which is which." The grove opened into a clearing, and Aurora stopped walking. The clearing's centre held a pool so still it refused to reflect. She crouched at its edge and looked down and saw not her face but the canopy below the water, trees growing downward into depth, their branches reaching for a light at the bottom of the world. A fish moved through the inverted branches — or a bird, she couldn't hold the distinction — leaving a trail of silver that dissipated like milk in tea. "Don't touch the water," Isolde said. "Not because it harms. Because it keeps what touches it, and I'd rather not negotiate for your hand." Aurora withdrew her fingers, which had drifted to an inch above the surface without her deciding to move them. Her skin tingled. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched, faintly, the way it did before storms. Nyx had gone still beside a tree at the clearing's far edge. Even for a being of living shadow, they had a particular quality of stillness when something held their full attention — a settling, like night falling into itself. "Aldric walked in a place like this," Nyx said, and the whisper-voice carried a weight Aurora hadn't heard in it before. "Before. The Fae built their courts on this same grammar. I remember the shape of it. I did not remember that I remembered." "How old is it?" Aurora asked. "Ask a better question," Isolde said. "How old compared to what?" The seer's mouth curved. "The stones you passed through were old when your Rome was a rumour. The grove is older than the stones. The grove, perhaps, is why the stones." They crossed the clearing. On the far side the ground rose into a low hill crowned with a ring of mushrooms, each the size of a dinner plate, luminous underneath with a blue-green glow that pulsed in slow rhythm. Aurora counted the pulses against her own heartbeat. They matched. She looked away and back, and they matched still, patient as a pulse. "It's keeping time with me." "It keeps time with everything living that enters," Isolde said. "Harmless. The grove taking your measure. It takes mine every day, out of habit, the way you might check a clock you don't believe." "And time itself—" "Runs as the grove pleases. An hour here may buy you minutes outside, or a week, or the same hour twice. I've never found the pattern. I suspect there is none and the grove simply enjoys the question." Isolde glanced at the coins of sky overhead. "Which is why we won't linger past need." At the pendant beneath Aurora's collar, warmth bloomed. She touched it through her shirt — the Heartstone, thumbnail-sized, crimson, given by a benefactor she'd never identified. It pulsed against her sternum, once, twice, the faint inner glow brightening to a coal's ember. "The pendant's doing its trick." Isolde went very still. "Its trick, as you call it, is to warm near doors to Hel. Show me." Aurora drew it out on its silver chain. The crimson stone throbbed with light, and in its glow the grove's doubled shadows deepened, the faint second shadows leaning toward her like plants toward sun. "There's no Hel portal here," Aurora said. "You said this place sits between Earth and the Fae realm." "I said what it sits between. Between is a wide country, and wide countries have borders on more than two sides." Isolde's gaze moved across the clearing, slow, counting something Aurora couldn't see. "The grove has stood guard over a thin place for longer than I've been exiled to it. Your stone feels the thinness. That is all. Wards hold. They've held since before the Courts cast me out." "And if they stopped holding?" "Then your pretty necklace would be a lantern in the dark, and everything in the dark would see it." The seer turned and walked on, and the conversation closed behind her like water. They climbed into older trees. The trunks here grew in spirals, bark twisting in patterns that Aurora's eyes kept trying to read as script. Once she traced a groove with her gaze and felt, for a vertiginous second, that she understood it — not the words but the intent of them, something about a debt and a season and a name withheld — and then the understanding slid off her like rain off oilcloth, leaving only the certainty she'd briefly held it. "I almost read that." "Don't," Isolde said, without turning. "The grove writes in obligations. Reading is signing." Nyx laughed — a sound like wind through a cracked window. "You brought us somewhere where looking is dangerous, touching is dangerous, and the flowers have manners." "I brought you somewhere honest," Isolde said. "Nothing here pretends to be safe. You'll find that rare, the longer you live in the world of things that pretend." The path — if it was a path; the flowers bent aside ahead of Isolde and straightened behind them, erasing it — ended at a hollow tree wider than Aurora's flat above the bar. Its opening arched twice her height, and inside, the dark was not dark. Light lived in there, sourceless and soft, and shelves lined the curving inner wall, grown rather than built, crowded with clay jars, folded cloths, bundles of dried herbs that smelled of nothing in the world above. Isolde ducked inside and returned with something wrapped in grey silk. She held it out on both palms. "For the road you don't know you're on yet," she said. "The grove permits the gift. I asked this morning, and the flowers didn't object." Aurora unwrapped it. A dagger lay in the silk, leaf-shaped and slender, its metal pale and cold as moonlight on snow. The cold of it climbed her fingers and settled into the crescent scar on her wrist, and the scar stopped itching for the first time since she'd crossed the stones. "Moonsilver," Nyx breathed, drifting closer, violet eyes narrowing. "Court-forged. Aurora — that is not a gift. That is a statement." "Gifts from the Fae are always statements," Isolde said. "This one says: the Courts owe me still, and I spend the debt on her. It will cut wards. It will cut worse things. It will always be cold, so you'll never forget you're holding it." Aurora closed her hand around the hilt. The cold steadied her, somehow, the way the grove's strangeness hadn't — a clean, uncomplicated fact in a place where light fell twice and water kept what it caught. Around them the luminous mushrooms pulsed with her heartbeat, patient, counting. The five-note question sang on somewhere in the canopy, unanswered, and overhead the coins of sky had shifted colour without any of them seeing it change, amber bleeding toward a dusk that owed nothing to any clock in London. "How long have we been here?" she asked. "Yes," Isolde said, and smiled, and led them deeper.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:38:34.946Z" 7/25/2026, 5:38:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.392
leniency0.784
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1699
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1699
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"wavering"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count3
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"silk"
count2
highlights
0"warmth"
1"wavering"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"whisper"
5"pulsed"
6"pulse"
7"throbbed"
8"traced"
9"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1713
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1193
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
November2
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Aurora20
Nyx6
Isolde16
Heartstone1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.662
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
24.87% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.751
wordCount1713
matches
0"not empty but held, the way a held breath has weight"
1"not her face but the canopy below the water, trees growing downward into dept"
2"not the words but the intent of them, something about a debt"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean31.15
std26.42
cv0.848
sampleLengths
061
157
231
32
42
586
64
731
856
95
1015
1184
123
1316
144
1576
165
1714
1810
1976
2024
2137
2240
2344
246
256
265
2731
2862
295
3034
313
3254
3342
345
3519
3634
3718
3869
395
4033
4182
424
4313
4427
4528
4683
4718
4825
4951
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs208
matches
0"wasn't repeating"
1"was asking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences118
ratio0.085
matches
0"Not gradually, not through any trick of distance — one breath held London's damp November bite, exhaust and wet leaf-rot, and the next held something sweet and green and thick as honey."
1"That struck Aurora first — flowers in late autumn, dense enough that every step crushed colour."
2"The silence had texture to it — not empty but held, the way a held breath has weight."
3"A fish moved through the inverted branches — or a bird, she couldn't hold the distinction — leaving a trail of silver that dissipated like milk in tea."
4"Even for a being of living shadow, they had a particular quality of stillness when something held their full attention — a settling, like night falling into itself."
5"She touched it through her shirt — the Heartstone, thumbnail-sized, crimson, given by a benefactor she'd never identified."
6"Once she traced a groove with her gaze and felt, for a vertiginous second, that she understood it — not the words but the intent of them, something about a debt and a season and a name withheld — and then the understanding slid off her like rain off oilcloth, leaving only the certainty she'd briefly held it."
7"Nyx laughed — a sound like wind through a cracked window."
8"The path — if it was a path; the flowers bent aside ahead of Isolde and straightened behind them, erasing it — ended at a hollow tree wider than Aurora's flat above the bar."
9"The cold steadied her, somehow, the way the grove's strangeness hadn't — a clean, uncomplicated fact in a place where light fell twice and water kept what it caught."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1191
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.028547439126784216
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005037783375314861
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean14.52
std11.27
cv0.776
sampleLengths
032
114
21
314
414
527
62
714
823
98
102
112
128
133
1432
152
1617
1724
184
197
2017
217
224
2316
2422
2514
265
275
2810
2921
307
3138
324
3314
343
3516
364
375
3818
3929
4021
413
425
435
449
4510
4612
4736
4828
496
75.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4661016949152542
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences71
matches
0"Only trees she'd never seen,"
1"Somewhere water ran over stone,"
2"Once she traced a groove"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences71
matches
0"She walked between the stones"
1"She stepped through the gap"
2"She'd paused further down the"
3"She watched one lean, slow"
4"It fell in columns that"
5"They descended through the trees."
6"It was asking."
7"She crouched at its edge"
8"Her skin tingled."
9"They crossed the clearing."
10"She looked away and back,"
11"She touched it through her"
12"It pulsed against her sternum,"
13"They climbed into older trees."
14"Its opening arched twice her"
15"She held it out on"
ratio0.225
23.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences71
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Aurora stopped at the edge"
2"The stone held warmth the"
3"Isolde said from somewhere ahead,"
4"She walked between the stones"
5"Aurora had watched for them"
6"Nyx lingered at her shoulder,"
7"She stepped through the gap"
8"The park vanished."
9"The stones stood behind her,"
10"She'd paused further down the"
11"Wildflowers carpeted the ground."
12"That struck Aurora first —"
13"Bluebells beside poppies beside things"
14"She watched one lean, slow"
15"Nyx drifted ahead, solid one"
16"The light in the grove"
17"It fell in columns that"
18"Aurora lifted her hand."
19"Aurora lowered her hand."
ratio0.873
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Even for a being of"
ratio0.014
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The standing stones rose from the bracken like the teeth of some buried giant, grey oak trunks fossilised into rock, bark long since hardened into ridges that c…"
1"It fell in columns that leaned, pooled in hollows where no sun reached, and everything it touched carried a faint doubling, as if each object cast a shadow and …"
2"Somewhere water ran over stone, though the sound arrived from the wrong direction each time she fixed on it: left, then behind, then above, as though the stream…"
3"She crouched at its edge and looked down and saw not her face but the canopy below the water, trees growing downward into depth, their branches reaching for a l…"
4"Light lived in there, sourceless and soft, and shelves lined the curving inner wall, grown rather than built, crowded with clay jars, folded cloths, bundles of …"
5"The five-note question sang on somewhere in the canopy, unanswered, and overhead the coins of sky had shifted colour without any of them seeing it change, amber…"
50.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Isolde said, her voice drifting back through the trees"
1"The seer turned, and the conversation closed behind her like water"
2"Isolde said, without turning"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.039
83.0727%