Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5QNWRAPN83CZR2M0123SE

Run Details

Duration:
6.9s
Cost:
$0.000275
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The wind off the Thames carried the smell of ozone and something else—something that made Detective Harlow Quinn’s skin crawl. She pulled her coat tighter as she stepped into the disused ticket hall of the old Southwark station, her boots echoing against the tiled floor. The place had been sealed for decades, but now it buzzed with the low hum of emergency lighting and the whispered conversations of uniformed officers. At the far end of the hall, beneath the faded Great Western Railway sign, a body lay sprawled on the concrete. Quinn’s partner, DS Morris, had been the first on the scene before he—before everything went wrong. Three years later, she still couldn’t say his name without tasting copper. “Detective,” DC Rook called out, approaching with his tablet. His face looked pale under the harsh beam of his flashlight. “We’ve got a situation here.” Quinn nodded and moved toward the body. The victim was a man in his late thirties, dressed in a long overcoat that had seen better days. His neck was twisted at an impossible angle, and there were dark bruises blooming across his throat like flowers. But it was what lay beside him that made Quinn pause. A small brass compass, its casing green with age, sat open on the ground. The needle spun lazily, not pointing north but toward the far wall where the tiles had been pried loose, revealing a jagged crack in the stone beneath. “That’s not standard issue,” Quinn muttered, crouching down. She picked up the compass with two fingers, noting the sigils etched into its face. Protective ones. Her stomach tightened. Rook shifted uncomfortably. “It looks like he fell down here. Maybe he was chased?” Quinn didn’t answer right away. She studied the walls, the floor, the way the shadows pooled in certain corners. There were scuff marks on the tiles, but they didn’t lead to the body. They led away from it, as if whoever had been here last had been running—not fleeing, but moving with purpose. “How many entry points do we have?” she asked. “Three. The main staircase, the service tunnel, and—” He hesitated. “There’s something weird about the ventilation system. We found traces of… I don’t know, some kind of residue. It’s not dust.” Quinn stood, compass still clutched in her hand. The needle had stopped moving, now pointing directly at her chest. “Show me.” They walked through the station in silence until they reached the platform level. Here, the air felt heavier, thick with the weight of forgotten years. Quinn’s flashlight caught on something glinting near the edge of the tracks—a single bone token, carved from what looked like yellowed ivory. “Entry requirement,” she said softly. Rook frowned. “For what?” “For the Veil Market.” The name echoed between them, swallowed by the darkness. “You think someone brought him down here to trade?” Quinn shook her head. “No. I think he was already dead when they brought him here.” She crouched again, this time examining the ground more closely. The bone token was warm to the touch, which shouldn’t have been possible. And beside it, pressed into the gravel, was a footprint—but not a human one. The impression was too narrow, too elongated, as if whoever had worn the shoe had been walking on the balls of their feet, like a cat. “Morris always said the Market moved every full moon,” Quinn said quietly. “He was obsessed with it.” Rook glanced at her. “You knew him?” “Knew him? I worked with him for five years.” Her voice cracked slightly. “Until he didn’t come back from this damn case.” She stood, brushing dirt from her knees. The compass needle trembled, then steadied, pointing once more toward the crack in the wall. “What if we’re looking at this wrong?” Rook said slowly. “What if he didn’t fall? What if he was pushed?” Quinn turned to look at him. For a moment, she saw something in his expression—something that reminded her of herself three years ago, before the dreams started, before she began seeing things that weren’t there. “Then who pushed him?” “Someone who knew about the Market. Someone who wanted to keep it hidden.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. She had spent months chasing shadows, following leads that always ended in dead ends. But this—this felt different. The compass, the token, the footprint. Pieces of a puzzle she hadn’t even known she was solving. She walked back to the body and knelt beside it. The man’s coat was buttoned up to the neck, but when she lifted the collar, she saw it—a tattoo on the inside of his wrist, barely visible beneath the grime. A sigil. One she recognized from her research files, from the reports Morris had left behind. “It’s a ward,” she whispered. “He wasn’t just any civilian. He was part of it.” Rook leaned over. “Part of what?” “The Market.” Quinn closed her fingers around the compass. Its metal was warm now, pulsing faintly against her palm. “Morris wasn’t investigating random crimes. He was getting close to something big.” She looked up at the cracked ceiling, where water dripped steadily into puddles below. “And whoever did this—they didn’t just kill him. They tried to erase him.” But even as she said it, Quinn knew it wasn’t enough. The compass hummed in her hand, its needle dancing like a heartbeat. Somewhere deep in her bones, she felt the pull of something vast and ancient, something that lived beneath the city’s skin and whispered to those brave—or foolish—enough to listen. The wind picked up, carrying with it the distant sound of footsteps. Not footsteps on stone or steel, but something softer, like fabric dragging across dirt. Quinn stood, raising her flashlight to scan the darkness. But there was nothing there. Just the echo of secrets waiting to be uncovered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"Quinn said quietly [quietly]"
2"Her voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
3"Rook said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.286
79.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"dancing"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count2
11
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"standard"
2"etched"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"glinting"
7"echoed"
8"trembled"
9"dancing"
10"footsteps"
11"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords968
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.34% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount768
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Thames1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn15
Southwark1
Great1
Western1
Railway1
Morris2
Rook6
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Rook"
places
0"Thames"
globalScore0.523
windowScore0.833
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like yellowed ivory"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.099
wordCount968
matches
0"not pointing north but toward the far wall"
1"not fleeing, but moving with purpose"
2"Not footsteps on stone or steel, but something softer, like fabric dragging across dirt"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean25.47
std18.66
cv0.733
sampleLengths
070
149
225
356
441
528
614
753
89
931
1019
112
1247
135
144
154
169
179
1816
1963
2017
217
2222
2322
2420
2535
264
2713
2838
2956
3015
316
3231
3327
3452
3526
3614
379
84.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences68
matches
0"been sealed"
1"was twisted"
2"been pried"
3"was buttoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs137
matches
0"was solving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences86
ratio0.105
matches
0"The wind off the Thames carried the smell of ozone and something else—something that made Detective Harlow Quinn’s skin crawl."
1"Quinn’s partner, DS Morris, had been the first on the scene before he—before everything went wrong."
2"They led away from it, as if whoever had been here last had been running—not fleeing, but moving with purpose."
3"Quinn’s flashlight caught on something glinting near the edge of the tracks—a single bone token, carved from what looked like yellowed ivory."
4"And beside it, pressed into the gravel, was a footprint—but not a human one."
5"For a moment, she saw something in his expression—something that reminded her of herself three years ago, before the dreams started, before she began seeing things that weren’t there."
6"But this—this felt different."
7"The man’s coat was buttoned up to the neck, but when she lifted the collar, she saw it—a tattoo on the inside of his wrist, barely visible beneath the grime."
8"Somewhere deep in her bones, she felt the pull of something vast and ancient, something that lived beneath the city’s skin and whispered to those brave—or foolish—enough to listen."
97.89% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount778
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.042416452442159386
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.014138817480719794
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean11.26
std6.85
cv0.608
sampleLengths
020
125
225
321
416
512
69
711
85
97
1019
1119
1211
1314
1427
158
1615
172
183
193
2011
215
2214
2314
2420
259
2610
2721
288
2911
302
3113
3212
3322
345
352
362
374
389
399
404
4112
4210
4313
4414
4526
4612
475
484
493
73.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.45348837209302323
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Somewhere deep in her bones,"
1"Just the echo of secrets"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences62
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter"
1"His face looked pale under"
2"His neck was twisted at"
3"She picked up the compass"
4"Her stomach tightened."
5"She studied the walls, the"
6"They led away from it,"
7"They walked through the station"
8"she said softly"
9"She crouched again, this time"
10"Her voice cracked slightly"
11"She stood, brushing dirt from"
12"She had spent months chasing"
13"She walked back to the"
14"Its metal was warm now,"
15"She looked up at the"
ratio0.258
64.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences62
matches
0"The wind off the Thames"
1"She pulled her coat tighter"
2"The place had been sealed"
3"Quinn’s partner, DS Morris, had"
4"DC Rook called out, approaching"
5"His face looked pale under"
6"Quinn nodded and moved toward"
7"The victim was a man"
8"His neck was twisted at"
9"A small brass compass, its"
10"The needle spun lazily, not"
11"Quinn muttered, crouching down"
12"She picked up the compass"
13"Her stomach tightened."
14"Rook shifted uncomfortably."
15"Quinn didn’t answer right away."
16"She studied the walls, the"
17"They led away from it,"
18"Quinn stood, compass still clutched"
19"The needle had stopped moving,"
ratio0.79
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The wind off the Thames carried the smell of ozone and something else—something that made Detective Harlow Quinn’s skin crawl."
1"They led away from it, as if whoever had been here last had been running—not fleeing, but moving with purpose."
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4"Somewhere deep in her bones, she felt the pull of something vast and ancient, something that lived beneath the city’s skin and whispered to those brave—or fooli…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
42.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"DC Rook called out (call out)"
1"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.214
75.8590%