| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Quinn said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "Her voice cracked slightly [slightly]" | | 3 | "Rook said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 79.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 979 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 979 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "standard" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "glinting" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "dancing" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 968 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 768 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.95 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Thames | 1 | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 15 | | Southwark | 1 | | Great | 1 | | Western | 1 | | Railway | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Rook | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Rook" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.523 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like yellowed ivory" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.099 | | wordCount | 968 | | matches | | 0 | "not pointing north but toward the far wall" | | 1 | "not fleeing, but moving with purpose" | | 2 | "Not footsteps on stone or steel, but something softer, like fabric dragging across dirt" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 25.47 | | std | 18.66 | | cv | 0.733 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 56 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 52 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 9 |
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| 84.62% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "been sealed" | | 1 | "was twisted" | | 2 | "been pried" | | 3 | "was buttoned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind off the Thames carried the smell of ozone and something else—something that made Detective Harlow Quinn’s skin crawl." | | 1 | "Quinn’s partner, DS Morris, had been the first on the scene before he—before everything went wrong." | | 2 | "They led away from it, as if whoever had been here last had been running—not fleeing, but moving with purpose." | | 3 | "Quinn’s flashlight caught on something glinting near the edge of the tracks—a single bone token, carved from what looked like yellowed ivory." | | 4 | "And beside it, pressed into the gravel, was a footprint—but not a human one." | | 5 | "For a moment, she saw something in his expression—something that reminded her of herself three years ago, before the dreams started, before she began seeing things that weren’t there." | | 6 | "But this—this felt different." | | 7 | "The man’s coat was buttoned up to the neck, but when she lifted the collar, she saw it—a tattoo on the inside of his wrist, barely visible beneath the grime." | | 8 | "Somewhere deep in her bones, she felt the pull of something vast and ancient, something that lived beneath the city’s skin and whispered to those brave—or foolish—enough to listen." |
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| 97.89% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 778 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.042416452442159386 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014138817480719794 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 11.26 | | std | 6.85 | | cv | 0.608 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 73.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.45348837209302323 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere deep in her bones," | | 1 | "Just the echo of secrets" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her coat tighter" | | 1 | "His face looked pale under" | | 2 | "His neck was twisted at" | | 3 | "She picked up the compass" | | 4 | "Her stomach tightened." | | 5 | "She studied the walls, the" | | 6 | "They led away from it," | | 7 | "They walked through the station" | | 8 | "she said softly" | | 9 | "She crouched again, this time" | | 10 | "Her voice cracked slightly" | | 11 | "She stood, brushing dirt from" | | 12 | "She had spent months chasing" | | 13 | "She walked back to the" | | 14 | "Its metal was warm now," | | 15 | "She looked up at the" |
| | ratio | 0.258 | |
| 64.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind off the Thames" | | 1 | "She pulled her coat tighter" | | 2 | "The place had been sealed" | | 3 | "Quinn’s partner, DS Morris, had" | | 4 | "DC Rook called out, approaching" | | 5 | "His face looked pale under" | | 6 | "Quinn nodded and moved toward" | | 7 | "The victim was a man" | | 8 | "His neck was twisted at" | | 9 | "A small brass compass, its" | | 10 | "The needle spun lazily, not" | | 11 | "Quinn muttered, crouching down" | | 12 | "She picked up the compass" | | 13 | "Her stomach tightened." | | 14 | "Rook shifted uncomfortably." | | 15 | "Quinn didn’t answer right away." | | 16 | "She studied the walls, the" | | 17 | "They led away from it," | | 18 | "Quinn stood, compass still clutched" | | 19 | "The needle had stopped moving," |
| | ratio | 0.79 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind off the Thames carried the smell of ozone and something else—something that made Detective Harlow Quinn’s skin crawl." | | 1 | "They led away from it, as if whoever had been here last had been running—not fleeing, but moving with purpose." | | 2 | "The impression was too narrow, too elongated, as if whoever had worn the shoe had been walking on the balls of their feet, like a cat." | | 3 | "For a moment, she saw something in his expression—something that reminded her of herself three years ago, before the dreams started, before she began seeing thi…" | | 4 | "Somewhere deep in her bones, she felt the pull of something vast and ancient, something that lived beneath the city’s skin and whispered to those brave—or fooli…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "DC Rook called out (call out)" | | 1 | "Quinn muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.214 | |