Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5VVRHTATKHQYTS4XVA8XZ

Run Details

Model:: Laguna S 2.1
Test:: Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:: Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:: 18.2s
Cost:: $0.000317
Provider:: Poolside

Evaluation summary

Score	Evaluator	Details Link
100.00%	Adverbs in dialogue tags	(details)
86.56%	AI-ism adverb frequency	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism character names	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism location names	(details)
19.35%	AI-ism word frequency	(details)
100.00%	Cliché density	(details)
100.00%	Emotion telling (show vs. tell)	(details)
35.04%	Filter word density	(details)
100.00%	Gibberish response detection	(details)
100.00%	Markdown formatting overuse	(details)
100.00%	Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)	(details)
98.28%	Name drop frequency	(details)
0.00%	Narrator intent-glossing	(details)
19.82%	"Not X but Y" pattern overuse	(details)
100.00%	Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)	(details)
50.31%	Paragraph length variance	(details)
98.64%	Passive voice overuse	(details)
40.32%	Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse	(details)
0.00%	Em-dash & semicolon overuse	(details)
94.00%	Purple prose (modifier overload)	(details)
100.00%	Repeated phrase echo	(details)
100.00%	Sentence length variance	(details)
81.54%	Sentence opener variety	(details)
0.00%	Adverb-first sentence starts	(details)
100.00%	Pronoun-first sentence starts	(details)
10.00%	Subject-first sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Subordinate conjunction sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Technical jargon density	(details)
62.50%	Useless dialogue additions	(details)
0.00%	Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)	(details)
63.2119%	Overall

Model input

System

You are an expert fiction writer.

Always keep the following rules in mind:
- Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang.
- Write in active voice
- Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle.
- Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions.
- Convey events and story through dialogue.
- Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety.
- Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech
- Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself.
- Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action.
- Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe"

When writing text:
- NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely.
- NEVER end with foreshadowing.
- NEVER write further than what I prompt you with.
- AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions.
- STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.

User/Human

Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response:
<codex>
<character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist">
  <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor>
  <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair>
  <height>5'6"</height>
  <age>25</age>
  <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar>
  <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description>
  <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card">
  <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor>
  <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height>
  <age>ageless</age>
  <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form>
  <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice>
  <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description>
  <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle">
  <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor>
  <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair>
  <height>5'5"</height>
  <age>300 years old</age>
  <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance>
  <speech>speaks in riddles</speech>
  <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints>
  <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion>
  <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description>
  <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory>
</character>

<location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony">
  <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler>
  <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor>
  <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description>
</location>

<location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)">
  <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation>
  <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones>
  <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior>
  <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora>
  <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description>
</location>

<item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas">
  <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor>
  <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial>
  <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size>
  <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior>
  <glow>faint inner glow</glow>
  <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description>
</item>

<item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts">
  <material>moonsilver</material>
  <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape>
  <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature>
  <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow>
  <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power>
  <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo>
  <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description>
</item>

<lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology">
  <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect>
  <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance>
  <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring>
  <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description>
</lore>
</codex>

Continue the story using the following instructions:
<instructions>
Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre.

A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition.

Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore.
Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
</instructions>

Model response

The air changed the moment they stepped through the gap between the standing stones, carrying with it the scent of night-blooming jasmine and something else entirely—something like ozone and starlight. Aurora paused, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone Pendant that hung heavy against her chest. It pulsed once, faintly, as if responding to something unseen.

Behind her, Nyx shifted their form, the shadows around them rippling like water disturbed by an unseen current. Their violet eyes reflected the dim glow of the clearing ahead, where trees twisted into impossible shapes and the ground beneath their feet felt spongy, alive.

"This place..." Isolde's voice carried the weight of recognition. She moved ahead, her silver hair catching light that seemed to emanate from the very air itself. No footprints marked the path she took, but the wildflowers parted respectfully as she passed. "The Grove remembers," she murmured, her pale lavender eyes scanning the surroundings. "It has been a long time since visitors walked these paths."

Aurora fell into step beside her, the Fae-Forged Blade secured in its sheath at her hip. The weapon felt unnaturally cold even through the fabric of her jacket, and she could sense its awareness, like a blade that recognized its purpose. "How long has it been since you were here?"

Isolde's laugh was like wind chimes in a dream. "Time flows differently in the space between breaths, little seer. What feels like moments to you may be centuries to me." She gestured toward a cluster of mushrooms that glowed with soft blue light. "The Fae Courts cast me out for sharing visions with mortals, yet here I return to the places they cannot reach."

Nyx stopped beside a tree whose bark shimmered with constellations. "The Veil grows thin here," they whispered, their voice carrying the quality of wind through autumn leaves. "I can feel the spaces between spaces pressing closer." Their hand reached out, fingers passing through the trunk of the tree as if testing reality itself. "There are rifts nearby. Fresh ones."

Aurora's pulse quickened. The pendant at her throat burned with sudden warmth, its deep crimson gemstone glowing brighter. "Rifts mean portals," she said, more statement than question. "To Hel."

"Or from Hel," Isolde corrected, her gaze drifting toward the horizon where the sky held colors that had no name. The grass beneath them shifted from emerald to silver as they watched, responding to some unseen rhythm. "The boundary between realms grows porous. The winter solstice approaches, and with it, weakness."

They walked deeper into the Grove, and the world around them became increasingly surreal. Flowers bloomed and withered in seconds, their petals scattering like confetti before reforming on neighboring stems. A stream of liquid light wound its way through the landscape, its surface rippling with images that weren't quite reflections—scenes from other worlds, other times.

"Look," Nyx pointed toward the stream, and Aurora saw her own face staring back at her, but older, marked by scars she didn't recognize. The vision shifted, showing her standing in a throne room carved from black stone, surrounded by shadows that bowed as she approached.

"That's not me," Aurora breathed, but even as she spoke, she felt the truth of the vision settling into her bones like a memory waiting to be claimed.

Isolde knelt beside the stream, cupping her hands and bringing some of the liquid light to her lips. Her eyes rolled back slightly, and when she spoke again, her voice carried an echo that seemed to come from everywhere at once. "The threads of fate intertwine here. What was, what is, what could be—all exist simultaneously in the Grove's embrace."

The trees began to hum, a low harmonic vibration that resonated in their chests. Aurora felt her teeth ache from the sound, and when she looked up, she saw that the leaves were forming patterns in the air—symbols that hurt to look at directly, that seemed to shift meaning just beyond comprehension.

"This place is alive," she said, reaching out to touch one of the symbols before catching herself. "It's not just a grove. It's a guardian. A keeper of thresholds."

"All places are alive to those who know how to see," Nyx replied, their form flickering between solid and incorporeal. "But this one... this one is ancient. Older than the Veil itself."

Aurora's hand moved instinctively to her wrist, where the small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood pressed against the fabric. The pendant responded immediately, its warmth spreading up her neck like a brand. Something was calling to her, drawing her forward, and despite the prickle of fear at the base of her spine, she found herself moving toward whatever awaited them in the heart of the Grove.

The path narrowed, winding between trees whose roots formed natural archways overhead. Bioluminescent vines draped from branch to branch, creating curtains of light that swayed without any breeze. When Aurora stepped through one such curtain, she emerged into a clearing where the very air sparkled with motes of gold and silver.

In the center of the clearing stood a structure that defied architecture—walls that curved impossibly, floors that tilted at angles that made the stomach churn, and a ceiling that opened to reveal not sky but the swirling mists of other dimensions. Figures moved within those mists, shapes that might have been people or might have been something else entirely.

"Is that..." Isolde's voice held wonder and something like reverence.

"The Observatory," Nyx breathed. "I've only heard stories of this place. It exists in all realms simultaneously, a nexus point where the boundaries between worlds collapse entirely."

Aurora felt the pendant burning now, its warmth spreading through her entire being. She could hear whispers in languages she didn't know but somehow understood—words of power, words of creation, words of destruction. The Heartstone was singing, and she was beginning to understand its song.

"We shouldn't go in there," she called back to her companions, but even as she spoke, her feet carried her forward. The pull was irresistible, magnetic, inevitable.

Isolde moved beside her, her expression serene despite the chaos of reality bending around them. "Some doors, once opened, can never be closed again," she said. "But some doors were meant to be opened."

Nyx's shadow-form wavered, their usual confidence replaced by something closer to trepidation. "The Wardens will know we've been here," they muttered. "They'll know that we've crossed a threshold that was meant to remain sealed."

But they followed anyway, stepping through the doorway of the Observatory as reality folded around them like a curtain being drawn back to reveal a stage where the players had yet to realize they were part of the performance.

Evaluation details

Result

Evaluator

Details

Meta Data

100.00%

Adverbs in dialogue tags

Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs

totalTags	16
adverbTagCount	0
adverbTags	(empty)
dialogueSentences	28
tagDensity	0.571
leniency	1
rawRatio	0
effectiveRatio	0

86.56%

AI-ism adverb frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)

wordCount

1116

totalAiIsmAdverbs

found

adverb	"very"
count	2

adverb	"slightly"
count	1

highlights

0	"very"
1	"slightly"

100.00%

AI-ism character names

Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

100.00%

AI-ism location names

Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

19.35%

AI-ism word frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)

wordCount

1116

totalAiIsms

found

word	"pulsed"
count	1

word	"carried the weight"
count	1

word	"scanning"
count	1

word	"shimmered"
count	1

word	"pulse"
count	1

word	"quickened"
count	1

word	"warmth"
count	3

word	"surreal"
count	1

word	"echo"
count	1

word	"resonated"
count	1

word	"structure"
count	1

word	"stomach"
count	1

word	"churn"
count	1

word	"magnetic"
count	1

word	"wavered"
count	1

word	"trepidation"
count	1

highlights

0	"pulsed"
1	"carried the weight"
2	"scanning"
3	"shimmered"
4	"pulse"
5	"quickened"
6	"warmth"
7	"surreal"
8	"echo"
9	"resonated"
10	"structure"
11	"stomach"
12	"churn"
13	"magnetic"
14	"wavered"
15	"trepidation"

100.00%

Cliché density

Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window

totalCliches	0
maxInWindow	0
found	(empty)
highlights	(empty)

100.00%

Emotion telling (show vs. tell)

Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling

emotionTells	0
narrationSentences	53
matches	(empty)

35.04%

Filter word density

Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words

filterCount

hedgeCount

narrationSentences

filterMatches

(empty)

hedgeMatches

0	"seemed to"
1	"began to"

100.00%

Gibberish response detection

Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)

analyzedSentences	65
gibberishSentences	0
adjustedGibberishSentences	0
longSentenceCount	0
runOnParagraphCount	0
giantParagraphCount	0
wordSaladCount	0
repetitionLoopCount	0
controlTokenCount	0
repeatedSegmentCount	0
maxSentenceWordsSeen	42
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Markdown formatting overuse

Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting

markdownSpans	0
markdownWords	0
totalWords	1110
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)

Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks

totalAttributions	12
unquotedAttributions	0
matches	(empty)

98.28%

Name drop frequency

Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words

totalMentions

wordCount

870

uniqueNames

maxNameDensity

1.03

worstName

"Aurora"

maxWindowNameDensity

worstWindowName

"Aurora"

discoveredNames

Heartstone	2
Pendant	1
Nyx	6
Aurora	9
Fae-Forged	1
Blade	1
Isolde	6
Grove	2
Observatory	1

persons

0	"Pendant"
1	"Nyx"
2	"Aurora"
3	"Blade"
4	"Isolde"

places

"Grove"

globalScore

0.983

windowScore

0.00%

Narrator intent-glossing

Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns

analyzedSentences

glossingSentenceCount

matches

0	"something like ozone and starlight"
1	"as if responding to something unseen"
2	"light that seemed to emanate from the very air itself"
3	"as if testing reality itself"
4	"quite reflections—scenes from other worlds, other times"
5	"echo that seemed to come from everywhere at once"
6	"something like reverence"

19.82%

"Not X but Y" pattern overuse

Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words

totalMatches

per1kWords

1.802

wordCount

1110

matches

0	"not me,\" Aurora breathed, but even as she spoke, she felt the truth of the vision settling"
1	"not sky but the swirling mists of other dimensions"

100.00%

Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)

Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses

thatCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"saw that the"

50.31%

Paragraph length variance

Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts

totalParagraphs

mean

44.4

std

14.48

0.326

sampleLengths

0	55
1	44
2	64
3	50
4	64
5	59
6	29
7	51
8	55
9	46
10	28
11	60
12	52
13	29
14	32
15	66
16	51
17	59
18	10
19	27
20	45
21	27
22	34
23	34
24	39

98.64%

Passive voice overuse

Target: ≤2% passive sentences

passiveCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"being drawn"

40.32%

Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse

Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs

pastProgressiveCount

totalVerbs

167

matches

0	"were forming"
1	"was calling"
2	"was singing"
3	"was beginning"

0.00%

Em-dash & semicolon overuse

Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons

emDashCount

semicolonCount

flaggedSentences

totalSentences

ratio

0.077

matches

0	"The air changed the moment they stepped through the gap between the standing stones, carrying with it the scent of night-blooming jasmine and something else entirely—something like ozone and starlight."
1	"A stream of liquid light wound its way through the landscape, its surface rippling with images that weren't quite reflections—scenes from other worlds, other times."
2	"Aurora felt her teeth ache from the sound, and when she looked up, she saw that the leaves were forming patterns in the air—symbols that hurt to look at directly, that seemed to shift meaning just beyond comprehension."
3	"In the center of the clearing stood a structure that defied architecture—walls that curved impossibly, floors that tilted at angles that made the stomach churn, and a ceiling that opened to reveal not sky but the swirling mists of other dimensions."
4	"She could hear whispers in languages she didn't know but somehow understood—words of power, words of creation, words of destruction."

94.00%

Purple prose (modifier overload)

Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking

wordCount

879

adjectiveStacks

stackExamples

0	"small crescent-shaped scar"

adverbCount

adverbRatio

0.03754266211604096

lyAdverbCount

lyAdverbRatio

0.012514220705346985

100.00%

Repeated phrase echo

Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)

totalSentences	65
echoCount	0
echoWords	(empty)

100.00%

Sentence length variance

Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts

totalSentences

mean

17.08

std

8.42

0.493

sampleLengths

0	30
1	15
2	10
3	18
4	26
5	9
6	17
7	15
8	12
9	11
10	16
11	25
12	9
13	9
14	34
15	21
16	10
17	17
18	26
19	6
20	3
21	15
22	9
23	2
24	20
25	17
26	14
27	14
28	16
29	25
30	24
31	22
32	28
33	18
34	23
35	19
36	14
37	38
38	17
39	12
40	20
41	12
42	19
43	13
44	34
45	12
46	16
47	23
48	41
49	18

81.54%

Sentence opener variety

Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers

consecutiveRepeats	2
diversityRatio	0.5076923076923077
totalSentences	65
uniqueOpeners	33

0.00%

Adverb-first sentence starts

Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb

adverbCount	0
totalSentences	50
matches	(empty)
ratio	0

100.00%

Pronoun-first sentence starts

Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun

pronounCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"It pulsed once, faintly, as"
1	"Their violet eyes reflected the"
2	"She moved ahead, her silver"
3	"she murmured, her pale lavender"
4	"She gestured toward a cluster"
5	"they whispered, their voice carrying"
6	"Their hand reached out, fingers"
7	"she said, more statement than"
8	"They walked deeper into the"
9	"Her eyes rolled back slightly,"
10	"she said, reaching out to"
11	"She could hear whispers in"
12	"she called back to her"

ratio

0.26

10.00%

Subject-first sentence starts

Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject

subjectCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"The air changed the moment"
1	"Aurora paused, her fingers tightening"
2	"It pulsed once, faintly, as"
3	"Their violet eyes reflected the"
4	"Isolde's voice carried the weight"
5	"She moved ahead, her silver"
6	"she murmured, her pale lavender"
7	"Aurora fell into step beside"
8	"The weapon felt unnaturally cold"
9	"Isolde's laugh was like wind"
10	"She gestured toward a cluster"
11	"Nyx stopped beside a tree"
12	"they whispered, their voice carrying"
13	"Their hand reached out, fingers"
14	"Aurora's pulse quickened."
15	"The pendant at her throat"
16	"she said, more statement than"
17	"Isolde corrected, her gaze drifting"
18	"The grass beneath them shifted"
19	"They walked deeper into the"

ratio

0.9

0.00%

Subordinate conjunction sentence starts

Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction

subConjCount	0
totalSentences	50
matches	(empty)
ratio	0

0.00%

Technical jargon density

Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns

analyzedSentences

technicalSentenceCount

matches

0	"Aurora paused, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone Pendant that hung heavy against her chest."
1	"It pulsed once, faintly, as if responding to something unseen."
2	"The weapon felt unnaturally cold even through the fabric of her jacket, and she could sense its awareness, like a blade that recognized its purpose."
3	"Flowers bloomed and withered in seconds, their petals scattering like confetti before reforming on neighboring stems."
4	"A stream of liquid light wound its way through the landscape, its surface rippling with images that weren't quite reflections—scenes from other worlds, other ti…"
5	"The vision shifted, showing her standing in a throne room carved from black stone, surrounded by shadows that bowed as she approached."
6	"The trees began to hum, a low harmonic vibration that resonated in their chests."
7	"Aurora felt her teeth ache from the sound, and when she looked up, she saw that the leaves were forming patterns in the air—symbols that hurt to look at directl…"
8	"Bioluminescent vines draped from branch to branch, creating curtains of light that swayed without any breeze."
9	"In the center of the clearing stood a structure that defied architecture—walls that curved impossibly, floors that tilted at angles that made the stomach churn,…"
10	"Aurora felt the pendant burning now, its warmth spreading through her entire being."

62.50%

Useless dialogue additions

Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments

totalTags

uselessAdditionCount

matches

0	"they whispered, their voice carrying the quality of wind through autumn leaves"
1	"Nyx replied, their form flickering between solid and incorporeal"

0.00%

Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)

Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags

totalTags

fancyCount

fancyTags

0	"she murmured (murmur)"
1	"they whispered (whisper)"
2	"Isolde corrected (correct)"
3	"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
4	"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
5	"she called back (call back)"
6	"they muttered (mutter)"

dialogueSentences

tagDensity

0.393

leniency

0.786

rawRatio

0.636

effectiveRatio

0.5

63.2119%