Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5XHDVKHH18YSQA8XX5RDD

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23.0s
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$0.012064
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon buzzed above the door on Greek Street and threw its light onto the wet pavement. Inside, The Raven's Nest smelled of old wood polish and beer and rain drying off coats. Rory wiped the counter. Last orders had thinned. The maps on the wall curled at the edges. A clock ticked behind the bar that never told the right time. The door opened. Cold air pushed in. She looked up without thinking about it, the way she always did when the bell jingled. A woman stood in the doorway with water on her shoulders, hair stuck to her forehead. Rory stopped wiping. "Jesus." The woman blinked. Rain dripped from her chin. "No." "Mei?" Mei Lin laughed once, a sharp sound that cracked in the middle. She stepped forward and then stopped, hands still in the pockets of a waxed jacket that cost more than Rory's flat. "My god. Rory Carter." Rory vaulted the bar before she decided to. She collided with Mei and the jacket was slick and cold and underneath it Mei felt thinner than she remembered. Thinner and taller. Mei had cut her hair. In school it had hung to her waist, black as ink. Now it brushed her jaw, severe, dyed at the tips a dark copper. Her face had lost its softness. Cheekbones cut hard. A small silver hoop caught the light in her nose. "You work here?" "I live above it. I help out." "You live above a bar in Soho. Of course you do." Rory pulled back enough to see her properly. The bright blue of her own eyes reflected the low light. Mei's eyes were the same, lined now with something precise and smoky. "You vanished. After year twelve. Your mum said you went to Edinburgh." "I did." "And then — nothing. I texted." "I know." The door opened again. A couple left, arguing in whispers. The bell jingled. Silas came out of the back room with a crate of glasses. He moved with the slight drag of his left leg, weight shifting to his right. His auburn hair, streaked grey at the temples, caught the lamplight. The silver signet on his right hand flashed when he set the crate down. He looked at the two women standing too close in the middle of his bar. "You two need a drink or a room?" Rory's mouth twitched. Her straight black hair swung against her shoulders when she turned. "Silas. This is Mei. Mei, Silas. He owns the place." Silas wiped his hands on his apron. His hazel eyes narrowed, then softened. "Mei. Friend from the before times?" "Cardiff. Comprehensive. Rory once set fire to the science block microwave trying to heat up an entire cottage pie. Still included." "I saved it. That pie fed three people." Mei shrugged out of her jacket. Underneath she wore a black roll neck and tailored trousers. No student hoodie. No chipped nail polish. The Rory she had known wore uniform ties as belts. This Mei held herself like someone who paid for posture lessons. Silas slid two glasses across the bar. He uncapped something dark without asking. "On the house. For the reunion." Mei picked up the glass. Rory's left wrist turned and the small crescent scar caught the light. Mei stared at it. "Still there." "Still there." Silas retreated to the far end, polishing. He gave them space, but he stayed within earshot. The bar made a hollow shape around them. "So." Mei took a sip. "Delivery girl turned barmaid? What happened to Law?" Rory leaned against the bar, arms crossed, shoulders tight. Her stature at five-six always looked shorter when she braced like that. "I finished the degree. Didn't want the life. Moved." "Because of Evan?" The question landed flat and heavy. Rory's jaw worked. "You kept up with that, then." "Your mum told my mum. She was worried." "Right." Mei set her glass down. Her hands shook. "Don't do that." "Do what?" "Make me the villain because I didn't chase you." "I didn't —" "You did. You disappeared. You left me on read for two years, Rory. I thought something happened to you. I thought he did something." Silence pooled between them. The rain hammered the windows. Rory stared at the grain of the bar top. "I couldn't go back. Not even for texts. Every time I looked at Cardiff, I saw him. I saw myself with him. I needed to cut it all off. Not just him." Mei's eyes filled. She blinked hard. "Even me?" "Even you. You were the best part. That made it harder." Mei laughed again, wet this time. "You idiot." "Yeah." "I flew down for your dad's birthday that one year. You were gone. Your mum made a cake with your name on it and you weren't there. She cried in the kitchen. I helped her wash up." Rory flinched. "I didn't know that." "Of course you didn't. You left." The words hung. Mei pressed the heel of her palm into her eye. "I got into art foundation. You told me not to bother. You said I'd starve." "I was seventeen. I was an arse." "You were right. For a while. Edinburgh was brutal. I starved. Then I didn't." Rory looked at the jacket again, at the clean lines, the expensive boots. "You look... you look different. Good. But different." "I am different. I had to be. After you went quiet, I realised no one was going to come save me from staying in that town forever. So I left too. I changed my name on my portfolio. I changed everything." "Mei suits you. The new Mei." "Lian now. Professionally. Mei Lian." Rory tested the name. "Lian. It fits." "My mum hates it." Rory snorted. Short. Real. "My dad still asks if I'll sit the bar." "Will you?" "No." Silas refilled their glasses without a word. He tapped the bar once with the signet ring and walked away. The ring clicked against wood. Mei watched him. "He's kind." "He is." "He looks at you like you're his kid." Rory shrugged. The gesture failed to hide the softness that crossed her face. "He let me stay when I had nowhere. He taught me how to open the till without it jamming." "You always found strays. Or they found you." "You were never a stray." "No. I was the one who stayed inside the lines so you had someone to drag out." Rory reached forward before she thought. She grabbed Mei's hand. Mei's fingers were cold. "I missed you." Mei did not pull away. "I missed you until it turned into something else. Something angry." "I know that feeling." "Do you?" Rory tightened her grip. The crescent scar stood pale against Mei's skin. "Every time I made a delivery to a posh house, I thought — Mei would know what that wallpaper is. Every time I saw a girl with long black hair on the Tube. Every time Eva talked about uni and you weren't there to call her pretentious." "I'm not pretentious." "You were, a bit. But you were right about most things." Mei's mouth broke open. She covered it with her free hand. "Stop. You're going to make me cry in this stupid expensive jacket." "Cry. It's waterproof." Mei did. Not loud. Her shoulders shook once, twice. Rory pulled her in and Mei smelled of rain and perfume and something metallic like paint. They stood like that while the bar emptied and the green light outside flickered. When they parted, Mei wiped her face with her sleeve and left a black smear. "Look what you did." "You always cried over me." "Shut up." Rory poured the last of the bottle. "Stay. Upstairs is a mess but the kettle works." Mei looked at her phone. The screen lit her changed face. She switched it off. "I have a train at midnight." "Miss it." "I have an opening in Shoreditch tomorrow. Early." Rory nodded. She swallowed. "Right." Mei picked up her jacket. She hesitated. "Come. In the morning. Bring your... bring your bar dad if you want." Rory's eyebrows lifted. "Seriously?" "My stuff is... it's about Cardiff, mostly. Maps. Houses. The river. You'd hate it. Which means you'd actually get it." Silas, from his spot by the maps, raised his glass a fraction. He had heard. "I'll come." "Good." Mei zipped her jacket. She reached into her bag and pulled out a crumpled card. Thick paper. LIAN ZHANG - VISUALS. Rory turned it over. On the back, in pen, Mei had written a time, an address. "Don't not show up." "I won't." Mei walked to the door. She paused with her hand on the handle. The rain hammered harder. "You cut your hair." "You cut yours first." "I know. I just... I kept expecting to see you round a corner with the same bob. Same everything." Rory touched her own straight shoulder-length hair. "It grows." Mei pushed the door. The bell jingled. The green neon cut across her face one more time and then she was gone into the street, a black shape against the wet light. Rory stayed by the bar. She held the card tight.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.012
leniency0.023
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1526
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1526
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences205
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1529
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount863
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.36
worstName"Mei"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Mei"
discoveredNames
Greek1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Lin1
Rory25
Mei29
Silas6
persons
0"Nest"
1"Lin"
2"Rory"
3"Mei"
4"Silas"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Raven"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1529
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences205
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs138
mean11.08
std11.24
cv1.015
sampleLengths
034
129
27
332
43
51
68
71
81
933
104
1131
1248
133
147
1511
1631
1712
182
196
202
2165
2215
238
2414
2510
2613
276
2821
298
3044
3113
326
3321
342
352
3624
3713
3821
399
403
416
423
436
448
451
468
473
482
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs168
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences205
ratio0.005
matches
0"LIAN ZHANG - VISUALS."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount900
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02666666666666667
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0044444444444444444
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences205
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences205
mean7.46
std6.7
cv0.898
sampleLengths
018
116
24
34
49
512
63
74
816
916
103
111
123
135
141
151
1612
1721
184
198
2020
213
225
2311
2413
256
263
2710
283
297
3011
318
3211
3312
3412
352
366
372
384
396
403
4112
4215
4311
4414
4515
468
473
4811
4910
44.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.28780487804878047
totalSentences205
uniqueOpeners59
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences109
matches
0"She looked up without thinking"
1"She stepped forward and then"
2"She collided with Mei and"
3"Her face had lost its"
4"He moved with the slight"
5"His auburn hair, streaked grey"
6"He looked at the two"
7"Her straight black hair swung"
8"His hazel eyes narrowed, then"
9"He uncapped something dark without"
10"He gave them space, but"
11"Her stature at five-six always"
12"Her hands shook."
13"She blinked hard."
14"He tapped the bar once"
15"She grabbed Mei's hand."
16"She covered it with her"
17"Her shoulders shook once, twice."
18"They stood like that while"
19"She switched it off."
ratio0.22
15.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences109
matches
0"The green neon buzzed above"
1"Rory wiped the counter."
2"The maps on the wall"
3"A clock ticked behind the"
4"The door opened."
5"She looked up without thinking"
6"A woman stood in the"
7"Rory stopped wiping."
8"The woman blinked."
9"Rain dripped from her chin."
10"Mei Lin laughed once, a"
11"She stepped forward and then"
12"Rory vaulted the bar before"
13"She collided with Mei and"
14"Mei had cut her hair."
15"Her face had lost its"
16"A small silver hoop caught"
17"Rory pulled back enough to"
18"The bright blue of her"
19"Mei's eyes were the same,"
ratio0.89
45.87% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Now it brushed her jaw,"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"This Mei held herself like someone who paid for posture lessons."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.5078%