| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.074 | |
| 91.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1172 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1172 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sense of" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "resolved" | | 6 | "synchronized" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "structure" | | 10 | "marble" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "d with joy" | | 1 | "s in relief" |
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| 36.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1192 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.10% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 939 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Shade | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Nyx | 5 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Aldric | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.861 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "glow that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, as though the air itself were smouldering gently" | | 1 | "not quite make out from here, except that every one of them seemed to be holding a platter, or a goblet, or both" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.839 | | wordCount | 1192 | | matches | | 0 | "not the amber of a London sunset, thin and apologetic, but a deep, saturated glow" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 38.45 | | std | 30.14 | | cv | 0.784 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 96 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 73 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 71 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 107 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 102 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 57 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 18 |
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| 84.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "been delivered" | | 1 | "been replaced" | | 2 | "were flushed" | | 3 | "was supposed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.148 | | matches | | 0 | "It was amber — not the amber of a London sunset, thin and apologetic, but a deep, saturated glow that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, as though the air itself were smouldering gently." | | 1 | "It tasted of honey and smoke and something underneath that she couldn't name — something ripe to the edge of rot." | | 2 | "A Shade had no business in Hel, Isolde had warned, but the warning had been delivered in Isolde's usual fashion — three sentences that each meant two things — and Nyx had come anyway." | | 3 | "\"Screaming is Pride's province. And Wrath's.\" Isolde walked forward, and Aurora noticed — with a prickle along her spine — that the half-fae left no footprints in the dark, rich soil." | | 4 | "Below them stretched vineyards — but vineyards as Aurora had never imagined them." | | 5 | "Somewhere to their left, Aurora heard laughter — bright, human-sounding laughter — and her hand went automatically to the Fae blade at her belt." | | 6 | "As they drew closer, the sound resolved into something stranger — a group of figures working among the vines, clipping grapes with silver shears, and the laughter came from them in waves, too regular, too synchronized, like a song where the melody had been replaced with joy." | | 7 | "Trees twisted upward in shapes that suggested limbs more than branches, heavy with fruit in colors Aurora had no names for — a red so deep it seemed to swallow light, a gold that made the amber sky look pale." | | 8 | "Slow, white grubs fat as her thumb writhed in the pulp, and the smell — sweet, overwhelming, cloying — coated the back of her tongue." | | 9 | "The pendant throbbed harder against her sternum, and for a moment — just a moment — she could have sworn she saw the air shimmer, the way the Veil was supposed to look to those with the sight." | | 10 | "Strings, and a drum with a beat like a slow heart, and underneath it a sound she couldn't identify until a gust of warm wind brought it closer — chewing." | | 11 | "Then she looked back once — at the luminous vineyard, the laughing workers, the ivory columns swimming in golden haze — and found, to her unease, that some small part of her wanted to stay." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 762 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "luminous, purple-black, pulsing" |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.03543307086614173 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010498687664041995 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 14.72 | | std | 11.68 | | cv | 0.794 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 47 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 33 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 40 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 81.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.5432098765432098 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere to their left, Aurora" | | 1 | "Then she looked back once" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "It was amber — not" | | 1 | "It tasted of honey and" | | 2 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 3 | "They stood on the shoulder" | | 4 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 5 | "It was warm." | | 6 | "It had been warm since" | | 7 | "They descended into the rows." | | 8 | "Their violet eyes had narrowed" | | 9 | "Their faces, when Aurora glimpsed" | | 10 | "Her stomach turned." | | 11 | "They moved on, deeper." | | 12 | "They skirted the hall through" | | 13 | "She pressed her fist over" | | 14 | "they said, and there was" | | 15 | "She faced forward and kept" |
| | ratio | 0.267 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The portal swallowed them like" | | 1 | "Aurora stumbled out the other" | | 2 | "It was amber — not" | | 3 | "Isolde said behind her" | | 4 | "Aurora said, and breathed anyway," | | 5 | "It tasted of honey and" | | 6 | "Nyx poured through the portal" | | 7 | "A Shade had no business" | | 8 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 9 | "Isolde walked forward, and Aurora" | | 10 | "The grass sprang back up" | | 11 | "They stood on the shoulder" | | 12 | "The vines were thick as" | | 13 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 14 | "It was warm." | | 15 | "It had been warm since" | | 16 | "They descended into the rows." | | 17 | "The vines grew overhead in" | | 18 | "The light filtered down in" | | 19 | "The moonsilver was cold even" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 83.33% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Now they solidified, tall and" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "It was amber — not the amber of a London sunset, thin and apologetic, but a deep, saturated glow that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, as though the …" | | 1 | "The vines were thick as her thigh, bark black and glossy as oil, and the grapes hanging from them were the size of plums, each one faintly luminous, purple-blac…" | | 2 | "Trees twisted upward in shapes that suggested limbs more than branches, heavy with fruit in colors Aurora had no names for — a red so deep it seemed to swallow …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.407 | | leniency | 0.815 | | rawRatio | 0.273 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |