| 78.79% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said again [again]" | | 1 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.121 | |
| 70.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1514 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1514 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "calculated" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "jaw clenched" | | 3 | "pounding" | | 4 | "processed" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "uncanny" | | 12 | "wavered" | | 13 | "trembled" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" | | 2 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1500 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1263 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 2.22 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 2 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 28 | | Soho | 2 | | Morris | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.392 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed charged with an electric tension that made her skin crawl" | | 1 | "artifacts that seemed to shift and move when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 2 | "eyes that seemed to see right through her, the woman wore a long coat that billowed slightly despite the lack of wind" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2 | | wordCount | 1500 | | matches | | 0 | "not at her, but past her, jumping down to the street below" | | 1 | "Not the fear of a criminal caught in the act, but something deeper, something primal" | | 2 | "not real,\" Quinn whispered, but her hand never left her weapon" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 33.33 | | std | 18.28 | | cv | 0.549 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 51 | | 41 | 58 | | 42 | 37 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 52 |
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| 97.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "been honed" | | 1 | "were lined" |
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| 14.81% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | 0 | "was already moving" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "was already moving" | | 3 | "wasn't looking" | | 4 | "was, standing" | | 5 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "Three people dead, all found in their apartments with no signs of forced entry, no witnesses, nothing but a single playing card left at each scene—the ace of spades." | | 1 | "The suspect—a wiry man with a scar running down his left cheek—paused at the far end of the alley, glancing back over his shoulder." | | 2 | "Before she could react, he lunged—not at her, but past her, jumping down to the street below." | | 3 | "But as she approached, something caught her attention—a figure standing in the doorway behind the suspect, tall and still in the dim light." | | 4 | "But something held her back—a whisper of intuition that told her this wasn't just another case." | | 5 | "The air was thick with the smell of incense and something else—something metallic and ancient." | | 6 | "She turned just in time to see Detective Harlow Quinn—herself—emerging from the shadows, her weapon drawn and her expression grim." | | 7 | "The woman stepped closer, and Quinn caught a glimpse of something in her eyes—recognition, perhaps, or understanding." | | 8 | "The woman reached into her coat pocket and withdrew a small object—a bone token, identical to the ones Quinn had seen in her dreams for the past three years." | | 9 | "But then she remembered the faces of the victims, the playing cards left at each scene, and the way Morris's eyes had looked when he'd appeared here—haunted, desperate, like a man who'd seen too much and couldn't find his way back." |
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| 99.45% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1280 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.040625 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01171875 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 14.29 | | std | 8.09 | | cv | 0.566 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 61.27% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3904761904761905 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he broke into a" | | 1 | "Just the rain-slicked rooftops and" | | 2 | "Somewhere in that darkness, her" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots splashed through puddles" | | 1 | "She'd had him cornered twice" | | 2 | "Her brown eyes narrowed behind" | | 3 | "she called out, her voice" | | 4 | "She followed, her military training" | | 5 | "He reached the fire escape" | | 6 | "Her worn leather watch ticked" | | 7 | "He pushed himself to his" | | 8 | "She'd chased criminals through these" | | 9 | "They ended up at the" | | 10 | "He knocked three times, paused," | | 11 | "She stepped forward, hand on" | | 12 | "She stepped inside." | | 13 | "Her partner of five years," | | 14 | "she said again, her voice" | | 15 | "She turned just in time" | | 16 | "Her voice carried an authority" | | 17 | "Her hands trembled as she" | | 18 | "She thought about turning back," | | 19 | "she said finally, her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.266 | |
| 67.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hit Detective Harlow" | | 1 | "Her boots splashed through puddles" | | 2 | "She'd had him cornered twice" | | 3 | "Quinn had been tracking him" | | 4 | "The suspect—a wiry man with" | | 5 | "Quinn pressed herself against the" | | 6 | "Her brown eyes narrowed behind" | | 7 | "she called out, her voice" | | 8 | "Quinn's hand moved to her" | | 9 | "The signal was spotty down" | | 10 | "She followed, her military training" | | 11 | "The man was fast, but" | | 12 | "He reached the fire escape" | | 13 | "The city spread out below" | | 14 | "Quinn said, stepping closer" | | 15 | "Her worn leather watch ticked" | | 16 | "Quinn turned, following his gaze," | | 17 | "He pushed himself to his" | | 18 | "Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as" | | 19 | "The suspect wove through the" |
| | ratio | 0.785 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could react, he" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots splashed through puddles that reflected the sickly yellow glow of streetlights, and she cursed under her breath as the man ahead disappeared into an a…" | | 1 | "Bottles filled with glowing liquids sat beside scrolls written in languages she couldn't read, and artifacts that seemed to shift and move when she wasn't looki…" | | 2 | "Her voice carried an authority that commanded attention, and Quinn found herself studying her more closely." | | 3 | "But then she remembered the faces of the victims, the playing cards left at each scene, and the way Morris's eyes had looked when he'd appeared here—haunted, de…" |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said again, her voice barely audible" | | 1 | "she said finally, her voice steady despite the turmoil in her chest" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "he hissed (hiss)" | | 2 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Quinn breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Quinn whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "the woman continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.303 | | leniency | 0.606 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |