Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5YCS8DZJEZ7VZ7FWZXSHC

Run Details

Duration:
10.7s
Cost:
$0.000280
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, turning the cobblestones of Dean Street into mirrors of flickering streetlight and the detective’s own reflection. Harlow Quinn’s boots slapped against the slick pavement, her trench coat plastered to her knees as she cut through the alley’s mouth. The suspect—a wiry man with a hunched shoulder and a duffel bag slung low—had vanished into the maze of Soho’s side streets, his silhouette swallowed by the green neon glow of The Raven’s Nest. She skidded to a halt outside the bar, pressing her palm against the damp wood of the doorframe. The sign buzzed lazily above, casting an eerie emerald hue across her face. Inside, the air hung thick with the scent of stale beer and something else—something metallic, like old blood. The maps on the walls seemed to shift in the gloom, their inked lines blurring into something less than cartography. She moved past the bar, past the jukebox playing a tinny jazz tune, toward the back where the bookshelf stood crooked against the wall. The shelf creaked when she pushed it. A hidden door yawned open, revealing a stairwell choked with dust. Quinn’s hand hovered over the entrance. The bone token requirement of the Veil Market was a rumor, a whispered warning from a source she couldn’t trust. But the suspect had crossed that threshold twenty minutes ago. If she didn’t follow, he’d vanish into the shadows forever. A floorboard groaned beneath her weight. She stepped back into the main room, adjusting her grip on the worn leather watch at her wrist—DS Morris’s watch, still ticking despite everything. The bartender, a gaunt man with ink-stained fingernails, glanced up from his ledger. “You shouldn’t be here after midnight,” he muttered. Quinn’s jaw tightened. “I’m not here to drink.” He returned his gaze to the ledger. “The Nest’s closed to outsiders now. Full moon’s in two nights. The Market moves soon.” The words hit like a punch. She’d heard the whispers about the Veil Market’s schedule, its tendency to vanish and reappear like a ghost. But the suspect had crossed into it tonight. She couldn’t let him disappear into that nocturnal labyrinth. Her fingers found the handle of her service revolver, hidden beneath her coat. The weight of it steadied her. She turned toward the back exit, toward the stairwell, but the bartender’s voice stopped her. “Detective Quinn. You’re not supposed to be here. The—” He hesitated, glancing sideways. “The others don’t like outsiders.” She didn’t wait for him to finish. The stairwell was darker than she remembered, the air colder. Her shoe caught on something—a loose stone, half-buried in grime. She knelt, brushing it free. The object beneath was small, bleached white: a bone, no bigger than her thumb. Her pulse spiked. The Market’s entry requirement. She pocketed it, fingers tracing its smooth surface. The stairs ended abruptly at a rusted grate. She pried it open with her shoulder, the metal screeching like a wounded animal. Below, the tunnel sloped downward, its walls lined with pipes that dripped water into an unseen drain. The air grew thicker, tinged with the ozone stench of magic and decay. Halfway down, she paused. The rain’s drumming on the surface above felt worlds away. Her breath fogged in the dim light of her flashlight. The suspect’s footsteps echoed ahead, muffled by the damp earth. She followed, each step a gamble. At the bottom, the tunnel widened into a cavernous space. The Veil Market sprawled before her—tents and stalls carved from salvaged metal and black cloth, their wares glinting under phosphorescent fungi. A hundred faces turned toward her as she emerged, their eyes calculating, hungry. The bone token in her pocket felt like a live wire. She gripped the rail of the grate, hesitating. The market’s patrons were not of this earth. Their movements were too fluid, their features too sharp. She’d seen faces like theirs in her nightmares, in the brief flashes when DS Morris’s death replayed behind her eyes. The footsteps stopped. A voice, low and familiar, called her name. Quinn’s hand tightened on her gun. The suspect stood at the far end of the market, his back to her, arguing with a stall vendor over a vial that pulsed with an inner light. The man’s scarred forearm was exposed, the Saint Christopher medallion beneath his shirt catching a shaft of light. Tomás Herrera. Her breath hitched. He’d vanished into this place, and now he was here, trading in whatever magic the Market peddled. She stepped onto the uneven ground, her boots crunching over broken glass and something softer—bone, maybe, or teeth. The vendor—hooded, faceless—glanced at her. “Entry fee?” Quinn’s fingers curled around the bone token. “I have this.” The vendor’s smile was a blade. “Not yours to offer, detective. The Mark chooses.” The air thickened. Shadows writhed at the market’s edges, forming shapes that weren’t quite human. She could feel the weight of the watch on her wrist, its ticking a metronome counting down to something she couldn’t name. Behind her, the suspect turned. His eyes met hers—warm brown, questioning. “You shouldn’t have come down here,” he said. But she was already moving, past him, into the stalls where the vials hummed and the knives gleamed. The Market’s heartbeat matched her own, erratic and fast. Somewhere, a bell chimed. The full moon would rise soon.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount898
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount898
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"tinged"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"calculating"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
3"tracing"
4"tinged"
5"footsteps"
6"echoed"
7"glinting"
8"calculating"
9"familiar"
10"pulsed"
11"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"watch watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords888
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount829
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Market"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Dean1
Street1
Quinn5
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Veil3
Market6
Morris2
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Market"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Herrera"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a live wire"
1"quite human"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount888
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"crossed that threshold"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean32.89
std23.01
cv0.7
sampleLengths
077
193
264
343
48
58
622
741
834
918
1046
1115
1252
1340
1455
1545
163
178
1854
1938
207
2110
2214
2337
2419
2531
266
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"was exposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was already moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences81
ratio0.099
matches
0"The suspect—a wiry man with a hunched shoulder and a duffel bag slung low—had vanished into the maze of Soho’s side streets, his silhouette swallowed by the green neon glow of The Raven’s Nest."
1"Inside, the air hung thick with the scent of stale beer and something else—something metallic, like old blood."
2"She stepped back into the main room, adjusting her grip on the worn leather watch at her wrist—DS Morris’s watch, still ticking despite everything."
3"Her shoe caught on something—a loose stone, half-buried in grime."
4"The Veil Market sprawled before her—tents and stalls carved from salvaged metal and black cloth, their wares glinting under phosphorescent fungi."
5"She stepped onto the uneven ground, her boots crunching over broken glass and something softer—bone, maybe, or teeth."
6"The vendor—hooded, faceless—glanced at her."
7"His eyes met hers—warm brown, questioning."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount841
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.020214030915576695
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0023781212841854932
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean10.96
std6.62
cv0.603
sampleLengths
021
122
234
318
413
518
620
724
87
911
106
1120
1210
1310
146
1524
1613
178
183
195
207
2115
226
2318
248
259
2613
276
2815
2913
305
317
3210
3310
345
3514
363
374
388
398
4014
4117
4213
434
4410
4510
4610
476
4810
4921
47.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.2962962962962963
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners24
46.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Somewhere, a bell chimed."
ratio0.014
81.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences72
matches
0"She skidded to a halt"
1"She moved past the bar,"
2"She stepped back into the"
3"He returned his gaze to"
4"She’d heard the whispers about"
5"She couldn’t let him disappear"
6"Her fingers found the handle"
7"She turned toward the back"
8"He hesitated, glancing sideways"
9"She didn’t wait for him"
10"Her shoe caught on something—a"
11"She knelt, brushing it free."
12"Her pulse spiked."
13"She pocketed it, fingers tracing"
14"She pried it open with"
15"Her breath fogged in the"
16"She followed, each step a"
17"She gripped the rail of"
18"Their movements were too fluid,"
19"She’d seen faces like theirs"
ratio0.347
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences72
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots slapped against"
2"The suspect—a wiry man with"
3"She skidded to a halt"
4"The sign buzzed lazily above,"
5"The maps on the walls"
6"She moved past the bar,"
7"The shelf creaked when she"
8"A hidden door yawned open,"
9"Quinn’s hand hovered over the"
10"The bone token requirement of"
11"A floorboard groaned beneath her"
12"She stepped back into the"
13"The bartender, a gaunt man"
14"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
15"He returned his gaze to"
16"The words hit like a"
17"She’d heard the whispers about"
18"She couldn’t let him disappear"
19"Her fingers found the handle"
ratio0.875
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"If she didn’t follow, he’d"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Shadows writhed at the market’s edges, forming shapes that weren’t quite human."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.222
82.3022%