| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.348 | | leniency | 0.696 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 927 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 927 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "glinting" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "practiced ease" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 18 | | totalWords | 916 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "Superstitious bastard" | | 1 | "Or protected by something he doesn’t understand." | | 2 | "them" | | 3 | "Magic." | | 4 | "The Veil Market." | | 5 | "Welcome, Traveler" | | 6 | "familiar." | | 7 | "her." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.48% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 769 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 11 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Pier | 1 | | Herrera | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Tomás | 3 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 2 | | Silas | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Herrera" | | 3 | "Saint" | | 4 | "Christopher" | | 5 | "Tomás" | | 6 | "Market" | | 7 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.785 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 55.66% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared—dark inviting, and far more dangerous than any crime scene she’d ever investigated" | | 1 | "as if responding to her heartbeat" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 916 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 22.34 | | std | 17.91 | | cv | 0.801 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 5.35% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "was lying" | | 1 | "was already moving" | | 2 | "was tracking" | | 3 | "was starting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "Her watch—leather, worn thin from years of service—ticked against her wrist." | | 1 | "Their eyes met—hers, a hard brown that had seen too much; his, warmer, but no less wary." | | 2 | "She’d seen the files—the patients who’d died after his treatment, their autopsies revealing things that didn’t fit." | | 3 | "In the chaos, she saw it—a bone token, polished smooth and warm to the touch despite the weather." | | 4 | "A doorway appeared—dark, inviting, and far more dangerous than any crime scene she’d ever investigated." | | 5 | "Merchants—a pale woman selling vials of liquid starlight, a gaunt man hawking knives that hummed with enchantments—watched her approach with knowing eyes." | | 6 | "His face was obscured by a scarf, but Quinn recognized the stance—military, precise, *familiar.*" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 317 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 10 | | adverbRatio | 0.031545741324921134 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015772870662460567 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 8.81 | | std | 6.13 | | cv | 0.696 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 69.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4519230769230769 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 45.05% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, deliberately, he turned." |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 84.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been tracking the suspect" | | 1 | "He hadn’t seen her." | | 2 | "She could almost see the" | | 3 | "Her watch—leather, worn thin from" | | 4 | "He paused at a fire" | | 5 | "He froze, one foot dangling" | | 6 | "Their eyes met—hers, a hard" | | 7 | "he said, voice low" | | 8 | "His breath fogged in the" | | 9 | "She stepped closer, the barrel" | | 10 | "She’d seen the files—the patients" | | 11 | "Her breath caught." | | 12 | "It pulsed once, almost imperceptibly," | | 13 | "She didn’t wait to see" | | 14 | "She was already moving, descending" | | 15 | "She’d rappelled down worse." | | 16 | "His face was obscured by" | | 17 | "He gestured to the bone" | | 18 | "She didn’t answer." | | 19 | "Her eyes drifted to the" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 68.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain fell in sheets," | | 1 | "The green neon sign above" | | 2 | "She’d been tracking the suspect" | | 3 | "The paramedic who’d gone underground." | | 4 | "He hadn’t seen her." | | 5 | "Quinn’s eyes tracked his silhouette" | | 6 | "The scar on his left" | | 7 | "She could almost see the" | | 8 | "Her watch—leather, worn thin from" | | 9 | "Military precision, even in the" | | 10 | "He paused at a fire" | | 11 | "Quinn raised her voice, sharp" | | 12 | "He froze, one foot dangling" | | 13 | "Their eyes met—hers, a hard" | | 14 | "Rain dripped from his jawline," | | 15 | "he said, voice low" | | 16 | "Quinn didn’t lower her gun." | | 17 | "His breath fogged in the" | | 18 | "She stepped closer, the barrel" | | 19 | "She’d seen the files—the patients" |
| | ratio | 0.784 | |
| 67.57% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "*Or protected by something he" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d seen the files—the patients who’d died after his treatment, their autopsies revealing things that didn’t fit." | | 1 | "Stalls lined the damp tunnels, their canopies strung with lanterns that cast shifting shadows." | | 2 | "Merchants—a pale woman selling vials of liquid starlight, a gaunt man hawking knives that hummed with enchantments—watched her approach with knowing eyes." | | 3 | "And at the far end of the market, standing beneath a tattered banner that read *Welcome, Traveler*, was a figure in a long coat." | | 4 | "The bone token in her hand pulsed again, warmer now, as if responding to her heartbeat." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, voice low" | | 1 | "She stepped, the barrel trembling slightly" | | 2 | "Silas said, his voice dropping to a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.217 | | leniency | 0.435 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |