Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5YH9W1DF4TD10J6Q86Z7A

Run Details

Duration:
18.3s
Cost:
$0.000259
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, drumming against Detective Harlow Quinn’s trench coat as she pressed the barrel of her service weapon against the brick wall beside The Raven’s Nest. The green neon sign above the entrance flickered, casting a sickly glow across the cobblestones. She’d been tracking the suspect for an hour, ever since she’d recognized him from the surveillance footage near the old Thames Pier. Tomás Herrera. The paramedic who’d gone underground. He hadn’t seen her. Not yet. Quinn’s eyes tracked his silhouette as he moved swiftly through the alley, his dark curls plastered to his forehead. The scar on his left forearm caught the light as he adjusted the strap of his worn duffel bag. She could almost see the Saint Christopher medallion glinting beneath his shirt. *Superstitious bastard*, she thought. *Or protected by something he doesn’t understand.* Her watch—leather, worn thin from years of service—ticked against her wrist. Eighteen years on the force, and she still checked it before making a move. Military precision, even in the rain. He paused at a fire escape, its metal rungs slick with moisture. Quinn raised her voice, sharp and cutting through the storm. “Herrera!” He froze, one foot dangling over the gap between buildings. Slowly, deliberately, he turned. Their eyes met—hers, a hard brown that had seen too much; his, warmer, but no less wary. Rain dripped from his jawline, mixing with something darker. Fear, maybe. Or resignation. “You shouldn’t be here,” he said, voice low. “This isn’t a place for cops.” Quinn didn’t lower her gun. “You’ve been treating supernatural patients. I know what you did at St. Bartholomew’s.” His breath fogged in the cold air. “That was before—” “Before what? Before you started working for *them*?” She stepped closer, the barrel trembling slightly. “The clique? You think I don’t know? I’ve been tracking your movements. The medevacs, the unauthorized procedures—they all lead back to someone with power.” Tomás’ hand twitched toward his bag. “I help people, Detective. I don’t know what you’re talking about.” But he was lying. She’d seen the files—the patients who’d died after his treatment, their autopsies revealing things that didn’t fit. Parasites. Symbiotes. *Magic.* A siren wailed in the distance. Quinn’s radio crackled to life, but she cut it off with a squeeze of the trigger. “You want answers?” she hissed. “Then come with me.” He hesitated. That was all she needed. The moment his weight shifted, she fired. The shot cracked through the rain, and Tomás stumbled backward, his duffel bag spilling open. In the chaos, she saw it—a bone token, polished smooth and warm to the touch despite the weather. Her breath caught. *The Veil Market.* Quinn snatched the token, her gloved fingers closing around it. It pulsed once, almost imperceptibly, like a heartbeat. She didn’t wait to see if he grabbed another weapon. She was already moving, descending the fire escape with practiced ease. The rungs were slick, but her boots found purchase. She’d rappelled down worse. At the bottom, Tomás scrambled to his feet. “You can’t—” But she was already gone, the bone token clutched in her fist. As she reached the alley’s end, she pressed it against the damp brick wall. The stone beneath her knuckles grew warm, then yielded with a soft grinding sound. A doorway appeared—dark, inviting, and far more dangerous than any crime scene she’d ever investigated. The rain followed her inside. The Veil Market sprawled before her like a fever dream. Stalls lined the damp tunnels, their canopies strung with lanterns that cast shifting shadows. Merchants—a pale woman selling vials of liquid starlight, a gaunt man hawking knives that hummed with enchantments—watched her approach with knowing eyes. The air tasted of ozone and something sweet, like burnt sugar. And at the far end of the market, standing beneath a tattered banner that read *Welcome, Traveler*, was a figure in a long coat. His face was obscured by a scarf, but Quinn recognized the stance—military, precise, *familiar.* “Detective Quinn.” She froze. “Silas?” But the voice that answered was wrong. Too smooth. Too practiced. “No,” Silas said, lowering his hood. “Not anymore. But you’re early.” Quinn’s finger twitched toward her sidearm. “What are you doing here?” “The same thing you are. Following a lead.” He gestured to the bone token in her hand. “Though I’m curious—how did you find this place?” She didn’t answer. Her eyes drifted to the exit signs, their green arrows pointing toward the surface. Toward the rain. Toward the city she’d sworn to protect. But her feet remained rooted to the spot. “You shouldn’t be here,” she said at last. “I know.” Silas smiled, and Quinn saw how the rainwater in his eyes caught the light. “But you’re already past the point of turning back.” Behind them, footsteps echoed. Heavy. Deliberate. Quinn’s radio buzzed again. She glanced at it, then at Silas, then at the growing number of shadows gathering at the market’s edges. The bone token in her hand pulsed again, warmer now, as if responding to her heartbeat. “Detective,” Silas said, his voice dropping to a whisper. “There’s a reason they moved the Veil Market every full moon. Because someone’s been hunting it.” The footsteps were closer now. She could hear boots hitting stone, the low murmur of voices. Someone was tracking *her.* Quinn looked down at the token, then at the exit, then at Silas. Her radio buzzed again, insistent. She had a choice to make. And the rain outside was starting to turn to sleet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount927
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount927
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"practiced ease"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count2
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"glinting"
2"weight"
3"pulsed"
4"practiced ease"
5"familiar"
6"footsteps"
7"echoed"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords18
totalWords916
ratio0.02
matches
0"Superstitious bastard"
1"Or protected by something he doesn’t understand."
2"them"
3"Magic."
4"The Veil Market."
5"Welcome, Traveler"
6"familiar."
7"her."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount769
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Raven1
Nest1
Thames1
Pier1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás3
Veil2
Market2
Silas5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tomás"
6"Market"
7"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Thames"
globalScore0.785
windowScore0.833
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared—dark inviting, and far more dangerous than any crime scene she’d ever investigated"
1"as if responding to her heartbeat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount916
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean22.34
std17.91
cv0.801
sampleLengths
073
16
261
331
422
51
614
730
814
918
1010
1139
1217
1324
1422
159
167
1743
183
1952
2010
2155
225
2357
2438
252
263
2711
2811
2911
3025
3135
328
3325
346
3539
3625
3720
3818
396
4010
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"was obscured"
5.35% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs137
matches
0"was lying"
1"was already moving"
2"was tracking"
3"was starting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences104
ratio0.067
matches
0"Her watch—leather, worn thin from years of service—ticked against her wrist."
1"Their eyes met—hers, a hard brown that had seen too much; his, warmer, but no less wary."
2"She’d seen the files—the patients who’d died after his treatment, their autopsies revealing things that didn’t fit."
3"In the chaos, she saw it—a bone token, polished smooth and warm to the touch despite the weather."
4"A doorway appeared—dark, inviting, and far more dangerous than any crime scene she’d ever investigated."
5"Merchants—a pale woman selling vials of liquid starlight, a gaunt man hawking knives that hummed with enchantments—watched her approach with knowing eyes."
6"His face was obscured by a scarf, but Quinn recognized the stance—military, precise, *familiar.*"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount317
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.031545741324921134
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.015772870662460567
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean8.81
std6.13
cv0.696
sampleLengths
029
115
222
32
45
54
62
719
819
912
104
117
1211
1314
146
1512
1610
171
1810
194
2017
219
222
232
248
256
265
2713
287
293
3015
3124
326
3311
344
3517
361
371
381
396
4016
415
424
432
445
457
4615
4718
483
493
69.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4519230769230769
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners47
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Slowly, deliberately, he turned."
ratio0.014
84.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences74
matches
0"She’d been tracking the suspect"
1"He hadn’t seen her."
2"She could almost see the"
3"Her watch—leather, worn thin from"
4"He paused at a fire"
5"He froze, one foot dangling"
6"Their eyes met—hers, a hard"
7"he said, voice low"
8"His breath fogged in the"
9"She stepped closer, the barrel"
10"She’d seen the files—the patients"
11"Her breath caught."
12"It pulsed once, almost imperceptibly,"
13"She didn’t wait to see"
14"She was already moving, descending"
15"She’d rappelled down worse."
16"His face was obscured by"
17"He gestured to the bone"
18"She didn’t answer."
19"Her eyes drifted to the"
ratio0.338
68.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences74
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"She’d been tracking the suspect"
3"The paramedic who’d gone underground."
4"He hadn’t seen her."
5"Quinn’s eyes tracked his silhouette"
6"The scar on his left"
7"She could almost see the"
8"Her watch—leather, worn thin from"
9"Military precision, even in the"
10"He paused at a fire"
11"Quinn raised her voice, sharp"
12"He froze, one foot dangling"
13"Their eyes met—hers, a hard"
14"Rain dripped from his jawline,"
15"he said, voice low"
16"Quinn didn’t lower her gun."
17"His breath fogged in the"
18"She stepped closer, the barrel"
19"She’d seen the files—the patients"
ratio0.784
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"*Or protected by something he"
ratio0.014
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She’d seen the files—the patients who’d died after his treatment, their autopsies revealing things that didn’t fit."
1"Stalls lined the damp tunnels, their canopies strung with lanterns that cast shifting shadows."
2"Merchants—a pale woman selling vials of liquid starlight, a gaunt man hawking knives that hummed with enchantments—watched her approach with knowing eyes."
3"And at the far end of the market, standing beneath a tattered banner that read *Welcome, Traveler*, was a figure in a long coat."
4"The bone token in her hand pulsed again, warmer now, as if responding to her heartbeat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, voice low"
1"She stepped, the barrel trembling slightly"
2"Silas said, his voice dropping to a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.435
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.087
77.9978%