Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5ZQK7KWFP6TKACFBZSGEG

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.030891
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt was still turning when the smell hit her — rain, clove cigarettes, and something darker underneath, like smoke trapped in old velvet. Aurora knew it before the second lock gave. She knew it in the way Ptolemy lifted his head from the windowsill, ears swivelling towards the door, and in the way her own pulse kicked against the crescent scar on her wrist. The third deadbolt slid home. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor with a charred hole in the shoulder of his charcoal suit and his ivory-handled cane slick with rain. One amber eye, one black, both fixed on her like she'd been the destination all along. Behind him, the curry house's fluorescent sign buzzed red light up the stairwell. "Three locks," he said. "Eva's taste in security has improved." "Lucien." Her hand stayed on the doorframe, barring nothing, barring everything. "You look like hell." "You look like a woman who changed her phone number." He stepped forward without waiting for the invitation. Ptolemy launched off the sill and wound through his ankles, purring, a traitor in tabby fur. "I sent four messages. A letter. A courier with a bouquet of funeral lilies, which I admit in retrospect was tonally confused." "I got the lilies." "And?" "They were dramatic and you knew it." She shut the door. Three locks again, one after the other, an old rhythm her hands performed without asking her. "How did you find me? I haven't told anyone in your world where I'm staying." "I have a father from a realm that deals in hunger, chérie. Finding people who don't want to be found is a family trade." He surveyed the flat — the towers of books, the scroll pinned open under a takeaway container, research notes crawling up the wall in Eva's ferocious handwriting. His mouth twitched. "God. It's worse than I remember." "Eva's a scholar. You're in her sacred temple of footnotes." "I've profaned holier places." He shrugged out of his wet jacket, and she saw the scorch mark wasn't fabric-deep — the skin beneath was burned in a pattern, four parallel lines, like something had raked him. He caught her looking and draped the jacket over a stack of annotated grimoires. "It's nothing." "Claws, Lucien. Those are claw marks." "Your observational skills remain distressingly intact." "So does your talent for walking into my life injured." The words came out sharper than she meant. Old reflex. She turned away, put the kettle on because her hands needed somewhere to be, and watched his reflection warp across the kitchen window. "Tea or are you going to tell me why you're actually here?" "Both. In whichever order produces the fewest thrown objects." "I've never thrown anything at you." "You threw a shoe in Marseilles." "It missed. And you deserved it." "It missed by design." He settled onto the arm of the sofa, cane between his knees, and for a moment neither of them filled the silence. The kettle ticked. Ptolemy resettled on his lap and Lucien stroked him with the absent precision of a man cataloguing a room's exits. "You left London six weeks ago. Mid-case. No note." "There was a note." "There was a text message, Aurora. 'Gone, don't follow.' Two words and a comma. I've had longer goodbyes from taxi drivers." The amber eye found her; the black one followed, slower, like it always did when he was angry. The asymmetry of it used to undo her. It still undid her. "Was it Evan?" The name landed in the flat like a dropped glass. Her hand went to her wrist, to the scar, and she hated that the gesture gave her away. "He's got nothing to do with you." "He made everything to do with me the night you came to my office with a split lip and asked me to teach you to fight. You remember that? You said, 'no magic, no demons, just make me dangerous.'" His grip tightened on the ivory handle. "I did. And then you disappeared, and I spent six weeks checking hospitals in Cardiff because you told me once — once, after three glasses of bad wine — that your mother keeps a box of your childhood things she can't throw out, and I thought if you were anywhere, you'd be where someone loved you like that." The kettle screamed. Aurora pulled it off the hob and stood there, steam curling past her face, two mugs waiting. "Say something." "You checked hospitals." "Aurora." "That's—" She poured water over the tea bags, watched the bloom of red spread. "You don't get to do that. You don't get to vanish for a year after everything and then check hospitals and show up with claw marks and act like the problem is my comma." He went still. Ptolemy, sensing the shift, hopped down and stalked under the bookshelf. "The year," Lucien said, quietly. "Yes. The year." "I told you Avaros summoned me. I told you a half-blood son doesn't refuse." "You told me afterwards. From Marseille. On a phone you threw into the harbour, because I tried your number for a month." She set his mug down hard enough to slosh it. "You left a fixer-shaped hole and a building full of people asking me what I knew, and I knew nothing. Do you know what that did to me, after Evan? Being left with nothing but questions? Again?" His jaw worked. Rain traced the window behind him. "There was no safe way to explain. What my father wanted from me — if I'd written it, spoken it, it would have marked you. You'd just gotten free of one man who owned pieces of you. I wasn't going to be the second." "So you decided for me." "I decided for you." No apology in it. Just fact, offered up like a blade hilt-first. "It's the worst thing I've done and I'd do it again, and you can hate that both are true." She did. She hated it and it rearranged nothing, because he was here, soaked and scorched and looking at her like the six weeks and the year before them were geography he intended to cross. "What do you want, Luc?" He stood. Crossed the flat the way he crossed everything — deliberately, like each step was negotiated. Close now. Close enough that she could see the singed edge of his collar, the faint shimmer of something not human under his skin where the burn was. "There's a man asking questions in the underworld. Money behind him, solicitors in Cardiff, a private firm. He's buying information about a delivery girl who works for Golden Empress and lives above a bar." He didn't touch her. He just stood in her space and let the words do it. "Evan found your London trail, Aurora. I came because I couldn't sit in Marseille knowing he'd get here first." Her stomach dropped through the floorboards, through the curry house, through to the earth. "How long?" "A week. Maybe less. The firm's discreet but my people are better." His hand rose, hovered beside her face — asking. "Pack a bag. That's all I'm asking tonight. Whatever is between us, the mess of it, the unsaid things — it keeps. He won't." She looked at his hand. The scar on her wrist pulsed like a remembered heartbeat, and she thought of the two-word text, the funeral lilies, the hospitals in Cardiff. The unsaid things, keeping. She put her fingers in his. "Ptolemy comes too." "Chérie." His hand closed around hers, warm, solid, here. "I'd sooner leave the cane."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His hand closed around [around]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.037
96.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"traced"
4"stomach"
5"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences55
matches
0"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1265
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount645
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy4
Moreau1
Three1
Eva1
Old1
Lucien3
Cardiff1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Three"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Old"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1265
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"hated that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean25.3
std24.3
cv0.96
sampleLengths
024
141
25
353
410
515
656
74
81
942
1060
1110
1252
136
146
1555
169
176
186
196
2058
214
2254
2328
247
25104
2620
272
283
291
3048
3114
325
333
3414
3569
3653
375
3835
3935
405
4145
4269
4314
442
4545
4633
476
483
4914
92.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"was burned"
1"was negotiated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs114
matches
0"was still turning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences92
ratio0.065
matches
0"The deadbolt was still turning when the smell hit her — rain, clove cigarettes, and something darker underneath, like smoke trapped in old velvet."
1"\"I have a father from a realm that deals in hunger, chérie. Finding people who don't want to be found is a family trade.\" He surveyed the flat — the towers of books, the scroll pinned open under a takeaway container, research notes crawling up the wall in Eva's ferocious handwriting."
2"\"I've profaned holier places.\" He shrugged out of his wet jacket, and she saw the scorch mark wasn't fabric-deep — the skin beneath was burned in a pattern, four parallel lines, like something had raked him."
3"\"There was a text message, Aurora. 'Gone, don't follow.' Two words and a comma. I've had longer goodbyes from taxi drivers.\" The amber eye found her; the black one followed, slower, like it always did when he was angry."
4"Crossed the flat the way he crossed everything — deliberately, like each step was negotiated."
5"\"A week. Maybe less. The firm's discreet but my people are better.\" His hand rose, hovered beside her face — asking."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount644
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.021739130434782608
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003105590062111801
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean13.75
std12.49
cv0.908
sampleLengths
024
18
233
35
424
516
613
74
86
911
104
1118
1216
1322
144
151
1611
1716
1815
1951
203
216
2210
2336
2414
252
266
276
2818
292
3023
3112
329
336
346
356
3626
373
3820
399
404
4139
428
434
443
4510
4618
477
4846
4958
60.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.42391304347826086
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners39
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Just fact, offered up like"
ratio0.02
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences50
matches
0"She knew it in the"
1"Her hand stayed on the"
2"He stepped forward without waiting"
3"She shut the door"
4"He surveyed the flat —"
5"His mouth twitched."
6"He shrugged out of his"
7"He caught her looking and"
8"She turned away, put the"
9"He settled onto the arm"
10"It still undid her."
11"Her hand went to her"
12"His grip tightened on the"
13"She poured water over the"
14"He went still."
15"She set his mug down"
16"His jaw worked."
17"She hated it and it"
18"He didn't touch her"
19"He just stood in her"
ratio0.5
30.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences50
matches
0"The deadbolt was still turning"
1"Aurora knew it before the"
2"She knew it in the"
3"The third deadbolt slid home."
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"Her hand stayed on the"
6"He stepped forward without waiting"
7"Ptolemy launched off the sill"
8"She shut the door"
9"He surveyed the flat —"
10"His mouth twitched."
11"He shrugged out of his"
12"He caught her looking and"
13"The words came out sharper"
14"She turned away, put the"
15"He settled onto the arm"
16"The kettle ticked."
17"Ptolemy resettled on his lap"
18"The amber eye found her;"
19"The asymmetry of it used"
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien said, quietly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.037
leniency0.074
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.5308%