Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD602SZA7V56GSXXAFX7NVD

Run Details

Duration:
20.2s
Cost:
$0.011791
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bell over the curry house downstairs jingled. Rory counted one floorboard creak, then another, then boots on the metal stairwell outside Eva's door. Ptolemy lifted his head from the stack of occult dictionaries he used as a throne. The cat stared at the door, tail thumping once, twice. Eva's neat handwriting marked three locks with tiny labels - TOP, MIDDLE, BOTTOM - because Rory always forgot the order. Rory flipped the top deadbolt, then the middle. Her left wrist caught the light. The crescent scar there went white. She flipped the bottom. The door gave an inch. The smell of cold autumn air and the kitchen grease from below slipped in. A hand, pale, knuckles scarred, pressed against the peeling paint on the other side. Lucien stood in the hall. Rain beaded on the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair was not slicked back. Damp strands stuck to his forehead. His cane hung from his wrist, the ivory handle slick with water. One amber eye, one black. Rory's fingers tightened around the doorframe. Plaster dust ground under her nails. "You moved." Lucien's gaze swept past her. Books towered on every surface of Eva's flat, scrolls unrolled across the futon, half-drunk mugs of tea balanced on top of grimoires. "I did not move. Eva lent me the flat for the week. Silas fumigated." His mouth twitched. "So resourceful. The barman with the rat problem." She did not open the door wider. "You have a phone." "It rang. You did not answer." "I blocked you." "I noticed. Innovative. Most people block one number. You blocked four." Ptolemy jumped from the dictionaries and threaded through Rory's legs, tail high. The cat sniffed Lucien's polished shoe and sneezed. Lucien crouched. The movement pulled his trousers tight over his knee. Rain dripped from his hair onto the floorboards. "You remember Ptolemy." Lucien extended two fingers. Ptolemy butted his head against them, hard enough to rock the cat's own body. "Flatterer. You still hate me." Rory stepped back. The motion was not an invitation, but Lucien took it as one. He rose and crossed the threshold. The cane clicked against the floor. He closed the door behind him with his hip and flipped the deadbolts - top, middle, bottom - without looking. The click of each lock sounded loud. "Eva's flat has three deadbolts because the last tenant got robbed by his own client. You know that how?" "I installed them." His coat dripped onto Eva's rug. Rory grabbed a tea towel that read KEEP CALM AND CARRY ON and threw it at him. He caught it. "You left Marseille without a word. You left London the same way. You always leave the same way, Lucien." The towel sat in his hands. He did not use it. "The job in Marseille went bad. You remember what I told you on the phone that night. I told you to stay away from the docks." "You told me to stay out of your business. There is a difference." "You stood on the dock anyway. With a knife from Eva's kitchen." Rory crossed to the tiny kitchenette. She needed something for her hands to do. The kettle, the mugs, the stack of takeaway boxes from Golden Empress with her own handwriting on the lids. She lifted the kettle. It was empty. "You did not need me." His voice came lower now. "No. I needed you to live. You confuse the two because you like to run toward danger with kitchen knives." The kettle banged against the sink. Water sputtered from the tap. "You could have come back after." His cane clicked once. He was closer. She felt the heat of his damp suit, the familiar scent under the rain - cedar and ink and something metallic, like old coins. "Yes." He said nothing else for a beat. The rain hit the window above the sink. Downstairs, someone shouted an order for extra poppadoms. "You look tired, Rory." She set her jaw. Bright blue eyes met his in the reflection of the window. "Thanks. You look like a drowned investment banker. What do you want?" A plastic tub on the counter sat open. Rice, congealed. Rory had intended to eat it. Lucien stared at it. His black eye caught the kitchen light and swallowed it. "The Merrow contract is back on the table. The buyer asks for you. Specifically." Her stomach dropped. She turned. "Liar." "No. Your name. Aurora Carter, delivery associate. They liked your negotiating style." She laughed. The sound scraped. "I told them to shove their cursed pearls up their—" "I told them you retired." The kitchenette was too small for two people. Eva's research notes pressed in from the living room - tall stacks of books on demon lineages, on Avaros, on half-bloods. On names Rory recognized because she had written them down for Lucien months ago, late at night, when his head rested on her stomach and he spelled words in French for her to sound out badly. Rory pushed past him. Her shoulder brushed his chest. His hand came up, not to grab, but his fingers brushed the crescent scar on her left wrist. The touch raised goosebumps up her forearm. She pulled away. "Don't." His hand dropped. "I am sorry." Two words. Flat. No flourish. For Lucien, that was as close to kneeling as he got. "For which part? The part where you left me on that dock with three bleeding men and a demon tide coming in, or the part where you told Silas I was not to be given any more work from your side of town?" His amber eye widened. "Silas said that?" "Yu-Fei had to pick up the slack. I had to ask my boss for extra shifts because you decided I needed protecting from your world." "My world almost killed you." "Your world is my world now. You made sure of that." She grabbed the stack of scrolls off the only chair and dumped them on the floor. Ptolemy bolted. "Sit. No, don't sit. You are wet. You will ruin Eva's chair. Just - stand there and tell me why you are really here." Lucien looked at the chair. He looked at the towel still in his hand. He draped it over the radiator instead and shrugged out of his coat. His shirt underneath clung to his back. The line of his spine showed through. "The contract is not why I came." "No?" "I came because Eva called me." Rory went still. "Eva called you." "She said you had not slept in three days. She said you kept the flat cold because you thought you heard something on the stairs." The kettle whistled. Rory did not move to take it off. Eva's Flat above the curry house was never cold. The ovens below kept the floorboards warm even in winter. Rory's face heated. "She worries for nothing." "She worries with good reason. You still sleep with the knife under your pillow." "How do you know that?" He stepped close again. This time he did touch. His palm cupped the side of her throat, thumb against her pulse. His hand was warm despite the rain. Her breath caught. She hated that it caught. "Because you check for it whenever you think I am not looking." His heterochromatic gaze dropped to her mouth. Her own gaze snagged on his. The distance between them was a handspan. The tea towel steamed on the radiator. The kettle screamed. "You said unsaid things were dangerous, Rory. In Marseille. You said leaving things unsaid gets people killed." "I said a lot of stupid things in Marseille." "Say one now." The kettle kept screaming. Rory reached behind her and killed the gas burner. Silence slammed back in, broken by the hiss of the radiator and Ptolemy crunching kibble in the corner. Her voice came out rough. "You hurt me." Lucien's thumb stroked once over her pulse. "I know." "You do not get to show up and act like three locks and a grumpy cat keep you out." "I know that also." His forehead lowered until it almost touched hers. Damp hair brushed her skin. Rain and cedar. She could see the faint line of a scar through his left eyebrow she had never asked about. "I missed you." "I missed you too. That is the problem." His other hand found her waist. Not tight. A question. She answered by leaning in. Her hands fisted in his wet shirt, black hair falling forward to hide her face, bright blue eyes hidden. "Do you stay this time?" "If you ask." She looked up. The distance went from a handspan to nothing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1439
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1439
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stomach"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
4"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences175
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1446
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount940
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Rory15
Lucien11
Golden1
Empress1
Avaros1
French1
Flat2
Ptolemy5
Rain3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rain"
places
0"Golden"
1"French"
globalScore0.702
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
61.69% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.383
wordCount1446
matches
0"not an invitation, but Lucien took it as one"
1"not to grab, but his fingers brushed the crescent scar on her left wrist"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences175
matches
0"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs99
mean14.61
std13.42
cv0.919
sampleLengths
08
141
240
34
433
544
612
72
827
914
103
118
127
134
146
153
1611
1739
183
1918
205
2147
227
2319
243
2526
2619
2711
2826
2913
3012
3140
325
335
3420
3511
366
3731
381
3923
404
4115
4212
4330
4414
455
461
4712
485
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
77.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences175
ratio0.023
matches
0"Eva's neat handwriting marked three locks with tiny labels - TOP, MIDDLE, BOTTOM - because Rory always forgot the order."
1"He closed the door behind him with his hip and flipped the deadbolts - top, middle, bottom - without looking."
2"She felt the heat of his damp suit, the familiar scent under the rain - cedar and ink and something metallic, like old coins."
3"Eva's research notes pressed in from the living room - tall stacks of books on demon lineages, on Avaros, on half-bloods."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount936
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.024572649572649572
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002136752136752137
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences175
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences175
mean8.26
std6.62
cv0.802
sampleLengths
08
116
215
310
420
58
66
76
84
95
1014
1114
125
139
147
156
1612
175
186
196
202
215
2222
2314
243
258
267
274
286
293
3011
3112
328
332
349
358
363
374
3814
395
403
4112
426
436
4420
457
4619
473
486
4917
43.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.26285714285714284
totalSentences175
uniqueOpeners46
30.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"Bright blue eyes met his"
ratio0.009
57.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences111
matches
0"Her left wrist caught the"
1"She flipped the bottom."
2"His platinum hair was not"
3"His cane hung from his"
4"His mouth twitched."
5"She did not open the"
6"He rose and crossed the"
7"He closed the door behind"
8"His coat dripped onto Eva's"
9"He caught it."
10"He did not use it."
11"She needed something for her"
12"She lifted the kettle."
13"It was empty."
14"His voice came lower now."
15"His cane clicked once."
16"He was closer."
17"She felt the heat of"
18"He said nothing else for"
19"She set her jaw."
ratio0.405
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences111
matches
0"The bell over the curry"
1"Rory counted one floorboard creak,"
2"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
3"The cat stared at the"
4"Eva's neat handwriting marked three"
5"Rory flipped the top deadbolt,"
6"Her left wrist caught the"
7"The crescent scar there went"
8"She flipped the bottom."
9"The door gave an inch."
10"The smell of cold autumn"
11"A hand, pale, knuckles scarred,"
12"Lucien stood in the hall."
13"Rain beaded on the shoulders"
14"His platinum hair was not"
15"His cane hung from his"
16"Rory's fingers tightened around the"
17"Plaster dust ground under her"
18"Lucien's gaze swept past her."
19"Books towered on every surface"
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.6373%