Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD606CT650ECNQBGEXYKSJE

Run Details

Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.030691
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The glass slipped in Aurora's hand before she saw his face. She caught it against her hip, felt the gin bleed cold through her apron, and only then looked up into the mirror behind the bar and found Owen Price standing in the doorway of the Raven's Nest with rain in his hair. Eight years. Cardiff seemed to arrive with him, trailing in off Brewer Street like damp off a coat. "Rory Carter." He said it the way people read names off gravestones. "I'll be damned." "Owen." She set the glass down. Her voice came out steady, which surprised her. "You're a long way from the Taff." He crossed the room the way he always had, shoulders first, and folded himself onto a barstool. Up close the years showed. The softness had gone out of his jaw. Something harder had moved in behind his eyes and redecorated. Silas glanced over from the till, one eyebrow raised a fraction. Aurora gave him the smallest shake of her head. *I've got this.* The old man returned to his ledger, unhurried, but she noticed he stayed within earshot. "Whatever you're drinking," Owen said. "I'm working, that's what I'm drinking." "Then pour me a double and pretend it's my round." She reached for the Laphroaig without asking. He noticed. "You remembered." "You drank it to seem older than you were. Figured by now you might've grown into it." He laughed, and for half a second he was nineteen again, sprawled on the wall outside the law library with a cigarette he never finished. Then the laugh ended and the stranger came back. "You look different," he said. "So do you." "I mean really different. You had that—" He waved a hand at her. "You used to dress like you were apologising for taking up space." "That was Evan's preference, not mine." The name landed between them and lay there. Owen turned his glass once on the bar top. "I heard about that. After. Eva told me some of it." "Eva talks too much." "Eva's the only reason I knew you were alive. You vanished, Rory. You left Cardiff and it was like you'd been rubbed out of the photograph. No forwarding address. No goodbye." He drank. "Your mum still asks about you, you know. Every time I see her in the Tesco on Cowbridge Road." Aurora picked up a cloth and began wiping down the bar, working at a ring of condensation that didn't need wiping. "I call her." "Every few months, yeah. She tells me. She holds the phone like it's a bird that might fly off." He watched her hands. "You cut your hair." "I grew it out, actually. Evan liked it long." "Christ, everything with you comes back to him." "Everything did. That was the problem." Silas moved down the bar, slow, deliberate, and set a bowl of salted nuts between them without a word. His hazel eyes rested on Owen for one measuring second, the kind of look that catalogued exits and weighed a man's intentions, and then he limped away again, signet ring clicking against the wood. "Who's that?" Owen asked. "My landlord. My boss. Depending on the day." "He looks at you like family." "He looks at everyone like that. It's just that some people deserve it." Owen was quiet a moment. The bar filled in around them with the ordinary noise of a Tuesday night: two students arguing about a film near the maps on the wall, a woman alone at the window table turning the pages of a newspaper she wasn't reading. The green neon from the sign outside buzzed faintly through the glass and painted the wet pavement. "You want to know the worst part?" Owen said. "I saw it. Back then. The way he'd go through your phone at parties and call it a joke. The way you'd check his face before you answered a question anybody asked you. I saw all of it." Aurora stopped wiping. "I told myself it wasn't my business. That's what I did. I did the arithmetic — Rory's happy enough, Rory's clever, Rory would leave if it were really bad — and the sum always came out to me not having to do anything." He turned the glass again. "Then Eva called me one night after you'd gone, told me what he'd done to your wrist, the lock on the bedroom door, all of it. And I sat in my kitchen and I realised I'd spent two years being a coward and calling it tact." The scar on her left wrist seemed to tighten, the small crescent gone cold. She put her hand flat over it without thinking, then made herself stop and set the hand on the bar where he could see it. "You weren't the one hurting me, Owen." "No. I was just the one watching." He finished the whisky. "I became a solicitor, you know. Family law. Cardiff. I sit across from women twice a week who have your look. The flat voice. The hand over the wrist. And every single time I think, here's my penance, here's Rory again, maybe this time I'll say the right thing early enough." "That's a heavy reason to choose a career." "It's the only honest thing I've ever done." She took his empty glass and refilled it without being asked. Her own rules about drinking on shift dissolved; she poured herself two fingers of the same and stood across from him with it. "I hated you for a while," she said. "You and the others. I used to lie awake above this bar thinking, somebody must have seen. Somebody must have known. It was easier to be angry at the audience than at the man on the stage." "And now?" "Now I think you were twenty years old and stupid in the ordinary way. He was stupid in a way that chose to be cruel. There's a difference." She drank. The peat smoke filled her chest. "But I won't pretend it doesn't sit in me somewhere. The watching. All of you, watching." "That's fair." "Don't do that either." "Do what?" "Agree with everything. Take every punch like it's communion." She leaned on the bar. "You're allowed to have been a kid, Owen. I'm allowed to have needed more than a kid. Both of those can be true and we both have to carry them anyway. That's what the years do. They don't settle anything. They just teach you to hold two things at once." He looked at her for a long moment, and something in his face gave way — not crumbled, just set down a load it had carried up eight years of motorway. "When did you get wise?" he asked. "About the time I stopped being afraid. Deliveries, mostly. You learn a lot about people carrying hot soup up six flights of stairs." "You're delivering food? You had a first in contract law." "I had Evan's version of a future. This one's mine. It smells of sesame oil and nobody locks the door on me." She nodded at his glass. "Drink up. It's last orders in twenty minutes and I have to close." He stayed for all twenty. They didn't talk about Cardiff again. He told her about his mother's allotment and a dog he'd adopted that was afraid of stairs, and she told him about Yu-Fei Cheung's kitchen and the old men who played chess in the corner of the restaurant and accused each other of espionage. It wasn't the friendship they'd had. It was something with scar tissue in it, something that knew its own history. When he stood to go, he put a twenty on the bar and then, hesitating, put his hand over hers — briefly, a question more than a gesture. "I'm in London once a month now," he said. "Work. Could I—" "You know where I work." He nodded. At the door he paused with the rain silvering his shoulders and looked back at her, at the maps and the black-and-white photographs and the green neon humming behind him. "You look like yourself, Rory," he said. "You didn't before. That's what I couldn't name back then. You looked like a rough sketch of someone. Now you look finished." "Nobody's finished, Owen." "No," he said. "Suppose not. Goodnight, then." The door swung shut and the bar settled into its late quiet. Aurora took his glass to the sink and ran the water hot, watching the steam rise off the whisky smell. Behind her, Silas closed his ledger with a soft thump. "Old friend?" he asked. "Old witness," she said. "There's a difference. But tonight I'm not sure it matters." She dried the glass, set it on the shelf, and went to turn the sign off.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:43:37.123Z" 7/25/2026, 5:43:37 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences64
matches
0"was afraid"
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1464
ratio0.002
matches
0"I've got this."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount731
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Owen"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Owen"
discoveredNames
Aurora5
Owen7
Price1
Raven1
Nest1
Brewer1
Street1
Laphroaig1
Silas3
Tuesday1
Cardiff2
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Owen"
2"Price"
3"Raven"
4"Silas"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Cheung"
places
0"Brewer"
1"Street"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1464
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean23.24
std21.08
cv0.907
sampleLengths
053
118
215
321
440
538
65
76
810
911
1017
1134
125
133
1425
156
1628
174
1852
1924
2027
219
228
236
2453
254
268
276
2813
2964
3047
313
3294
3339
347
3562
368
378
3834
3945
402
4152
422
434
442
4564
4631
477
4823
4910
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"wasn't reading"
61.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences106
ratio0.028
matches
0"Her own rules about drinking on shift dissolved; she poured herself two fingers of the same and stood across from him with it."
1"He looked at her for a long moment, and something in his face gave way — not crumbled, just set down a load it had carried up eight years of motorway."
2"When he stood to go, he put a twenty on the bar and then, hesitating, put his hand over hers — briefly, a question more than a gesture."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount732
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02459016393442623
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004098360655737705
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean13.81
std12.08
cv0.874
sampleLengths
011
142
22
316
412
53
66
78
87
917
105
118
1210
1311
149
1518
165
176
1810
197
202
212
2217
2325
249
255
263
2713
2812
296
308
319
3211
334
3433
3519
3621
373
3823
394
409
418
426
4319
4434
454
468
476
4813
495
64.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.42452830188679247
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners45
69.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"Then the laugh ended and"
ratio0.021
11.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences48
matches
0"She caught it against her"
1"He said it the way"
2"She set the glass down"
3"Her voice came out steady,"
4"He crossed the room the"
5"*I've got this.* The old"
6"She reached for the Laphroaig"
7"He laughed, and for half"
8"He waved a hand at"
9"He watched her hands"
10"His hazel eyes rested on"
11"He turned the glass again"
12"She put her hand flat"
13"He finished the whisky"
14"She took his empty glass"
15"Her own rules about drinking"
16"She leaned on the bar"
17"He looked at her for"
18"She nodded at his glass"
19"He stayed for all twenty."
ratio0.521
12.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences48
matches
0"The glass slipped in Aurora's"
1"She caught it against her"
2"Cardiff seemed to arrive with"
3"He said it the way"
4"She set the glass down"
5"Her voice came out steady,"
6"He crossed the room the"
7"The softness had gone out"
8"Something harder had moved in"
9"Silas glanced over from the"
10"Aurora gave him the smallest"
11"*I've got this.* The old"
12"She reached for the Laphroaig"
13"He laughed, and for half"
14"He waved a hand at"
15"The name landed between them"
16"Owen turned his glass once"
17"Aurora picked up a cloth"
18"He watched her hands"
19"Silas moved down the bar,"
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora picked up a cloth and began wiping down the bar, working at a ring of condensation that didn't need wiping."
1"His hazel eyes rested on Owen for one measuring second, the kind of look that catalogued exits and weighed a man's intentions, and then he limped away again, si…"
2"He told her about his mother's allotment and a dog he'd adopted that was afraid of stairs, and she told him about Yu-Fei Cheung's kitchen and the old men who pl…"
3"It was something with scar tissue in it, something that knew its own history."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1120%