Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD60KJ4N29TJ4N15RAZJKJG

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.027857
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven — three measured raps, unhurried, the kind of knock that assumed it would be answered. Rory knew it before she reached the door. She knew it the way you know a song from its first two notes. Ptolemy uncoiled from the stack of journals by the window and slipped under the sofa, which told her nothing; the tabby hid from everyone. Rory looked through the peephole anyway, because she was not a fool, and because some small, stupid part of her needed the confirmation. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor with rain on his shoulders, charcoal wool darkened to near-black, platinum hair gleaming under the flickering hallway light. He held his ivory-handled cane loosely, the way other men held umbrellas. He was looking directly at the peephole, as though he could feel her eye against the other side of it. She opened the first deadbolt. Then the second. Her hand paused on the third. "Aurora." His voice came through the door, low and accented and infuriatingly calm. "I can hear you deciding. Either finish the job or send me away, but the indecision is cruel to us both." She turned the third bolt and opened the door. "You have a lot of nerve," she said. "So I am told. Frequently. Sometimes by people I have not yet met." His eyes — that impossible pairing, one amber, one black as spilled ink — moved over her face with an attention she felt in her sternum. "May I come in?" "No." "I see." He didn't move. Rain slid down the collar of his coat. "Then may I stand in your doorway and drip on Eva's carpet while I tell you why I've come?" "Eva would kill you for the carpet alone." "Eva has tried to kill me for less." The ghost of something crossed his mouth — not quite a smile. Lucien's smiles were rationed like wartime sugar. "It concerns her, actually. May I?" Rory hated herself for the way her pulse jumped. She stepped back. "Two minutes." He crossed the threshold and the flat seemed to shrink around him, the way it shrank around everything — the towers of books, the scrolls rubber-banded on the kitchen table, the notes pinned to the wall in Eva's frantic shorthand. He took it in with a broker's eye, cataloguing, and then his gaze came back to her and stayed. "You cut your hair," he said. "That was eight months ago." "I know when it was." The words landed softly and did damage anyway. Eight months since she'd walked out of his office above the leather shop in Soho. Eight months since she'd told him that she was done being one of his assets, one of his interesting human investments, and he'd stood there behind that ridiculous desk and let her go without saying a single one of the things she'd been silently begging him to say. "Why are you here, Lucien?" He set the cane's tip against the floor and leaned on it with casual elegance, but she knew him well enough to read the tension in his wrist. "Someone made an inquiry about Eva's research last week. Through a channel in Whitechapel. The wrong kind of channel." "What kind of inquiry?" "The kind preceded by payment and followed by surveillance." The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one swallowed it. "A watcher was posted on Brick Lane for three nights. He has been discouraged." "Discouraged." Rory's arms crossed over her chest. "Is he alive?" "He is alive, employed elsewhere, and considerably poorer." Lucien's jaw tightened. "I came to warn Eva. I did not expect—" He stopped. Started again, and for the first time in her memory, Lucien Moreau sounded like a man feeling his way across a dark room. "I did not expect to find you here." "I'm staying a few nights. While Eva's in Edinburgh." "You're staying a few nights." He repeated it slowly, and something in his face rearranged itself. "In a flat that is presently of interest to people I would not wish on anyone." "So I'll be careful." "You are not careful, Aurora. You are brilliant and reckless and you assume the world will reorganize itself around your good intentions." He took a step closer, and the smell of him — rain, wool, something faintly like cedar — reached her with the force of a memory. "The last time I watched you be careless, I spent six weeks cleaning up after it and you never even knew." Rory's breath went thin. "That was your choice. Everything you did was your choice. You never once asked me what I wanted." "You wanted to be left out of it. You said so." "I wanted to matter more than the work!" The words came out louder than she intended, and they hung in the cramped flat between the books and the deadbolts, terrible and true. Ptolemy's tail vanished the rest of the way under the sofa. Lucien went very still. Men like Lucien, she had learned, became most still when the ground moved under them. "Is that what you think," he said finally. It wasn't a question. It was a man examining a wound. "That you were part of the work." "You introduced me to your associates as 'a useful acquaintance.'" "I was protecting you." "You were erasing me." "I was—" He broke off. Looked away, toward the window and the sodium-orange street below, and when he spoke again his voice had shed its polish entirely, gone rough at the edges. "I have spent thirty-two years learning that anything I name becomes a target. My father taught me that. My employer after him taught it again. So I did not name you. To anyone. Not even—" His hand flexed on the ivory handle. "Not even to myself, which was the coward's version, and I knew it at the time." Rory's anger didn't leave her. It just changed shape. "And now?" she asked quietly. "Now someone is watching this flat, and I find I do not care what it makes you." He turned back to her, and the mismatched eyes held hers with an honesty that looked like it cost him blood. "It makes you a target, Aurora. So I am going to say it once, plainly, because I may not get a better moment, and then I will help you secure those absurd locks and we will argue about the rest afterward." "Lucien—" "You were never the work. You were the reason the work felt survivable. You walked out eight months ago and I have been—" He exhaled, a short, humorless sound. "My tailor says I have lost weight. My tailor is a demon who eats insults, Aurora. There is no one else I could possibly be talking about." The rain ticked against the window. Somewhere below, the curry house's extractor fan hummed its endless note. Rory looked at him — at the rain in his eyelashes, at the careful ruin of his composure, at the man who had crossed London at midnight in a storm because naming her was finally cheaper than losing her. "You're standing on Eva's good rug," she said. Something flickered in his face — confusion, then dawning, terrified hope. "Take your coat off," Rory said, and reached past him to turn the deadbolts, one, two, three. "It's soaked through. And then you're going to tell me everything about the watcher, and everything about the channel, and then—" her hand brushed his as she drew back, and she felt him shiver, "—we're going to talk about what you call me. Starting now." Lucien caught her fingers. Gently. As though she were the rarest thing he'd ever brokered. "Mine," he said roughly. "If you'll have it. Starting now." She didn't pull her hand away. Outside, the rain went on falling over Brick Lane, and for the first time in eight months, Rory let herself be held still.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:43:50.681Z" 7/25/2026, 5:43:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
49.06% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"she asked quietly [quietly]"
2"He turned back [back]"
3"he said roughly [roughly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.415
leniency0.83
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.151
81.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
3"very"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"gleaming"
2"could feel"
3"pulse"
4"tension"
5"weight"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1326
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount794
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Rain1
Lucien7
Eva1
Soho1
Rory9
Started1
Looked1
London1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rain"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.933
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"sounded like a man feeling his way across"
2"looked like it cost him blood"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1326
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean26.52
std23.5
cv0.886
sampleLengths
044
147
256
314
434
59
68
743
81
932
108
1133
1214
1359
146
155
165
1771
185
1947
204
2134
2210
2353
249
2532
264
2769
2822
2911
308
3135
3219
3326
3410
354
364
3790
389
395
4079
411
4256
4356
448
4511
4662
4715
4810
4929
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"were rationed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs133
matches
0"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences95
ratio0.105
matches
0"The knock came at half past eleven — three measured raps, unhurried, the kind of knock that assumed it would be answered."
1"Ptolemy uncoiled from the stack of journals by the window and slipped under the sofa, which told her nothing; the tabby hid from everyone."
2"\"So I am told. Frequently. Sometimes by people I have not yet met.\" His eyes — that impossible pairing, one amber, one black as spilled ink — moved over her face with an attention she felt in her sternum."
3"\"Eva has tried to kill me for less.\" The ghost of something crossed his mouth — not quite a smile."
4"He crossed the threshold and the flat seemed to shrink around him, the way it shrank around everything — the towers of books, the scrolls rubber-banded on the kitchen table, the notes pinned to the wall in Eva's frantic shorthand."
5"\"The kind preceded by payment and followed by surveillance.\" The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one swallowed it."
6"\"You are not careful, Aurora. You are brilliant and reckless and you assume the world will reorganize itself around your good intentions.\" He took a step closer, and the smell of him — rain, wool, something faintly like cedar — reached her with the force of a memory."
7"Rory looked at him — at the rain in his eyelashes, at the careful ruin of his composure, at the man who had crossed London at midnight in a storm because naming her was finally cheaper than losing her."
8"Something flickered in his face — confusion, then dawning, terrified hope."
9"\"It's soaked through. And then you're going to tell me everything about the watcher, and everything about the channel, and then—\" her hand brushed his as she drew back, and she felt him shiver, \"—we're going to talk about what you call me. Starting now.\""
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount747
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.04685408299866131
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.014725568942436412
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean13.96
std11.61
cv0.832
sampleLengths
022
18
214
324
423
524
612
720
85
93
106
1113
1221
139
148
1539
164
171
185
198
2019
218
2220
237
246
259
263
272
2840
2919
306
315
325
338
3415
3548
365
3728
3819
394
4020
4114
427
433
4411
4511
4623
478
489
4916
67.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4421052631578947
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Somewhere below, the curry house's"
ratio0.034
36.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences59
matches
0"She knew it the way"
1"He held his ivory-handled cane"
2"He was looking directly at"
3"She opened the first deadbolt."
4"Her hand paused on the"
5"His voice came through the"
6"She turned the third bolt"
7"His eyes — that impossible"
8"He didn't move"
9"She stepped back."
10"He crossed the threshold and"
11"He took it in with"
12"He set the cane's tip"
13"He repeated it slowly, and"
14"He took a step closer,"
15"he said finally"
16"It wasn't a question."
17"It was a man examining"
18"He broke off"
19"His hand flexed on the"
ratio0.458
27.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences59
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory knew it before she"
2"She knew it the way"
3"Ptolemy uncoiled from the stack"
4"Rory looked through the peephole"
5"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
6"He held his ivory-handled cane"
7"He was looking directly at"
8"She opened the first deadbolt."
9"Her hand paused on the"
10"His voice came through the"
11"She turned the third bolt"
12"His eyes — that impossible"
13"He didn't move"
14"Rain slid down the collar"
15"The ghost of something crossed"
16"Lucien's smiles were rationed like"
17"Rory hated herself for the"
18"She stepped back."
19"He crossed the threshold and"
ratio0.864
84.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"As though she were the"
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory looked at him — at the rain in his eyelashes, at the careful ruin of his composure, at the man who had crossed London at midnight in a storm because naming…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.151
leniency0.302
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.038
83.5239%