| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.737 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 962 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 962 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "glint" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "unraveling" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "crystal" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 28 | | totalWords | 954 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "unraveling" | | 1 | "sings" | | 2 | "Don’t push it," | | 3 | "She’ll bury you in riddles." | | 4 | "Not a Hel portal," | | 5 | "Something older." | | 6 | "woven" | | 7 | "Give us the Veil, and we will give you your sister." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.01% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 821 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae | 3 | | Aurora | 11 | | Veil | 3 | | Shadows | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Crown | 7 | | Helonic | 1 | | Isolde | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Shadows" | | 4 | "Crown" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.83 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 5.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like sorrow" | | 1 | "as if reading from a scroll written in starlight" | | 2 | "metal that seemed to drink the light" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.096 | | wordCount | 954 | | matches | | 0 | "not darkness but a swirling nebula of colors" | | 1 | "not the ocean of molten glass she’d expected, but a wound in the world itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.04% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 47.7 | | std | 21.52 | | cv | 0.451 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 109 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 41 |
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| 94.12% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "were lined" | | 1 | "was documented" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, the crescent scar on her wrist catching a glint of something violet—Nyx’s doing, probably, or a trick of the light." | | 1 | "Isolde knelt by the bank, her fingers trailing through the falling droplets, and Aurora watched her reflection ripple in the air—distorted, beautiful, older than her years." | | 2 | "She could smell ozone and something sweeter—blood and honey, maybe." | | 3 | "And atop it, as if placed there by unseen hands, lay the Crown itself—a circlet of thorned metal that seemed to drink the light." | | 4 | "The Veil weakened during the winter solstice—that was documented, part of the fragile balance she’d studied in her cursed legal education." | | 5 | "She pulled the Fae blade from her belt—Isolde’s gift, still cold despite the heat in her chest." | | 6 | "Branches writhed, thorns lashed, and the floor cracked open to reveal not the ocean of molten glass she’d expected, but a wound in the world itself—a swirling portal painted in the colors of a dying star." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 829 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.028950542822677925 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007237635705669481 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 14.03 | | std | 7.78 | | cv | 0.554 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 40 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 60.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.39705882352941174 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 97.97% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "She tucked a strand of" | | 1 | "It had grown warm when" | | 2 | "She didn’t look back, nor" | | 3 | "they echoed, their form flickering" | | 4 | "Their voice carried something like" | | 5 | "She’d felt it too: that" | | 6 | "They moved deeper, past a" | | 7 | "*She’ll bury you in riddles.*" | | 8 | "Its surface writhed with glyphs" | | 9 | "She stepped closer to the" | | 10 | "She could smell ozone and" | | 11 | "They stepped closer to the" | | 12 | "She could hear whispers in" | | 13 | "She pulled the Fae blade" | | 14 | "Its moonlight gleamed faintly as" | | 15 | "she said aloud" | | 16 | "She drew the blade, its" | | 17 | "It was older, hungrier, and" |
| | ratio | 0.305 | |
| 36.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed as they" | | 1 | "Aurora paused, her breath fogging" | | 2 | "The trees here grew in" | | 3 | "She tucked a strand of" | | 4 | "It had grown warm when" | | 5 | "Isolde murmured, her voice like" | | 6 | "She didn’t look back, nor" | | 7 | "The Fae grove had swallowed" | | 8 | "Nyx materialized from a patch" | | 9 | "they echoed, their form flickering" | | 10 | "Their voice carried something like" | | 11 | "Aurora exchanged a glance with" | | 12 | "Nyx had a way of" | | 13 | "She’d felt it too: that" | | 14 | "The pendant grew hot against" | | 15 | "They moved deeper, past a" | | 16 | "Isolde knelt by the bank," | | 17 | "The seer turned, silver hair" | | 18 | "Isolde said, as if reading" | | 19 | "Aurora said, then caught herself" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 84.75% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Either way, she kept her" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 37.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, the crescent scar on her wrist catching a glint of something violet—Nyx’s doing, probably, or a trick of the light." | | 1 | "Its surface writhed with glyphs that rearranged themselves when she looked away." | | 2 | "The ruin’s doorway yawned open, revealing not darkness but a swirling nebula of colors that made Aurora’s eyes water." | | 3 | "The Veil weakened during the winter solstice—that was documented, part of the fragile balance she’d studied in her cursed legal education." | | 4 | "The scream tore through the grove, and the stoneshowed their true faces: jagged, hungry things that lunged at them." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, as if reading from a scroll written in starlight" | | 1 | "She stepped, and the glyphs flared crimson" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their voice tight" | | 3 | "Nyx interrupted, but their tone softened" | | 4 | "They stepped, their form dissolving into smoke" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx interrupted (interrupt)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.421 | |