Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD61NYE8B7G2NB0QR9XA7VX

Run Details

Duration:
2m 25s
Cost:
$0.055499
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Mystery genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The dead man on the tracks wore evening dress and no shoes. Harlow Quinn ducked under the cordon before the duty sergeant finished his warning. Blue light washed the old Camden platform in pulses, stripping colour from tile and soot, giving the abandoned station the complexion of something drowned. The air tasted of brake dust and pennies. Beneath that, sweeter, like lilies left too long in a vase. “Scene’s yours, Detective.” The sergeant lifted the tape. His eyes kept sliding to the tunnel mouth. “Mind the third rail. Power says dead. Body says otherwise.” Quinn stepped down onto the ballast. Her worn leather watch bit cold against her left wrist. Eighteen years had taught her the weight of a room, how grief pooled, how panic left fingerprints on air. This place had weight in the wrong direction. It pulled. The corpse lay between the rails as if set down by careful hands. Black tie. White shirt. Cufflinks shaped like little skulls. No coat despite the chill. His soles were clean enough to reflect the lamps. “Male, forties,” said the SOCO behind her. “No wallet. No phone. No blood.” “No blood?” “Not a drop outside him.” Quinn crouched. The man’s face held the calm of a sleeper denied dreams. A white object rested on his tongue. Bone, carved into a disc the size of a two-pound coin. A hole pierced its centre, neat as a bead. “Don’t touch,” Eva Kowalski said from the platform edge. Quinn had not heard her come down. Eva stood with her worn leather satchel clutched to her chest, round glasses fogged at the rims, curly red hair trapped under a borrowed scene hood. She looked small against the black arch of the tunnel. She also looked like the only person present who had read the room correctly. “Not evidence until I say so,” Quinn said. “It is evidence. It’s also an invitation.” Eva tucked hair behind her left ear. “Please don’t put it in an exhibit bag before you photograph both sides.” The duty sergeant laughed once. “Museum’s sending interns to homicides now?” “Restricted archives,” Eva said. “And this isn’t a homicide.” Quinn rose. “Cause of death unknown. Body concealed in a sealed station. That buys the word until someone earns a refund.” “Sealed?” Eva pointed along the platform. “Your officers came through the emergency stair. The old lift shaft is chained from the inside. The tunnel south is bricked. The tunnel north has tracks polished bright for forty metres, then dust like felt. He didn’t walk in barefoot.” “Then he was carried.” “By whom?” The sergeant again. “No marks on the ladder. No scuffs on the tiles. CCTV at street level caught a fox and two drunk students arguing about chips.” Quinn walked the body’s length. The rails hummed under her boots though the current board read isolated. She stopped at the dead man’s right hand. The fingers curled around air. The thumb pressed inward, as if holding a pen, a stem, a hilt. “Rigor’s off,” she said. The SOCO checked his tablet. “Ambient temp says six hours. Muscle says two. Lividity says he died on his back in a warmer room, then took a nap here.” “Three bodies in one,” Eva murmured. Quinn glanced up. “Meaning?” “Nothing useful. A bad joke.” “Make it better.” Eva swallowed. Her gaze moved from the bone token to the tunnel mouth and back. “Stage magicians call this misdirection. Poor men’s séances call it apport. An object arrives from elsewhere. The room stays locked. The believer pays extra for the lock.” “This believer paid with blood he doesn’t have.” “That’s why I said it isn’t homicide. Homicide requires a living killer entering a possible place.” The sergeant shifted. “You hear that, Quinn? Ghost did it. I’ll tell the Commissioner to dust Ouija boards for prints.” Quinn ignored him. She lifted her torch and let the beam crawl along the tunnel wall. Camden’s old station had been closed before her first warrant card. Posters survived in ulcers behind newer boards: a smiling family at the seaside, a play long closed, a cigarette advert with the surgeon’s warning eaten by damp. At ankle height the tiles bore a line of grey dust. Unbroken. Almost. “There,” Quinn said. Eva came closer despite herself. A gap in the dust, no wider than a shoe, sat beneath the poster frame. Not a footprint. A pressure mark. Something had rested against the wall and disturbed the grime in a perfect crescent. Quinn photographed it with her phone, then with the scene camera when the SOCO muttered about protocol. “Could be a rat,” the sergeant said. “A rat wearing cufflinks.” “Could be from the closure works.” “Closure dust lies under paint flakes and rat droppings. This lies over them.” Quinn held the torch steady. “Someone leaned here after the rats stopped caring.” Eva’s breath changed. Not a gasp. A decision. Quinn saw it. “What?” “Nothing.” “That word costs extra tonight.” Eva opened her satchel. Books, pencils, a paper bag of mints, a pair of white gloves. Under them sat a small brass compass with a patina of verdigris. Protective sigils ringed its face, etched so fine they vanished unless light struck sideways. The needle did not point north. It trembled toward the dead man, then jerked to the tunnel, then to Quinn’s chest. The sergeant barked a laugh. “Satnav’s drunk.” “Where did you get that?” Quinn asked. “Market research.” “Answer properly.” Eva closed her fist around the compass. The needle kept twitching against her palm. “There are places under London that do not stay still. This finds their doors. It should not find a person.” “Unless the person is a door.” Silence took the platform by the throat. Quinn returned to the body. She had missed the order of things, offended by the clean soles, the theatrical bone, the shortage of blood. Begin with what refused to lie. No blood outside. No tracks in. Rigor wrong. Lividity displaced. Token on tongue. Hand closed around absence. Compass choosing flesh over stone. “Turn him,” she said. The SOCO hesitated. “Detective-” “Gloves, photos, then turn him.” They rolled the dead man with the tenderness reserved for evidence and explosives. The back of his shirt had adhered to the ballast. When the fabric peeled free, black grit clung to cotton in lines too straight for accident. Not random. Letters. Eva dropped to her knees. “Don’t brush him.” “Greek?” the SOCO asked. “No.” Eva’s finger hovered above the cloth. “Greek wears its age honestly. This borrows letters and feeds them backwards. Not reverse Greek either. A market hand. Camden cant, if Camden had teeth.” Quinn photographed each stroke. “Translate.” “I can’t.” “You came down a dead stair with a haunted compass. Earn the taxi fare.” Eva’s freckles stood out against the flush in her cheeks. “It says paid. Or bought. The grammar argues with itself. This mark is an IOU.” The sergeant leaned in despite his better angels. “Someone wrote on him after death?” “Before,” Quinn said. Eva looked up. “Lividity fixed on his back in a warm room. The grit stuck while the skin still took an impression. He lay on this message before he lay here. Then whoever dressed him missed it, or wanted us lower down to find it.” “Lower down,” Eva repeated. The compass in her hand gave a tiny brass tick. Quinn felt the sound in her molars. She thought of DS Morris three years dead, of a case file with pages that dried brown at the edges no matter how often the archive changed the box. Morris had written one line in his notebook before the lake house: The witness is the lock. No one had found the witness. No one had found all of Morris. She pushed the memory back where it belonged, behind her teeth. “Again,” she said. Eva blinked. “What?” “Say what you saw first, before the performance.” “That the evidence is rude.” A startled sound escaped the SOCO. Eva rushed on, Oxford cracking through fright. “A body is placed where place is the point. Not the wound, not the weapon. An abandoned Tube station under Camden, one that smells recent though the trains forgot it. A bone token in the mouth, not in the hand where a faker would put it for the first photograph. No blood because blood would make this about death. This is about access.” “Access to what?” the sergeant asked. The compass needle snapped toward him. He stepped back into a lamp stand and set the shadows swinging. “To here,” Eva said. “Or through here. The Veil Market moves every full moon and asks bone at the door. People trade in things no museum catalogue survives. If this station is the door tonight, your dead man is either the key, the receipt, or the knock.” Quinn watched the tunnel mouth. Darkness there had depth, not absence. It layered itself, black upon black, patient as water under ice. “Full moon was last night,” the sergeant said. “Then the market is late,” Eva whispered. “Or it moved early.” A sound came from the north tunnel. Metal cooling, though nothing had burned. The rails brightened in a long, thin line. Dust lifted from the sleepers in one breath and settled in the next, closer. “Power says dead,” Quinn said. The duty sergeant was already reaching for his radio. “Control, this is Camden disused, we need engineers and armed support, priority one. Control?” Static answered with a voice underneath it. Not words. A tune. Three notes down, one up, a music box after the child leaves the room. Eva opened the compass fully. The sigils caught blue light and threw it in circles across the dead man’s face. “Take the token out of his mouth.” “No,” Quinn said. “If he is the knock, someone may answer.” “If he is the key, removing it opens the door.” “And if he is the receipt?” Eva’s glasses had slipped. She did not push them up. “Receipts get checked.” Quinn drew her torch across the corpse once more. The white cuff at his wrist had shifted when they turned him. Beneath the skull cufflink, a mark circled the bone. Not a bruise. An impression. Narrow, ridged, familiar in a way that made her palm itch. She lifted her own left wrist. Her worn leather watch strap held the same pattern in negative: the buckle’s teeth, the keeper’s edge, the scarred loop Morris had given her after a raid in Peckham because hers had snapped on a suspect’s fence. The dead man had been held by a watch strap. Not around his wrist. Through it. “Skin’s pierced under the cufflink,” Quinn said. “Macro. Now.” The SOCO bent with the camera. “Jesus. There’s a channel. Under the radial bone. Like something passed-” The body inhaled. Not a spasm. Not trapped gas leaving by the back door. A deliberate pull, chest rising, shirt tightening over the grit-written IOU. The bone token clicked against his teeth. Every lamp on the platform went out. In the blue battery glow, Eva’s compass spun once and stopped. The needle pointed at Quinn. The sergeant swore and stumbled toward the ladder. “Control, repeat, officers require-” “Don’t say my name down here,” Eva said, sharp with terror. “Don’t say anyone’s.” From the tunnel came footsteps with no feet in them. Gravel pressed. Air dented. A weight approached by deciding where the dark should break. Quinn drew her sidearm and found the gesture useless, comforting, hers. “Lights on the north arch. Nobody crosses the cordon. Nobody runs alone.” The dead man turned his head. Bone token held between his teeth, he smiled around it. The compass needle jumped from Quinn to the mouth of the tunnel and back, faster, torn between two magnets. Eva grabbed Quinn’s sleeve with cold fingers. “Harlow,” she said, forgetting the rule she had made. “It isn’t coming through.” The rails sang. Something behind the bricked south tunnel knocked from the other side, three soft blows against London clay, polite as a visitor who knows the house is occupied. The corpse spat the token into Quinn’s hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences87
tagDensity0.322
leniency0.644
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2016
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2016
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"tenderness"
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word"familiar"
count1
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word"footsteps"
count1
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word"comforting"
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highlights
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2"perfect"
3"etched"
4"trembled"
5"silence"
6"tenderness"
7"familiar"
8"footsteps"
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100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
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100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences176
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences233
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2016
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions33
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1309
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.22
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Quinn29
Camden2
Kowalski1
Eva25
Morris4
Oxford1
Peckham1
London1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Camden"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
places
0"Oxford"
1"Peckham"
2"London"
globalScore0.392
windowScore0.167
97.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like the only person present who h"
1"as if holding a pen, a stem, a hilt"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2016
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences233
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs111
mean18.16
std17
cv0.936
sampleLengths
012
156
226
345
436
513
62
75
840
99
1057
118
1227
1311
149
1521
1646
174
1829
1943
204
2129
226
234
245
253
2642
278
2816
2920
3067
313
325
3352
347
354
366
3726
388
394
401
415
4263
437
447
452
462
4734
486
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences176
matches
0"been closed"
1"been held"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs220
matches
0"was already reaching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences233
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1311
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.018306636155606407
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0038138825324180014
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences233
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences233
mean8.65
std7.9
cv0.913
sampleLengths
012
113
224
38
411
58
68
710
86
910
1019
118
122
1313
142
152
165
175
189
197
206
212
225
232
2411
257
2611
279
289
297
3026
3110
3214
338
3414
3513
365
376
384
395
402
4119
426
4340
444
455
4624
475
4812
498
71.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.45493562231759654
totalSentences233
uniqueOpeners106
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences141
matches
0"His eyes kept sliding to"
1"Her worn leather watch bit"
2"His soles were clean enough"
3"She looked small against the"
4"She also looked like the"
5"She stopped at the dead"
6"Her gaze moved from the"
7"She lifted her torch and"
8"It trembled toward the dead"
9"She had missed the order"
10"They rolled the dead man"
11"She thought of DS Morris"
12"She pushed the memory back"
13"He stepped back into a"
14"It layered itself, black upon"
15"She did not push them"
16"She lifted her own left"
17"Her worn leather watch strap"
18"she said, forgetting the rule"
ratio0.135
69.93% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences141
matches
0"The dead man on the"
1"Harlow Quinn ducked under the"
2"The air tasted of brake"
3"The sergeant lifted the tape"
4"His eyes kept sliding to"
5"Quinn stepped down onto the"
6"Her worn leather watch bit"
7"This place had weight in"
8"The corpse lay between the"
9"Cufflinks shaped like little skulls."
10"His soles were clean enough"
11"The man’s face held the"
12"A white object rested on"
13"A hole pierced its centre,"
14"Eva Kowalski said from the"
15"Quinn had not heard her"
16"Eva stood with her worn"
17"She looked small against the"
18"She also looked like the"
19"Eva tucked hair behind her"
ratio0.78
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Something behind the bricked south tunnel knocked from the other side, three soft blows against London clay, polite as a visitor who knows the house is occupied…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva repeated (repeat)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences87
tagDensity0.253
leniency0.506
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.069
87.5387%