Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD62BTH5C3S683Q2VHZVN4N

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Duration:
26.7s
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$0.015502
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Meta

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon bled down Frith Street in the rain. THE RAVEN'S NEST stuttered against the wet brick, one letter on the fritz. Rory watched it from the window above the bar with her knees pulled to her chest. Downstairs, the bar breathed low. Last orders had come and gone. The place smelled of lemon polish and old smoke that never left the wood. The walls held their usual crowd of maps with pins rusted in and black-and-white photographs curled at the edges. The hidden door behind the bookshelf stayed shut. Silas stood behind the bar. He polished a glass with a white cloth. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light. The beard matched. Trimmed neat. His right hand worked the cloth. The silver signet ring knocked against the glass, a small tick. His left leg held stiff. The old knee. The bell above the door jingled and let in a shiver of cold air. Rory did not look at first. She wiped down table three. Her straight shoulder-length black hair fell forward and hid her face. Her sleeve rode up and showed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, pale as milk. Silas glanced toward the door. "You'll catch your death out there." The woman at the door shook rain from a camel coat worth more than the Raven's monthly till. "God. This place. You could put a sign up. Or not. Classic Silas." Rory froze. The cloth stopped in a circle on the wood. That voice. She turned. The woman had the same freckles across the nose. The same gap between the front teeth. Her hair was different. Cut blunt at the chin and dyed a hard, expensive blonde. Her mouth was painted. Her eyes found Rory and stopped. "Rory?" The wool blanket fell from Rory's shoulders. "No." "Rory Carter. Jesus Christ." The woman crossed the room in three long strides. Her heels clicked on the floorboards. She grabbed Rory's hands. Her grip was cold. Chloe Davies had lived two doors down from Rory in Talybont, first year. Chloe had slept on Rory's floor for a month after her first failed contract law exam and eaten nothing but super noodles and ketchup. Chloe had wanted to run a legal aid centre in Splott. Chloe had sworn she would never own a briefcase. Now the coat. The watch. The sharp line of her blazer. "You cut your hair." Rory pulled her hands back. "You bleached yours." Chloe laughed. A short bark. She looked Rory up and down. The oversized hoodie. The restaurant logo faded on the chest. The leggings with a hole at the knee. "I thought you were — Brendan told my mum you were in London but no one had— The last I heard you dropped out." "I did." Chloe's mouth opened. "You did. You left. In March. Second year. You just left. You didn't answer your phone for six months." "I know." "I went to your flat. In Cathays. The landlord said you'd gone. Your mum called me." Rory stacked the cloth. Folded it. Unfolded it. "I had stuff going on." Chloe stared. "Stuff." Silas set two glasses on the bar. He poured water. His hazel eyes flicked between them. Quiet authority in the way he made space and did not fill it. "You want a drink? On the house. For the prodigal." "Silas, this is Chloe. From Cardiff." "Chloe from Cardiff." Silas extended his right hand and the signet ring caught. "Welcome home." Chloe took it. Automatic. Firm. "You still run this crypt?" "Still crypt-keeping." He limped around the bar. The slight hitch in his left leg made his step uneven. He pulled out a stool for her. "Sit. You both look like you need it." Rory did not sit. She leaned against table three. Her bright blue eyes caught the neon from the window. "So. You look—" "Employed? I am. Travers Smith. Qualified last year. Property. It pays." "Property." Chloe heard the edge and ignored it. "It pays. Not everyone can do the noble thing and disappear to London to find themselves. Some of us had rent." The words landed hard and flat. The rain hit the windows harder. Rory's jaw worked. "I work. I work for Golden Empress. Deliveries. Part-time. And I help Silas here." "Deliveries." "Yeah." "You were first in our year. You were going to clerk at the Senedd." Chloe's hands curled around the water glass. Her nails were perfect nubs, painted nude. "I rang Evan, you know. After you left. He told me you had a breakdown. He told me you cheated on him and then—" Rory's laugh cut her off. Sharp. No humour in it. "He told you that." "Well what was I supposed to think? You vanished. He was there. Crying in the kitchen. He said you threw a plate at him." The scar on Rory's wrist seemed brighter. "I threw nothing." Chloe looked at the scar before she could stop herself. Then up. "Rory—" "Don't." Silas stepped forward. He rested his forearms on the bar. The wood creaked. "Chloe. Breathe." "I am breathing. I am— I came in for a drink because it pisses down and I had a client dinner on Wardour Street and I see my best friend who ghosted me three years ago mopping tables. Excuse me if I'm not doing Zen." Rory pushed off the table. She paced to the wall of maps. Her old habit. She traced a pin stuck in the Bay of Bengal with a fingertip. "I didn't ghost you. I couldn't. Speak. For a bit. I couldn't speak to anyone from there." "You could have texted. One text. 'Alive, not dead, fuck off'. I'd have taken that." "I couldn't." "You could." Silence stretched. The fridge hummed. A bus hissed outside on Old Compton. Chloe exhaled. The anger leaked out of her shoulders. "You know they offered you a spot back. Professor Hughes told me. He held it for Michaelmas. He said you had the best mind for statutory interpretation he'd seen in ten years." Rory kept her back to the room. "I don't want that life." "Nobody wants it. We do it. You were good at it." "I was good at exams." "You were good full stop. You— You used to argue with Evan for hours about housing rights and now you—" "Now I what?" Chloe swallowed. "Now you hide." The word hung there. Rory turned around. Her face was white. "I live here now. Above this bar. I open the shutters in the morning and I hear Silas grind coffee and I ride my bike through Soho with noodles that leak in the bag and Yu-Fei pays me and I pay Silas and I am safe. That is not hiding. That is living." Chloe's eyes filled. "Is it?" Rory's lips parted. No sound came. Chloe stood up. She undid the camel coat and then did it up again. An old tic. She did it when she was nervous before moots. "I read about Evan in the Western Mail. Assault. Another girl. I saw his name and I thought— Oh. Oh shit. She was right." The rain found a new rhythm. "I should have listened." Rory crossed the room. She did not touch her. She stood close enough that their shoes almost touched. Chloe's heels and Rory's busted trainers. "You didn't know." "I should have known. I told you you were lucky. I told you he was intense but he loved you. I said that." "You didn't know either." "I was your flatmate. I was supposed to." Silas poured whisky this time. Two fingers. He pushed one across the bar toward Rory. One toward Chloe. The bottle clunked. "On the house still stands." Chloe picked up the glass with both hands. "Do you remember the night before land law? We got pissed on that terrible rosé and you said you'd be a barrister like your dad but you'd only defend people who were actually innocent." Rory's mouth twitched. "And you said you'd put all landlords in prison." "And you said you'd visit me in the dock for saying it." A laugh broke out of Rory. Real this time. Short and wet. "God. We were idiots." "We were nineteen." "We were insufferable." They drank. The whisky burned. Outside, a group shouted down the street. Chloe set her glass down. "I have to go. Tom is waiting. My boyfriend. He is— He works in finance. Very exciting. He owns three identical navy jumpers." "Sounds hot." "He is. In a spreadsheet sort of way." Rory nodded. The old lightness sat awkward between them like a third guest at the table. Chloe fished in her coat for a card. Thick stock. Embossed. "My number. New one. My flat is in Farringdon now. Small. But we have a spare sofa that does not have a spring trying to kill you." Rory took the card. The small crescent scar white against the black ink. "You still have that same hole in your leggings from second year?" Rory looked down at her knee. "Different hole. Same leggings." Chloe's laugh cracked in the middle. "Same you, then." Rory slipped the card into the kangaroo pocket of her hoodie. "Same-ish." The bell jingled again as Chloe left. Cold air in. Rain and Soho and tyre spray. The green neon buzzed. Silas watched the street through the glass for a beat too long. Old habit. He locked the door and turned the sign. Rory stood at table three with the cloth in her hand and the card heavy in her pocket.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1593
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1593
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"perfect"
2"traced"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences145
matches
0"was nervous"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences145
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences216
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1594
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount901
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity3.22
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Frith1
Street1
Raven1
Rory29
Davies1
Talybont1
Splott1
Bay1
Bengal1
Old2
Compton1
Chloe22
Soho1
Silas7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Davies"
3"Chloe"
4"Silas"
places
0"Frith"
1"Street"
2"Talybont"
3"Splott"
4"Bay"
5"Bengal"
6"Compton"
7"Soho"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed brighter"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1594
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences216
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs129
mean12.36
std12.38
cv1.002
sampleLengths
039
152
251
314
439
55
66
718
813
911
102
112
1241
131
147
151
164
1723
1857
1911
204
215
223
2329
2424
252
263
2719
282
2916
308
315
322
331
3429
3510
366
373
3810
392
405
415
422
4323
448
4519
463
4711
481
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences216
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount906
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.016556291390728478
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011037527593818985
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences216
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences216
mean7.38
std7.22
cv0.979
sampleLengths
010
113
216
35
46
514
619
78
85
98
108
113
122
136
1411
155
163
1714
186
195
2011
2117
225
236
2418
2513
262
279
282
292
309
317
324
3311
344
356
361
377
381
394
409
416
424
434
4413
4524
4611
479
483
492
41.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.2824074074074074
totalSentences216
uniqueOpeners61
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences123
matches
0"He polished a glass with"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"His right hand worked the"
3"His left leg held stiff."
4"She wiped down table three."
5"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
6"Her sleeve rode up and"
7"Her hair was different."
8"Her mouth was painted."
9"Her eyes found Rory and"
10"Her heels clicked on the"
11"She grabbed Rory's hands."
12"Her grip was cold."
13"She looked Rory up and"
14"He poured water."
15"His hazel eyes flicked between"
16"He limped around the bar."
17"He pulled out a stool"
18"She leaned against table three."
19"Her bright blue eyes caught"
ratio0.26
8.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences123
matches
0"The green neon bled down"
1"THE RAVEN'S NEST stuttered against"
2"Rory watched it from the"
3"Downstairs, the bar breathed low."
4"The place smelled of lemon"
5"The walls held their usual"
6"The hidden door behind the"
7"Silas stood behind the bar."
8"He polished a glass with"
9"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
10"The beard matched."
11"His right hand worked the"
12"The silver signet ring knocked"
13"His left leg held stiff."
14"The old knee."
15"The bell above the door"
16"Rory did not look at"
17"She wiped down table three."
18"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
19"Her sleeve rode up and"
ratio0.902
40.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"Now the coat."
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.6314%