| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.079 | | leniency | 0.158 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1326 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1326 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "comforting" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 160 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1329 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.19% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1033 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.94 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 4 | | Park | 3 | | Rory | 20 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Veil | 3 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Earth | 1 | | Meat | 1 | | London | 1 | | Dymasian | 1 | | Nyx | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Belphegor" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Meat" | | 7 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Dymasian" |
| | globalScore | 0.532 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.752 | | wordCount | 1329 | | matches | | 0 | "not soup but a city above it - London, upside down, Richmond Park a dark" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 85 | | mean | 15.64 | | std | 14.24 | | cv | 0.911 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 91 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 160 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "Trees heavy with fruit that had never seen Earth - glass peaches, black apples with veins, bunches of grapes each the size of a fist and breathing faint steam." | | 1 | "Inside, Rory saw not soup but a city above it - London, upside down, Richmond Park a dark smudge, the Veil a membrane stretched thin over it, with teeth pressing through." | | 2 | "Through them she saw a flash of ordinary winter - grey bark, a dog walker in Richmond Park, oblivious." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 768 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.024739583333333332 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0026041666666666665 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 160 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 160 | | mean | 8.31 | | std | 5.7 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 63.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4125 | | totalSentences | 160 | | uniqueOpeners | 66 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Too many figures moving between" | | 1 | "Somewhere beyond the orchards, beyond" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "She left no mark on" | | 1 | "Her silver hair caught no" | | 2 | "Their edges bled." | | 3 | "It drank heat from her" | | 4 | "It did not open so" | | 5 | "It was not ground." | | 6 | "She landed on something soft" | | 7 | "She knew the name before" | | 8 | "Their violet eyes widened." | | 9 | "She did not like this" | | 10 | "Her ethereal calm thinned." | | 11 | "Their shadow stretched impossibly long," | | 12 | "It popped when she trod." | | 13 | "They moved deeper, between two" | | 14 | "Her stomach growled, a traitor." | | 15 | "He stirred a cauldron of" | | 16 | "his pot-face boomed" | | 17 | "Their humanoid silhouette unraveled into" | | 18 | "Her fingers landed on the" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 56.49% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones sweated." | | 1 | "Aurora pressed her palm to" | | 2 | "Moss peeled back." | | 3 | "Veins of amber lit beneath" | | 4 | "Isolde stepped through first." | | 5 | "She left no mark on" | | 6 | "Her silver hair caught no" | | 7 | "Rory's voice cracked." | | 8 | "The Heartstone Pendant beat against" | | 9 | "Crimson light bled through the" | | 10 | "Nyx hung at her shoulder," | | 11 | "Their edges bled." | | 12 | "Nyx's voice brushed the back" | | 13 | "Isolde turned her lavender gaze" | | 14 | "The Grove beyond the stones" | | 15 | "Trees grew up and down" | | 16 | "Wildflowers opened year-round and each" | | 17 | "Snowdrops with summer in their" | | 18 | "Foxgloves rang without wind." | | 19 | "Rory's hand dropped to her" |
| | ratio | 0.807 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx solidified beside her, their shadow knitting into limbs, into a tall, lean shape that swallowed light." | | 1 | "Trees heavy with fruit that had never seen Earth - glass peaches, black apples with veins, bunches of grapes each the size of a fist and breathing faint steam." | | 2 | "Their humanoid silhouette unraveled into ribbons of living shadow that lashed across the stone table, scattering steam-birds." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.053 | | leniency | 0.105 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |