Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD647E4HW72V71S55X63JEK

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Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
$0.015381
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green from the neon sign bled through the front window of The Raven's Nest and cut the dark inside into wet strips. Rain hit the pavement on Greek Street and hissed against the grilles over the basement flats. Inside, the air held beer and old paper and lemon peel, and the maps on the walls curled at the corners where the damp got in. Aurora wiped down the bar with a rag that left more damp than it lifted. The flat upstairs leaked again and the ceiling above the optics showed a new brown halo. Her hair still held the chill from the stairwell. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light when she turned her hand. Silas worked the far end, his bad leg propped on the rail under the counter. Hazel eyes on inventory. The silver signet on his right hand knocked against each bottle when he counted. His beard, grey shot through the auburn, moved when he chewed the inside of his cheek. The door opened and the bell knocked against the glass. A woman stepped in and shook rain off a camel coat that cost more than Aurora's rent for a month. Dark hair cut sharp at the jaw. A leather bag with clean corners. She scanned the room, faced the wrong kind of place for that coat, and her gaze snagged on Aurora. "Rory?" Aurora's hand stopped on the bar. The woman laughed once, short, and the sound broke. "No. No way." Aurora straightened. Her grip tightened on the rag until water ran down her knuckles. "Jess." Jess Williams crossed the floor in three strides and her heels clicked against the boards. She reached for Aurora and then checked herself and left her hands in the air for half a second before she dropped them back to her bag. "Christ. Look at you." "You cut your hair." "You still live above a bar? This bar? Silas' bar?" Jess turned in a half circle, took in the photographs in black and white, the shelves of books that nobody read, the low light. Aurora hung the rag over the tap. "I live upstairs. I help out some nights." "Right. Right, you said that on the phone. Two years ago. Three?" "Two." Jess pulled out a stool. The coat fell open and showed a dark suit underneath, white shirt, no creases. A silk pin at her collar. "You were in London. You never called back." The words landed flat. Silas looked up from his bottles. His eyes went from Jess to Aurora and back. He tapped the bar twice with his signet and went back to his count. He understood when to vanish without leaving. Aurora poured water into a glass and pushed it over. Her blue eyes fixed on the rim where a chip showed. "You look different." "You mean I look like a grown up." "I mean you look like you." Jess took the glass but did not drink. Her fingers had no ink on them anymore, no chipped black polish, no silver rings stacked to the knuckle. A single plain band on the second finger and a watch with a thin face. "Do you remember last time I saw you? You had pink in your hair. You were going to sue the university for charging us to print essays." "Pre-law made me radical." "Pre-law made you insufferable." Aurora cracked a smile despite herself. The old lines came back around her mouth. "You were supposed to come with me. We had the whole plan. Squat in Tottenham. Get jobs in a record shop." "I had finals." "You had Brendan on your back. You had Evan telling you that London was a dirty hole and you were too good for it." At the name, Aurora's shoulders pulled in. Jess saw it. Her face softened and then hardened again, quick. "Sorry. I shouldn't." "It's fine." "No, it isn't. I read about you and him in that group chat. Maya told me. After." Aurora busied her hands with bottle caps, lined them in a row, made order where there was none. "You left Cardiff and you just went dark. I thought you ghosted me. I thought you decided I was part of all that." "I did. For a while." The honesty sat between them. The rain hit harder and the neon buzzed and popped. Jess exhaled and the perfect posture slipped. "I passed the bar. Last spring." Aurora looked up fast. "You did?" "I did. Lincoln's Inn. I wore a wig. I looked like a sheepdog that lost a fight." "You hate wigs." "I do. I held a brief last month. Possession with intent. Kid from Butetown. Eighteen. I got him a community order." Aurora stared. The girl who once smoked behind the PE shed and forged absence notes with a flourish, who screamed along to Paramore till her throat bled, now spoke of community orders with the cadence of a person who believed in them. "Brendan will be proud." "Your dad wrote me a reference. He said I had grit. High praise from Brendan Carter." "He uses that word for his steak too." Jess laughed and this time it reached her eyes. "What about you? The restaurant still?" "Golden Empress. Yu-Fei still pays me peanuts and still makes the best char siu in Zone One." "And law? Cardiff?" Aurora shook her head. The black curtain of her hair swung. "Done. I quit in second year. You remember." "I remember you loved it. You knew every loophole before the lecturers did." "I loved winning arguments. I hated the rest." Jess leaned on the bar. The coat slipped off one shoulder. "You were better than me. At it. You always were." "I left. You stayed. You finished. You earned it." The words hung. Aurora wanted to take them back, soften the edge. She did not. Jess picked at the watch strap. The metal made a small tick when she turned it. "I kept your room the way you left it when you went to London the first time. For three months. Mum said you were coming back. I told everyone you would." "You shouldn't have." "I know." "I asked Eva to tell you not to wait. She said she did." "Eva told me you needed space. That's not the same as don't wait." Silas set a bottle down with more force than necessary. Glass rang against glass. He caught Aurora's eye and raised a brow. She gave a small shake of her head. Jess stared into the water glass. The ice sweated. "I saw Evan last year. In town. Outside the Castle. He asked about you." Aurora's hand went to her wrist. Thumb over the crescent scar. "What did you tell him?" "I told him to piss off and die." "Jess." "What? I did." Aurora let out a breath she had held since the door opened. A knot loosened low in her chest. "Thanks." "He looked small. That surprised me. You always made him sound huge." "He was." The bar settled back into its hum. Someone down the street shouted and a bus braked hard and sprayed water against the window. Inside, the maps rustled when the heater clicked on. Jess fiddled with her bag. She pulled out a card, thick stock, embossed letters, her name underneath Chambers in Temple. "You could call. Or come by. My clerk makes terrible coffee but he knows how to find people. If you ever want - if you ever think about - you know. Reapplying. Or anything." Aurora took the card. The edge bit into her fingertip. "I deliver noodles. I pour pints. I sleep above a bar that smells of old spies. Law feels far." "It is close. You are twenty five. That's nothing." "You sound like Brendan." "I sound like you from ten years ago. Before you decided small was safe." Aurora's blue eyes flashed. Cool and bright. The old temper that made teachers step back in class. "Small keeps the lights on. Small keeps me out of places where men like Evan think they own the room." Jess flushed. Her hands closed round the glass and the knuckles showed white. "I didn't mean -" "I know what you meant." Silence again. Not soft. Heavy. Then Aurora pushed the card into the pocket of her apron. She pulled two glasses from under the bar, poured a measure of whisky with a steady hand, and slid one over. The amber caught the green from the sign and turned strange and bright. "Stay till the rain stops. On the house. For the reunion." Jess picked up the glass. Her mouth twisted. "To us not being dead yet." "To old maps and bad decisions." They drank.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1453
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1453
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"scanned"
2"silk"
3"perfect"
4"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1455
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
22.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount862
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.55
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Greek1
Street1
Aurora22
Williams1
Jess14
Paramore1
Chambers1
Temple1
Silas3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Aurora"
2"Williams"
3"Jess"
4"Silas"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Paramore"
3"Temple"
globalScore0.224
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1455
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs106
mean13.73
std12.93
cv0.942
sampleLengths
065
155
249
310
452
51
66
79
83
914
101
1142
124
134
1410
1524
167
178
1812
191
2025
218
224
2336
2421
253
268
276
2842
2927
304
314
3214
3321
343
3524
367
3711
383
392
4017
4118
4223
435
4415
457
466
474
482
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences154
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount822
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.019464720194647202
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean9.45
std7.13
cv0.755
sampleLengths
023
116
226
315
416
59
615
715
84
914
1016
1110
1220
137
146
1519
161
176
189
193
202
2112
221
2315
2427
254
264
2710
2824
297
308
3112
321
335
3414
356
368
374
386
399
4014
417
4210
4311
443
458
466
478
4819
4915
42.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2922077922077922
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners45
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then Aurora pushed the card"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her hair still held the"
1"His beard, grey shot through"
2"She scanned the room, faced"
3"Her grip tightened on the"
4"She reached for Aurora and"
5"His eyes went from Jess"
6"He tapped the bar twice"
7"He understood when to vanish"
8"Her blue eyes fixed on"
9"Her fingers had no ink"
10"Her face softened and then"
11"She did not."
12"He caught Aurora's eye and"
13"She gave a small shake"
14"She pulled out a card,"
15"Her hands closed round the"
16"She pulled two glasses from"
17"Her mouth twisted."
ratio0.217
2.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences83
matches
0"The green from the neon"
1"Aurora wiped down the bar"
2"The flat upstairs leaked again"
3"Her hair still held the"
4"The crescent scar on her"
5"Silas worked the far end,"
6"Hazel eyes on inventory."
7"The silver signet on his"
8"His beard, grey shot through"
9"The door opened and the"
10"A woman stepped in and"
11"A leather bag with clean"
12"She scanned the room, faced"
13"Aurora's hand stopped on the"
14"The woman laughed once, short,"
15"Her grip tightened on the"
16"Jess Williams crossed the floor"
17"She reached for Aurora and"
18"Jess turned in a half"
19"Aurora hung the rag over"
ratio0.916
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.3457%