Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD65TC60TJN3G52DMN3AQF7

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23.4s
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$0.012482
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck again. Rory jiggled it with her left wrist cocked at an ugly angle, swearing under her breath. The crescent-shaped scar on the inside of her wrist flashed white when she twisted too hard. Outside, the stairwell smelled like turmeric and damp from the curry house below, and the person on the other side of the door was knocking like they owned the place. Three sharp raps, pause, two more. Patient. Precise. "Coming," she called, and it came out snappier than she meant it to. Eva wasn't supposed to be back until tomorrow. She'd left Rory with a key and a list — water the spider plant, feed Ptolemy, don't touch the scrolls on the kitchen table because some of them bite — and the strict instruction not to open the door for anyone after nine. It was ten past ten. The tabby was asleep on top of a stack of books about Sumerian binding sigils, and Rory had been camped on Eva's sagging couch in an oversized t-shirt that said GOLDEN EMPRESS DELIVERY, trying very hard not to think about the fact that her own flat above Silas' bar had a leaking pipe again. She threw the last deadbolt and yanked. The hallway light was busted, flickering, but it caught him perfectly anyway. As if it had been waiting for him. Lucien Moreau stood on Eva's cramped landing with his ivory-handled cane braced against the second step, looking completely unruffled by the fact that he was not supposed to be here. That he, specifically, was never supposed to be here again. He wore a tailored charcoal suit despite the late hour, despite the rain that had started to bead on the shoulders. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place. One amber eye, one black. He looked at her bare legs, at the t-shirt that barely hit mid-thigh, at her straight black hair still damp from the shower and falling to her shoulders. "Merde," he said softly, and then recovered. "Rory." That voice. Four languages fluently and he'd always used that soft French accent only when he wanted something. "What are you doing here?" she said. Her voice sounded tight even to her own ears. Cool-headed, that was what people called her. Quick thinking. Right now her brain was giving her nothing except the very unhelpful observation that he smelled like rain and expensive cologne, even over the curry. "I could ask you the same," he said. His eyes — eyes — dropped to the doorway, the barricade of research notes behind her. "This is Eva's flat." "I know whose flat it is. I'm cat-sitting. What are you doing here, Lucien?" He shifted his weight, and she heard the soft click of his cane against the linoleum. The blade concealed inside that handle had saved her life once, pressed to her throat in a different way entirely. "Eva called me. Two days ago. She said if she didn't check in, I should come get the Morocco file. She did not check in." Rory's stomach dropped. "She's supposed to be in Bristol until tomorrow. She said—" "She told you Bristol?" Something in his jaw tightened. That mismatched gaze sharpened. "She told me Prague." For a second they just stared at each other in the doorway, the complication of the last three months stretching between them like a live wire. The way he'd left her standing outside his office in Clerkenwell after the warehouse fire. No kiss. No explanation. Just, I think it's better if we keep this professional, Aurora. Her full name, like a verdict. Like he hadn't had his hand tangled in her hair an hour before. "If you let me in, we can argue about who she lies to more productively," he said. She wanted to slam the door. She wanted to grab the front of that perfect suit and pull. She stepped back. He entered in that fluid, economical way he had, cane barely touching the floor — more affectation than necessity most days, unless his father's blood was giving him trouble. He took in the flat in one sweep. Every surface was indeed covered. Books stacked spine-out, scrolls half-unrolled and weighted with mugs, notebooks with Eva's frantic handwriting. Ptolemy lifted his head from the Sumerian sigils, regarded Lucien with deep tabby contempt, and went back to sleep. "You changed your shampoo," he said, without looking at her. And somehow that was worse than if he'd tried to kiss her. Rory closed the door. One deadbolt. Two. Three, with a fight. "It's Eva's shower gel. Don't flatter yourself." "Never," he said lightly. Too lightly. He set his cane against the counter and shrugged off his jacket, draping it over the one clear chair back with care. The shirt underneath was white, sleeves rolled precisely twice. "When did you last hear from her?" "This morning. A picture of Ptolemy. She said—" She picked up her phone from the couch arm, thumbing fast. The screen glowed bright blue in the dim flat. "Here. 'Tell Ptolemy mama will be home tomorrow and not to let Rory give him tuna again.'" Lucien came closer to look. Close enough that she could see the faint shadow under his amber eye, like he hadn't slept. Close enough that if she breathed too deep she'd be breathing him. "And before that?" "Before that Thursday. She said the contact in Bristol was being cagey." "Prague," he repeated, frowning. He reached past her for one of the notebooks on the counter, his forearm just brushing hers. She went very still. "Eva did not go to Bristol. There is no contact in Bristol." "You think I don't know that she lies when she's scared? I'm her best friend." "And I am—" He stopped. Corrected himself. "I was her fixer before you were her best friend." The words landed. Cool-headed, intelligent, quick out-of-the-box thinking. That's what her mother always wrote on her school reports, before law, before London, before fleeing Cardiff with a suitcase and a bruise in the shape of Evan's hand on her arm. Lucien had liked that about her. That she didn't flinch. She hadn't flinched when he told her what he was. Half-demon, born in Marseille to a human mother and something from Avaros that never bothered to learn his name. She had flinched when he'd told her to keep it professional. "Right," she said. "Business. Of course. The Morocco file. I'll get it. Then you can go." She tried to step around him. The flat was cramped, barely a one-bedroom, and he was 5'11" of tailored obstacle in the middle of it. He didn't move. He looked down at her, and for once the perfect mask slipped. "Rory." "Don't." "Let me—" "No." She swallowed. Her bright blue eyes were furious and bright. "You don't get to show up after three months of absolutely nothing and do the soft Luc thing. You don't get to notice my shampoo." His black eye seemed to drink the dim light. "Would you prefer I was cruel about it?" "I would prefer you were consistent!" The shout startled Ptolemy. The cat bolted, knocking a stack of books over with a thump. Neither of them moved to fix it. Lucien's hand came up — hesitated — then settled, barely, on her elbow. His fingers were warm. Always warmer than a human's should be. "I was trying to protect you," he said, low. "That night in the warehouse. You saw what my father’s people—" "I saw you," she cut in. "I saw you put yourself between me and a knife. I saw you bleed. Don't tell me you were protecting me by walking away afterwards. That's not protection, that's cowardice." He flinched. Actually flinched. "You were twenty-five," he said. "You deliver noodles for Yu-Fei. You live above a bar that floods every winter. You are — you were — you are extraordinary, Aurora Carter, and you were in a room full of things that eat extraordinary girls alive. And I could not think straight when you were near me." His thumb moved, unconscious, over the inside of her wrist. Over that small crescent scar. "So you decided for me," she whispered. "I decided badly," he said. "As humans say. Very badly." The rain had gotten louder, hammering the window above the sink. Downstairs, someone shouted an order. The flat smelled like old paper and rain on wool and him. Rory looked at his mouth and then forced her eyes up. "If Eva's in Prague instead of Bristol, is she in trouble?" The professional mask tried to come back. She watched him try to put it on and fail. "Possibly. The last file she asked about was a binding ring. If she's gone to get it herself—" "Then we go get her." "We?" "Don't start. You need someone who can talk Eva down when she's in full research spiral. That's me. You're just the guy with the stabby cane." A ghost of a smile touched his lips. Relieved. Fond. Terribly familiar. "I missed you saying my cane was stabby." "I missed—" She stopped herself just in time. Took a breath. "We should look for the Morocco file." "It's not here," he said, still holding her elbow. "I already know. Eva would have hidden it in the false bottom of Ptolemy's litter box cabinet. Because she thinks she's funny." She stared. Then, despite herself, a laugh burst out of her. A real one. "God, I hate you." "No, you don't." And he was right. Which made it worse. He was still so close. The third deadbolt on the door caught the flickering hall light through the crack. His gaze dropped to her lips and then, with obvious effort, back to her eyes. "Aurora," he said, and this time her name wasn't a verdict. It was a question. Her answer was to go up on her toes in that ridiculous t-shirt and press her mouth to his. He made a low sound against her, like something punched out of him, cane clattering to the floor as both his hands came up to cup her face like she was something rare. Something to be held carefully. She tasted rain. He tasted like he'd been waiting three months to breathe. When she finally pulled back, just an inch, she was not cool-headed at all. Her heart was hammering against her ribs. "If we're going to Prague," she said, breathless, "you're buying me a proper coat. And you're telling me everything this time." "Everything," he promised, amber eye bright, black eye soft. His forehead touched hers. "Starting with the fact that I have never been able to keep things professional where you are concerned, Laila. Not once." Laila. He'd only ever called her that when they were alone. She smiled against him, and upstairs, Ptolemy knocked another book off the pile just to remind them he existed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags34
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
1"he said lightly [lightly]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.548
leniency1
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.059
69.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1810
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"very"
count4
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count2
5
adverb"precisely"
count1
6
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"perfectly"
2"completely"
3"softly"
4"lightly"
5"precisely"
6"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1810
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count2
3
word"absolutely"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"stomach"
2"perfect"
3"absolutely"
4"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
64.73% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"tried to"
2"seemed to"
3"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1819
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions34
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1412
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Rory6
Ptolemy5
Sumerian2
Moreau1
French1
Clerkenwell1
Aurora2
Lucien5
Corrected1
London1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Marseille1
Avaros1
You6
Carter1
Laila1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Moreau"
4"Aurora"
5"Lucien"
6"Evan"
7"You"
8"Carter"
9"Laila"
places
0"Sumerian"
1"Clerkenwell"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
4"Marseille"
5"Avaros"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
28.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"smelled like turmeric and damp from the cu"
1"smelled like rain and expensive cologne, e"
2"smelled like old paper and rain on wool an"
3"tasted like he'd been waiting three month"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1819
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean24.92
std20.73
cv0.832
sampleLengths
05
170
213
3110
47
520
679
728
88
918
1050
1128
1214
1336
1425
1513
1617
1775
1817
1918
203
2175
2210
2312
2418
2544
2645
2734
283
2912
3037
3115
3217
3350
3429
3511
3616
3740
381
391
402
4136
4217
436
4423
4524
4620
4736
484
4955
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences128
matches
0"been camped"
1"was busted"
2"was slicked"
3"was cramped"
74.21% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs265
matches
0"was knocking"
1"was giving"
2"was giving"
3"were protecting"
4"was hammering"
48.25% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences151
ratio0.033
matches
0"She'd left Rory with a key and a list — water the spider plant, feed Ptolemy, don't touch the scrolls on the kitchen table because some of them bite — and the strict instruction not to open the door for anyone after nine."
1"His eyes — eyes — dropped to the doorway, the barricade of research notes behind her."
2"He entered in that fluid, economical way he had, cane barely touching the floor — more affectation than necessity most days, unless his father's blood was giving him trouble."
3"Lucien's hand came up — hesitated — then settled, barely, on her elbow. His fingers were warm. Always warmer than a human's should be."
4"You are — you were — you are extraordinary, Aurora Carter, and you were in a room full of things that eat extraordinary girls alive."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount701
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03281027104136947
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0042796005706134095
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean12.05
std9.97
cv0.827
sampleLengths
05
116
216
330
46
51
61
713
88
943
105
1154
127
1312
148
1530
1610
1721
1813
195
2028
217
221
232
2416
257
269
277
282
2925
308
3116
324
3314
3416
3520
3625
373
3810
399
404
414
4226
4315
442
452
4611
476
4813
4917
57.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3841059602649007
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners58
31.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"Just, I think it's better"
ratio0.009
36.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences107
matches
0"she called, and it came"
1"She'd left Rory with a"
2"It was ten past ten."
3"She threw the last deadbolt"
4"He wore a tailored charcoal"
5"His platinum blond hair was"
6"He looked at her bare"
7"he said softly, and then"
8"Her voice sounded tight even"
9"His eyes — eyes —"
10"He shifted his weight, and"
11"Her full name, like a"
12"She wanted to slam the"
13"She wanted to grab the"
14"She stepped back."
15"He entered in that fluid,"
16"He took in the flat"
17"he said, without looking at"
18"he said lightly"
19"He set his cane against"
ratio0.458
67.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences107
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck again."
1"Rory jiggled it with her"
2"The crescent-shaped scar on the"
3"she called, and it came"
4"Eva wasn't supposed to be"
5"She'd left Rory with a"
6"It was ten past ten."
7"The tabby was asleep on"
8"She threw the last deadbolt"
9"The hallway light was busted,"
10"Lucien Moreau stood on Eva's"
11"That he, specifically, was never"
12"He wore a tailored charcoal"
13"His platinum blond hair was"
14"He looked at her bare"
15"he said softly, and then"
16"Her voice sounded tight even"
17"His eyes — eyes —"
18"He shifted his weight, and"
19"The blade concealed inside that"
ratio0.785
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"As if it had been"
1"If she's gone to get"
2"Because she thinks she's"
ratio0.028
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"You are — you were — you are extraordinary, Aurora Carter, and you were in a room full of things that eat extraordinary girls alive."
1"You need someone who can talk Eva down when she's in full research spiral."
73.28% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, without looking at her"
1"he said, low"
2"she said, breathless,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he promised (promise)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.274
leniency0.548
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.097
83.7346%