Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD66JP9Q9SJERNXBV5P8MA1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.034646
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Richmond Park gate had been locked since dusk, but locks had never meant much to the Grove. Rory slipped through the gap where the fence sagged against the hawthorn, the one Silas had shown her with a warning she'd half ignored, and walked into the dark between the trees. The pendant lay warm against her sternum. It had been warm since Putney Bridge, a faint pulse under her shirt like a second heartbeat, and it had grown hotter with every mile. Something on the other side of the city was waking up, or opening, and the Heartstone knew the way to it. That was why she'd come. The grove was the only place she knew where the world's skin wore thin. The path ended sooner than she remembered. She stopped. Behind her, the park breathed its ordinary night sounds — distant traffic, a fox bark, wind worrying the bracken. Ahead, the ancient oaks stood in their ring, black against a sky that held no stars. The standing stones between them caught no light at all. They should have gleamed faintly, they always gleamed faintly, pale grey catching the city's glow. Tonight they swallowed it. "Fine," she said, to herself, to the dark. Her voice came out smaller than she intended. She stepped over the boundary. The temperature dropped so sharply her breath smoked. The wildflowers were there, blooming out of season as they always did, but their colour was wrong — not the riot of blues and whites she remembered, but a bleached, bone-pale uniformity, every head turned towards her as she passed. She told herself it was the dark. The dark did that to colour. She kept walking. The clearing opened ahead, and the wrongness arrived with it, quiet as a held breath. The clearing had changed shape. She stood at its edge and counted the oaks, because counting was something solid, something a barrister's daughter did when the world slid sideways. Twelve. There had always been nine. She counted again, slower, marking each trunk with her eyes. Twelve. The three new ones stood at the eastern arc, and their bark was wrong — smooth, grey, wet-looking, like skin stretched over something that had never been wood. The pendant pulsed hard against her chest. Once. Twice. A rhythm now, not a flutter. Like something knocking from inside. She pulled it out from under her collar. The crimson stone glowed, a dull ember-light that painted her fingers red. In all the months she'd worn it, it had never done this. It pulsed when she neared a Hel portal. That was what it was for. That was the whole of its purpose. "There's no portal here," she whispered. "There isn't one here." The clearing disagreed with her. She could feel it disagreeing — a pressure in the air, the way a room feels different a moment before someone speaks. She took three steps in, then made herself stop, because her legs wanted to keep going and she hadn't decided that. The grass under her boots gave oddly, soft as moss, soft as something else. She didn't look down. Looking down felt like a mistake, the way turning around in a dark hallway feels like a mistake, so she fixed her eyes on the centre of the clearing, where the old fire-pit sat cold and ringed with stones. Something moved at the edge of her vision. Left side, between two of the ordinary oaks. When she turned her head there was nothing — bracken, shadow, the black lattice of branches. But the nothing had a shape it was holding, the way water holds the shape of a stone after the stone is lifted out. "Who's there?" She hated how it sounded. Thin. Girlish. The voice Evan used to make her use. The wind answered, which was worse than silence, because the wind had a rhythm to it. In and out. In and out. The bracken around the clearing's edge rose and fell with it, all of it, everywhere, in perfect unison — and there was no wind. The air against her face was dead still. Rory backed towards the fire-pit without deciding to. Her heel struck a stone and the sound cracked through the clearing, too loud, and every wildflower in the ring turned at once. She watched them do it. Hundreds of pale heads swivelling on their stems, not towards the sound. Towards her. Her mouth went dry. The pendant beat against her collarbone, insistent, eager, and she clamped her hand over it through her shirt. Under her palm the stone was hot enough to sting. Then she heard the breathing. Not the wind-rhythm. Underneath that. Close. A slow, wet inhalation somewhere behind her left shoulder, the sound of lungs far larger than any animal that belonged in Richmond Park, drawing the air in and savouring it. Holding it. Letting it out. Warmth touched the back of her neck. Every instinct she owned screamed at her to run and every lesson the Grove had ever taught her said running was how you got lost, how an hour inside became days outside, how you came home to a world that had forgotten you. She stood rigid, fists clenched, the scar on her left wrist throbbing the way it did before thunderstorms, and forced herself to turn around the way you'd turn a page you didn't want to read. Nothing there. Three feet of empty air between her and the nearest oak, and beyond it the ring of standing stones, and beyond those, darkness stacked on darkness. But the grass was pressed flat in a wide, curved line exactly where she'd been facing. A line that hadn't been there when she walked in. Something had been lying there, watching her back, and it had risen while she stood frozen, and it was somewhere else now. "Show yourself," she said. Cool-headed. Intelligent. She put Cardiff steel into it, her father's courtroom voice, and if her hands shook she kept them low where the dark couldn't see. The clearing answered by going silent. Not quiet — silent. The wind-rhythm cut off mid-breath. The distant traffic that had hummed at the edge of hearing all night simply ceased, as though someone had closed a door between the Grove and London, between the Grove and the world. Even the pendant's glow dimmed, shrinking down to a coal-red pinpoint, and the darkness rushed in around it. In that silence, she heard her own name. It came from the eastern arc, from the three wrong trees, spoken in a voice she knew and couldn't place — familiar the way a smell is familiar, recognition arriving half a second behind the sound. Not shouted. Offered. Said the way you say a name to a sleeping person you want to wake gently. Rory. Her legs moved before her mind caught up, three quick steps sideways, putting the fire-pit between her and the voice, and her boot came down on something that crunched. Not a stick. Sticks snapped. This crunched, layered and brittle, and the smell that rose from it was sweet and cold, like a florist's shop in winter. She looked down despite herself. The clearing floor was carpeted in wings. Moth wings, thousands of them, pale and huge, scattered over the grass in drifts she had somehow walked through without noticing. They had not been there when she arrived. She would have seen. She would have felt them underfoot. Each one was the size of her hand, and in the pendant's dying glow she could make out the pattern on their surfaces — concentric rings of grey and white that formed, unmistakably, eyes. Thousands of eyes, all open, all underfoot, and when she shifted her weight they crackled like frost. The pendant flared. Sudden, searing heat against her sternum, bright enough that red light flooded the clearing for one instant, and in that instant she saw it all — the twelve oaks, and among the smooth grey trunks of the eastern three, the spaces between them that were not spaces. Openings. Vertical, dark, edged in something wet that caught the light. Doorways cut into the bark of trees that had no business standing in Richmond Park, and through the nearest one, a landscape of black ice under a sky with no sun, and a figure standing in that landscape, facing her, perfectly still. The light died. Darkness slammed back. The pendant cooled so fast it hurt, an ache of ice against her skin, and its glow guttered to nothing. She stood blind in the centre of the clearing, heart hammering, breath coming shallow, listening. The breathing had started again. Behind her. No — beside her. No — It came from everywhere now, from the ring of oaks, from the ground under the moth wings, from the standing stones themselves, a dozen slow rhythms not quite in time with each other, all of them patient, all of them close. The wildflowers rustled though the air hung dead. Something stepped softly through the bracken to her left, and something else answered it from the right with a sound like knuckles cracking, one by one, in a very large hand. The voice spoke her name again. Closer this time. It came from directly in front of her, perhaps four paces away, at the height of a human face, and this time she placed it — knew it the way you know the voice in a nightmare even while you're dreaming it. It was her own. "Aurora," it said, in her voice, in her mouth's shape of sound, pleased with itself. "Aurora. You came." The moth wings began to stir under her boots, a soft papery shiver spreading outward across the clearing floor, as though a wind were rising from beneath the earth itself — and the pendant, cold and dark against her chest, gave one last pulse. Not warmth this time. A pull. A steady, certain tug towards the eastern trees, towards the openings in the bark, towards the black-ice landscape where the still figure waited, and Rory dug her heels into the carpet of eyes and understood, with the clear and useless clarity of the truly trapped, that she had not come here to find the portal. The portal had been waiting for her to arrive.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:47:06.32Z" 7/25/2026, 5:47:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1701
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"gently"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
4"very"
5"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1701
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"familiar"
count2
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"pulsed"
2"could feel"
3"silence"
4"perfect"
5"warmth"
6"familiar"
7"weight"
8"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"fists clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences137
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1715
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1698
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.24
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park3
Grove4
Silas1
Putney1
Bridge1
Heartstone1
Hel1
Thin1
Evan1
Cool-headed1
Cardiff1
London1
Rory4
persons
0"Silas"
1"Heartstone"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Putney"
3"Bridge"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
89.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a mistake, the way turning ar"
1"not quite in time with each other, all of them patient, all of them close"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.583
wordCount1715
matches
0"not the riot of blues and whites she remembered, but a bleached, bone-pale uniformity, every head turned towards"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean36.49
std28.25
cv0.774
sampleLengths
050
172
27
366
416
55
664
715
85
969
1020
1153
1210
1327
1478
1556
1617
1754
1848
192
2032
215
2238
233
247
2578
2628
2748
2830
2966
308
3155
321
3356
345
3597
36103
373
3838
3913
4080
4151
424
4318
4448
4557
469
97.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences137
matches
0"been locked"
1"is lifted"
2"was carpeted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs275
matches
0"was waking"
1"was holding"
2"were rising"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences139
ratio0.101
matches
0"Behind her, the park breathed its ordinary night sounds — distant traffic, a fox bark, wind worrying the bracken."
1"The wildflowers were there, blooming out of season as they always did, but their colour was wrong — not the riot of blues and whites she remembered, but a bleached, bone-pale uniformity, every head turned towards her as she passed."
2"The three new ones stood at the eastern arc, and their bark was wrong — smooth, grey, wet-looking, like skin stretched over something that had never been wood."
3"She could feel it disagreeing — a pressure in the air, the way a room feels different a moment before someone speaks."
4"When she turned her head there was nothing — bracken, shadow, the black lattice of branches."
5"The bracken around the clearing's edge rose and fell with it, all of it, everywhere, in perfect unison — and there was no wind."
6"Not quiet — silent."
7"It came from the eastern arc, from the three wrong trees, spoken in a voice she knew and couldn't place — familiar the way a smell is familiar, recognition arriving half a second behind the sound."
8"Each one was the size of her hand, and in the pendant's dying glow she could make out the pattern on their surfaces — concentric rings of grey and white that formed, unmistakably, eyes."
9"Sudden, searing heat against her sternum, bright enough that red light flooded the clearing for one instant, and in that instant she saw it all — the twelve oaks, and among the smooth grey trunks of the eastern three, the spaces between them that were not spaces."
10"No — beside her."
11"No —"
12"It came from directly in front of her, perhaps four paces away, at the height of a human face, and this time she placed it — knew it the way you know the voice in a nightmare even while you're dreaming it."
13"The moth wings began to stir under her boots, a soft papery shiver spreading outward across the clearing floor, as though a wind were rising from beneath the earth itself — and the pendant, cold and dark against her chest, gave one last pulse."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1696
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay warm against her"
1"wrong — smooth, grey, wet-looking,"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.030660377358490566
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.0076650943396226415
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean12.34
std12.01
cv0.973
sampleLengths
018
132
27
325
421
55
614
77
82
919
1016
1110
1215
134
148
158
165
178
1840
197
206
213
2215
235
2424
251
265
2710
281
2928
307
311
321
336
345
358
3612
3712
388
396
407
416
424
435
4422
4521
4614
474
4839
498
58.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.4172661870503597
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners58
59.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"Then she heard the breathing."
1"Even the pendant's glow dimmed,"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences113
matches
0"It had been warm since"
1"They should have gleamed faintly,"
2"she said, to herself, to"
3"Her voice came out smaller"
4"She stepped over the boundary."
5"She told herself it was"
6"She kept walking."
7"She stood at its edge"
8"She counted again, slower, marking"
9"She pulled it out from"
10"It pulsed when she neared"
11"She could feel it disagreeing"
12"She took three steps in,"
13"She didn't look down."
14"She hated how it sounded"
15"Her heel struck a stone"
16"She watched them do it."
17"Her mouth went dry."
18"She stood rigid, fists clenched,"
19"She put Cardiff steel into"
ratio0.274
79.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences113
matches
0"The Richmond Park gate had"
1"Rory slipped through the gap"
2"The pendant lay warm against"
3"It had been warm since"
4"Something on the other side"
5"That was why she'd come."
6"The grove was the only"
7"The path ended sooner than"
8"The standing stones between them"
9"They should have gleamed faintly,"
10"Tonight they swallowed it."
11"she said, to herself, to"
12"Her voice came out smaller"
13"She stepped over the boundary."
14"The temperature dropped so sharply"
15"The wildflowers were there, blooming"
16"She told herself it was"
17"The dark did that to"
18"She kept walking."
19"The clearing opened ahead, and"
ratio0.761
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
25.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Ahead, the ancient oaks stood in their ring, black against a sky that held no stars."
1"The three new ones stood at the eastern arc, and their bark was wrong — smooth, grey, wet-looking, like skin stretched over something that had never been wood."
2"The crimson stone glowed, a dull ember-light that painted her fingers red."
3"A slow, wet inhalation somewhere behind her left shoulder, the sound of lungs far larger than any animal that belonged in Richmond Park, drawing the air in and …"
4"Every instinct she owned screamed at her to run and every lesson the Grove had ever taught her said running was how you got lost, how an hour inside became days…"
5"Her legs moved before her mind caught up, three quick steps sideways, putting the fire-pit between her and the voice, and her boot came down on something that c…"
6"Sudden, searing heat against her sternum, bright enough that red light flooded the clearing for one instant, and in that instant she saw it all — the twelve oak…"
7"Doorways cut into the bark of trees that had no business standing in Richmond Park, and through the nearest one, a landscape of black ice under a sky with no su…"
8"The moth wings began to stir under her boots, a soft papery shiver spreading outward across the clearing floor, as though a wind were rising from beneath the ea…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
82.1341%