| 13.95% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she asks instead [instead]" | | 1 | "he says finally [finally]" | | 2 | "Lucien steps further [further]" | | 3 | "he asks quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.465 | | leniency | 0.93 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.186 | |
| 76.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1290 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 65.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1290 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lilt" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "glint" | | 7 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1298 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 979 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 10 | | Moreau | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Lucien | 8 | | Marseille | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Marseille" |
| | globalScore | 0.989 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.082 | | wordCount | 1298 | | matches | | 0 | "not pretending,” she says, but even to her own ears it sounds hollow" | | 1 | "not angry, not yet, but something worse" | | 2 | "not yet, but something worse" | | 3 | "not fragile,” she says, but it comes out more defensive than intended" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 23.18 | | std | 18.4 | | cv | 0.794 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 79 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 57 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 56 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 86.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "got answered" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "was supposed" | | 3 | "is interrupted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of him — sandalwood and something darker, almost like smoke — curls through the cramped space as he steps inside without waiting for an invitation." | | 1 | "He steps closer, and she can see the way the dim light from the hallway catches the heterochromatic shift in his eyes — amber on one side, black on the other — and something primal stirs in her chest." | | 2 | "Lucien’s expression hardens — not angry, not yet, but something worse." | | 3 | "Just studies her face, searching for something beneath the surface — guilt, fear, regret." | | 4 | "He flinches at the honesty in her tone, and for a moment she sees the boy beneath the man — the lost kid from Marseille who grew up too fast in a world that didn’t understand him." | | 5 | "The tension snaps like a gunshot, and suddenly they’re moving — fast, precise, deadly." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 976 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03790983606557377 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010245901639344262 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 13.66 | | std | 9.88 | | cv | 0.723 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 74.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.49473684210526314 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Ever since he left her" | | 1 | "Just studies her face, searching" | | 2 | "Maybe all three." |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 82.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "he says, and his voice" | | 1 | "She flinches at the accuracy" | | 2 | "she says, but even to" | | 3 | "He steps closer, and she" | | 4 | "he says, pulling a folded" | | 5 | "Her breath catches." | | 6 | "He unfolds the paper, revealing" | | 7 | "It was supposed to be" | | 8 | "she lies, but her voice" | | 9 | "he says her name like" | | 10 | "She wants to argue, to" | | 11 | "she asks instead" | | 12 | "he says finally" | | 13 | "She feels the blood drain" | | 14 | "He moves past her, heading" | | 15 | "His gaze flicks to hers," | | 16 | "she says, but it comes" | | 17 | "He turns to face her" | | 18 | "she fires back" | | 19 | "he asks quietly" |
| | ratio | 0.343 | |
| 64.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swings open before" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stands in the" | | 2 | "The scent of him —" | | 3 | "he says, and his voice" | | 4 | "Aurora crosses her arms, feeling" | | 5 | "She flinches at the accuracy" | | 6 | "The truth is, she’s been" | | 7 | "she says, but even to" | | 8 | "He steps closer, and she" | | 9 | "he says, pulling a folded" | | 10 | "Her breath catches." | | 11 | "He unfolds the paper, revealing" | | 12 | "Aurora’s stomach drops." | | 13 | "That photo was supposed to" | | 14 | "It was supposed to be" | | 15 | "she lies, but her voice" | | 16 | "Lucien’s expression hardens — not" | | 17 | "he says her name like" | | 18 | "She wants to argue, to" | | 19 | "she asks instead" |
| | ratio | 0.791 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "A reminder of vulnerability, of fragility, of things that can’t be fixed no matter how hard you try." | | 1 | "He flinches at the honesty in her tone, and for a moment she sees the boy beneath the man — the lost kid from Marseille who grew up too fast in a world that did…" | | 2 | "The same boy who used to sneak cigarettes behind the university library and dream of escaping to somewhere better." | | 3 | "Tall, broad-shouldered, wearing a long coat that billows slightly in the wind." | | 4 | "Aurora stumbles backward as the two men clash in her tiny living room, their fight sending books flying and furniture crashing to the ground." |
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| 50.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she lies, but her voice cracks on the last word" | | 1 | "He turns, his expression softening just slightly" | | 2 | "the intruder says, his voice familiar somehow" |
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| 33.72% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispers (whisper)" | | 1 | "she lies (lie)" | | 2 | "he continues (continue)" | | 3 | "Aurora demands (demand)" | | 4 | "Lucien orders (order)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.349 | | leniency | 0.698 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.233 | |