Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD686840BZYQJXTKYAKJRS4

Run Details

Duration:
17.8s
Cost:
$0.000417
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door burst open with a crack that echoed too loudly in the cramped flat. Lucien Moreau stepped inside, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the grime of the streets, his platinum hair slightly askew. The ivory cane he’d carried tapped once against the floorboards before he lifted it, its hidden blade glinting faintly in the lamplight. Ptolemy, the tabby, arched his back and fled under the couch, tail puffed like a bottlebrush. Aurora Carter looked up from the pile of takeout containers she’d been sorting on the counter, her bright blue eyes narrowing. Her straight black hair was tucked behind one ear, and she wore an apron over a faded band t-shirt. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light as she wiped her hands on a dishcloth. “Lucien.” Her voice was flat, but her knuckles whitened around the cloth. He removed his coat with deliberate slowness, the motion fluid despite the tension in his stance. “Aurora. You didn’t answer the door.” “You didn’t call.” “An *unexpected* visit.” He smirked, but it didn’t reach his amber eye. The black one seemed darker, as if absorbing the room’s dimness. She set the cloth down. “What took you so long? You said you’d be here at—” “The clocktower?” He laughed, low and bitter. “I’m not here for Eva’s research, Rory.” Her name for him landed like a stone. She stiffened. “I know,” he said, stepping closer. The floorboards creaked under his polished shoes. “But we can’t afford delays now.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. She glanced toward the door, then back at him. “You never just *show up*, Lucien. You send someone first.” “I lost someone because of that.” His voice dropped. “You remember, don’t you?” The words hung between them. Eva. The woman who’d been their friend, their confidante, now gone—taken by something that left claw marks on the truth. Lucien’s cane shifted in his grip. “They’re after you now, too. The ones who killed her.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “You said she was—” “Dead.” He didn’t wait for her to finish. “But not before she gave me something. Something that links us.” She crossed to the window, gripping the sill. Outside, the neon sign of Golden Empress flickered, casting a sickly glow over Brick Lane. “What did she give you?” “A name. A location. A reason to come back to *this*” —he jerked his chin at the cluttered shelves lined with scrolls and books—“when I swore I’d never return.” The irony wasn’t lost on her. She’d left London once before, fleeing Evan, fleeing the weight of knowing too much about things that shouldn’t exist. But here she was, standing in a flat that smelled of cardamom and old paper, staring at a man who’d once held her hand in the rain and told her she was smarter than all the demons in Avaros. “You’re lying.” Lucien’s smirk returned, sharp as a blade. “Would I make it this far if I were?” She turned, defiance warring with something else—fear, maybe, or the ghost of what they’d been. “Eva wouldn’t have given you anything useful. She was careful.” “She was *dead*.” His voice cracked. “For three months, I’ve been chasing shadows, Rory. And now I’m here because *you’re* the only one who can help me find what she took.” The door creaked open a crack. Through it, she glimpsed the street—empty except for a delivery van idling outside Golden Empress. Silas’s bar, directly below. “Why?” “Because the same people who put a bullet in her put a target on your back.” He stepped closer, until the heat of him brushed her skin. “They know you’re connected to her. To *them*.” Aurora’s scar throbbed, a phantom ache from childhood, from pain she’d never quite processed. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” “Liar.” He reached for her face, then stopped. “You left me in the rain once before, remember? In Paris. I waited for you until dawn.” Her throat worked. “You don’t get to—” “I *waited*.” His other hand drifted to his cane. “And when they killed her, I couldn’t. I *couldn’t*.” The door rattled. A muffled curse, heavy footsteps. Lucien pulled back, his voice urgent. “Go. Lock it. And Aurora—” He hesitated, thumb brushing the cane’s handle. “If you care about the life I’ve tried to build, you’ll help me.” She didn’t move. “They’re inside. I can feel it.” He glanced at the clock on the wall—its hands frozen at 3:07. “And they’re not leaving without what’s theirs.” Aurora exhaled, slow. She slipped the key from her pocket and slid it into the lock. Three deadbolts. All clicked shut. Lucien leaned against the doorframe, unarmored now, vulnerable in a way that made her chest ache. “I’m sorry, Rory.” “Lucien.” “You always call me that when you’re angry.” “I’m not angry.” “Then why does your voice sound like it’s breaking?” She didn’t answer. Instead, she turned to the shelves, pulling out a scroll tied with faded ribbon. The handwriting was Eva’s. “What’s this?” “A map.” Her voice was steadier now. “To the old chapel on the outskirts of town. The one Eva always said was ‘a place where the walls remember too much.’” Lucien’s eyes flickered—amber and black, shifting like twin flames. “She was closer to the truth than I thought.” The floorboards groaned again. Something heavy dragged across the stairwell above. Aurora grabbed a frying pan from the counter. Lucien unsheathed his blade. “We’re not fighting them here,” he said. “Then where?” He looked at her—really looked—and in that moment, she saw it: the man who’d once saved her from a demon’s claws in Marseille, who’d apologized in four languages when he’d broken the rule against sleeping with humans. “In the chapel,” he said. “But we have to move fast. They’ll follow us.” “They’re already inside.” He turned to the window. “Ptolemy?” A meow. A flicker of movement under the couch. Lucien grinned. “Our little spy.” Aurora raised the pan. “You named the cat?” “She named herself. After your favorite philosopher.” “Plato?” “Aristotle. But close enough.” The door splintered. A hand—pale, clawed—broke through the wood. Lucien stepped in front of Aurora, blade raised. “Go. Now.” She hesitated, hand on the pan, but then saw the thing behind the intruder: a sigil branded into the wall, the mark of the Avaros exiles. “Lucien,” she whispered. He didn’t answer. Just pressed his back against the door, cane and blade ready, and waited for the storm to break.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"her knuckles whitened around [around]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.034
90.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1081
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1081
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"processed"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"glinting"
2"tension"
3"flickered"
4"weight"
5"throbbed"
6"processed"
7"footsteps"
8"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords9
totalWords1072
ratio0.008
matches
0"unexpected"
1"show up"
2"this"
3"dead"
4"you’re"
5"them"
6"waited"
7"couldn’t"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount718
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Carter1
Golden2
Empress2
Brick1
Lane1
London1
Evan1
Avaros2
Aurora8
Eva2
Lucien9
Marseille1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Carter"
2"Empress"
3"Evan"
4"Aurora"
5"Eva"
6"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"London"
4"Avaros"
5"Marseille"
globalScore0.873
windowScore0.667
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if absorbing the room’s dimness"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1072
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean17.02
std14.33
cv0.842
sampleLengths
072
158
212
322
43
523
616
714
810
919
1022
1113
1225
1316
147
1519
1628
1729
1864
192
2016
2125
2231
2325
241
2535
2621
2725
287
2918
308
3131
323
3325
3421
3519
361
378
383
399
4021
412
4230
4318
4411
4512
467
472
4837
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was tucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was, standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences119
ratio0.067
matches
0"The woman who’d been their friend, their confidante, now gone—taken by something that left claw marks on the truth."
1"“A name. A location. A reason to come back to *this*” —he jerked his chin at the cluttered shelves lined with scrolls and books—“when I swore I’d never return.”"
2"She turned, defiance warring with something else—fear, maybe, or the ghost of what they’d been."
3"Through it, she glimpsed the street—empty except for a delivery van idling outside Golden Empress."
4"“They’re inside. I can feel it.” He glanced at the clock on the wall—its hands frozen at 3:07."
5"Lucien’s eyes flickered—amber and black, shifting like twin flames."
6"He looked at her—really looked—and in that moment, she saw it: the man who’d once saved her from a demon’s claws in Marseille, who’d apologized in four languages when he’d broken the rule against sleeping with humans."
7"A hand—pale, clawed—broke through the wood."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount610
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03278688524590164
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009836065573770493
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean9.01
std7.31
cv0.811
sampleLengths
015
119
222
316
421
519
618
712
816
96
103
1112
1211
135
1411
157
167
178
182
196
207
216
223
239
2410
259
264
275
281
2919
306
3110
323
334
348
3511
368
3715
385
3929
406
4119
4239
432
447
459
4615
4710
486
4925
53.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3277310924369748
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"All clicked shut."
1"Instead, she turned to the"
2"Just pressed his back against"
ratio0.043
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her straight black hair was"
1"Her voice was flat, but"
2"He removed his coat with"
3"He smirked, but it didn’t"
4"She set the cloth down."
5"He laughed, low and bitter"
6"Her name for him landed"
7"he said, stepping closer"
8"She glanced toward the door,"
9"His voice dropped"
10"He didn’t wait for her"
11"She crossed to the window,"
12"—he jerked his chin at"
13"She’d left London once before,"
14"She turned, defiance warring with"
15"His voice cracked"
16"He stepped closer, until the"
17"He reached for her face,"
18"Her throat worked."
19"His other hand drifted to"
ratio0.429
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences70
matches
0"The door burst open with"
1"Lucien Moreau stepped inside, his"
2"The ivory cane he’d carried"
3"Ptolemy, the tabby, arched his"
4"Aurora Carter looked up from"
5"Her straight black hair was"
6"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
7"Her voice was flat, but"
8"He removed his coat with"
9"He smirked, but it didn’t"
10"The black one seemed darker,"
11"She set the cloth down."
12"He laughed, low and bitter"
13"Her name for him landed"
14"he said, stepping closer"
15"The floorboards creaked under his"
16"Aurora’s jaw tightened."
17"She glanced toward the door,"
18"His voice dropped"
19"The words hung between them."
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She’d left London once before, fleeing Evan, fleeing the weight of knowing too much about things that shouldn’t exist."
1"But here she was, standing in a flat that smelled of cardamom and old paper, staring at a man who’d once held her hand in the rain and told her she was smarter …"
2"Lucien leaned against the doorframe, unarmored now, vulnerable in a way that made her chest ache."
3"He looked at her—really looked—and in that moment, she saw it: the man who’d once saved her from a demon’s claws in Marseille, who’d apologized in four language…"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He hesitated, thumb brushing the cane’s handle"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.172
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.069
80.8136%