Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD69GWJJK7942DE86HJ4328

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.024949
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bones were the first thing that bothered Detective Harlow Quinn. They sat in a neat pyramid on the ticket office counter of the abandoned Camden station, each one smooth and pale as river stone, stacked with a care that suggested either ritual or obsessive patience. Quinn had counted forty-seven before she stopped herself. Priorities. The body waited at the bottom of the stairs. She'd entered through a maintenance hatch off Camden High Street, down a ladder slick with condensation, following a torch beam and a whispered tip from a source she still hadn't decided whether to believe. Now she stood on a platform that shouldn't exist — no map of the Underground she'd studied listed it — watching blue-white light from the forensic lamps catch on tile mosaics that depicted no station name, only symbols. Circles within circles. Eyes, she thought, or mouths. "You're not going to like the preliminary," DS Theo Rennick called from beside the body. He crouched over it with his gloved hands folded, the way he always did when something had unsettled him. Six years they'd worked together, and Quinn knew his silences better than most people's confessions. "Try me." "Male, roughly thirty. No identification. No phone, no wallet, no keys." Rennick tilted his head toward the corpse's hands. "And no blood. Anywhere. Look at the floor, Quinn." She looked. The victim lay spread on the platform as if he'd been arranged, arms out, palms up. His shirt gaped open over a chest split from sternum to navel — a wound that should have painted the tiles for metres. The concrete around him gleamed clean and grey. "Body was moved," she said. "That's what I thought. But look at the lividity." He eased the body's shoulder up an inch. Purple bruising pooled exactly where the man lay, fixed in the tissue. "He died here. Bled out here. And there's no blood." Quinn lowered herself to one knee, her worn leather watch catching the lamplight as she braced a hand on the platform. The tiles near the body felt wrong beneath her palm. Warm. The rest of the station breathed cold enough to fog her breath, but a ring of warmth radiated outward from the corpse, perhaps half a metre, as if the stone remembered something the air had forgotten. "Rennick. Tell me what your gut says." "My gut says we call it in as an occult-flavoured homicide, bag the bones, and let forensics sort the rest. Cult theatrics. Some dealer got creative." He glanced up at the mosaics. "We've seen stranger staging in Soho." "And the missing blood?" "Pump and filter. Someone came back for it." "For what?" Quinn straightened and paced the platform's edge, boots loud in the hush. "There's no drag trail. No footprints in the dust except ours and the tip-off caller's — single set, small, heading in and back out. Whoever killed him walked on this floor. Where are their prints?" Rennick opened his mouth, then shut it. "There's grit everywhere," she continued. "Coal dust, decades of it. You can't cross this platform without writing your name in it. And yet the killer left nothing, and the blood left nothing, and the tiles under him are warm." She crouched again and studied the wound. "No hesitation marks. No tool striations on the ribs. Rennick — this chest wasn't cut. Look at the edges. They're parted. Like something opened him from the inside." "Harlow." His voice dropped, the way it had three years ago in that warehouse with Morris, and she felt her jaw tighten at the tone. "I know what this looks like to you. Another one of those scenes. But we are not doing this again." "Doing what? Following evidence?" "Following ghosts." She let the words sit between them while she worked. The victim's right hand curled slightly, more than the left. Rigor had come and gone — call it thirty hours dead. She eased the fingers open. The palm held a crescent of verdigris, green powder, and embedded in the skin, a fragment of etched brass no bigger than a thumbnail. She held it under the lamp. A needle. A compass needle, impossibly fine, and along its length, markings too small to read unaided. "He was holding something," she said. "Brass. Torn from his grip hard enough to leave this behind and powder his palm with corrosion. Find the rest of it." "If there is a rest of it." "There is." Quinn rose and turned in a slow circle, reading the platform the way she'd read every scene in eighteen years — not as a place, but as a sentence somebody else had written. The pyramid of bones on the counter above. The body aligned with the tracks, not the stairs. The warm ring of stone. "He died holding a compass, pointing somewhere, and whoever took it didn't care about money, identification, or being seen. They cared about that one object. Everything else is dressing." "The bones?" "Left, not taken. Which means the killer had no use for them — or they were a price already paid." She walked to the platform's edge and looked down into the black mouth of the tunnel. The tracks gleamed. Fresh gleam, no rust film. "Theo. This station is on no map. The rails are maintained. There are forty-seven bones on the counter and a dead man with green dust in his fist. Your cult staging doesn't cover the temperature of the floor." Rennick stood slowly, peeling off a glove to touch the tile himself. His face changed. "Warm," he admitted. "Body heat doesn't soak into concrete. Something under this platform was active when he died." Quinn slipped the brass needle into an evidence bag and held it up to the light again. The etched marks along its length almost resembled the mosaics. Circles. Eyes. "And there's your missing blood, I think. Not pumped out. Taken up. The floor drank it, or something in the floor did." "You hear yourself, yeah?" But Rennick's protest carried no weight now. He kept his hand flat on the warm stone like a man testing a fever. "Bag everything. The bones, the grit from the body's outline, a core sample of that tile if the techs can manage it." Quinn checked her watch — the worn leather strap, the face she'd never replaced after Morris cracked it — and looked again toward the tunnel's dark. Somewhere down there, air moved. She'd felt it on her neck for the last ten minutes, a faint warm draught from a tunnel that should have been sealed and dead for decades. "And Quinn?" Rennick nodded at the evidence bag in her hand. "Whatever that needle was pointing at when he died — you realise it's still pointing." She looked down. Through the clear plastic, the brass sliver trembled against her glove, not north, never north — but fixed, insistent, toward the tunnel mouth. It had been still a moment ago. Now it quivered like a hound that had caught scent. "Then we'd better find the rest of the compass," Quinn said, "before whatever it's pointing at finds us first."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She crouched again [again]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.973
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.054
91.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"unsettled"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"aligned"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"quivered"
count1
highlights
0"unsettled"
1"warmth"
2"etched"
3"aligned"
4"weight"
5"trembled"
6"quivered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"watch "
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1188
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount735
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Camden2
High1
Street1
Underground1
Theo1
Rennick6
Purple1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Theo"
3"Rennick"
4"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore0.888
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.842
wordCount1188
matches
0"not as a place, but as a sentence somebody else had written"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean33.94
std27.23
cv0.802
sampleLengths
011
153
280
349
42
528
649
75
839
968
107
1138
124
138
1449
157
1674
1745
184
192
2060
2123
2228
237
2486
252
2682
2715
283
2966
3026
3180
3226
3343
3419
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"been arranged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences83
ratio0.072
matches
0"Now she stood on a platform that shouldn't exist — no map of the Underground she'd studied listed it — watching blue-white light from the forensic lamps catch on tile mosaics that depicted no station name, only symbols."
1"His shirt gaped open over a chest split from sternum to navel — a wound that should have painted the tiles for metres."
2"Rigor had come and gone — call it thirty hours dead."
3"\"There is.\" Quinn rose and turned in a slow circle, reading the platform the way she'd read every scene in eighteen years — not as a place, but as a sentence somebody else had written."
4"\"Bag everything. The bones, the grit from the body's outline, a core sample of that tile if the techs can manage it.\" Quinn checked her watch — the worn leather strap, the face she'd never replaced after Morris cracked it — and looked again toward the tunnel's dark."
5"Through the clear plastic, the brass sliver trembled against her glove, not north, never north — but fixed, insistent, toward the tunnel mouth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount729
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.027434842249657063
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006858710562414266
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean14.31
std11.6
cv0.81
sampleLengths
011
135
28
31
49
534
638
73
85
915
1019
1115
122
1319
149
152
1616
1723
188
195
2017
2112
2210
2321
2410
251
2636
277
2832
296
304
318
3214
3335
347
355
3641
3728
3825
3920
404
412
4210
4310
4411
455
4624
476
482
4915
84.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5301204819277109
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners44
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Somewhere down there, air moved."
ratio0.019
91.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences53
matches
0"They sat in a neat"
1"She'd entered through a maintenance"
2"He crouched over it with"
3"His shirt gaped open over"
4"He eased the body's shoulder"
5"He glanced up at the"
6"She crouched again and studied"
7"His voice dropped, the way"
8"She let the words sit"
9"She eased the fingers open."
10"She held it under the"
11"She walked to the platform's"
12"His face changed."
13"He kept his hand flat"
14"She'd felt it on her"
15"She looked down."
16"It had been still a"
ratio0.321
54.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences53
matches
0"The bones were the first"
1"They sat in a neat"
2"Quinn had counted forty-seven before"
3"The body waited at the"
4"She'd entered through a maintenance"
5"DS Theo Rennick called from"
6"He crouched over it with"
7"Rennick tilted his head toward"
8"The victim lay spread on"
9"His shirt gaped open over"
10"The concrete around him gleamed"
11"He eased the body's shoulder"
12"Quinn lowered herself to one"
13"The tiles near the body"
14"The rest of the station"
15"He glanced up at the"
16"Quinn straightened and paced the"
17"Rennick opened his mouth, then"
18"She crouched again and studied"
19"His voice dropped, the way"
ratio0.811
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences53
matches
0"Now she stood on a"
1"Now it quivered like a"
ratio0.038
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The bones were the first thing that bothered Detective Harlow Quinn."
1"Now she stood on a platform that shouldn't exist — no map of the Underground she'd studied listed it — watching blue-white light from the forensic lamps catch o…"
2"The rest of the station breathed cold enough to fog her breath, but a ring of warmth radiated outward from the corpse, perhaps half a metre, as if the stone rem…"
3"She'd felt it on her neck for the last ten minutes, a faint warm draught from a tunnel that should have been sealed and dead for decades."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she continued (continue)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.162
leniency0.324
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.108
88.4168%