Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD69HKPE22B08ZXPGJ5ZB85

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.028826
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gates at Richmond Park closed at dusk, but Aurora had known about the gap in the fence near Kingston Gate since she was sixteen, when Eva had dared her to climb it during a school trip. Funny, the things the body remembered. Her hands found the wire before her eyes did. She shouldn't have come. She'd told herself that at the bus stop, told herself again walking up the dark lane with the pendant burning against her sternum like a coal. It had started that morning, a slow pulse of warmth that didn't match her heartbeat. By closing time at the Golden Empress it had become insistent, tugging at her chest whenever she faced south-west, the way a compass needle swung to north. Yu-Fei had watched her rub at it through her shirt and said, without looking up from the wok, "Whatever's calling you, girl, don't answer at night." So of course she'd come at night. The park swallowed her torchlight whole. Deer moved somewhere off to her left, a ripple of hoofbeats that stopped when she stopped. She told herself that was what deer did. The pendant had gone quiet the moment she passed the fence, and that quiet felt worse than the burning, like a dog that had stopped barking. "Hello?" Her voice came out thin. Nobody answered. Nobody was meant to. The oaks found her before she found them. She'd been aiming for the clearing on instinct more than memory — she'd only been here once, weeks ago, in daylight, with Silas drawing diagrams in the dirt and talking too fast about pockets and boundaries. In daylight the standing stones had looked like ancient, storm-twisted trees. Tonight they stood upright. Tonight they had shape. Seven of them, she counted, then counted again because she got eight the second time. The clearing held its own light. That was the wrong thing, the first wrong thing she couldn't explain away: a grey-green glow with no source, the wildflowers pale as moths against it, blooming in November. Her phone said half eleven. Her phone also said she had signal, full bars, which was impossible out here, and when she tried to call Eva the screen showed the call connecting, ringing, ringing, and then Eva's voice said "Rory?" with a flatness that made her end the call mid-word. "Not funny," she said, to no one, and her voice came back from the stones half a second late. Not an echo. A reply. It had her voice's shape but not its weight, like a coat worn by someone thinner. She stepped into the clearing because leaving meant walking back through the dark alone, and staying meant the light, and she hated herself for how quickly that logic assembled itself. The wildflowers leaned. She watched them do it — a slow, deliberate tilt, hundreds of small white heads turning to track her as she crossed the grass. Flowers didn't do that. Flowers followed the sun, not a person, and there was no sun here, no moon either; the sky above the clearing was a solid dark, starless, like a lid. The pendant flared hot and she hissed, yanking the chain out from under her collar. The crimson stone glowed from within, a deep ember-red, pulsing. Near a portal, Silas had said, all those weeks ago. It pulses when you're near a portal. The word hadn't meant anything then. Now she stood inside a ring of eight — seven — standing oaks at midnight, and the word had acquired teeth. "Right," she said. "Right, so. Which one of you is the door?" Something laughed. Low, unhurried, from behind the largest stone — except when she whipped the torch round, the beam passed through the space and showed nothing but bark and shadow. The laugh didn't stop all at once. It wound down, like a record slowing, and in the last of it she heard her own laugh folded inside the sound. Her feet carried her backwards without consulting her. She bumped into one of the stones and the stone was warm, body-warm, and it leaned. She felt the tilt of it against her shoulder blades, gentle, curious, the way a horse noses a pocket for sugar. "Don't," she whispered. It stopped. The warmth receded through the bark like something withdrawing a hand. Time slipped. She knew it because the dew on her boots froze and thawed between one breath and the next, because the pendant's pulse sped and slowed, because when she checked her phone again it said half eleven, had always said half eleven, would perhaps always say half eleven. Silas's voice in memory: an hour inside can be minutes or days outside. She'd laughed at that. She filed the laugh away with all the other stupid things she'd ever done. The figure stood at the edge of the clearing the next time she looked up. It hadn't arrived. There'd been no footsteps, no parting of grass. It was simply there, the way a word you stare at long enough stops being a word — a woman-shape in the grey-green light, tall, robed in something that drank the light and returned none of it. Aurora's torch hand shook. The beam found the figure's face and the face was hers. Bright blue eyes. Black hair to the shoulders. The crescent scar on the left wrist, visible where one pale hand hung at its side. "Oh, no," Aurora said. "No, no, no—" "Aurora." Her own voice, again, but right this time, weighted and warm, the exact register she used on the phone with her mother. The figure tilted its head. The wildflowers all bent toward it at once, a field bowing. "You came. It took you long enough." "I'm not talking to you." "You already are." The figure smiled, and the smile was wrong not because it was cruel but because it was kind — patient, indulgent, the smile of someone who had waited a very long time and could wait a great deal longer. "You felt the call this morning. You told the old woman you were going home. Then you packed your torch, your keys, and the little stone, and you came to my garden in the dark. Curiosity is a door, sweet girl. You opened it. I only held it ajar." Behind the figure, between the two largest stones, the air had begun to shimmer. Aurora could see it now that she knew to look: a seam, a place where the grey-green light doubled over itself, and through it something that was not the park, a landscape of long white hills under a black sky, and shapes moving on those hills, unhurried, tall. The pendant seared her chest and she cried out, and the sound came back to her from three directions at once, each return a little slower, a little deeper, until the last repetition was a man's voice, low and almost fond, saying her name from somewhere very far beneath the ground. "Stay a while," said the woman with her face, stepping back toward the seam, raising one scarred left wrist in welcome. "Time is kind here. Ask anyone who's left."
created_at"2026-07-25T17:48:43.517Z" 7/25/2026, 5:48:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1185
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1185
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"echo"
3"weight"
4"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1192
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1088
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.37
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora4
Kingston1
Gate1
Eva3
Golden1
Empress1
Silas3
November1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Kingston"
3"Golden"
4"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like ancient, storm-twisted trees"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1192
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"started that morning"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean49.67
std30.32
cv0.61
sampleLengths
052
198
27
356
412
578
685
740
890
969
1012
1159
1245
1316
1480
1515
1687
177
1846
195
2091
2162
2251
2329
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences81
ratio0.086
matches
0"She'd been aiming for the clearing on instinct more than memory — she'd only been here once, weeks ago, in daylight, with Silas drawing diagrams in the dirt and talking too fast about pockets and boundaries."
1"She watched them do it — a slow, deliberate tilt, hundreds of small white heads turning to track her as she crossed the grass."
2"Flowers followed the sun, not a person, and there was no sun here, no moon either; the sky above the clearing was a solid dark, starless, like a lid."
3"Now she stood inside a ring of eight — seven — standing oaks at midnight, and the word had acquired teeth."
4"Low, unhurried, from behind the largest stone — except when she whipped the torch round, the beam passed through the space and showed nothing but bark and shadow."
5"It was simply there, the way a word you stare at long enough stops being a word — a woman-shape in the grey-green light, tall, robed in something that drank the light and returned none of it."
6"\"You already are.\" The figure smiled, and the smile was wrong not because it was cruel but because it was kind — patient, indulgent, the smile of someone who had waited a very long time and could wait a great deal longer."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1091
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"ancient, storm-twisted trees."
1"deep ember-red, pulsing."
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.0384967919340055
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0036663611365719525
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean14.72
std12.92
cv0.878
sampleLengths
037
16
29
34
426
515
627
726
87
96
1016
118
1226
136
142
154
168
1736
1811
194
204
2115
226
2329
245
2545
2619
273
282
2916
3030
313
3224
334
3429
3515
3610
3710
387
396
4021
413
429
432
4428
457
4622
478
4816
4921
59.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners36
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Bright blue eyes."
ratio0.015
76.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences67
matches
0"Her hands found the wire"
1"She shouldn't have come."
2"She'd told herself that at"
3"It had started that morning,"
4"She told herself that was"
5"Her voice came out thin"
6"She'd been aiming for the"
7"Her phone said half eleven."
8"Her phone also said she"
9"she said, to no one,"
10"It had her voice's shape"
11"She stepped into the clearing"
12"She watched them do it"
13"It pulses when you're near"
14"It wound down, like a"
15"Her feet carried her backwards"
16"She bumped into one of"
17"She felt the tilt of"
18"She knew it because the"
19"She'd laughed at that."
ratio0.358
57.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences67
matches
0"The gates at Richmond Park"
1"Her hands found the wire"
2"She shouldn't have come."
3"She'd told herself that at"
4"It had started that morning,"
5"Yu-Fei had watched her rub"
6"The park swallowed her torchlight"
7"Deer moved somewhere off to"
8"She told herself that was"
9"The pendant had gone quiet"
10"Her voice came out thin"
11"Nobody was meant to."
12"The oaks found her before"
13"She'd been aiming for the"
14"Tonight they stood upright."
15"Tonight they had shape."
16"The clearing held its own"
17"That was the wrong thing,"
18"Her phone said half eleven."
19"Her phone also said she"
ratio0.806
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Now she stood inside a"
ratio0.015
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The pendant had gone quiet the moment she passed the fence, and that quiet felt worse than the burning, like a dog that had stopped barking."
1"It was simply there, the way a word you stare at long enough stops being a word — a woman-shape in the grey-green light, tall, robed in something that drank the…"
2"Aurora could see it now that she knew to look: a seam, a place where the grey-green light doubled over itself, and through it something that was not the park, a…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Yu-Fei had, without looking up from the wok,"
1"The figure smiled, and the smile was wrong not because it was cruel but because it was kind — patient, indulgent, the smile of someone who had waited a very long time and could wait a great deal longer"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Yu-Fei had (have)"
1"she had (have)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.375
82.2669%