| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.484 | | leniency | 0.968 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |
| 82.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "truly" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "eyebrow" | | 2 | "quivered" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "raced" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 15.87% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 5 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | | 0 | "feel" | | 1 | "wonder" | | 2 | "watch" | | 3 | "know" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1421 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Bakerloo Line—Closed 1987" 1/1/1987, 12:00:00 AM | | 1 | "Classified" | | 2 | "you" | | 3 | "me" | | 4 | "They know I’m close. The—" | | 5 | "anchor" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.60% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1153 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.91 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 22 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Line | 1 | | Closed | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | East | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 16 | | Afghanistan | 1 | | Carved | 1 | | Liam | 2 | | Cross | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Line" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Liam" | | 7 | "Cross" |
| | places | | 0 | "East" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Afghanistan" |
| | globalScore | 0.546 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like soot across her cheek—a mark" | | 1 | "sockets that seemed to stare into their souls" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.815 | | wordCount | 1421 | | matches | | 0 | "not north but toward the far end of the platform" | | 1 | "not toward the platform’s far end, but straight at Quinn’s chest" | | 2 | "not the darkness of the station, but something deeper, like the air itself was folding in on itse" | | 3 | "Not with light, but with a warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "understood that reality" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 40.6 | | std | 28.35 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 89 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 84 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 79 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 61 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 66 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 64 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 2 |
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| 89.67% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulled" | | 1 | "been told" | | 2 | "been followed" | | 3 | "been found" |
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| 38.19% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "was folding" | | 1 | "was already moving" | | 2 | "were trying" | | 3 | "was staring" | | 4 | "was already reaching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of rust and something sweeter—vanilla, maybe, or the lingering ghost of incense." | | 1 | "Her curly red hair was pulled into a messy bun, and she wore a smear of what looked like soot across her cheek—a mark Quinn couldn’t place." | | 2 | "“And you’re telling me this doesn’t fit?” Eva’s voice carried a mixture of exhaustion and something else—certainty." | | 3 | "Its needle quivered, then steadied, pointing not north but toward the far end of the platform, where a rusted sign still read *Bakerloo Line—Closed 1987*." | | 4 | "The casing bore the telltale patina of verdigris, and etched into its face were sigils Quinn recognized from a case file marked *Classified*—the same symbols that had haunted her nightmares since DS Morris vanished three years ago." | | 5 | "And the compass—she’d seen one of those before, too." | | 6 | "It trembled again, then pointed—not toward the platform’s far end, but straight at Quinn’s chest." | | 7 | "Carved into its underside was a symbol—a serpent coiled around a key." | | 8 | "The—*" | | 9 | "The green light flickered again, and for a heartbeat, Quinn thought she saw shadows move along the walls—not the darkness of the station, but something deeper, like the air itself was folding in on itself." | | 10 | "The casing bore a maker’s mark—a crescent moon cradling a star." | | 11 | "It burned as she touched it, and for a moment, she saw through her own eyes: Liam Cross’s final moments, his desperate attempts to seal a breach in the fabric of the world, the moment he realized the thing he’d bound to his wrist wasn’t a guardian—it was a prisoner." |
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| 93.69% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1165 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.04721030042918455 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014592274678111588 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 13.53 | | std | 8.75 | | cv | 0.647 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 51.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.34285714285714286 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d seen plenty of crime" | | 1 | "She crouched by the body," | | 2 | "His throat had been slit" | | 3 | "She didn’t look up at" | | 4 | "She finally turned, her brown" | | 5 | "Her curly red hair was" | | 6 | "She gestured to the small" | | 7 | "Its needle quivered, then steadied," | | 8 | "She’d seen similar marks during" | | 9 | "She’d reported it, filed it" | | 10 | "she whispered, more to herself" | | 11 | "It trembled again, then pointed—not" | | 12 | "Her watch glinted under the" | | 13 | "She’d inherited it from her" | | 14 | "She paused, crouching to pick" | | 15 | "It was warm." | | 16 | "She flipped the token over" | | 17 | "She wasn’t sure why she’d" | | 18 | "His mouth opened in a" | | 19 | "She was staring at the" |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 50.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The fluorescent lights above flickered" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the" | | 2 | "The air tasted of rust" | | 3 | "She’d seen plenty of crime" | | 4 | "She crouched by the body," | | 5 | "The victim was a young" | | 6 | "His throat had been slit" | | 7 | "Blood had congealed into dark" | | 8 | "She didn’t look up at" | | 9 | "She finally turned, her brown" | | 10 | "Eva Kowalski stood a few" | | 11 | "Her curly red hair was" | | 12 | "Eva’s voice carried a mixture" | | 13 | "Quinn raised an eyebrow." | | 14 | "Eva stepped closer, her freckled" | | 15 | "She gestured to the small" | | 16 | "Its needle quivered, then steadied," | | 17 | "The casing bore the telltale" | | 18 | "Eva said, as if Quinn" | | 19 | "Quinn knelt again, this time" |
| | ratio | 0.819 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her partner vanished in" | | 1 | "Even now, its hands moved" | | 2 | "Even as she spoke, the" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The fluorescent lights above flickered once, twice, before dimming to a sickly green glow that made the abandoned tube station feel less like a decommissioned p…" | | 1 | "Blood had congealed into dark rivulets that snaked across his shirt, forming patterns that almost looked intentional." | | 2 | "Eva Kowalski stood a few paces back, one hand pressed to the bridge of her round glasses, the other clutching a worn leather satchel that had seen better centur…" | | 3 | "The casing bore the telltale patina of verdigris, and etched into its face were sigils Quinn recognized from a case file marked *Classified*—the same symbols th…" | | 4 | "The day he disappeared, he’d been found unconscious near a derelict subway line, clutching a compass that had burned a sigil into his palm." | | 5 | "She’d inherited it from her father, a veteran who’d died in Afghanistan." | | 6 | "The same symbol Morris had scrawled in his journal before the last entry, which ended mid-sentence: *They know I’m close." | | 7 | "But Quinn was already moving, her hand drifting to her belt where her service weapon lay unused." | | 8 | "Quinn looked at Eva, who was pale and shaken, then at the body, whose eyes were now completely gone, leaving only empty sockets that seemed to stare into their …" | | 9 | "The compass on the corpse began to levitate, spinning in a circle before shooting upward, its needle vanishing into the darkness above." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva said, as if Quinn hadn’t just been told the sky was blue" | | 1 | "Quinn stood, her gaze drifting to the ticket booth" | | 2 | "she whispered, more to herself than to Eva" | | 3 | "She paused, crouching to pick up the bone token" | | 4 | "Quinn said, more to herself than to Eva" |
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| 85.48% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.258 | | leniency | 0.516 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.129 | |