| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the seer said simply [simply]" | | 1 | "Isolde said gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.629 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 82.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1391 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "lazily" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1391 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "churn" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.20% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1405 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1207 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Aurora | 15 | | Time | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Time" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.879 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite trees, more like pillars of living wood twisted into impossible spirals, their bark shimmering with flecks of gold that moved when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 1 | "not quite visible, more felt than seen, like heat rising off pavement in summer" | | 2 | "something like recognition" | | 3 | "wood that seemed to shift and reform as Aurora watched" | | 4 | "not quite solid, more like suggestions of movement, figures that existed in the corner of vision and vanished when looked at directly" | | 5 | "seemed woven from the same impossible colors as the sky, with eyes like burning coals" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.712 | | wordCount | 1405 | | matches | | 0 | "not their faces but scenes from other places: a vineyard under an amber sky" |
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| 92.59% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "had that scar" | | 1 | "knew that whatever" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 34.27 | | std | 21.88 | | cv | 0.639 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 104 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 75 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 63 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 67 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 46 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 46 | | 34 | 54 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 43 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 54 |
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| 91.59% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "been baffled" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "being prepared" |
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| 71.79% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "were walking" | | 2 | "was examining" | | 3 | "were changing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.178 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt it first — a pressure against her skin, like diving underwater, though the sky above remained the same London gray." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in her wake — silver petals, midnight blue blossoms, things that had no name in any mortal garden." | | 2 | "The trees here were wrong — not quite trees, more like pillars of living wood twisted into impossible spirals, their bark shimmering with flecks of gold that moved when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 3 | "\"The Veil is thin here,\" they whispered, and Aurora could see the faint shimmer in the air — not quite visible, more felt than seen, like heat rising off pavement in summer." | | 4 | "It pulsed once, a gentle thrum against her skin, and she swear she heard something in response — a sound like distant bells, or maybe the echo of a heartbeat from somewhere very far away." | | 5 | "They rounded a bend in the path — if it could be called a path." | | 6 | "It swirled with colors she couldn't name — purples that burned like fire, blues that shimmered like oil on water, golds that shifted and flowed like liquid metal." | | 7 | "In the center of the clearing stood a pool of water — but it wasn't water." | | 8 | "It moved like liquid mercury, reflecting not their faces but scenes from other places: a vineyard under an amber sky where robed figures danced around tables piled high with food; a court of twisted thrones where pale figures with too many eyes watched with hungry interest; a library that stretched into infinity, its books floating gently in the air." | | 9 | "The surface rippled as she approached, and for a moment she thought she saw her own reflection staring back — but older, with eyes that held the same violet glow as Nyx's, and hair that flowed like liquid shadow." | | 10 | "The deep crimson gem caught and reflected the impossible colors of the sky, and for a moment she could swear she heard voices — whispers in a language that predated words, speaking of hunger and feast, of excess and emptiness, of a banquet table set for someone who had not yet arrived." | | 11 | "The reflections were changing now, showing new scenes: a kitchen where a young woman with black hair and bright blue eyes laughed as she tossed ingredients into a wok; a bar where a man with kind eyes and tired smile poured drinks for ghosts; a flat where books lined every wall and the smell of jasmine tea lingered in the air." | | 12 | "From the edges of the clearing, shapes began to emerge — not quite solid, more like suggestions of movement, figures that existed in the corner of vision and vanished when looked at directly." | | 13 | "Aurora looked at each of them in turn — Nyx, the eternal shade who had walked the earth for centuries; Isolde, the exiled seer whose visions spanned lifetimes; and herself, caught between worlds, marked by magic she didn't understand, carrying artifacts from realms she'd never seen." | | 14 | "The pool began to bubble, and from its depths rose a figure — tall, robed in robes that seemed woven from the same impossible colors as the sky, with eyes like burning coals." | | 15 | "The reflections faded, leaving only their own faces staring back at them — but changed somehow." |
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| 91.05% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1199 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.043369474562135114 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010842368640533779 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 15.61 | | std | 12.93 | | cv | 0.828 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 59 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 39 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 71.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4666666666666667 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the old woman who" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 1 | "she asked, though she already" | | 2 | "They paused at the base" | | 3 | "they whispered, and Aurora could" | | 4 | "It pulsed once, a gentle" | | 5 | "They rounded a bend in" | | 6 | "It swirled with colors she" | | 7 | "She'd had that scar since" | | 8 | "It moved like liquid mercury," | | 9 | "she asked Isolde" | | 10 | "It would cut through wards," |
| | ratio | 0.175 | |
| 7.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment" | | 1 | "Aurora felt it first —" | | 2 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 3 | "Nyx said, their voice a" | | 4 | "Isolde moved ahead, bare feet" | | 5 | "Wildflowers bloomed in her wake" | | 6 | "The air grew sweeter, thick" | | 7 | "Isolde murmured, her voice carrying" | | 8 | "Aurora glanced around." | | 9 | "The trees here were wrong" | | 10 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 11 | "she asked, though she already" | | 12 | "Time had been slipping since" | | 13 | "Nyx drifted slightly ahead, their" | | 14 | "They paused at the base" | | 15 | "they whispered, and Aurora could" | | 16 | "Aurora touched the pendant again." | | 17 | "It pulsed once, a gentle" | | 18 | "They rounded a bend in" | | 19 | "The ground had opened into" |
| | ratio | 0.905 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in her wake — silver petals, midnight blue blossoms, things that had no name in any mortal garden." | | 1 | "The trees here were wrong — not quite trees, more like pillars of living wood twisted into impossible spirals, their bark shimmering with flecks of gold that mo…" | | 2 | "The ground beneath her boots felt spongy, as though she were walking on moss-covered cushions stretched over something vast and sleeping." | | 3 | "Aurora's hand moved instinctively to her wrist, where the small crescent-shaped scar from childhood throbbed with a heat that had nothing to do with the ambient…" | | 4 | "She'd had that scar since she was seven, when she'd fallen from the old oak tree in her grandmother's garden and somehow landed wrong, her wrist bending at an a…" | | 5 | "It moved like liquid mercury, reflecting not their faces but scenes from other places: a vineyard under an amber sky where robed figures danced around tables pi…" | | 6 | "The surface rippled as she approached, and for a moment she thought she saw her own reflection staring back — but older, with eyes that held the same violet glo…" | | 7 | "The deep crimson gem caught and reflected the impossible colors of the sky, and for a moment she could swear she heard voices — whispers in a language that pred…" | | 8 | "Each one pulsed with its own inner light, runes carved deep into the ancient wood that seemed to shift and reform as Aurora watched." | | 9 | "The ground trembled beneath them, a low vibration that made the pool's surface churn." | | 10 | "From the edges of the clearing, shapes began to emerge — not quite solid, more like suggestions of movement, figures that existed in the corner of vision and va…" | | 11 | "Aurora looked at each of them in turn — Nyx, the eternal shade who had walked the earth for centuries; Isolde, the exiled seer whose visions spanned lifetimes; …" | | 12 | "The pool began to bubble, and from its depths rose a figure — tall, robed in robes that seemed woven from the same impossible colors as the sky, with eyes like …" |
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| 56.82% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their voice a breath of wind through autumn leaves," | | 1 | "Nyx said, their voice tight with something like recognition" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their form flickering between solid and shadow" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Isolde added (add)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "the figure called out (call out)" | | 6 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |