Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6CW14XQD8D5RFE5WKPAYR

Run Details

Duration:
13.7s
Cost:
$0.000517
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, turning Shaftesbury Avenue into a river of reflected neon and shattered headlights. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped through puddles as she broke into a run, her service weapon drawn but not yet pointed at anyone in particular. Three blocks back, she'd seen the flash of the Saint Christopher medallion disappearing into the shadows beneath the abandoned Pret a Manger, and now she moved with the military precision that eighteen years on the Metropolitan Police had carved into her stride. The suspect—Tomás Herrera, though Quinn wasn't certain that was his real name—had led her here before, she realized. Or someone like him had. The pattern was familiar: disappear into the city's underbelly, leave just enough evidence behind to suggest something bigger was happening. Bigger and more dangerous than either of them might be ready for. She skidded around the corner onto Charing Cross Road, rain plastering her cropped salt-and-pepper hair to her sharp jaw. Her worn leather watch—her partner's, before Morris had died three years ago under circumstances the force still couldn't explain—read 11:47 PM. The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest flickered above the entrance like a dying heartbeat, and Quinn's hand tightened on her weapon. The suspect had ducked inside. She paused at the threshold, scanning the crowd through the rain-streaked window. The bar was exactly as she remembered it from her previous visits: dim lighting, walls covered in old maps and black-and-white photographs, the kind of place where people who wanted to be forgotten could disappear completely. A few heads turned toward her as she entered, but most pretended not to notice the detective in their midst. "Evening, love," the bartender called out, polishing a glass with mechanical efficiency. "Rough night?" Quinn approached the bar, her eyes scanning the room. "Did you see which door he went through?" The bartender's expression didn't change, but Quinn caught the subtle shift in his posture. "You mean the fella with the scar?" "How long ago?" "Twenty minutes, maybe less. He went through the back." The bartender nodded toward a bookshelf that dominated the far wall, its shelves lined with books that hadn't been touched in years. "But you should know, love, that door's been stuck shut for months. Squeaky hinge and all." Quinn's brown eyes narrowed. She'd heard that line before, used by enough witnesses who thought they were helping when they were actually hindering. "When was the last time someone tried it?" The bartender hesitated, just for a fraction of a second. "Why would anyone try it?" "Because they're looking for someone." The bartender's hands stilled on the glass. Quinn saw his shoulders tense, saw the way his gaze flicked toward the bookshelf and then back to her face. "I... I don't know nothing about no one going through any door." "Tomás Herrera," Quinn said quietly. "Former paramedic. Works out of St. Thomas' Hospital when he's not providing 'off-the-books medical care' for people with unusual injuries." The color drained from the bartender's face. He opened his mouth, closed it again, and then reached behind the bar for what Quinn assumed was a phone. She moved faster. One moment she was at the bar, the next she was across the room, her hand closing around the bookshelf's edge. The wood was warm beneath her palm, almost humming with latent energy. With a sharp tug, she pulled at the nearest book—*The History of Alchemy*—and heard the satisfying click of a mechanism engaging. The bookshelf swung inward, revealing a narrow corridor lit by flickering candles. Quinn stepped through, her weapon raised, and found herself in a small chamber that served as a staging area for the hidden passages beneath the city. The air here was different—colder, damper, carrying the scent of old stone and something else that made her skin crawl. She heard footsteps ahead, the distinctive echo of someone moving quickly through the tunnels. Quinn followed, her training taking over as she navigated the unfamiliar passages. The walls here were carved from solid rock, and the ceiling dropped low enough that she had to duck frequently. Every sound seemed amplified in the confined space—the drip of water, the whisper of her own breathing, the distant rumble of the city above. The tunnel opened into a larger space, and Quinn's breath caught in her throat. The Veil Market stretched before her like something from a nightmare. An abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, transformed into a bazaar of the supernatural. Stalls lined the platform, each one manned by figures who seemed to shift and blur at the edges of her vision. Enchanted goods hung from racks, their surfaces rippling with otherworldly light. Bottles of banned alchemical substances lined wooden tables, their contents swirling with colors that shouldn't exist in nature. And at the center of it all, talking to what appeared to be a vendor made entirely of shadows, was Tomás Herrera. Quinn's hand trembled slightly as she raised her weapon. Not from fear—though the situation was clearly dangerous—but from recognition. This wasn't just a black market; this was something bigger. Something that connected to the case files gathering dust in her office, to the strange deaths she'd been investigating for months, to the partner she'd lost three years ago. "Detective Quinn," a voice called out from behind her. She spun around, weapon still trained on Herrera, to find the bartender from The Raven's Nest standing in the tunnel entrance. In his hand, he held something that looked suspiciously like a bone token—the entry requirement for the market. "I'm not here to hurt anyone," Quinn called back, her voice steadier than she felt. "I just want to talk." Herrera turned, and Quinn saw that he'd been crying. The Saint Christopher medallion hung loosely around his neck, and his olive skin was streaked with rain and something else—tears, or maybe just the grime of the underground. "You shouldn't be here, Detective," he said, his voice carrying an accent that marked him as foreign even in the multicultural sprawl of London. "This place isn't safe for police." "Neither is administering unauthorized treatment to supernatural patients," Quinn replied, taking a step forward. "But you did it anyway, didn't you? Because someone needed help, and the system wouldn't provide it." Herrera's jaw clenched. Quinn had seen that expression before—in suspects, in witnesses, in herself when the job got too personal. "What do you want from me?" "Information." Quinn lowered her weapon slightly. "About the Market. About who's running it. About the connection between these supernatural patients and the deaths I've been investigating." The bartender stepped further into the tunnel, his eyes darting between Quinn and Herrera. "You really don't know what you're asking for, love," he said quietly. "I know enough," Quinn replied. She'd spent eighteen years learning how to read people, how to push the right buttons, how to make them see that cooperation was in their best interest. "Three years ago, my partner died investigating something that wasn't human. Something that left no trace except for a few strange symbols and a witness who swore he saw shadows move." Herrera's face paled. "Morris." "DS Morris. You knew him?" "No, but I've seen his files." Herrera glanced around nervously. "Look, if you're really serious about this—" "I am." Quinn took another step. "And I'm serious about bringing whoever's responsible to justice, whether they're human or not." The bartender cleared his throat. "The thing is, Detective, the Market moves locations every full moon. Tonight's the night, and if you're not careful—" "I'm not here to shut it down," Quinn interrupted. "I'm here to find out who's using it to hurt people." Herrera studied her face for a long moment, his warm brown eyes searching hers. Then he reached into the pocket of his jacket and pulled out a small piece of paper. "If you really want answers, meet me at the usual place tomorrow night. But Quinn—" He paused, glancing back toward the Market. "Some doors, once opened, can't be closed again." Quinn took the paper, her fingers brushing against his. For a moment, she felt something—recognition, maybe, or the echo of a connection that went deeper than either of them realized. Then Herrera turned and disappeared into the crowd of the Market, leaving Quinn alone in the tunnel with the bartender and the weight of what she'd just learned. "Well," the bartender said, "that was... interesting." Quinn looked down at the paper in her hand. It was blank. Or almost blank. In the flickering candlelight, she could just make out writing that hadn't been there before: *Midnight. St. Bride's Churchyard. Come alone.* She crumpled the paper in her fist and let it fall to the wet floor. The decision ahead of her was clear, even if the consequences weren't. Follow this lead deeper into the supernatural underworld, or turn back and pretend she'd never seen what was really happening in the shadows of London. The rain was still falling when she stepped back onto the street, but now it sounded different—like the city itself was holding its breath, waiting to see which choice she'd make.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:50:34.197Z" 7/25/2026, 5:50:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
42.11% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Quinn said quietly [quietly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"Herrera glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.789
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.158
67.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1526
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"loosely"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count4
5
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"quickly"
2"slightly"
3"loosely"
4"really"
5"nervously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1526
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count2
4
word"mechanical"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"echo"
count2
8
word"navigated"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"otherworldly"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"jaw clenched"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"familiar"
2"flickered"
3"scanning"
4"mechanical"
5"flicked"
6"footsteps"
7"echo"
8"navigated"
9"whisper"
10"otherworldly"
11"trembled"
12"jaw clenched"
13"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
77.18% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords10
totalWords1514
ratio0.007
matches
0"The History of Alchemy"
1"Midnight. St. Bride's Churchyard. Come alone."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1197
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity2.09
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Harlow1
Quinn25
Saint2
Christopher2
Pret1
Manger1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Tomás2
Herrera10
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Morris1
Raven2
Nest2
History1
Veil1
Market3
Tube1
Camden1
London2
Churchyard1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Police"
5"Tomás"
6"Herrera"
7"Morris"
8"Raven"
9"Nest"
10"Market"
11"Camden"
places
0"Shaftesbury"
1"Avenue"
2"Charing"
3"Cross"
4"Road"
5"London"
globalScore0.456
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed amplified in the confined space—the drip of water, the whisper of her own breathing, the distant rumble of the city above"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1514
matches(empty)
45.45% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences110
matches
0"heard that line"
1"saw that he'd"
2"seen that expression"
3"see that cooperation"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean32.91
std21.77
cv0.661
sampleLengths
084
155
263
35
468
514
617
721
83
947
1031
1115
125
1339
1425
1527
1657
1758
1870
1914
2074
2122
2258
239
2439
2520
2637
2730
2831
2926
3026
3126
3263
334
345
3517
3620
3724
3820
3961
4058
417
4230
436
4452
4531
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"been touched"
1"were carved"
2"was streaked"
3.92% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was happening"
1"were helping"
2"were actually hindering"
3"was really happening"
4"was holding"
5"was still falling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences110
ratio0.109
matches
0"The suspect—Tomás Herrera, though Quinn wasn't certain that was his real name—had led her here before, she realized."
1"Her worn leather watch—her partner's, before Morris had died three years ago under circumstances the force still couldn't explain—read 11:47 PM."
2"With a sharp tug, she pulled at the nearest book—*The History of Alchemy*—and heard the satisfying click of a mechanism engaging."
3"The air here was different—colder, damper, carrying the scent of old stone and something else that made her skin crawl."
4"Every sound seemed amplified in the confined space—the drip of water, the whisper of her own breathing, the distant rumble of the city above."
5"Not from fear—though the situation was clearly dangerous—but from recognition."
6"This wasn't just a black market; this was something bigger."
7"In his hand, he held something that looked suspiciously like a bone token—the entry requirement for the market."
8"The Saint Christopher medallion hung loosely around his neck, and his olive skin was streaked with rain and something else—tears, or maybe just the grime of the underground."
9"Quinn had seen that expression before—in suspects, in witnesses, in herself when the job got too personal."
10"For a moment, she felt something—recognition, maybe, or the echo of a connection that went deeper than either of them realized."
11"The rain was still falling when she stepped back onto the street, but now it sounded different—like the city itself was holding its breath, waiting to see which choice she'd make."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1214
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"different—colder, damper, carrying"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03706754530477759
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01400329489291598
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean13.76
std8.46
cv0.614
sampleLengths
017
125
242
318
45
520
612
719
821
923
105
1112
1236
1320
1412
152
169
178
1814
197
203
2131
2216
234
2419
258
2610
275
285
297
3020
3112
325
3320
347
3520
363
3721
3812
3921
4012
4126
4220
4314
4412
4520
4624
4714
4811
4913
78.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners55
82.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then he reached into the"
1"Then Herrera turned and disappeared"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences81
matches
0"She skidded around the corner"
1"Her worn leather watch—her partner's,"
2"She paused at the threshold,"
3"She'd heard that line before,"
4"He opened his mouth, closed"
5"She moved faster."
6"She heard footsteps ahead, the"
7"She spun around, weapon still"
8"he said, his voice carrying"
9"he said quietly"
10"She'd spent eighteen years learning"
11"He paused, glancing back toward"
12"It was blank."
13"She crumpled the paper in"
ratio0.173
58.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences81
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped"
2"The suspect—Tomás Herrera, though Quinn"
3"The pattern was familiar: disappear"
4"She skidded around the corner"
5"Her worn leather watch—her partner's,"
6"The green neon sign of"
7"The suspect had ducked inside."
8"She paused at the threshold,"
9"The bar was exactly as"
10"the bartender called out, polishing"
11"Quinn approached the bar, her"
12"The bartender's expression didn't change,"
13"The bartender nodded toward a"
14"Quinn's brown eyes narrowed."
15"She'd heard that line before,"
16"The bartender hesitated, just for"
17"The bartender's hands stilled on"
18"Quinn saw his shoulders tense,"
19"Quinn said quietly"
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.70% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The bar was exactly as she remembered it from her previous visits: dim lighting, walls covered in old maps and black-and-white photographs, the kind of place wh…"
1"She'd heard that line before, used by enough witnesses who thought they were helping when they were actually hindering."
2"Bottles of banned alchemical substances lined wooden tables, their contents swirling with colors that shouldn't exist in nature."
3"Something that connected to the case files gathering dust in her office, to the strange deaths she'd been investigating for months, to the partner she'd lost th…"
4"In his hand, he held something that looked suspiciously like a bone token—the entry requirement for the market."
5"For a moment, she felt something—recognition, maybe, or the echo of a connection that went deeper than either of them realized."
6"The rain was still falling when she stepped back onto the street, but now it sounded different—like the city itself was holding its breath, waiting to see which…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn called back, her voice steadier than she felt"
71.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"the bartender called out (call out)"
1"Quinn called back (call back)"
2"Quinn interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.237
leniency0.474
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.158
72.2193%