| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She turned slightly [slightly]" | | 1 | "she asked again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 67 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.627 | | rawRatio | 0.095 | | effectiveRatio | 0.06 | |
| 84.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1276 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.73% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1276 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "marble" | | 5 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 135 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1266 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 31 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 959 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.83 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like rain and something wilder—san" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1266 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 86 | | mean | 14.72 | | std | 16.57 | | cv | 1.126 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 69 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 52 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 50 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 97.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "was plastered" | | 1 | "been coiled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't expecting" | | 1 | "was remembering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 135 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open without a knock, and the hallway smelled like rain and something wilder—sandalwood and smoke." | | 1 | "His platinum hair was plastered to his forehead, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held a gravity she hadn't seen in months." | | 2 | "She remembered the way his fingers had brushed her wrist when she shivered, how he'd laughed—low and dark—when she'd called him a romantic fool." | | 3 | "Because the dreams had started again—vivid, burning things, hands reaching through fire." | | 4 | "The flat felt smaller now, or maybe it had always been this way—full of things they'd both loved, things they'd both forgotten." | | 5 | "Because the woman who'd carved her name into the marble of a demon court had sent word—three words delivered by a raven with eyes like molten gold." | | 6 | "She remembered the way he'd kissed her the night before the fight—had kissed her like he was afraid she'd disappear if he looked away too long." | | 7 | "There wasn't one there, just exhaustion and something softer—regret, maybe, or relief." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 971 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.037075180226570546 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006179196704428424 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 135 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 135 | | mean | 9.38 | | std | 7.45 | | cv | 0.794 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 41.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.2814814814814815 | | totalSentences | 135 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 46.95% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he held it between" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 62.25% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She wasn't expecting anyone." | | 1 | "His platinum hair was plastered" | | 2 | "He hadn't changed much, but" | | 3 | "she said, closing the distance" | | 4 | "He shook droplets onto the" | | 5 | "He looked away, toward the" | | 6 | "They'd spent three hours there," | | 7 | "She remembered the way his" | | 8 | "He turned, and she saw" | | 9 | "He crossed the room in" | | 10 | "His hand settled on the" | | 11 | "she said, and for a" | | 12 | "She turned slightly, arms crossed," | | 13 | "She could hear her own" | | 14 | "She stepped back, giving herself" | | 15 | "He didn't use it as" | | 16 | "She remembered the way he'd" | | 17 | "He exhaled, slow and deliberate" | | 18 | "She studied his face, searching" | | 19 | "she asked again" |
| | ratio | 0.394 | |
| 79.72% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open without" | | 1 | "Aurora paused in the corridor," | | 2 | "She wasn't expecting anyone." | | 3 | "Lucien stood in the doorway" | | 4 | "His platinum hair was plastered" | | 5 | "He hadn't changed much, but" | | 6 | "she said, closing the distance" | | 7 | "The flat was quiet except" | | 8 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, watched from" | | 9 | "The cat blinked slowly, unimpressed." | | 10 | "Lucien stepped inside, his polished" | | 11 | "He shook droplets onto the" | | 12 | "The silence stretched." | | 13 | "He looked away, toward the" | | 14 | "Aurora's breath caught." | | 15 | "They'd spent three hours there," | | 16 | "She remembered the way his" | | 17 | "He turned, and she saw" | | 18 | "He crossed the room in" | | 19 | "His hand settled on the" |
| | ratio | 0.761 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Because she was alone." | | 1 | "Because the dreams had started" | | 2 | "Because she'd dreamed of him," | | 3 | "Because the scar on her" | | 4 | "Because the summons had come" | | 5 | "Because the woman who'd carved" | | 6 | "Because some things couldn't stay" | | 7 | "Because yes, it was." | | 8 | "Because she'd been the one" | | 9 | "Because she had." |
| | ratio | 0.141 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He hadn't changed much, but everything about him felt different now, sharper, as if he'd carved something essential out of himself and left it on the other side…" | | 1 | "Aurora felt something shift between them, something that had been coiled tight for months." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 67 | | tagDensity | 0.254 | | leniency | 0.507 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.03 | |