Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6F85XDZ1KXFFTVW4SJANS

Run Details

Duration:
13.3s
Cost:
$0.000359
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The key rattled against the chain lock, and before Aurora could even register the sound, the door swung inward. “You didn’t answer,” she said, crossing her arms over her chest. The words came out sharper than she intended, but she refused to soften them. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, rainwater dripping from his charcoal suit jacket onto the threadbare carpet. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—scanned the cramped space with practiced precision, taking in the scattered books, the herbs drying from the ceiling, the tabby cat watching from the shadows. “Three deadbolts,” he said, stepping past her without invitation. “You always make it so difficult.” “I live in a flat above a curry house on Brick Lane,” Aurora replied, stepping closer. Her heartbeat hammered in her ears. “Everyone knows where I am.” Ptolemy wound himself around Lucien’s ankles, purring loudly. The cat rubbed against his legs, and for a moment, something almost like tenderness flickered across the Frenchman’s face. “You kept the cat,” he said, more to himself than to her. “I kept everything that was mine,” Aurora snapped. “Including the right to never see you again.” Lucien’s laugh was low, dangerous. “You called me twice after I left. Both times you hung up before I could speak.” Her skin prickled. “That was months ago. I’ve moved on.” “Have you?” He tilted his head, studying her. “You still wear that silver pendant he gave you. The one shaped like a crescent moon.” Aurora’s hand flew to her neck, fingers closing around the cool metal. “It’s just jewelry.” “It’s a lie,” he said softly. “You never took it off, even when you swore you would.” The air between them crackled with something neither of them wanted to name. Aurora remembered the night they’d spent together in Marseille, the way his lips had tasted like wine and secrets, the way he’d whispered promises she’d been foolish enough to believe. “What do you want, Luc?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. He set his cane against the wall and stepped closer. The scent of rain and sandalwood wrapped around her. “I need your help.” “With what?” “A demon from Avaros is hunting me. He knows about the child.” Aurora froze. “What child?” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “The one you’re carrying.” The words hit her like a physical blow. She stumbled backward, her hand flying to her stomach. “That’s—” “Impossible,” he said, but his eyes betrayed him. He knelt beside her, his hand hovering over her abdomen as if afraid to touch. “Or maybe it isn’t.” Aurora’s vision blurred. She remembered the fever dreams, the missed periods, the way her body had changed. She’d convinced herself it was stress, that running from Evan had taken more out of her than she’d realized. “No,” she whispered. “It can’t be.” “The demon doesn’t know about the binding spell. But I do. And if he finds out before the child is born, before the bloodline awakens, we’re both dead.” She looked up at him, really looked at him. The rain had soaked through his hair, plastering it to his forehead. His cane leaned against the wall, within reach. Her fingers twitched toward it. “Why are you telling me this?” she asked. “Because I made a mistake,” he said, his voice breaking slightly. “A big one. And I’m not making another.” Aurora closed her eyes. She remembered the last time she’d seen him, the way he’d walked away without looking back, the way her heart had shattered into a thousand pieces. “I hate you,” she said, but it felt hollow even as the words left her mouth. “I know.” He reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a small vial filled with a glowing liquid. “Drink this. It’ll protect you.” “What is it?” “My blood.” His fingers trembled slightly. “Mixed with wolfsbane and dragon’s bane. It’ll keep the demon at bay until we figure out how to kill him.” Aurora stared at the vial. “You’d give me your blood?” “I’d give you my heart if you’d let me,” he said quietly. “But I’m afraid you already broke it.” Something cracked inside her chest. She reached for the vial, her fingers brushing against his. The contact sent sparks through her veins. “Why now?” she whispered. “Because I can’t lose you twice.” Aurora pulled her hand away and grabbed her keys from the hook by the door. “Get out.” “Aurora, please—” “Get out, Lucien!” He stood, his face twisted with something raw and desperate. For a moment, she thought he might cry. Then he turned, grabbed his cane, and disappeared into the rain. Aurora stood in the doorway, clutching the vial. The cat wound around her legs, purring. “He came back,” she whispered to Ptolemy. The cat blinked slowly, as if in understanding. Aurora closed the door and locked all three deadbolts. Then she sank onto the couch, staring at the vial in her shaking hands. She thought about the baby. About Lucien. About the way he’d looked at her, like she was the only person in the world worth saving. And she thought about the way he’d lied to her, the way he’d walked away without a backward glance, the way he’d let her believe he didn’t care. But now he was here, soaked to the bone, offering her his blood and his heart and his promises. Aurora uncorked the vial and drank. The liquid burned going down, warm and sweet and alive. She could feel it spreading through her veins, protecting her, binding her to him in ways she didn’t understand. When she looked up, Lucien was gone. But on the coffee table, where he’d been standing, lay a single white rose with a note attached: “For the woman who carries my future.” Aurora folded the note and pressed it to her chest. Somewhere in the distance, thunder rumbled. She didn’t know what the future held, but for the first time in months, she felt like she wasn’t facing it alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
69.57% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
1"His fingers trembled slightly [slightly]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.13
69.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount999
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"really"
3"slightly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount999
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"tenderness"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"tenderness"
2"flickered"
3"whisper"
4"stomach"
5"shattered"
6"trembled"
7"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords997
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount726
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora14
Moreau1
Lucien6
Frenchman1
Marseille1
Evan1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
places
0"Frenchman"
1"Marseille"
globalScore0.536
windowScore0.667
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like wine and secrets, the way he’"
1"felt like she wasn’t facing it alone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount997
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean18.46
std10.49
cv0.568
sampleLengths
019
125
248
315
427
527
612
716
821
910
1024
1115
1217
1343
1413
1523
162
1712
184
197
2018
2127
2236
236
2428
2534
268
2719
2830
2916
3024
313
3226
3310
3419
3522
364
376
3817
392
403
4129
4215
437
448
4523
4625
4728
4819
4935
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs147
matches
0"wasn’t facing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences100
ratio0.01
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—scanned the cramped space with practiced precision, taking in the scattered books, the herbs drying from the ceiling, the tabby cat watching from the shadows."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount728
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03296703296703297
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012362637362637362
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean9.97
std6.61
cv0.663
sampleLengths
019
111
214
318
430
59
66
716
86
95
108
1119
1212
138
148
155
1616
173
187
198
2016
2112
223
236
2411
2513
2630
2713
2810
299
304
312
3212
332
342
353
364
378
389
391
408
4115
424
433
4414
4519
463
473
4828
499
55.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"Then he turned, grabbed his"
1"Then she sank onto the"
2"Somewhere in the distance, thunder"
ratio0.045
38.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences66
matches
0"she said, crossing her arms"
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
2"he said, stepping past her"
3"Her heartbeat hammered in her"
4"he said, more to himself"
5"Her skin prickled."
6"He tilted his head, studying"
7"he said softly"
8"she asked, her voice barely"
9"He set his cane against"
10"She stumbled backward, her hand"
11"he said, but his eyes"
12"He knelt beside her, his"
13"She remembered the fever dreams,"
14"She’d convinced herself it was"
15"She looked up at him,"
16"His cane leaned against the"
17"Her fingers twitched toward it."
18"he said, his voice breaking"
19"She remembered the last time"
ratio0.455
28.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences66
matches
0"The key rattled against the"
1"she said, crossing her arms"
2"The words came out sharper"
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
5"he said, stepping past her"
6"Aurora replied, stepping closer"
7"Her heartbeat hammered in her"
8"Ptolemy wound himself around Lucien’s"
9"The cat rubbed against his"
10"he said, more to himself"
11"Lucien’s laugh was low, dangerous."
12"Her skin prickled."
13"He tilted his head, studying"
14"Aurora’s hand flew to her"
15"he said softly"
16"The air between them crackled"
17"Aurora remembered the night they’d"
18"she asked, her voice barely"
19"He set his cane against"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He knelt beside her, his hand hovering over her abdomen as if afraid to touch."
1"She could feel it spreading through her veins, protecting her, binding her to him in ways she didn’t understand."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, more to himself than to her"
1"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"he said, but his eyes betrayed him"
3"he said, his voice breaking slightly"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Aurora snapped (snap)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.326
leniency0.652
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.174
79.8389%