Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6HV55ZAFBPX3YTMVDZ39J

Run Details

Duration:
12.5s
Cost:
$0.000294
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The body sat propped against the tiled wall of the abandoned Tube platform, arms splayed like a crucifix. Detective Harlow Quinn knelt beside it, her leather gloved hands sifting through the scattered contents of the victim's jacket pocket. The fluorescent light above flickered, casting stuttering shadows across the platform. "Coroner says he's been dead for less than an hour," said DS Marcus Hale, stepping over a puddle of congealed blood that hadn't quite dried yet. His breath fogged in the chill air seeping through the broken windows. "Heart attack, apparently. Massive coronary." Quinn didn't look up. Her brown eyes remained fixed on a small brass object half-buried beneath the body's outstretched hand. She pulled it free—a compass, its casing green with age, the face etched with symbols that made her skin crawl. "What kind of heart attack victim carries an antique compass?" she asked, holding it up. The needle spun lazily before settling, pointing not north but toward the darkness beyond the platform's edge. Hale shifted uncomfortably. "Maybe he was a collector. Tourist thing." "Tourists don't get access to the Underground after hours." Quinn stood, tucking the compass into her own pocket. Her military bearing kept her posture rigid despite the cold. "And they don't usually end up dead in disused stations with their pockets picked clean except for—" She gestured to the compass. "—this." The detective's worn leather watch ticked steadily against her wrist as she circled the body. Three years of investigating cases that defied explanation had taught her to trust patterns, even when the pattern itself was impossible. This felt familiar, like the case that had taken Morris. "There's something else," Hale said, his voice quieter now. "The paramedics found his flat above ground. Place was ransacked. Papers everywhere. Looked like they were searching for something specific." Quinn stopped moving. The victim's name was Thomas Reed, according to the crumpled ID still clutched in his stiffening fingers. She'd heard the name before—mentioned in passing during her briefing on the missing persons cases that had started appearing six months ago. All of them occult researchers, all last seen near Camden Market. "The Veil Market," she said suddenly. Hale frowned. "What?" "Moves locations every full moon. Underground. Literally." Quinn's jaw tightened. She'd spent weeks tracking rumors, following whispers that most of her colleagues dismissed as urban legend. But Morris had believed them. Before he'd died chasing shadows through the city's underbelly. "Are you suggesting—" "I'm suggesting someone killed a man for information about a black market that deals in supernatural artifacts." Quinn knelt again, this time examining the platform floor. Her gloved finger traced a faint scuff mark in the dirt—a boot heel, worn smooth on the inside edge. "Notice anything about these marks?" Hale crouched beside her. "Looks like regular footprints." "Regular footprints don't come in pairs that mirror each other perfectly." Quinn pointed to two sets of impressions leading away from the body. "See how they're spaced? Too consistent. Too deliberate." The detective pulled out her phone, snapping photos of the compass before slipping it back into her pocket. The needle still pointed toward the tunnel's mouth, where darkness swallowed the tracks whole. "Impossible," Hale muttered. "No one walks the tunnels alone at night. Not after dark." "Then why are there boot prints leading into them?" Quinn stood, brushing dirt from her knees. Her sharp jaw set with determination. "And why does our victim have defensive wounds on his hands if he died of natural causes?" The coroner's report had listed the cause of death as cardiac arrest, but Quinn had seen enough autopsies to know that heart attacks didn't leave bruising around the knuckles. Someone had grabbed Reed before he died, held him still while— "The compass," Hale said slowly, realization dawning. "You think it's connected to the rift activity we've been seeing?" Quinn nodded, though she kept her expression neutral. The reports had come in sporadically—witnesses describing lights in the tunnels, strange sounds beneath the city streets. Most had been written off as pranks or hallucinations. But Morris had investigated one before his death, and his final transmission had mentioned something about "doors that shouldn't exist." "This isn't just about one murder," she said. "It's about whoever's been hunting people who know about the Market. About the things sold there." Hale pulled out his radio. "Should I run this by headquarters?" Quinn shook her head. "Not yet. If there's a leak..." She'd learned that lesson the hard way. Some cases couldn't be trusted to procedure. Instead, she pulled out her phone and dialed a number she rarely used anymore. When Aurora answered on the first ring, Quinn felt her stomach clench. "Quinn." Aurora's voice carried exhaustion, the kind that came from working too many late nights buried in research. "What have you found?" "Something that might explain what happened to Morris." Quinn looked down at the compass still warm in her pocket, its needle steady as a heartbeat. "Meet me at the old station. Bring your friend with the satchel full of books." The line went dead before Aurora could ask questions, but Quinn heard the click of a phone being set down, followed by hurried footsteps. Someone was already moving toward her. Back on the platform, Hale studied the body again. "You really think there's something supernatural going on here?" Quinn crouched beside the corpse, noting the way the victim's eyes seemed to stare past the ceiling, toward something only he could see. "I think someone killed Thomas Reed because he knew how to find something dangerous." She pointed to the compass. "And I think he was trying to warn us about what's coming through whatever door he opened." The fluorescent light above flickered once more, then died completely, plunging the platform into darkness. In that moment, Quinn could swear she heard footsteps echoing from the tunnel—soft, deliberate, and impossibly close. Hale's radio crackled to life. "Detective? We've got movement on the thermal imaging. Something's coming up from the tunnels." Quinn slipped the compass from her pocket. The needle pointed directly at the darkness ahead, unwavering. Whatever was coming, it knew she was ready. She stood, gun drawn, and waited for the sound of the first step.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
37.84% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said suddenly [suddenly]"
1"Quinn knelt again [again]"
2"Hale said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.973
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.162
71.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"suddenly"
2"perfectly"
3"slowly"
4"really"
5"completely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count2
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"chill"
2"etched"
3"familiar"
4"traced"
5"stomach"
6"footsteps"
7"echoing"
8"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences66
matches
0"t with determination"
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1033
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount722
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.35
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn17
Marcus1
Hale10
Morris3
Thomas1
Reed2
Camden1
Market1
Aurora3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Marcus"
3"Hale"
4"Morris"
5"Thomas"
6"Reed"
7"Aurora"
places
0"Camden"
globalScore0.323
windowScore0.5
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite dried yet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.968
wordCount1033
matches
0"not north but toward the darkness beyond the platform's edge"
87.30% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"know that heart"
1"learned that lesson"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean29.51
std15.57
cv0.527
sampleLengths
049
143
240
332
410
551
646
729
853
96
103
1140
123
1350
148
1531
1632
1714
1839
1940
2018
2154
2224
2311
2424
2526
2622
2740
2830
2918
3059
3132
3219
3324
3413
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"been written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was already moving"
1"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences84
ratio0.083
matches
0"She pulled it free—a compass, its casing green with age, the face etched with symbols that made her skin crawl."
1"\"—this.\""
2"She'd heard the name before—mentioned in passing during her briefing on the missing persons cases that had started appearing six months ago."
3"Her gloved finger traced a faint scuff mark in the dirt—a boot heel, worn smooth on the inside edge."
4"Someone had grabbed Reed before he died, held him still while—"
5"The reports had come in sporadically—witnesses describing lights in the tunnels, strange sounds beneath the city streets."
6"In that moment, Quinn could swear she heard footsteps echoing from the tunnel—soft, deliberate, and impossibly close."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount365
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.038356164383561646
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00821917808219178
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean12.3
std6.8
cv0.553
sampleLengths
018
120
211
326
412
55
64
716
820
915
1017
113
127
1318
1410
1522
161
1715
1821
1910
209
2120
223
2317
2422
2511
266
272
281
2910
3016
315
329
333
3426
3519
365
374
384
3923
408
4118
4214
433
4411
4516
466
4717
4829
4911
84.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5119047619047619
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners43
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Instead, she pulled out her"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences62
matches
0"His breath fogged in the"
1"Her brown eyes remained fixed"
2"She pulled it free—a compass,"
3"she asked, holding it up"
4"Her military bearing kept her"
5"She gestured to the compass"
6"She'd heard the name before—mentioned"
7"she said suddenly"
8"She'd spent weeks tracking rumors,"
9"Her gloved finger traced a"
10"Her sharp jaw set with"
11"She'd learned that lesson the"
12"She pointed to the compass"
13"She stood, gun drawn, and"
ratio0.226
48.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences62
matches
0"The body sat propped against"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn knelt beside"
2"The fluorescent light above flickered,"
3"His breath fogged in the"
4"Quinn didn't look up."
5"Her brown eyes remained fixed"
6"She pulled it free—a compass,"
7"she asked, holding it up"
8"The needle spun lazily before"
9"Hale shifted uncomfortably."
10"Quinn stood, tucking the compass"
11"Her military bearing kept her"
12"She gestured to the compass"
13"The detective's worn leather watch"
14"This felt familiar, like the"
15"Hale said, his voice quieter"
16"Quinn stopped moving."
17"The victim's name was Thomas"
18"She'd heard the name before—mentioned"
19"she said suddenly"
ratio0.823
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Before he'd died chasing shadows"
ratio0.016
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She pulled it free—a compass, its casing green with age, the face etched with symbols that made her skin crawl."
1"Three years of investigating cases that defied explanation had taught her to trust patterns, even when the pattern itself was impossible."
2"She'd heard the name before—mentioned in passing during her briefing on the missing persons cases that had started appearing six months ago."
3"The detective pulled out her phone, snapping photos of the compass before slipping it back into her pocket."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Hale said, his voice quieter now"
1"Quinn knelt again, this time examining the platform floor"
2"Hale said slowly, realization dawning"
3"Quinn looked down, its needle steady as a heartbeat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Hale muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.189
leniency0.378
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.054
79.1661%