Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6JJFKWNDPN326SZS1DMTN

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.031111
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back and Rory opened the door, and there he stood on the landing, rain jewelling the shoulders of a charcoal suit that probably cost more than her entire flat. Lucien Moreau. Four months of silence wrapped in platinum and an ivory cane. "Rory." His voice had roughened since spring. The mismatched eyes — one amber, one black as spilled ink — travelled over her face like he was checking her for damage. "May I come in?" "No." She moved to close the door. The cane's tip slid into the gap with the ease of long practice. "That's a blade in there, isn't it," she said. "You're threatening me with your fancy stick." "I'm asking with my fancy stick. There's a difference." Rain ran down the side of his face, tracing the line of his jaw. He didn't wipe it away. "You've stopped answering my calls. You've stopped answering everyone's calls. Even Eva's, and she told me herself she phoned you eleven times on Tuesday." "Eva talks too much." "Eva worries. As do I." A pause, measured as everything he did. "Twelve minutes, Rory. Then I'll go, and you can bolt your three locks and pretend I was never here." Ptolemy wound between her ankles and yowled at the draught. Rory looked down at the cat, then back at the half-demon dripping on the communal carpet. The curry house below had the evening fry-up going; the whole stairwell smelled of cumin and hot oil, and Lucien Moreau stood in the middle of it like a knife in a cutlery drawer. "Twelve minutes," she said, and stepped aside. He crossed the threshold the way he entered every room — slowly, cataloguing. His gaze swept the towers of books, the scrolls rubber-banded on the radiator, the chalk symbols Eva had scribbled on the window glass and forgotten to wipe. Something flickered across his face at those, gone before she could name it. "You're staying here," he said. "Not above the bar." "Silas needed the room." She shut the door. One bolt. Two. The third she left, and hated that he noticed. "Silas lies poorly." Lucien set the cane against the arm of the sofa and sat without being invited, folding himself onto the one cushion not occupied by papers. "You've moved out of your own flat and gone to ground in a warded room above a curry house. You did the same thing in Cardiff, Eva tells me. Before London." The name Evan didn't need saying. It hung there anyway. "Your twelve minutes are ticking." He reached into his jacket. Rory's hand found the kitchen knife she'd left on the counter — muscle memory, nothing more — and his eyes tracked the movement, and something in the black one went soft and terrible. "I'm not him," Lucien said quietly. "I know you're not." Her knuckles had gone white on the handle. She let go, finger by finger. "What do you want, Luc?" He produced a folded slip of paper and held it out. She didn't take it, so he laid it on the arm of the sofa, weighted it with a dead fountain pen of Eva's. "Your name came up," he said. "In a conversation I paid a great deal of money to overhear. Avaros has taken an interest in a delivery girl who walks through a veil-ward without breaking stride." Rory's stomach dropped through the floor of the curry house. "That was an accident. I didn't even know it was there." "Intent is a luxury the realm of Avaros doesn't entertain. You touched something that isn't yours, and now people who answer to my father are asking what you are." He leaned forward, elbows on knees, and the lamplight caught the amber eye and turned it molten. "I told them you were nothing. A human girl with a moped and a talent for being where she shouldn't. Do you know what it cost me to call you nothing?" "I didn't ask you to protect me." "No. You asked me to kiss you, and then you vanished for four months." The flat went very quiet. Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill and began washing a paw with theatrical indifference. "That was a mistake," Rory said. "Which part?" His voice stayed level, but his thumb moved along the silver head of the cane, a slow circuit, over and over. "The kiss, or the vanishing? Because I've had four months to rank them, and I keep changing my mind." "The kiss happened because I'd had two glasses of Silas's disgusting plum wine and you said my name in French." "Aurore." He said it again now, deliberately, the rolling R of Marseille in it, and she hated her own pulse for answering. "It means dawn. I wasn't seducing you. I was remarking on accuracy." "You were absolutely seducing me." "I was." No hesitation. He'd never once flinched from the truth of himself; it was the most dangerous thing about him. "And you kissed me back, and then you went home and bolted your door, and I stood in the street below like a fool in a three-thousand-pound suit until your light went out." She hadn't known that. He could see her not knowing it, and looked away first — the first time he'd broken eye contact since the landing. "Why did you run?" he asked. "Because the last time I let a man matter, I had to flee a city to get free of him." The words came out flat, rehearsed by months of silence. "Because you broker information for demons and you carry a sword in your walking stick and my father is a barrister, Luc, my mother teaches Year Four, and nothing about you fits in the life I'm supposed to crawl back to." "And is that the life you want?" "It's the life that's safe." "Cardiff was safe. Wasn't it?" The knife was on the counter. She picked it up just to have somewhere to put her hands, then set it down again because he'd already seen. He'd seen everything. That was his whole trade. "You should go," she said. He rose. Took the cane. Crossed to the door with the paper still lying on the sofa arm, and for one mad second she thought he'd actually leave it at that, twelve minutes barely half spent, and she didn't know if the thing flooding her chest was relief or grief. At the door he stopped. Didn't turn. "The ward on this window is wrong," he said. "Eva's chalked the third sigil backwards. It'll hold out weather. It won't hold out anything from Avaros." One bolt slid back under his hand, then the second. "Fix it tonight, Rory. I'll send no more messages after this one. You've made your terms plain." "Luc." He stilled, hand on the latch. "The paper." Her throat had closed to a pinhole. "What does it say?" "The name of the man my father's people have hired to find you." He looked back at her then, and both eyes were black in the dim hall light. "And beneath it, the address of a fixer in Whitechapel who owes me his life and asks no questions. You don't have to call me. Call him. I won't be involved." "You're just handing me to a stranger?" "I'm honouring the only request you've ever made of me." The door opened. Cold air came up the stairwell smelling of rain and cumin. "You asked me to leave you alone. In Marseille, in the spring. You don't remember saying it, but I've thought of nothing else since." "I was drunk then too." "You were honest then too." He stepped onto the landing. She watched his hand come up, knock twice on the doorframe — an old gesture, from before, from the months when he'd appeared at her window above the bar with stolen pastries and information she hadn't asked for. Hello and goodbye in the same two knocks. "Rory." "Mm." "The scar on your wrist. You told me once it was from a bicycle." A ghost of a smile moved across his mouth and died. "Avaros doesn't believe that story either. Fix the window." The door clicked shut. The landing light hummed. She stood in the middle of Eva's books with Ptolemy twining around her shins, and then she crossed the room, shot the third bolt home, and pressed her palm flat against the wood where he'd stood. The paper was still on the sofa arm. She left it there a long moment, untouched, before she picked it up.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
1"One bolt slid back [back]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.067
89.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1420
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1420
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"tracing"
2"measured"
3"flickered"
4"stomach"
5"pulse"
6"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1427
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount806
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Moreau2
Rain1
Ptolemy3
Lucien4
Eva3
One2
Evan1
Marseille1
Cold1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Rain"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
5"Eva"
6"One"
7"Evan"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1427
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean24.6
std20.59
cv0.837
sampleLengths
033
113
234
31
419
516
652
74
831
960
107
1153
129
1320
1459
1510
165
1738
186
1923
2034
2135
2221
2377
247
2514
2618
276
2842
2920
3034
315
3254
3326
346
3571
367
375
385
3935
405
4150
427
4353
441
456
4613
4760
487
4948
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"being invited"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was checking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences108
ratio0.065
matches
0"The mismatched eyes — one amber, one black as spilled ink — travelled over her face like he was checking her for damage."
1"The curry house below had the evening fry-up going; the whole stairwell smelled of cumin and hot oil, and Lucien Moreau stood in the middle of it like a knife in a cutlery drawer."
2"He crossed the threshold the way he entered every room — slowly, cataloguing."
3"Rory's hand found the kitchen knife she'd left on the counter — muscle memory, nothing more — and his eyes tracked the movement, and something in the black one went soft and terrible."
4"He'd never once flinched from the truth of himself; it was the most dangerous thing about him."
5"He could see her not knowing it, and looked away first — the first time he'd broken eye contact since the landing."
6"She watched his hand come up, knock twice on the doorframe — an old gesture, from before, from the months when he'd appeared at her window above the bar with stolen pastries and information she hadn't asked for."
97.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount802
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04239401496259352
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007481296758104738
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean13.21
std11.05
cv0.837
sampleLengths
033
12
211
37
423
54
61
76
813
99
107
1123
125
1324
144
1512
1619
1710
1816
1934
207
2113
2227
2313
245
254
268
272
281
299
3028
3131
326
334
345
355
3633
376
3812
396
405
4111
4223
436
4429
4510
4611
4746
4831
497
57.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37962962962962965
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
33.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences60
matches
0"His voice had roughened since"
1"She moved to close the"
2"He didn't wipe it away."
3"she said, and stepped aside"
4"He crossed the threshold the"
5"His gaze swept the towers"
6"She shut the door"
7"It hung there anyway."
8"He reached into his jacket."
9"Her knuckles had gone white"
10"She let go, finger by"
11"He produced a folded slip"
12"She didn't take it, so"
13"He leaned forward, elbows on"
14"His voice stayed level, but"
15"He said it again now,"
16"He'd never once flinched from"
17"She hadn't known that."
18"He could see her not"
19"She picked it up just"
ratio0.467
18.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences60
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"His voice had roughened since"
2"The mismatched eyes — one"
3"She moved to close the"
4"The cane's tip slid into"
5"Rain ran down the side"
6"He didn't wipe it away."
7"A pause, measured as everything"
8"Ptolemy wound between her ankles"
9"Rory looked down at the"
10"The curry house below had"
11"she said, and stepped aside"
12"He crossed the threshold the"
13"His gaze swept the towers"
14"Something flickered across his face"
15"She shut the door"
16"The third she left, and"
17"Lucien set the cane against"
18"The name Evan didn't need"
19"It hung there anyway."
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"His voice stayed, but his thumb moved along the silver head of the cane, a slow circuit, over and over"
1"He looked back, and both eyes were black in the dim hall light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.7296%