Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6JK88Z0NK6NKZQQ2BJPSE

Run Details

Duration:
11.4s
Cost:
$0.000259
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drummed against Detective Harlow Quinn’s leather jacket as she weaved through the narrow alleyways of Soho. The city’s heartbeat was muffled beneath the downpour, but her pulse remained steady, a metronome counting down to something she couldn’t yet name. Tomás Herrera’s silhouette had vanished into the labyrinth of backstreets, but she could feel his presence like a bruise beneath her skin. Her worn watch glinted faintly as she checked the time—02:17. Too late for a coincidence. She rounded a corner, her boots splashing through puddles thick with oil and debris. The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered overhead, its glow reflected in the wet cobblestones. Quinn had passed this bar a dozen times in her career, always with her partner, always with casual banter about drinks and politics. Now, it felt like a landmark in a dream she couldn’t wake from. “Herrera,” she muttered, more to herself than the empty street. Her voice cut through the rain like a blade. The bar’s windows were dark, but she noticed a figure lingering near the entrance—a man in a trench coat, shoulders hunched against the cold. Quinn’s hand drifted to her service weapon, though she kept it holstered. Not yet. Not unless she had to. The man turned, and her breath caught. It was Tomás, his olive skin glistening, his dark curls plastered to his forehead. He clutched something wrapped in a stained cloth—a medallion peeked out, Saint Christopher’s face barely visible beneath his shirt. *Medical supplies*, she thought. *He’s not running from me. He’s meeting someone.* Before she could step forward, the man melted into the crowd of a passing late-night busker. Quinn followed, her stride urgent but controlled. The streets narrowed, leading her downward, away from the main roads. She descended a rusted fire escape, the metal creaking beneath her weight. At the bottom, a narrow doorway yawned open, its entrance marked only by a faded sign reading *“Maintenance Access.”* She hesitated. The building beyond could be anything—an apartment, a warehouse, a trap. But her training, her instincts, screamed otherwise. Quinn pulled the door open and stepped inside. The air shifted instantly. Warm, humid, tinged with the scent of incense and something older—ozone, maybe, or the tang of magic. Her flashlight cut through the darkness, revealing a stairwell carved into stone, spiraling downward into earth. She descended, each step echoing. The walls were lined with symbols she didn’t recognize, carved into the rock like ancient warnings. At the bottom, the beam of her light swept across a cavernous space. The Veil Market. Torchlight flickered from every corner, illuminating stalls draped in velvet and iron. Shelves bowed under the weight of vials, tomes bound in leather and bone, and artifacts that made her stomach churn. A woman with horns haggled over a vial of liquid that pulsed like a heartbeat. A man with too many fingers examined a dagger that seemed to drink the light around it. And in the center, a circle of figures in hooded robes chanted in a language that made her teeth ache. Tomás stood at the edge of the crowd, his back to her. He held a small wooden box, its surface etched with patterns that shifted when she looked away. Before she could move, he turned, and their eyes met. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice calm despite the chaos around them. “You shouldn’t be here.” “Why not?” She kept her hand near her holster, but her voice was steady. “You’ve got a bone to pick with the department, and I’ve got questions about DS Morris.” His smile was pity. “You still don’t understand, do you? This isn’t about the clique. It’s about *them*. The ones who took him.” A memory flashed—Morris’s last words, his hand reaching for something that wasn’t there. Quinn clenched her jaw. “Stay focused. Where are we going?” Tomás hesitated, glancing at the robed figures. “The Bone Token.” “The entry requirement.” He nodded, pulling a small pouch from his coat. Inside, a single ivory token lay in a bed of moss. “You don’t have one.” “I don’t need one.” She stepped forward, boots echoing on the stone. “I need answers.” The market shifted. The stalls rearranged themselves, the symbols on the walls glowing brighter. Quinn’s flashlight flickered, then died. In the sudden darkness, the chanting grew louder, more urgent. She fumbled for her matches, but her fingers were numb. “You can’t come in,” a voice hissed from the shadows. “Not without one of his.” She whirled to see a figure emerging from the darkness—tall, gaunt, with eyes like black coins. His coat was embroidered with serpents, and in his hand, he held a bone token that pulsed with the same rhythm as the vial in the woman’s stall. Tomás stepped between them. “You’re not ready for this, Quinn. Whatever you think you know, it’s all wrong.” But Quinn was already reaching for the pouch in her other hand. “I’m not leaving without seeing what happened to Morris.” The gaunt man laughed, a sound like breaking glass. “He didn’t *happen*, detective. He *became*. And you—” He gestured to the market, to the shadows, to the very air itself—“you’re standing in the middle of a war you can’t even see.” Her fingers closed around the bone token. It was warm, alive. Against her better judgment, she pressed it into the slot in the wall. The market inhaled.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount904
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount904
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count3
3
word"glistening"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"tinged"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count2
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"churn"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count2
11
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"could feel"
2"flickered"
3"glistening"
4"weight"
5"tinged"
6"echoing"
7"velvet"
8"stomach"
9"churn"
10"pulsed"
11"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords15
totalWords897
ratio0.017
matches
0"Medical supplies"
1"He’s not running from me. He’s meeting someone."
2"“Maintenance Access.”"
3"them"
4"happen"
5"became"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount787
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn8
Soho1
Herrera1
Raven1
Nest1
Tomás5
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil1
Market1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Raven"
4"Nest"
5"Tomás"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Market"
9"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.992
windowScore1
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a landmark in a dream she cou"
1"dagger that seemed to drink the light around it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount897
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean34.5
std21.1
cv0.612
sampleLengths
077
167
219
343
452
565
628
758
816
984
1039
1116
1230
1323
1423
1510
163
1724
1815
1939
2015
2144
2218
2321
2441
2527
90.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"was muffled"
1"were lined"
2"was embroidered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was already reaching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences81
ratio0.099
matches
0"Her worn watch glinted faintly as she checked the time—02:17."
1"The bar’s windows were dark, but she noticed a figure lingering near the entrance—a man in a trench coat, shoulders hunched against the cold."
2"He clutched something wrapped in a stained cloth—a medallion peeked out, Saint Christopher’s face barely visible beneath his shirt."
3"The building beyond could be anything—an apartment, a warehouse, a trap."
4"Warm, humid, tinged with the scent of incense and something older—ozone, maybe, or the tang of magic."
5"A memory flashed—Morris’s last words, his hand reaching for something that wasn’t there."
6"She whirled to see a figure emerging from the darkness—tall, gaunt, with eyes like black coins."
7"“He didn’t *happen*, detective. He *became*. And you—” He gestured to the market, to the shadows, to the very air itself—“you’re standing in the middle of a war you can’t even see.”"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount768
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.024739583333333332
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005208333333333333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean11.07
std6.47
cv0.585
sampleLengths
017
123
222
310
45
514
617
723
813
910
109
1124
1212
132
145
157
1614
1719
184
195
203
2116
227
2311
2412
2519
262
2711
287
298
304
3117
3216
335
3416
3513
363
3712
3820
3915
4017
4120
4212
4317
4410
4512
464
4714
4816
494
54.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37037037037037035
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners30
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Too late for a coincidence."
ratio0.015
84.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences68
matches
0"Her worn watch glinted faintly"
1"She rounded a corner, her"
2"she muttered, more to herself"
3"Her voice cut through the"
4"It was Tomás, his olive"
5"He clutched something wrapped in"
6"*He’s not running from me."
7"He’s meeting someone.*"
8"She descended a rusted fire"
9"Her flashlight cut through the"
10"She descended, each step echoing."
11"He held a small wooden"
12"he said, his voice calm"
13"She kept her hand near"
14"His smile was pity."
15"He nodded, pulling a small"
16"She stepped forward, boots echoing"
17"She fumbled for her matches,"
18"She whirled to see a"
19"His coat was embroidered with"
ratio0.338
70.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences68
matches
0"Rain drummed against Detective Harlow"
1"The city’s heartbeat was muffled"
2"Tomás Herrera’s silhouette had vanished"
3"Her worn watch glinted faintly"
4"She rounded a corner, her"
5"The green neon sign of"
6"Quinn had passed this bar"
7"she muttered, more to herself"
8"Her voice cut through the"
9"The bar’s windows were dark,"
10"Quinn’s hand drifted to her"
11"The man turned, and her"
12"It was Tomás, his olive"
13"He clutched something wrapped in"
14"*He’s not running from me."
15"He’s meeting someone.*"
16"Quinn followed, her stride urgent"
17"The streets narrowed, leading her"
18"She descended a rusted fire"
19"The building beyond could be"
ratio0.779
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"Now, it felt like a"
1"Before she could step forward,"
2"Before she could move, he"
ratio0.044
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Shelves bowed under the weight of vials, tomes bound in leather and bone, and artifacts that made her stomach churn."
1"A memory flashed—Morris’s last words, his hand reaching for something that wasn’t there."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she muttered, more to herself than the empty street"
1"She kept, but her voice was steady"
2"She stepped, boots echoing on the stone"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"a narrow doorway yawned (yawn)"
2"a voice hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.333
80.1281%